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HIIIIII!!!! Im new here and i would like feedback on this bkdk fic that I’m writing:))))) and i would just want some pointers or hopefully to find someone who would edit/help me write this story. PLEASE I NNED HELP i want to put it on ao3
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A scream was heard throughout the kingdom- scratch that, more like a holler was heard. “Get out!!”, the voice sent shivers down people's spines. Everyone in town ran to see the commotion, knowing the possessor of the ear-splitting screech, but not the reason.
When the people of the town got close enough to the castle, they could see The Mad Prince, Izuku- No one dared to say that to him, but that is the name he garnered over the years.
Anyways, the prince could be seen throwing a peculiar looking man with red and white hair, out of the castle doors. It was strange because royalty or people of high status only colored their hair, and on rare occasions some people were born with it, like izuku.
Someone had recognized the man as Prince Todoroki and yelled his name asking him what he was doing there?, and that is when Izuku turned and stated in a very loud voice “ This Prince-“ laced with disgust as if he was going to throw up any moment .” Has tried to defile me in undesirable ways!’’ Many scrunched up their faces and some gasped, they had thought the man was a goner! Then the prince started again while Todoroki was being restrained by guards, it had begun to rain and the ground the town’s people were stepping in started to soften. many, including Todoroki only had a simple tunic on. Izuku's hair began to soak as the rest of the people.
“ I had refused his advances many times and he wouldn’t give up” Izuku yelled venom lacing his words as if he wanted the man's head. The detained prince tried to object, but a hard slap stopped his words in his tracks. Multiple townsfolk shrieked while holding their faces as if they got hit. Then Izuku continued, his eyes apparent with rage “ this man won't ever step foot in this kingdom… and if he does the next time you’d see him is BURNING AT A STAKE” he yelled convulsively shaking, eyes bulging out of his eyes, lightning striking multiple times behind the castle as if he were in a movie.
Finally losing his temper- not that he was holding it to begin with. He had motioned to the guards to take the red and white haired prince to his home kingdom, and began to walk away until he heard a cry.
“ I'm sorry!… please don’t do this- i thought you l-loved me!” Todoroki sobbed roughly, terrified of the consequences of his actions. It was so pitiful, Izuku chuckled under his breath, bringing his hand up to stop himself. He turned his neck showing the side of his face. “ I don’t recall ever saying that? Hmm..” he said in a mockingly innocent manner, putting his index finger to his chin and arching his eyebrow as if he was trying to remember. Slyly smiling as he turned his head walking away, water squelching as he walked. You could hear Todoroki gasp for air as if he couldn’t believe what he heard. His eyes widened in betrayal
The guards took the pervert away, metal stomping against the water making tiny splashes. He cried and begged Izuku but the green prince wouldn’t look back. He shut the castle door and Todoroki choked realizing that he was royally fucked. The people of the town eyed Todoroki as if he were a monster, even though izuku was crazy he was sweet to the people and they’d go to war for him. One person went so far and threw dirt at the perverse prince as the guards dragged him away. The whole time he kept thrashing and screaming to break free but it was no use. The guards threw him in the carriage and they took him away
“ YOU'LL PAY FOR THIS!! YOU FUCKING PSYCHO” was the last thing anyone heard of the pervert while the drove him away, the murder laced in his voice was terrifying enough but the look on his face was worse the rage in his eyes, his grinding against each other and the dried tears on his face. Everyone had an eerie feeling about him, its like they knew he’d be back.
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A breathy exhale out his nose, Izuku flops on the sofa in his room. Mentally exhausted, he curls up shivering, breath quickening, shoulders shaking. Fisting his hair roughly, trying to stabilize his emotions. His chest collapses inward, tears form while his lips quiver. Why me ?!….why is it always me?…why can't I be loved- a painful sob broke his thoughts. Izuku didn’t want to be bitter, he didn’t want people to fear him, he knows he is loved bye the people but they’re scared, he can't show too much vulnerability he’ll seem weak. Hitting his hands against his head,gasping for air sobs becoming violent, no one saw him. No one will ever see him, if they get too close- “no no no no” he muttered , shaking his head , tears and snot rushing to the side of his face. He would never let anyone get close.
He sat there and cried for a while, when he calmed down he took his fancy looking tunic off and went into his bathroom, stopping to look at himself. Looking at his deep green curls, the messed up glitter on his face, his red nose and puffed up eyes. The dried tears on face and the smeared light pink lipstick on his face, he looked real, he didn’t look all made up and perfect. He breathed in and exhaled deeply and smiled softly, lips barely curling and walked into his shower feeling new.
