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Body Language Cheat Sheet For WritersÂ
â° Facial expressions
These are your micro-signals, like the blinking neon signs of the soul. But theyâre small, quick, and often lie harder than words.
Raised eyebrows â This can mean surprise or disbelief, sure. But it can also be a full-on, silent âAre you serious right now?â when someoneâs being ridiculous. Or even curiosity when someoneâs too emotionally repressed to askthe damn question.
Furrowed brow â That face people make when theyâre doing long division in their head or trying to emotionally process a compliment. Itâs thinking, yesâbut also confusion, deep frustration, or quiet simmering rage.
Smiling â Can be happiness⊠or total fake-it-till-you-make-it energy. Some smiles are stiff. Some donât reach the eyes. Show that.
Frowning â Sure, sadness. But also: disappointment, judgment, or the universal âIâm about to say something blunt, brace yourself.â
Lip biting â Itâs not just nervousness, itâs pressure. Self-control. Anticipation. Itâs the thing people do when they want to say something and decide, at the last second, not to.
â° Eye movement
The window to the soul? Yeah. But also the window to when someoneâs lying, flirting, or deeply trying not to cry in public.
Eye contact â Confidence or challenge. Eye contact can be gentle, curious, sharp like a blade. Sometimes itâs desperate: âPlease understand me.â
Avoiding eye contact â Not always guilt. Sometimes itâs protectiveness. Sometimes itâs âIâm afraid if I look at you, youâll see everything Iâm trying to hide.â
Narrowed eyes â Calculating. Suspicious. The look someone gives when their brainâs saying âhmmm...â and itâs not a good hmm.
Wide eyes â Surprise, yes. But also sudden fear. The oh-God-itâs-happening look. Or when someone just found out theyâre not as in control as they thought.
Eye roll â Classic. But try using it with tension, like when someoneâs annoyed and trying very hard not to lose it in public.
â° Gestures
This is where charactersâ emotions go when their mouths are lying.
Crossing arms â Not just defensive. Sometimes itâs comfort. A self-hug. A barrier when the conversation is getting too personal.
Fidgeting â This is nervous energy with nowhere to go. Watch fingers tapping, rings spinning, sleeves tugged. It says: Iâm not okay, but Iâm trying not to show it.
Pointing â Itâs a stab in the air. Aggressive, usually. But sometimes a desperate plea: Look. Understand this.
Open palms â Vulnerability. Honesty. Or a gesture that says, âI have nothing left to hide.â
Hand on chin â Not just thinking. Itâs stalling. Itâs delaying. Itâs âIâm about to say something that might get me in trouble.â
â° Posture and movement
These are your vibes. How someone occupies space says everything.
Slumped shoulders â Exhaustion. Defeat. Or someone trying to take up less space because they feel small.
Upright posture â Not always confidence. Sometimes itâs forced. Sometimes itâs a character trying really, really hard to look like theyâre fine.
Pacing â Inner chaos externalized. Thinking so loudly it needs movement. Waiting for something. Running from your own thoughts.
Tapping foot â Tension. Irritation. Sometimes a buildup to an explosion.
Leaning in â Intimacy. Interest. Or subtle manipulation. (You matter to me. Iâm listening. Letâs get closer.)
â° Touch
This is intimacy in all its forms, comforting, protective, romantic, or invasive.
Hugging â Doesnât always mean closeness. Could be a goodbye. Could be an apology they canât say out loud. Could be awkward as hell.
Handshake â Stiff or crushing or slippery. How someone shakes hands says more than their words do.
Back patting â Casual warmth. Bro culture. Awkward emotional support when someone doesnât know how to comfort but wants to try.
Clenched fists â Holding something in. Rage, tears, restraint. Fists mean tension that needs somewhere to go.
Hair tuck â Sure, flirtation or nerves. But also a subtle shield. A way to hide. A habit from childhood when someone didnât want to be seen.
â° Mirroring:
If two characters start syncing their body language, something is happening. Empathy. Chemistry. Shared grief. If someone shifts their body when the other does? Take notice. Other human bits that say everything without words...
