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The Divide AU

Decided to call this the Divide AU since it'll be divided into two timelines after The Last Hope: the rewritten and fixed canon timeline and the DawnClan timeline

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Mapleshade’s Vengeance Rewrite

-Maplekit is born to Dawnfeather and Redstar alongside Seedkit. Redstar and Dawnfeather had lost several litters before and became a bit protective

-Maplekit becomes spoiled and entitled from being the leader’s kit while Seedkit becomes disappointed by his sister’s behavior

-The day before Maplekit and Seedkit become apprentices, Redstar dies from a tainted piece of fresh-kill and the ceremony is pushed back by a day

-Seedpaw slowly starts to drift apart from Maplepaw during their apprenticeship

-A couple of moons pass when Dawnfeather tells Maplepaw that she is expecting kits, and Maplepaw assumes that she is replacing her with the new kits

-Dawnfeather dies from greencough when Nettlekit is four moons old, and Maplepaw has another breakdown

-The newly named Birchface decides to bring Maplepaw to the forest in order to talk privately about her reaction and reveals about his mother's death

-Maplepaw gains a small crush on him

-But she never gets the chance to tell him since a few moons later, he falls from Sunningrocks and drowns alongside his apprentice

-Mapleshade completely shuts down for a while until she formally meets the tom that caused the accident: Appledusk

-The two keep meeting at Gatherings and border patrols before they confess to each other and start meeting in secret

-A few moons passed and Mapleshade reveals her pregnancy to Appledusk

-Appledusk is reasonably worried about ThunderClan finding out, but Mapleshade pushes aside his worries

-Frecklewish approaches Mapleshade the next day and wonders if, against all odds, the kits are Birchface's, and takes Mapleshade's shocked silence as a 'yes'

-Petalkit, Larchkit, and Patchkit are born

-Two moons later, the secret is revealed after Ravenwing misunderstands a sign

-At the river, Mapleshade is trying to get her kits to swim across when a patrol of Bloomheart, Seedpelt, and Frecklewish appear and says that Oakstar changed his mind after an elder, Amberclaw, reveals that Oakstar is half-Clan since his father Gorseclaw was born in a now forgotten Clan and brought to ThunderClan as a kit with his sister and mother

-But Mapleshade is too blinded by hostility to even listen and instead yells them that it's too late before yelling at her kits to cross the river

-Unfortunately, the kits instead run to the patrol

-Mapleshade, feeling betrayed by the only ones that could never leave her, tries to attack them but Bloomheart fends her off and accidentally pushes her into the river

-The RiverClan patrol still manages to save her, and she is freaking out over ThunderClan 'stealing' her kits

-She is brought to Darkstar where Appledusk reveals their secret meetings

-When asked about what she meant about ThunderClan stealing her kits, Mapleshade reveals what happened and begs for RiverClan's help

-Darkstar notices an unsettling look in Mapleshade's eyes and decides that she will not risk her warriors' lives just to get three kits

-Mapleshade yells at her before turning to Appledusk for help, which he says that she is not the cat he once thought she was and wants nothing to do with her

-"You told me you loved me! I went through the agony of bearing your kits! And now, you treat me worse than prey. You will regret this Appledusk. That is my last promise to you."

-She then runs out of RiverClan's camp and ends up at the barn where she plots how to make both RiverClan and ThunderClan pay

-The next few moons, she secretly torments the Clans by stealing prey from both territories and putting them on the other's territories, she kills Ravenwing at the Moonstone, she blinds a pregnant Frecklewish when she's out on a stroll, and paralyzes Perchpaw before killing Appledusk while trying to attack Reedshine

-Reedshine's yowl alerts a nearby patrol that attack Mapleshade and chase her off the territory where she returns to the barn and dies, descending to the Dark Forest

-In the epilogue, Frecklewish died giving birth to stillborn kits, Petalkit is now Petaldawn and is Flashpaw's and Daisypaw's mother, Larchkit is now Larchtail and is Mistpaw's mentor, and Patchkit is now Patchface, the new ThunderClan medicine cat after Cloudberry was asked to train him when Ravenwing died