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Laughter could be heard loud and thunderous throughout the red castles “ That’s fucking hilarious!! “ Prince Katsuki cackled, talking to his best man in his dressing room, “yeah dude! He was shaking!” His red haired friend exclaimed. “ he really slapped the fucker…, whew! I didn’t think greenie had it in him” Katsuki said wiping tears from his eyes from laughing too much, he always hated Todoroki so getting his ass handed to him really boosted his mood. “ What?! Izuku is feared by A LOT of kingdoms!” Kirishima said, in emphasizing ‘A lot’ as if this was common knowledge. Katsuki gave him a quizzed face wondering if they were talking about the same person,he opened his mouth but before he could inquire some people came in and told him it was time for him to walk down the aisle.
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He sighed softly and looked at his bride,uncertain but in love he smiled. He knew he had some infatuation with her. She had looked as beautiful as a flower in a lonesome desert, no one could compare to her beauty he thought. He felt like he was moving in slow motion but he just wanted to get to her, that’s all he wanted, that’s all he ever wanted. In the corner of his eye he spotted Izuku, and his breath caught woah.. he thought but shook his thoughts. He had scared himself and he started to doubt his thoughts , then he looked at his bride and all of his worries washed away.
When he got to her-his love, his eyes widened and softened he grabbed her hands and held them and looked in her eyes. The priest said whatever he said- Katsuki wasn’t listening he kept thinking about izuku, it quizzed him but he snapped to reality. “ Speak now or forever hold your peace” the priest said, those words would forever scar him. “ I love you!!! Please don’t marry him!” A voice yelled from out of he audience. Katsukis heart sank his eyes moving erratically, he looked at his bride and back at the crowd, he let go harshly let got of her hands, his throat contracting “ what?” His voice broke nose flaring, he kept looking in her eyes hoping he could get anything, but she couldn’t even look him in the eyes. He backed away, he felt lost, all the time they’ve spent, all the ‘I love yous’ was for nothing.. his eyes burned and he started to breath as if he was out of breathe shaking his head, he couldn’t believe what he heard, his ears were ringing and heart was beating loudly, he looked at the girl her head was down and she was wincing like she was expecting to get hit, he didn’t even yell. He ran, he ran as fast as he could out of the castle. Turning corridors, running through halls he pushed the door open, feeling the sun hit his face. He cried, broke down on his knees holding his chest.
” Hey” a soft voice said. A calming hand was placed on Katsukis back rubbing circles , the voice began to speak again but stopped, running was heard from inside etching closer to the door. “ Be ok” the voice said quietly but reassuringly, then the hand returned to its owner and the person walked away. Katsuki looked up for the first time and saw a blurry silhouette with green hair moving away, “ ill try” katsuki whispered, and the silhouette stopped as if he heard him then continued to walk away. Kirishima came out the door and shook katsuki asking him if he was okay. Katsuki kept looking at Izuku everything was slow he didn’t take his eyes off of him. Izuku got in his carriage and finally looked back at katsuki, nodding at him and softly smiling while the horses started to trot. Katsukis eyes widened a little, his heart was beating fast and he merely nodded back. Eyes following the carriage as it drove away.
“ KATSUKI!” The red haired boy yelled in his ear, snapping him out of his trance. “ WHAT” katsuki yelled back “ are you ok?!!” Kirishima worried, katsuki wobbly sighed and looked in the air “ I will be”. “ I guess that’s enough for right now” kirishima said calmly plopping him self next to Katsuki nudging his shoulder, “ yeah” katsuki breathed
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“ YOU DID WHAT??!!” Shinsou spat his tea, “ what it just felt right!!I felt bad?” He exclaimed confused, curling his shoulders and moving back hiding by his tea. “ its not a bad thing it’s just…. Unlike you??” Shinsou gestured his hands side to side like he was trying to feel his answer looking confused. Izuku frowned, unlike me ? He thought “ what do you mean ?? You think I’m mean??!” Izuku worried, shinsou looked up at him confused but hurried his answer” NO- no no ! I’m saying that you don’t talk to people like him” shinsou tensed his shoulders up and looked to the side, tilting his head in the same direction. Like him?? Izuku quizzed “ People like him?” Izuku questioned, Shinsou looked alarmed
, he looked in izukus eyes as if he were joking. When he realized he was not he sighed “ izuku… darling, people like Katsuki are..well… aggressive and we shouldn’t associate with them” he said condescendingly, taking his hand and looking at him like a child, as if he couldn’t understand. That made Izuku uncomfortable and ticked off but he couldn’t say it so he just agreed and switched the conversation, ‘darling’ put a bad taste in his mouth.