Nodding â Not just yes. Could be an âI hear you,â even if they donât agree. Could be the âkeep goingâ nod. Could be patronizing if done too slow.
Crossed legs â Chill. Casual. Or closed-off, depending on context. Especially if their arms are crossed too.
Finger tapping â Time is ticking. Brain is pacing. Somethingâs coming.
Hand to chest â Sincerity, yes. But also shock. Or groundingâa subconscious attempt to stay present when everything feels like too much.
Tilting the head â Curiosity. Playfulness. Or someone listening so hard they forget to hide it.
Temple rub â âI canât deal.â Could be physical pain. Could be stress. Could be emotional overload in disguise.
Chin stroking â Your classic âIâm judging you politely.â Often used in arguments between characters pretending to be calm.
Hands behind the back â Authority. Control. Or rigid fear masked as control.
Leaning body â This is the body betraying the brain. A tilt toward someone means they careâeven if their words are cold.
Nail biting â Classic anxiety. But also habit. Something learned. Sometimes people bite because thatâs how they self-soothe.
Squinting â Focusing. Doubting. Suspicion without confrontation.
Shifting weight â Uncomfortable. Unsure. Someone who wants to leave but doesnât.
Covering the mouth â Guilt. Hesitation. The âshould I say this?â moment before something big drops.
Body language is more honest than dialogue. If you really want to show your characterâs internal world, donât just give them lines. Give them a hand that wonât stop shaking. Give them a foot that wonât stop bouncing. Give them a mouth that smiles when their eyes donât. And if youâre not sure what your character would do in a moment of fear, or love, or heartbreak, try acting it out yourself. Seriously. Get weird. Feel what your body does. Then write that down.
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A Celebration Of You
Tags: Aventurine x Reader, Jiaoqiu x Reader, Phainon x Reader, Fluff, Comfort, Romance, Birthday Celebration, Thoughtful Gestures, Character Development, Gentle Love, Relationship Dynamics.
Requested by: @everestnotmountain

Your birthday is no ordinary occasion in Aventurineâs eyes. From the moment the date comes around, the entire month feels like a prelude to the grand spectacle that is your special day. As someone who thrives on high-stakes drama, he isnât about to let your birthday pass by unnoticed or uncelebratedâthis will be an event that everyone remembers.
The first sign that heâs preparing for your birthday is the cryptic messages that fill your inbox. âPrepare for a night of fortuneâs favors and dangerous delights,â one message reads, followed by another: âThe dice are rolling, my dear. Will you win or lose? Letâs find out.â
As the day arrives, Aventurine greets you with an impeccably tailored suit, complete with your favorite color incorporated into his attire, a signature of his taste. His grin is sly, eyes twinkling as he hands you a velvet box, inside which lies a stunning piece of jewelryâan intricately designed necklace with a pendant in the shape of a roulette wheel. âFor luck, of course,â he says, voice teasing, though thereâs a deeper sincerity in his gaze that betrays the flamboyant facade. He winks. âConsider it a gamble on me.â
The evening unfolds with a lavish party, hosted in a private venue that you didnât even know existed. The ambiance is a mix of high society and a touch of decadenceâgolden chandeliers glimmer above, and roulette tables dot the space. Guests murmur in the background, but the focus is all on you. The food is gourmet, but every course is accompanied by a playful twistââa game of chanceâ where you must roll dice to decide what you eat next. Aventurine is ever the master of ceremonies, his charm filling the room as he guides you through each round with a devilish grin, offering playful bets and challenges that keep you on your toes.
For a birthday gift, you get more than just material things. He arranges for a private dinner where the two of you can indulge in fine wine and share stories. The night ends with an unexpected twistâa surprise firework display designed by Aventurine himself, a perfect blend of calculated risk and breathtaking beauty. Itâs a night where the gamble is on love, trust, and the unpredictable nature of life itself, and you walk away knowing that, despite his ruthless nature, heâll always make you feel like the prize in the game of life.