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Warriors Series Six Rewrite

Mapleshine's Hope Rewrite

-Snaptooth is now Wildpelt's mate in a Bluestar's Prophecy Stormtail/Moonflower relationship

-Flamekit is now a blue-gray tabby tom named Duskkit and Finchkit remains the same

The Broken Code Rewrite

(Version One)

-Bristlepaw and Thriftpaw are born from Ivystorm and Flippaw is born from Fernsong, both litters are sired by Thornclaw

-A voice warns Shadowpaw that a great darkness will destroy the Clans from within

-Shadowpaw decides of freezing Bramblestar as a last resort since the herbs are not helping the leader

-Rootpaw sees a spirit near Shadowsight trying to comfort said cat but is distracted by Bramblestar's ghost

-Toadstep dies in the battle against the impostor

-Mapleshine tries to trick the impostor into revealing themself as Ashfur but the impostor reveals that they are not Ashfur and that they are Petalstar, an ancient SkyClan leader before killing Mapleshine

-The Sisters' ritual reveals Petalstar as a cream-colored she-cat with a ginger face, tail, legs, and ears and pale blue eyes

-When Shadowsight dreams himself into the Dark Forest, he finally meets the voice that has been giving him reassurances from the beginning: a tuxedo she-cat with blue-green eyes who identifies herself as Magpie

-The Dark Forest is being swallowed by thick fog which will tear a spirit apart if they touch it for too long

-Petalstar reveals that the Clans are too soft on codebreakers so she wants to remake the Clans, no matter who gets in her way

-Dawnstar manages to get through the hole in the barrier that is slowly growing and kills Darkstripe

-Redwillow falls into the thick fog and his screams are heard as he's being killed bit by agonizing bit

-Petalstar reveals that she used Ashfur to harvest spirits before disposing of him once his usefulness wore out

-Magpie tries to protect Shadowsight's body but Petalstar strikes her

-After Bristlefrost's sacrifice and the fog disappears, Magpie calls out to a 'Little One' as she is bleeding from her throat before collapsing

-Dawnstar rushes to her side and reveals that Magpie is her adoptive mother that she formed her beliefs around

-Once back to the living world, Shadowsight reveals that it was Magpie he was communicating with instead of StarClan and that she tried to help him all along

(Version Two)

-Just the two Clans fighting over where borders go and about half-Clan relationships within DawnClan

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Warriors Series Five Rewrite

Dovewing's Silence Rewrite

(Version One)

-Basically nothing changes from the original

(Version Two)

-The new Clan debates what to do: if they should leave the lake or choose one of the old Clans' camps as their own

-Spikekit and Grasskit become apprentices with Tigerheart and Heathertail as their mentors

-The newly named Toadstar chooses Heathertail as deputy

-Songheart finds out she's expecting Lionblaze's kits

Bramblestar's Storm Rewrite

(Version One)

-Toadstep survives greencough

-Benny survives and is renamed Patchpaw as ThunderClan's new medicine cat apprentice

-Fernsong is now born a she-cat but identifies as a tom i.e. a he-molly: a she-cat or tom that identifies as their personal gender

-Jessy gives birth to hers' and Bramblestar's kits: Redkit (red-brown tom) and Wildkit (black she-kit) but when they're fully weaned, she leaves the Clan to go back to her Twolegs

(Version Two)

-Tigerheart and Ivystorm settle their grudge with each other

-Benny survives and is renamed Patchpaw as DawnClan's new medicine cat apprentice

-Fernsong is now born a she-cat but identifies as a tom i.e. a he-molly: a she-cat or tom that identifies as their personal gender

A Vision of Shadows Rewrite

(Version One)

-An unknown figure helps Redpaw with his warrior training but is unsuccessful as he is forced into the medicine cat position

-Twigkit is renamed as Mistkit

-Blossomfall gives birth to Toadstep's kits

-Darktail and a pale gray she-cat named Moonfall are revealed to be Blackstar's kits from his time as a rogue

