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Regas ︴★★★☆☆

➥ author ,, @samk .

➥ fandom ,, original .

➥ pages ,, 33/? + vol. 6/? : uncompleted .

➥ tags ,, gay, reincarnation, fantasy, royalty, slightly angsty .

➥ finished ,, 09.23.24 - ? ? ? .

︴about ,,

This is a Manhwa, adapted from a novel that I haven't read it yet, about a himbo muscle guy who is a servant taking care of a "nasty" prince as child.

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spoilers below, obviously .

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︴rating ,,

I would have to say that even though this is like a three out of five stars, it's still good.

I liked the first part of the story of Abel trying to protect the prince and showing him all these things that warms him up to Abel

LIKE ALL THE SCENES OF "even though you're going to be king someday, you don't have to, because I want you to find happiness for yourself" IS SO CUTE

THE FACT HE FUCKING DIED TRYING TO PROTECT HIM EVEN THOUGH HE KNOWS HE WAS GETTING POISONED BUT HE TOOK IT EVERYDAY JUST SO THE PRINCE WOULDN'T EAT IT???

dude. crying fucking tears over here.

I like abel's personality, i like the big aloof guy personality.

I JUST HATE IT AFTER HE REINCARNATED HE TURNED INTO THIS FREAKING TWINK

ALSO IT FEELS WEIRD BECAUSE I CONSIDERED ABEL AS A PARENT TO THE PRINCE AND NOW THEYRE THE SAME AGE TECHNICALLY PHYSICALLY ELEVEN YEARS LATER I FEEL LIKE MENTALLY ABEL IS HIS AGE AND ITS SO WEIRD BC THEYRE SUPPOSED TO BE SHIPPED TOGETHER

anyways I'll update when I read the novel because I haven't

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STOOP

How I found out about trump getting shot

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How does this work ?

I unreasonably read a ton of fanfiction/manhwa and would love to share my unrequested and unneeded opinions on them into the ring of fire.

︴ I'm reviewing the stories (not the author) based on their grammar, how well I can read it, and if I like the story in general. This isn't an excuse to attack on someone's character, you can be a bad writer and be the koolest person I've ever met!

︴ if the thing that I'm reading it uncompleted I will keep updating my feelings about each chapter and then once everything is published I will do an overall review.

︴ Many reviews will have spoilers (for obvious reasons) but I will put a disclaimer if you just want a basis of what the story is about and interested in reading it.

︴ I will read only the tags I am interested in, if you request or recommend a fanfic that I'm not interested in or uncomfortable in the contents, please don't be offended if I don't do that review.

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My Silent Prayer

Silence, Silence, Silence,

Pleading, Pleading, Pleading,

For help, for guidance, for rescue,

But no answer, no rescue, no guidance,

Only the echoing of my closets silence.

In the echoes of silence, a void so deep,

No solace, no comfort, just endless miskeep.

Pleading for answers, met with cold disdain,

In the depths of despair, consumed by pain.

Silent echoes reverberated through the dark,

A lonely cry, a hopeless spark.

Lost in the emptiness, no rescue in sight,

Trapped in the shadows of eternal night.

Desperate pleas fall on deaf ears.

No savior, no relief from the tears.

Alone in the void, with no end in sight,

The echoes of silence, a never-ending plight.

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Before the Storm ︴★★★★☆

➥ author ,, @crissy_writes_garbage .

➥ fandom ,, Naruto .

➥ pages ,, 6/6 : completed .

➥ tags ,, SasuSaku (Haruno Sakura/Uchiha Sasuke), Team 7, Time Travel, mentions of pregnancy .

➥ finished ,, 09.22.24 - 09.22.24 .

︴about ,,

This Ao3 Fanfiction is just about Adult Sakura, when she was pregnant with Sarada I assume, and she travels into the past where her team was a Genin and taking that huge mission where they traveled outside of Konoha.

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spoilers below, obviously .

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︴rating ,,

I would say out of five stars, it would be four out of five

I love the concept of this person time traveling to the past and meeting this person because I like seeing the past reacting to the future and it makes me think "hrm... how will they react based on their personality"

I like the ship sasusaku.........

I usually don't read stories with women who are pregnant because it makes me so uncomfortable but I can ignore those parts

I love the writing style a bit because it makes it easier to read for me since it has big spaces each "paragraph"

For the most part in my opinion there wasn't anything too out of character, the only thing I could criticize (and the reason why I took a star off) is the part where Sasuke yelled "Don't touch my wife!"

I get it, overprotective especially because she is pregnant, it's just for me I feel like if he was really really desperate he would but if she is just in danger a bit he would just help her and not yell out a cringy line that made me repulsed a bit... ermm....

I JUST since he's like a very tch... im a kinda deadbeat dad.... tch but i care about my wife... NO EXTREME ALPHA MALE LIKE HIM IS GONNA DO A SCREAM OF "DON'T TOUCH HERRER !!! >_< PLEADING EMOJI!!!"

MAYBE MAYBE IM JUST OVERREACTING OBER THAT PART JUST A TAD BUT BRO IT WAS A SHORT FANFIC I READ OBVIOUSLY ONE PART OUT OF 6 PAGES WILL IMPACT MY SCORE!!!!!