Jiaoqiu isnât the type to indulge in grand gestures. Heâs subtle, thoughtful, and prefers to focus on the little things that show how much you mean to him. He would likely spend weeks planning the perfect birthday for you, though he would never let on until the day arrives. His care and attention to detail would be apparent in the smallest of actions, yet those would speak volumes.
The day begins with him quietly showing up at your door early in the morning, a soft, comforting smile on his face. Heâs dressed simply, but thereâs something elegant about the way he carries himself. He hands you a small, intricately wrapped box. Inside is a delicate, hand-painted jar of his specialtyâan herbal tea blend that he personally crafted just for you. âFor your peace of mind,â he says, his voice calm and soft as ever. âI thought you might enjoy something to calm you after the excitement of the day.â
Throughout the day, Jiaoqiu doesnât make the day about him. Instead, he does things that make you feel loved in a quiet way. Heâs there to help you with anything you need, offering words of encouragement and gentle humor. When you need a break, heâs ready with a fan and a serene space where the two of you can rest, allowing you to enjoy the calm away from the chaos of the day.
As evening falls, he invites you to a secluded garden within the Alchemy Commissionâs groundsâan intimate, peaceful setting surrounded by softly glowing lanterns. There, he surprises you with a homemade meal, full of comfort and nourishment. Heâs spent the afternoon preparing it, making sure every dish is full of flavor and love. There are no grand speeches, no unnecessary flourishesâjust his presence and the warmth heâs been radiating all day. After dinner, he offers you a handmade token, a small medallion heâs had engraved with a simple phrase: âMay your heart always be healed.â
The night ends with Jiaoqiu quietly sitting by your side, your hands resting together, the stars overhead, and the sound of the gentle breeze carrying his calm words to you. He doesnât need to say much, because you already know that his way of spoiling you is by simply being present, caring, and steadyâexactly what you need.

Phainonâs approach to spoiling you on your birthday is nothing short of grandâhe may be gentle and cheerful, but his desire to make your special day unforgettable is deeply ingrained in him. The moment he learns your birthday is approaching, he gets to work, balancing his warrior spirit with his determination to create something truly beautiful for you.
The day starts with him meeting you at dawn, wearing an outfit that exudes regal elegance, his shining hair swept back. He greets you with a cheerful smile, eyes alight with excitement. Without hesitation, he leads you to a small, private area set up with a beautifully arranged breakfast spreadâfresh fruit, pastries, and an assortment of teas. âI wanted you to start your day with peace,â he says, his voice soft but with a sincerity that carries weight.
As the day unfolds, Phainon continues to surprise you with thoughtful gestures. His deep attention to detail shows as he arranges for a small group of friends to join you for a light-hearted, competitive gameâheâs always been a fan of friendly rivalry. Whether itâs a contest of skill or wit, Phainonâs charm comes out as he eagerly engages with you, his friendly spirit making every moment feel exciting.
The evening brings an elegant celebration with music, where Phainon takes the lead in organizing a dance, showing off his graceful yet strong movements, inviting you to join him. Heâs playful but respectful, constantly making sure youâre enjoying yourself. During the festivities, he surprises you with a hand-carved keepsakeâa small, intricate figure made of the finest materials from Aedes Elysiae. Itâs a representation of a hero in his culture, but in this case, itâs clearly made with you in mind, a way to symbolize how important you are in his life.
As the night ends, Phainon pulls you aside, offering a quiet moment away from the celebration. He smiles, his usual cheerfulness tempered with a hint of genuine warmth. âHappy birthday,â he says softly, before holding you close. âI hope today showed you just how much you mean to me, and how proud I am to share this life with you.â
No matter the chaos of battle or the trials of his journey, Phainonâs birthday gift is the promise of loyalty, affection, and devotionâsomething priceless in a world so unpredictable. You are his constant, and he makes sure you feel it every step of the way.

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share a physical feature of your oc's that you like a lot!