-Dawnpelt, Lioneye, and Mistcloud are revealed to be alive since Moonfall went behind her brother's back and saved them

-Moonfall and Darktail fight in the lake which they both go under, a red spot slowly forms from where they sank and Moonfall bursts out of the water saying that she killed Darktail once and for all, and disbands the Kin

-Mistpaw is named Mistshade

-Moonfall becomes a member of the revived ShadowClan and asks to be renamed Moonfoot after Blackstar

(Version Two)

-Ivystorm gives birth to hers' and Tigerheart's kits: Shadowkit (unchanged), Leafkit (light brown tom), and Brightkit (pale silver she-kit)

-Darktail is dissatisfied that DawnClan is all there is left of the four original Clans

-Moonfall and Darktail fight in the lake which they both go under, a red spot slowly forms from where they sank and Moonfall bursts out of the water saying that she killed Darktail once and for all, and disbands the Kin

-Moonfall joines DawnClan and asks to be renamed Moonfoot after Blackstar

-SkyClan decides to occupy the old ShadowClan territory while DawnClan occupies the old ThunderClan territory

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Warriors Series Four Rewrite

Omen of the Stars Rewrite

-Stonestar announces that RiverClan will be fishing from the lake because of the drought but staying on their own territory

-Ivypaw is now Lionblaze's apprentice and Dovepaw is now Songheart's apprentice

-Dovepaw is chosen alongside Lionblaze which surprises Ivypaw and Songheart

-Ivypaw is starting to feel neglected by Lionblaze paying more attention to Dovepaw

-Dovepaw sees and hears Blackclaw plotting with Leopardfur to get rid of Stonestar and have Leopardfur reinstated as RiverClan's leader

-Dawnstar reveals the prophecy after Dovepaw and Ivypaw sneak into WindClan

-Lionblaze seems to be agitated with Ivypaw which makes her think that he would prefer being Dovepaw's mentor instead

-Longtail is crushed by the tree but manages to push Briarpaw away just in time as the only wounds she receives is being scarred on her side and half of her face

-Ivypaw tries to interrogate Lionblaze about how he truly feels about being her mentor and notices his eyes glaze over before he snaps out of it

-Dovepaw finds out that Ivypaw is training in the Dark Forest and tells Jayflight and Lionblaze

-Jayflight finds out that StarClan is now divided but an unknown figure approaches him and says that the code states that they must fight together against evil

-Songheart comforts Ivypaw after finding out that the sisters are drifting apart

-Dovepaw reveals her powers to Ivypaw which makes her decide to spy on the Dark Forest

-Flametail falls through the frozen lake, but Jayflight and a mysterious figure save him

-Ivypaw finds Flametail's spirit in the Dark Forest and is told to kill him, but Tigerheart intervenes

-Flametail reveals that his body is healing which is why his spirit is able to move freely

-Ivypaw and Dovepaw become Ivystorm and Dovewing

-Ivystorm interrogates Lionblaze again that he only reason she became a warrior was because he was through training her, and with glazed over eyes he reveals that he would have preferred Dovewing as his apprentice since she is better at listening to her mentor

-Ivystorm realizes that she has a power of manipulating cats by talking to them and being able to resist manipulation from others

-Flametail is now fully recovered from his near drowning

-Sorreltail's kits are stillborn, but Brackenfur finds two abandoned kits who they decide to raise and name them Lilykit and Seedkit

-Hollyleaf tells Lionblaze and Jayflight that she absorbed Ashfur's spirit when she killed him and that she kept hearing his voice was in her head which led her to reveal their parentage

-Ivystorm also reveals her powers to Dovewing who relays the knowledge to Lionblaze and Jayflight

-Jayflight tells Dawnstar that there are five cats with powers: himself able to walk in dreams and memories, Lionblaze being invincible, Dovewing being able to extend her sight and hearing, Ivystorm being able to manipulate cats and resist manipulation, and Hollyleaf being able to absorb souls