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Izuku got a letter, he sat down at his study lighting a candle while drinking some tea. He opened the letter, it read,
Hi, this is katsuki, I just wanted to say thank you I guess for that.
Izuku smiled, he didn’t think his words would stick with katsuki, but he continued.
We are having a get together tomorrow night, with a few of the kingdom's princesses and princes.
I would like to invite you-
Izuku choked on his tea. He's inviting me!!!?? He thought coughing.
I think you’re cool enough to come or whatever
Izuku could tell that part was written fast because it was all sloppy. Was he embarrassed? Izuku chuckled
Anyways you don’t have to write back just show up or don’t whatever I don’t care.
He cared
The location is by creek in the forest at the border between The heart kingdom and yours, the time is preferably late, around 10, wear something you wouldn’t mind getting wet.
Bye.
Izuku already had a an idea what he was going to wear, he was excited. He knew he couldn’t tell Shinsou about this.
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Katsuki felt like shit but he really wanted to go to the little thing he had planned, it had been maybe two weeks since the whole incident and it wasn’t so popular anymore, and he’s been coping. He still thought about her and he’d call her name forgetting that she wasn’t there , but it was ok.
He got off the bed groaning, walking in the bathroom he saw his reflection in the mirror, he looked….interesting. That’s what we are going to call him, he groaned and got in the shower, hissing as the hot water hit his back, he turned his head and swore he saw her but it wasn’t real, he’s been seeing her from time to time but its only glimpses and he was painfully reminded that she wasn’t there, and that shed ran off with someone else.
Katsuki picked up a black shirt and put it on, flexing his muscles to fit in it. It was a little tight but that’s how he liked it. He had also put on some white knee high shorts, and a slide type shoe. He'd almost walked out but he had put a coat like item on so he wouldn’t be exposed, he walked outside getting in his carriage and left.
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It was probably like 10:40 and Katsuki was sure izuku wasn’t coming, he was a little disappointed but it’s whatever.
“Damn suki he stood you up” said the infamous ‘Pink Princess’ chuckling while she nudged his shoulder. Katsuki grunted while rolling his eyes “ stop with the ‘suki’ shit… and he didn’t “stand me up” I told him he could come if he wanted too” he replied with quotations while looking at his friends messing around the fire while drinking idiots he snorted.
“Yeah whatever” she said joining them before Katsuki could retort, “ asshole!” He yelled.
He sat there drinking for a while and then he heard a snap of a twig, he almost dropped his drink and it startled him, when he turned around he saw him.
Izuku was wearing a deep teal chemise with a medium length train in the back, it had greenish blue and green streaks in it. His pants were black and tight, like a stretchy material? His hair oh..- his hair was so curly t the curls were perfectly placed, some out of his face and some in front. He was so shiny and his face looked glittery, in the moonlight he shined like the moon was there to spotlight him.
“Woah,” Katsuki murmured out loud, his eyes widened and his lips parted.”Excuse me?” Izuku chuckled, pulling his hand up to cover his face, Katsuki coughed “ nothing, sorry um hey.” Izuku was amused. “ Hi!, Im izuku if you can't tell” he said smiling, it was just silent. Izuku looked at Katsuki, he just looked dumbstruck. He could see the bags under his eyes. He must've had some rough nights. Izuku thought sadly, the silence got uncomfortable so he waved his hand in front of his face “ are you ok?” Izuku asked, he started getting worried.
“ Huh?..yeah! I'm ok..” Katsuki said, regaining his consciousness. “O…k?” Izuku said eyeing him. “ um.. they’re drinking over there if you want to join them” Katsuki said nonchalantly, it shocked Izuku because he totally switched his tone and attitude. “ hm?… I think I’ll stick with you, I mean it was soo nice for you to invite me ” Izuku said in a faux innocent voice looking up at Katsuki. Katsukis eyes widened for a little, he cleared his throat “ Ok… but, be careful Izuku i might be a little too much for you ” he said whispering raspy in Izuku's ear, and then backing away. Izuku gulped and cleared his throat, it was like Katsuki beat him at his own game. “ I can handle anything, “ he suggested. Katsuki didn’t respond, he just chuckled.