#you can literally just go 'i like my guy's spiky hair' it doesnt have to be anything groundbreaking!!#oc questions#oc development#character development#tag the oc#tag your oc#category: appearance
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Your blog is so helpful! I'm looking for descriptions of hair. Sometimes I think of my characters moving hair behind their shoulder because it gets annoying and in the way and tickles your neck weird, so calling it 'strands' ("she moved a strand of hair behind her shoulder") feels not enough because I think of a strand as one thin single piece and while 'strands' might be accurate, it doesn't quite convey that the character might have moved literally half their entire head of hair, not just a few straggles. "Chunk of hair" might be the closest thing but also doesn't fit right with the context of hair imo.
Hairstyles & Descriptive Words to Describe Hair
Hair Types & Haircuts
Glad to hear, thank you! Based on suggestions from these previous posts and the sources below, here are alternatives you can consider for describing half (or a significant quantity) of your character's hair:
A considerable amount of her hair
Cascade of hair
Clump of hair
Curtain of hair
Fistful of hair
Half of her hair
Handful of hair
Mass of hair
Most of her hair
Portion of her hair
Section of her hair
Segment of hair
Sizable amount of hair
The bulk of her hair
Wave of hair
Some writers don't specify the amount of hair, and prefer to focus on describing the motion along the lines of, "moved/gathered/collected/flicked/tossed her hair behind her shoulder/to her back/to one side".
Sources: 1 2 â More: Writing Notes & References â Writing Resources PDFs
Hope you find the right phrase for your story. You can go through the links, in case I missed other more suitable descriptors. All the best with your writing!
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please i beg of you all
Character asks!
These are more focused on the background stuff rather than the usual "what would the character do in XY situation" kinds of asks. I've been looking for something like this for quite a while and in the end decided to make my own. Feel free to use, go wild, enjoy
What was the original thought that led to the creation of this character?
How long was the process before the character reached its final version? (or a version that would be clearly recognizable as the character?)
What was the first thing you decided on, the character's name, appearance, personality or their role in the story?
And reverse, which one of the four things did you struggle with the most?
How did you choose their name and why? Was it simply based on vibes or is there any specific meaning behind the name? Are the reasons behind their name different in- and out of universe?
What was the thought process behind their appearance? Did you go mostly for the aesthetic or are there other reasons they look the way they do?
What is an aspect of their appearance that you like the most?
What is the origin of their personality? And let's be honest - how much of it is projecting?
How big is their role in the story? Do they make a frequent appearance or are they a character with little "screentime" but big influence? Or are they just a favourite background guy?
What is their main character arc in the story? Where do they start and how do they develop? Do they get a happy ending or is their story a tragic one?
Is there any existing character from other media that your character resembles? Was the resemblance intentional or was it a coincidence?
Do you have a playlist for the character? What songs do you associate with them and why?
Do you have a voice claim for the character? What do you imagine the character sounds like?
Do you have any quotes tied to the character, either from the story itself or from another source that fit them?
Have you ever made a moodboard for them?
Is there any memes or running jokes associated with the character, both in- and out of universe?
Are there any motifs or symbols associated with the character? How are they represented, in their design, personality or in some other way?
Does the character have other characters connected to them? Do you have a family tree and "offscreen" connections made up for them or do they exist in a vacuum purely for the purpose of the story?
What is your general favourite thing about the character? What is your least favourite?
Bonus question: share any additional thoughts, art, favourite scenes, anything you've been waiting for a chance to ramble about
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Write a scene in which a character, finally, after years of holding on to it, reveals a secret.
#daily writing prompts#writers on tumblr#writing prompts#writing inspiration#writing exercises#creative writing#character development
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pigeon shape variation
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When your Character...
Gets into: A Fight â ...Another Fight â ...Yet Another Fight
Hates Someone â Kisses Someone â Falls in Love
Calls Someone they Love â Dies / Cheats Death â Drowns
is...
A Ballerina â A Child â Interacting with a Child â A Cheerleader
A Cowboy â A Genius â A Lawyer â A Pirate â A Spy
A Wheelchair User â A Zombie â Beautiful â Dangerous â Drunk
Funny â In a Coma â In a Secret Society â Injured â Shy
needs...