-Strange scents are being detected in all of the territories

-StarClan is now experiencing changing seasons

-Brightheart gives birth to Swiftstep's kits: Snowkit, Amberkit, and Dewkit

-The Clans prepare for the battle against the Dark Forest

-The Dark Forest attack ShadowClan and take one of Blackstar's lives

-The mysterious figure that helped save Flametail reveals themselves as a cat made up of stars named Star's Path: the first spirit and creator of StarClan

-Midnight reveals that they are the kit of Star's Path and helps fight the Dark Forest

-Ivystorm inspires the trainees to fight against the Dark Forest and is saved from Hawkfrost by Hollyleaf

-Ivystorm kills Hawkfrost before carrying Hollyleaf to camp where she makes amends with her family before dying

(Ending One)

-Dawnstar, Hollyleaf, Ferncloud, Sorreltail, Mistyfoot, Ebonygaze, and Mousefur ascend to StarClan

-Midnight and Star's Path reveal that the prophecy has been fulfilled

(Ending Two)

-Mousewhisker, Ivypool, and Songheart are all that's left of ThunderClan

-Tigerheart, Ivytail and her kits, and Berryheart are all that's left of ShadowClan

-Kestrelflight, Heathertail, and Owlwhisker are all that's left of WindClan

-Toadpelt, Robinwing, and Petalfur are all that's left of RiverClan

-The survivors meet at the island and decide to join together as one Clan with Toadpelt as leader

-The new Clan is named DawnClan for the cats joining together for a new dawn

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Warriors Series Three Rewrite

The Power of Three Changes

-Lionkit is now red-and-cream

-Feathertail is now Ashfur's mate, and they are the parents of Foxkit and Icekit

-Cinderpaw is now named Songpaw after Ravensong

-There is no Tribe or Ancient sub-plot

-After finding out about Brightheart neglecting Jaypaw, Dawnstar takes him as her own apprentice

-Graystripe and Sandstorm return and it turns out they became mates during their journey home

-Jaypaw accidentally dreamwalks into the Dark Forest where Spottedleaf leads him back to StarClan and try to force him to become a medicine cat which he refuses since Dawnstar believes in him and told him about her experiences before the Clan where disabled cats can hunt and fight as well as normal cats

-WindClan is attacked by dogs and Dawnstar sends a patrol to see if they can help or if WindClan has it covered, the patrol is needed to defeat the dogs

-ShadowClan's accusation of ThunderClan taking in non-Clanborn cats at the Gathering has Dawnstar snap at Blackstar and says that she and the other 'non-Clanborn' cats will leave which surprises all four Clans since Dawnstar is the most loyal and passionate cat they know

-Dawnstar says that if she proved herself over and over again to the Clans then why can't the others, and all of the Clans agrees

-Jaypaw dreamwalks into Dawnstar's dream and finds out about the prophecy but also that Dawnstar is confused about which kin since she adopted Cloudtail when he was a kit so that makes Whitewing her kin as well

-Songpaw breaks her leg, but Cinderleap comforts her by saying that Dawnstar never gave up on her when the rest of the Clan did

-Lionpaw is visited by Tigerstar and Brambleclaw finds out which he then warns his 'son' about the dangers of the Dark Forest

-Lionpaw discovers his power after kittypets from the Greenleaf Twolegplace attack the border patrol

-Jaypaw reveals the prophecy to his siblings and about Dawnstar's confusion about which cats the prophecy is talking about

-Sandstorm gives birth to Bumblekit, Briarkit, and Blossomkit

-WindClan attacks ThunderClan, and Feathertail and Dawnstar's and Blackwhisker's newborn kits are killed by accident

-Dawnstar attacks Onestar and tells him that he will pay for the deaths his warriors caused

-Jaypaw gets his warrior name: Jayflight and is now a full-time fighter since his lack of vision makes it hard to hunt precisely

-A fire breaks out and the remaining cats head towards the Twoleg nest, but Jayflight, Hollyleaf, and Lionblaze are trapped

-Mapleshine reveals that the three are not her kits before a black-and-white blur knocks Ashfur off of the branch, the blur is revealed to be Swiftstep with Dustpelt close behind