As the night progressed, izuku got hold of some wine or something he really didn’t know. It just made him really woozy. The other princes and princesses had joined them, it was The Heart Prince Kirishima and The Light Prince Kamanari, The Pink Princess from The kingdom of lust and a few others.
They were laughing around but izuku swore he heard a sort of ‘whisper’ it was calling him all night , he excused himself from the group and started to follow the voice.
“ Come here” it whispered , izuku turned and looked but he didn’t see anybody. Pushing through branches and bushes he continued into the forest.
“In here silly” the voice giggled, izuku looked around more and saw a light he tripped over too it “H-hello” Izuku hiccuped. He saw there was an opening, before he could go in an arm pulled him back. He whipped his head to see katsuki, “ what the fuck are you doing out here?” Katsuki said Izuku was going to answer but he was cut off.
“Come in and you’ll see” the voice purred
Izuku gave Katsuki a look saying, "Does that answer your question’.
“Are you coming?” The voice was getting inpatient
“ lets go” Izuku whispered gesturing to the cave, Katsuki thought he was stupid” it’s dangerous, no idiot” Katsuki hissed , izuku rolled his eyes and forced his arm out of his grip and ran in the cave “ scaredy cat” izuku whisper-yelled. Katsuki of course ran after him but then stopped after seeing a large orb glowing with an array of colors. Izuku stood in front it mesmerized.
“ like what you see?” The voice chuckled,” i can give you power wouldn’t you like that?”
Katsukis hand tightened and inhaled walking to the orb where izuku was
“ what do you mean?”katsuki spat replying to the thing
“ just touch me and see” the voice moaned with excitement
“What’s the catch?” Katsuki questioned, he was super sketched and izuku was just staring.
‘ ughhhhh you’re so boring, you’re not going to make this easy are you?” The voice sighed
“ no I’m not sorry I don’t touch random fucking orbs in caves” Katsuki said sarcastically.
“Ok, well sorry for this then” the voice said plainly , before Katsuki could say anything “ what?-"Izuku said before the orb got bigger and touched them instead.
The pair jumped back holding their arms.
The voice cackled “ look down”
Everything went so fast
The pair looked down, everything was glowing they looked at their arms , it was a stripe of light going up their arms. Katsukis was orange and Izukus was green, but Katsukis stripes ruptured into other lines like explosions?. He looked up at izuku and saw his were like lightning strikes in his arm reaching his neck, izuku looked at him “ I’m sorry” barely even whispering he looked as if he was going to cry.
Katsuki wasn’t going to go out like this, his anger built up and charged at the orb, thinking he could do some damage. Izuku followed him trying to stop but it was too late, Katsuki jumped on it and izuku was still grabbing him.
“This is going to be soooooo gooooood” the voice exclaimed laughing
They both got blasted back, landing on their back. Convulsing violently, feeling like they were being electrocuted, izuku grabbed Katsukis arm trying to withstand the pain
By this time they’re whole body had streaks of light. It looked cool but didn’t feel cool.
Izuku had started to holler, the pain was too much too bare, he patted his hand around to find something sharp. His hand met a rock, he grabbed and tried to plunge it into himself. But Katsuki had stopped him.
“We…can..do..this” Katsuki groaned, he was not going to give up on life. “ I’m…sorry,“ izuku said lightly. tears running down both of their faces” Be ok…” Katsuki whispered.
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“Sir, are you ok” a voice said, Izuku shot up, his eyes widened. “Woah! Calm down, you're ok,” the other man exclaimed, trying to get Izuku to lay down.” What happened !!? Where’s Katsuki? “ Izuku said practically screaming. The man had covered his ear, wincing at the screech, “ he’s just in the other room, I was told the other kingdoms princes and princess found you in a cave laying next to Katsuki….with throw up everywhere” the man said, lightly gagging at the thought of being covered in throw up.
“Oh…” izuku said looking down at his arm, there were little marks all across his arms. It wasn’t a dream izuku thought I DIDN'T DIE!? Eyes wide.
“I have to go to the restroom” Izuku announced, trying to get up but immediately falling after.” Woah, you can’t just get up like that sir you haven’t been up for two months” the man exclaimed running to the side of the bed to help him up. Izuku choked two months,
“ What?” Izuku rasped, the man sighed “ he woke up the other day, do you wish to go to the bathroom?’’. It took a while for the prince to respond.”… yes, i would” he said, collecting himself, giving the man a sheepish smile.
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