A Magical Item â An Aphrodisiac â A Fictional Poison
A Coping Strategy â A Drink â A Medicinal Herb â A Mentor
Money â A Persuasion Tactic â A Quirk â To be Killed Off
To Become Likable â To Clean a Wound â To Self-Reflect
To Find the Right Word, but Can't â To Say No â To Swear
loves...
Astronomy â Baking â Cooking â Cocktails â Food â Oils
Dancing â Fashion â Gems â Herbal Remedies â Honey
Mushrooms â Mythology â Numbers â Perfumes
Roses â Sweets â To Argue â To Insult â To Kiss
To Make False Claims â Wine â Wine-Tasting â Yoga
has/experiences...
Allergies â Amnesia â Bereavement â Bites & Stings
Bruises â Caffeine â CO Poisoning â Color Blindness
Facial Hair â Fainting â Fevers â Food Allergies
Food Poisoning â Fractures â Frostbite â Hypothermia
Injuries â Jet Lag â Kidnapping â Manipulation â Mutism
Pain â Paranoia â Poisoning â More Pain & Violence
Scars â Trauma â Viruses â Wounds
[these are just quick references. more research may be needed to write your story...]
Writing Resources PDFs
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That's amazing. And because I love ticking boxes, I filled it out for Azula, just for the fun of it:
i made a character sheet. free to use as you wish, feel free to change whatever you want XD open source ass thing. spent all of ~maybe an hour on it.
Credit: the text in the insert-image box comes from this video, and the text for the top three lines (intense, complex, fruity) comes from this post. The actual image was made with the free NBOS character sheet creator, which is a sort of dated but free and solid text-layout sheet maker intended for ttrpg style character sheet creation.
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How Body Language Changes When a Character Is Falling in Love (Whether They Admit It or Not)
When someone starts to fall, it shows up everywhereânot in the love confession (thatâs the easy part), but in the twitch of a smile, in the silence that suddenly feels charged, in the way someoneâs hand almost reaches out before pulling back.
ⰠThey start listening⊠with their whole damn body
Suddenly, theyâre turned toward this person all the time. Full body facing them. Chin tilted slightly in. They lean forward during small talk like itâs breaking news. They notice things, like the rhythm of their voice, the way their lips move when they think too hard. They stop fiddling with their phone. Their knee bounces until the other person speaks, and then, stillness. Theyâre so present, it hurts.
ⰠTheir eye contact gets⊠weird
Sometimes they canât stop looking. Sometimes they canât look at all... Thereâs that momentâthe pause, the flickerâwhere their eyes land on the other personâs mouth for just a second too long. Or they track their hands. Or notice how their hair falls into their face. Itâs not about lust. Itâs yearning, and itâs quiet and stupid and full of panic. And when the person catches them looking? Immediate eye dart. Back to their drink. To the sky. To anywhere else. Guilty. Flushed. Terrified.
â° Their hands get stupid
Theyâre suddenly very aware of what their hands are doing. They fidget more. Or freeze. They keep their arms close to their body, like theyâre worried theyâll accidentally reach out. If they touch the other person, even casually, it lingers. Not long enough to be noticed, but long enough to matter. Sometimes they adjust the other personâs collar or brush something off their sleeve and then have a tiny meltdown inside. That kind of touch feels too intimate. Itâs not flirtation. Itâs reverence.
â° Their silence means more than their words
They trail off mid-sentence. Laugh at things they donât usually laugh at. Start saying something and stop themselves. Itâs because their brain is trying to do too many things at onceâact normal, sound chill, donât make it weird, try not to look like youâre in love. Meanwhile, the body is over here sweating, shifting, subtly turning toward the other person like a sunflower in denial.