-Dustpelt says that Dawnstar sent the two to search for them

-The three escape and they are all escorted back to the Clan where Ashfur is interrogated by Dawnstar and reveals everything

-Ferncloud surprises the Clan by slashing her brother's face and reveals that Feathertail loved him much to his surprise since he took her as a mate to try and get over Mapleshine which failed

-Foxpaw and Icepaw disown Ashfur as their father

-Dawnstar strips Ashfur of his name before exiling him which he retorts by saying that the Clan will pay for this

-As Sol is taken prisoner, Purdy is invited to join ThunderClan as an elder since he is older now than when he first met the journeying cats

-The other three leaders arrive to talk about Sol's punishment

-Skypool reveals to Hollyleaf that she knows that she killed Ashfur and that she is the three's true mother

-Hollyleaf reveals at the secret at the Gathering, but all Lionblaze notices is that her eyes are now dark blue instead of green

-Hollyleaf reveals that she was the one that killed Ashfur and threatend to kill Skypool before running into the tunnels just before it collapses

-Dawnstar reveals to Blackwhisker that she knew the three were Skypool's kits and wonders if her silence was worth it

-He tells her that it was up to their daughters since it wasn't hers to tell

-A barely visible figure is watching the Clans as it wonders about what will happen to 'the balance'

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Warriors Series One Rewrite

I decided to rewrite the series since there was a lot of things that annoyed me, like Firestar being a gary stu, how stupid the Clans are and how they treat adoption and disabilities

Bluestar's Prophecy Changes

-Frostfur and Brindleface are now White-eye's and Sparrowpelt's kits

-Windflight is no longer Thrushpelt's and Tawnyspots' father

-Rosetail is now cream-colored with a ginger tail

-Featherwhisker and Spottedpaw, who chose to be a medicine cat because of her interest in herbs and healing, help Bluefur stop Thistleclaw and Tigerpaw from killing a kit before helping to carry him to ThunderClan

-Featherwhisker tells Sunstar what happened and Tigerpaw gets a new mentor, Lionheart, and Thistleclaw is given one chance to regain his Clan's trust

-The kit, Tiny, recovers and explains that his brother and sister tried to kill him for being small and chased him from their den

-The queens share the responsibility of raising Ebonykit since he's old enough to eat prey

-Thistleclaw tries to usurp Lionheart's mentoring while at the same time try to force Spottedpaw to have his kits which he attempts by trying to force mating her when she's gathering herbs in the forest

-Adderfang finds out and helps Spottedpaw back to camp where she reveals what Thistleclaw has done, and when Sunstar asks Thistleclaw why he did it, he says that Spottedpaw is Snowfur and that they are in love which Spottedpaw vehemently denies

-Thistleclaw is then sentenced to exile and told that he would be killed if anyone saw him again

-The clan doesn't blame Spottedpaw because she was the victim

-Tigerpaw and Whitepaw become warriors, and Ebonykit becomes an apprentice with Leopardfoot as his mentor

-Bluefur never gives up her kits, and becomes deputy when they are three moons old and able to eat prey

-It's hinted that the kits' father is from RiverClan because of Mistykit's name

The Prophecy Begins Changes

-The prophecy is changed to: A shining light will change the Clans

-Longtail is now Goldenflower's and Patchpelt's kit

-Sandstorm is Rosetail's and Thrushpelt's kit

-Mistyfoot and Ebonygaze(Ebonypaw) have kits: Blackkit (Reedwhisker), Fawnkit (Primrosepaw), Shadekit (Pikekit), and Nightkit (Perchpaw)

-Whitestorm is Darkstripe's and Graystripe's father

-Rusty is now an unnamed calico she-cat loner with hazel eyes who is renamed Dawnpaw for waiting since dawn to join ThunderClan

-Dawnpaw uses human words which confuse the Clan (i.e. road instead of Thunderpath, human instead of Twoleg, human curses instead of Clan curses, etc.)