â° Their whole vibe gets softer
Thereâs a gentleness that creeps in. Even if theyâre a sharp, snarky character, thereâs a moment where they look at the person like theyâre a planet theyâve just discovered. Itâs brief. Itâs devastating. Itâs involuntary. And they might pretend it didnât happen. But the reader saw it. The love interest definitely saw it. And suddenly, everything is different.
â° Bonus: They mirror the other person without meaning to
Their arms cross when the other personâs do. Their head tilts. They laugh a beat after. This is subconscious connection at work. Their body wants to match this person. Sync with them. Be close without being obvious. And when they stop mirroring? Thatâs a sign too. Maybe something hurt. Maybe theyâre trying to pull away. But the body always tells the truth, even when the characterâs mouth is lying through its teeth.
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which ocs don't know eachother well / at all, but would be really funny together if they did?
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ultimate character development template
basics
name: meaning of name: nicknames/titles: age: gender: location: birthday: strengths + example where it's shown: weaknesses + example where it's shown: how it affects others:
emotional depth
attachment style + how it manifests in the story: physical fear: emotional/abstract fear: happy memory: sad memory: object of significance: philosophical outlook/belief: what characters are ignorant about themselves: how confident are they: goal: long-term dreams: what they're embarrassed/ashamed to tell others about: regrets: source of pride: source of misery: what they admire above all else: do they believe in fate:
personality
mbti: enneagram: big five: character archetype: star sign: who they pretend to be on the outside: who they actually are/how they feel towards the mask: mental health conditions: how it manifests for them: iq: eq: humour: reputation:
habits
bad habits: mannerisms when stressed: mannerisms when content: mannerisms when scared: mannerisms normally: verbal mannerisms/distinctive speaking style: how do they move across a room: what do they say and what remains unsaid: how they express love: hobbies:
appearance
defining features: eye shape + colour: hair texture + colour: skin texture + tone: vibe: height: build: clothing: any bodily disfigurement (scars, etc.): overall attractiveness: their opinion on their appearance: appeals to:
relationships
who they trust most: what they wish they could do for them: what's holding them back: who they hate most: what they wish they could do to them: what's holding them back: relationship with the protagonist: relationship with the antagonist: siblings: relationship with them: parents/step-parents: relationship with them: previous broken relationships: why did it break: what others expect of them: who believes in them: their mentor character/who they look up to: political/religious/other affiliations: what makes them different from every other character: non-human relationships + why: romantic "type" + why: relationship dynamics:
backstory/background
primary emotion towards their past: primary feelings while in their past: where did they grow up: defining incidents: earliest childhood memory: saddest memory: happiest memory: major accomplishments: their opinion on it: notable people in their backstory: effect on them today: trauma: what have they already lost: financial circumstance:
progression
why are they important (eg. why're they the only one able to do something?): what do they learn about themselves throughout the story: what do they learn about the world: how do they feel towards their newfound knowledge: character arc (positive, negative, neutral): how relationships change because of their actions: what mistakes do they make: what scene is their character highlighted: do they get what they want: why or why not: what happens to them after the story ends:
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villany at it's finest
Is Your Villain Dry? Internal Conflict is Needed!
@thewriteadviceforwriters
Villains arenât evil just for chaos. thereâs a whole world of internal battles waging behind that hardened façade. Dive deep into your villainâs psyche to reveal:
A haunting past or a pivotal mistake that shadows their every move đ
A remnant of empathy or humanity that makes them tragically relatable
Subvert expectations:
Avoid the cliché "pure evil" stereotype by exploring the layers of regret, loss, or even doubtful remorse.
Show that they might be wrestling with an internal conflict over choices made in the name of a twisted sense of justice.
Use narrative techniques:
Experiment with fragmented internal monologues instead of well-structured soliloquies.
Incorporate flashbacks or unreliable narration to mirror the fragmented state of their troubled mind.
Infuse subtle moments of vulnerability:
Craft scenes where your villain, in solitude (maybe under a starlit sky đ), reflects on their regrets and fears.
Use these quiet moments to hint at the underlying emotional turmoil, avoiding over-dramatization.
Leverage relationships as catalysts:
Introduce secondary charactersâlike a long-lost friend or a mentorâwho evoke memories of who they once were.