-Although Dawnpaw is harsh and blunt, around elders, kits, and queens she is kind and friendly

-The Dark Forest is introduced instead of the next series

-Ravenpaw is now Spottedleaf's apprentice and gets the name Ravensong when Yellowfang takes over his training

-Longtail and Dawnpaw get into an argument when Longtail askes her if her mother taught her any manners she retorts: "Which one? The one that abandoned me at a week old, or the one that died protecting me when I was four months old?!"

-Dawnpaw then runs into the forest while Longtail and the entire Clan stare in shock

-Shadekit disappears and it's discovered that he went to comfort Dawnpaw in the forest but a fox got to him while she was trying to save him

-Nightkit is killed by Brokenstar

-Lionheart survives but is now mute and Bluestar decides to replace him with Tigerclaw

-Dawnpaw is now thought of as the traitor since she is loner-born although she proves to the Clan that she is not

-Fawnkit dies due to greencough

-Ashfur's and Ferncloud's father is Darkstripe

-Dawnpaw and Graypaw find bones scattered throughout ShadowClan territory, but they're too big to be prey bones

-The ShadowClan elders reveal that Brokenstar is hunting them down since he eats the bodies of the kits that died and has already eaten a couple elders

-Brokenstar is still chased out of ShadowClan with his loyal warriors and a cream-and-gray she-cat named Sandycloud, Hopekit, is chosen as leader instead of Nightpelt

-Dawnpaw and Graypaw are made warriors, and Dawnpaw gets the name Dawnlight

-Dawnlight and Graystripe have a small falling out during the search for WindClan since Dawnlight is more experienced with traveling and Graystripe doesn't listen to her

-Dawnlight intercepts Whiteclaw when he lunges at Graystripe, saving him and telling him that if Graystripe dodged then he would fall into the gorge

-Cinderpaw is still crippled but continues training to be a warrior at Dawnlight's encouragement of already meeting disabled cats that have adapted their way of living

-Dawnlight finds a newborn kit with its' dead mother and takes him in while telling the rest of the Clan that she was adopted and because of that would never leave a kit to die

-It is revealed during the battle against the rogues, Brokentail had planned with a Twolegplace group called 'BloodClan' to destroy ThunderClan

-Bluestar tells the other Clans at the Gathering about keeping Brokentail prisoner and allows one warrior from each Clan to end Brokentail once and for all

-Dawnlight reveals what she knows about BloodClan but Tigerclaw refuses to listen saying that a bunch of kittypets aren't difficult to take care of

-Silverstream joins ThunderClan when she is expecting kits, Crookedstar tries to get her back but stops when Silverstream goes into labor and the third kit, named Spring by Graystripe after asking Dawnlight of what rogues, loners, and kittypets call newleaf, is stillborn

-Tigerclaw is stripped of his name before being exiled

-Bluestar refuses to name a deputy and slowly experiences dementia

-Whitestorm is chosen to lead a group for the Gathering when Bluestar refuses to allow anyone to go and find out that Tigerclaw is the leader of ShadowClan

-Bluestar refuses to make any of the apprentices warriors and the kits apprentices

-Snowkit is saved from death by Dawnlight who kills the hawk before it could get him

-Bluestar attacks Dawnlight for stopping the upcoming battle against WindClan

-Swiftpaw and Brightpaw are attacked by the dogs while hunting and both survive the ordeal but are named Lostface and Dogslip

-The Clan leads the dogs to the gorge where Bluestar reveals to Mistyfoot, Stonefur, and Mosspetal that their father is Oakheart

-Ravensong receives a dream that tells him that Dawnlight is to be the new leader

-Dawnstar gives the older apprentices their warrior names and gives the kits their apprentice names, including Snowkit

-Swiftpaw is renamed Swiftstep

-TigerClan kidnaps Stonefur, Mistyfoot, Stormpaw, and Featherpaw while Mosspetal is killed for trying to escape and Silverstream is killed for being a traitor

-Blackfoot, having a change of heart, knocks Stonefur unconscious to trick Tigerstar into thinking that he died and helps the group escape

-Tigerstar tries to kill Gorsepaw but a cat comes between them and take the blow

-The cat is revealed to be Sandystar who reveals that Tigerstar took the rest of her lives and forced her to give up her leadership

-All of the Clans are shocked when Ebonygaze reveals that the leaders of BloodClan, Death and Strike, are his siblings Socks and Ruby

-Both siblings murder Tigerstar and give them three days whether to die or leave

-Dawnstar loses her first life before killing Death (Socks) while Ebonygaze kills Strike (Ruby)

-After BloodClan is defeated, Dawnstar suggests to change the medicine cat rule and the rule about forbidden relationships: 'A medicine cat can have a mate and kits as long as there is another fully trained medicine cat' and 'If a cat chooses to switch Clans to be with their mate, they must start over in that Clan as an apprentice'

-Dawnstar names Longtail her deputy after Whitestorm's death

-Cloudtail, being annoyed at his adoptive mother's and Blackwhisker's obliviousness, reveals to the duo's feeling for each other in front of the Clan

Dawnstar's Quest Changes

-Snowpaw is now named Snowheart and is a full-time hunter since he would have a hard time fighting in border patrols

-Cloudtail, Brightheart, and Swiftstep are mates

-StarClan forces Dawnstar to rebuild SkyClan when she refuses by making the fresh-kill be covered with maggots, herbs in the medicine den rot, and prey disappear from the forest

-Squirrelflight is now tortoiseshell-and-white and renamed Maplekit/paw/shine, and Leafpool is now blue-gray and renamed Skykit/paw/pool and Blackwhisker is their father

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Warriors Series Two Rewrite

The New Prophecy Changes

-Hawkfrost, Mothwing, and Tadpole are now Leopardstar's and Tigerstar's kits

-Stonefur decided to lead RiverClan after Leopardstar was forced to step down

-Tadpole is now named Toadpelt

-Maplepaw and Skypaw don't have the mysterious connection

-The RiverClan representative is a white she-cat apprentice named Snowpaw

-Longtail is still deputy after Dawnstar helps him relearn how to hunt and fight after being blinded

-Cloudtail is Whitepaw's biological father

-Purdy is now young when he meets the journeying cats

-Midnight is now a shape-shifting spirit

-The actual savior of the Tribe is a pale gray she-cat named Frost on Gray Feathers

-Both Graystripe and Sandstorm are captured by twolegs after freeing the others

-Snowpaw dies saving Smokepaw

-Crowpaw is named Crowfeather after Frost

-Maplepaw receives her warrior name: Mapleshine

-Dawnstar refuses to be with Tallstar when he dies since he asked for Onewhisker as well and knows that it's WindClan's business alone but mourns for the fallen leader

-Toadpelt refuses to help his father with taking over the Clans, which makes Brambleclaw start to doubt his father and Hawkfrost

-Skypaw finds the Moonpool and receives her medicine cat name: Skypool

-Mudclaw is seemingly killed when lightning struck a tree and it fell on him, but Dawnstar sees a dark shape kill Mudclaw before hiding his body under the tree

-After Onestar receives his lives, Dawnstar decides to only help WindClan when it's an emergency or to warn them about dangers in order to not look like WindClan needs ThunderClan's guidance

-Mothwing reveals that she doesn't believe in StarClan and that only Toadpelt knows

-Skypool spends time with Crowfeather when she can and the two fall in love

-Dawnstar allows Daisy and her kits to stay until the kits are three moons old then they will decide if their placement in the Clan is permanent for not

-Skypool finds out about the Place of No Stars

-Dawnstar thanks Onestar for the help against the badgers and tells him about her idea which he agrees to

-Longtail decides to retire and Brambleclaw is chosen as deputy

-Brambleclaw finds Dawnstar bleeding out as Hawkfrost stands over her

-Hawkfrost reveals that Dawnstar used a stick to trigger the fox trap in order to not get caught and decided to attack her instead

-He orders Brambleclaw to take the rest of her lives, but Brambleclaw instead digs up the stake and uses it to kill Hawkfrost when he lunges at him

-After Dawnstar comes back from losing a life, she reveals that it was Ashfur who told her that Blackstar was on ThunderClan territory and says that she will be keeping a close eye on him in case he didn't know about Hawkfrost