Let these interactions expose the conflict between the villainâs desire for power and the remnants of their former, more innocent self.
Remember:
The key to authentic internal conflict is subtlety. Let these emotions simmer beneath the surface, influencing every decision without overtly stating them.
Experiment relentlesslyâlet your villainâs inner struggle fuel the narrative and add depth to their character arc.
Let your villain be the dark heart of your story, pulsing with all the ambiguities of a lost soul caught between redemption and damnation. Happy writing, and keep weaving that intricate magic! đ - Rin T.
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Writing Tips Master Post
Edit: Some posts may be deleted
Character writing/development:
Character Arcs
Making Character Profiles
Character Development
Comic Relief Arc
Internal Conflict
Character Voices
Creating Distinct Characters
Creating Likeable Characters
Writing Strong Female Characters
Writing POC Characters
Building Tension
Writing Grumpy x Sunshine Tropes
Writing Sexuality & Gender
Writing Manipulative Characters
Writing Mature Young Characters
Plot devices/development:
Intrigue in Storytelling
Enemies to Lovers
Alternatives to Killing Characters
Worldbuilding
Misdirection
Things to Consider Before Killing Characters
Foreshadowing
Narrative (+ how to write):
Emphasising the Stakes
Avoid Info-Dumping
Writing Without Dialogue
1st vs. 2nd vs. 3rd Perspective
Fight Scenes (+ More)
Transitions
Pacing
Writing Prologues
Dialogue Tips
Writing War
Writing Cheating
Writing Miscommunication
Writing Unrequited Love
Writing a Slow Burn Btwn Introverts
Writing Smut
Writing Admiration Without Attraction
Writing Dual POVs
Worldbuilding:
Worldbuilding: Questions to Consider
Creating Laws/Rules in Fantasy Worlds
Book writing:
Connected vs. Stand-Alone Series
A & B Stories
Writer resources:
Writing YouTube Channels, Podcasts, & Blogs
Online Writing Resources
Outlining/Writing/Editing Software
Translation Software for Writing
Writer help:
Losing Passion/Burnout
Overcoming Writer's Block
Fantasy terms:
How To Name Fantasy Races (Step-by-Step)
Naming Elemental Races
Naming Fire-Related Races
How To Name Fantasy Places
Ask games:
Character Ask Game #1
Character Ask Game #2
Character Ask Game #3
Miscellaneous:
Writing Tips
Writing Fantasy
Miscommunication Prompts
Variety in Sentence Structure (avoiding repetition)
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20 Ways to Show Extreme Fear in Your Writing
As I dive into researching signs of fear for my horror WIP, I wanted to share some of the most compelling and visceral reactions Iâve come across. Whether youâre writing a chilling scene or crafting a characterâs panic, these 20 signs of fear can help bring tension and realism to your story.
Physical Reactions
Hyperventilating â sucking in air but never feeling like itâs enough
Chest tightens â feels like a weight or hands pressing down
Limbs shaking violently, knees buckling
Complete loss of muscle control â collapsing or unable to stand
Cold sweat soaking through clothes
Heart hammering so hard they feel it in their throat or head
Tunnel vision â the world narrowing down to one terrifying focal point
Ringing in the ears or sudden deafness, like the world drops away
Dizziness / feeling faint / vision blurring
Dry mouth â unable to speak or even scream
Uncontrollable Behavior
Screaming / sobbing / gasping â involuntary vocal outbursts
Panic run â bolting without thinking, tripping over everything
Clawing at their own skin / chest / throat â like trying to escape their body
Begging / pleading out loud even if no oneâs there
Repeating words or phrases â âNo, no, noâ / âThis isnât happeningâ
Hiding instinctively â diving under tables, closets, or corners
Desperate grabbing â reaching for someone, anything solid
Loss of bladder or bowel control (for extreme terror)
Total mental shutdown â frozen, slack-jawed, staring blankly
Memory blackout â later canât recall what happened during the worst moment
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