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Lucian’s Bio

Name: Lucian Baalzephon Daemonos Zaeldarachai Nicknames: Lord of suffering, Sadist king, Crimson Harbinger, Malice, The Horsemen's Amalgamation, The Chimera of Hatred Gender: Male Age: ??? Species: Demon Lord Soul: Crimson (Pure Evil) Sexuality: Asexual Atk/Def: ??? Exp: 0 Lv:0 Friends: None, he doesn't believe in friendship Enemies: Everyone Family: The Archlords of hell, whom he is currently betraying Crush: No one, he doesn't believe in love Personality towards others: He usually goes 4 ways towards people, The Manipulator, The Tormentor, The Tyrant, and The Killer, and none are friendly Strengths: Gains more power the more he's damaged, which has turned him into a Psychotic Sadomasochist. Weaknesses: Platinum, Hope, Affection, His Suppressed 5th Side. Flaws: Good god, where do i begin? Likes: Suffering, Hopelessness, Misery, and Chaos Dislikes: Affection, Joy, Hope, Love, Positivity, Anyone who isn't himself, Anything bright and happy Fears: Losing everything he's worked so hard to achieve, Platinum (Highly suppressed until he's exposed to the Platinum soul when he attempts to invade Natt's dream) Eye color: Red Clothes: Pressed skin, flesh, and bone. Hair: Long and white, like Sephiroth's Other: Albino skin, Talons, 10 wings, a fanged grin near constantly, Venomous Long Clawlike Nails, a scorpion-esque tail, and an odd Glass Orb attached to a necklace, Ironically resembling Prayer beads. Alignment: Pure Chaotic Evil Goals: To turn the world into a plain of endless suffering and madness. Job: Demon lord, Archon of Zaeldarach Items: None Previous Misdeeds: Getting the monsters sealed underground while posing as their advisor, Driving Chara to a suicide attempt, Getting both Chara and Asriel killed, Driving a human into the highest form of absolute despair, offing nearly everything on the planet in said human's body, imprisoning and tormenting 7 souls about to enter the next plane, attempting to  bring forth the "Day of the damned". Battle theme: www.youtube.com/watch?v=d8HQcB… The laughter in the track could easily be his Battle theme (Abysmal Form): www.youtube.com/watch?v=OF-rp4… "Lucian has truly grown into the eldritch abomination he wishes he were. If you fail, you, me, and everyone else is doomed to suffer eternally. No pressure."

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The Phobites

The servants of Yvriolketl, entities based on the worst fears of mankind.... Cynoscote: A blood-soaked grinning hound that delights in causing indiscriminate carnage, often seen as the pet of Yvriolketl. Trypani: A nurse with an empty, bleeding gash instead of a face, covered by bandages. She has syringes for fingers, and likes injecting people with drugs and then harvesting their fluids.... Glossoryan: While not as visually horrific as alot of other phobites, his abilities are terrifying. He's a master debater, and often brings the person he's debating against endless grief by the end of it, usually posing as a lawyer and getting innocent people convicted... Socionib: Usually manifesting as a party invitation that is psychologically impossible to refuse. People there are forced to stay forever and interact with the most annoying people they can imagine. Thanatomar: A gaunt figure who's touch brings death, he can also change into an oily form or a purple cloud. Necromant: A tall, black cloaked, skull-faced figure with a vajra. Under his cloak are countless sewn together cadavers, writhing in pain... Coulrabi: A clown that stalks people, usually laughing creepily or asking "Aren't i funny?". He then uses his deadly gags to leave their corpses a gruesome joke... Pedialis: A creepy doll-esque construct with two weird blades instead of hands. She constantly giggles, her eyes are realistic and wide, and her jaw is completely disjointed from the rest of her body. Acronaut: A massive U.F.O.-like structure, it sucks people in, forever suspending them above a glass floor.... Pteromerhanic: A construct resembling a small plane, it latches people into it's underbelly crucifix style and skewers them with spears on chains protruding from it's wings.... Mysox: A bloated figure in a hazmat suit carrying a large gas tank on his back. He launches a gas that leaves the victim with a disease with countless symptoms, none of which are pleasant.... Agorastull: An unknown evil that traps people outside of their comfort zones... Claustromass: A mold-like ooze that infects places and people, making places narrower or people stuck in a room.... Arachnea: At first a beautiful woman, until you learn her insides are spiders intent on having you for dinner.... Ophidia: A woman with snakes for legs, arms, hair, and a tongue... Hemora: A Penanggalan that sucks blood in order to make a strong atronach of red hardened fluid to serve as a body.... Astrakrome: A being that rules over thunder and lightning, causing the most ludicrously violent and chaotic storms imaginable.... Musoil: A hive mind of skaven rats.... Emeter: An obese corpse with it's limbs replaced with tanks of disgusting fluids, which constantly leak from it's mouth. When it opens, the fluids come out in a vile stream.... Aquatua: A drowned girl dressed like a sea nymph who makes the water her weapon.... Nyctro: The darkbound, the shadows answer to him..... Carcinogyte: An old man in a wheel chair that breathes the most horrific and painful form of cancer imaginable.... Dentalair: A malfunctioning automaton that believes it's helping people through his "Dentistry" Trypectioze: A disease that inhabits a body, filling them with disturbing holes of biological matter.... Aeroflight: A harpy-like orb that picks people up for an eternal flight of horrors.... Turokial: A cannibalistic gentleman whose body melts when he needs to feed. He kills by inserting his hand into people, turning them into a cheese-like substance inside-going-out.... Omphalume: A parasite that causes tentacles to grow out of the navel of it's host... Papaste: A murderous creep who dresses like the pope and has an obsession wit anti-catholicism... Nomotechedoor: A tube-shaped robot who steals cellphones for data. Ephebiyoung: A group of teens who embody youthly chaos. Phagomorphicus: An elongated vaguely-phallic looking serpent who swallows people into a pocket dimension where they are digested for eternity... Triskaid: An odd kid with an odd obsession with the number 13... Ablutia: A corpse-like woman who manifests in baths and showers... Dextra and Levoi: Creepy twins who stalk people from either the left or the right, only visible to them... Phoborous: An entity that manifests all fears in whoever sees it... Thallasoar: A kraken/megalodon/shapeshifting sea monster that rules a pocket dimension similar to the game Subnautica. Acousticet: A blind man with speakers for eyes and a mouth, and extremely good hearing. Ambularz: A mech that forces people into it and then never lets them stop wandering. Photoceptrex: A light-manipulating femalien without features. Somnion: An entity that preys on sleeping victims. Cibum: A man that owns an inescapable buffet. The more you eat, the less you have.... Chronoclock: A clock-headed man who drains time.... Panatalia: The nigh-omnipotent bride of Yvriolketl. Chirofell: A man with a million hands. Spheksio: A humanoid wasp with the general disposition of a Xenomorph. Rhytole: An old man who infects everyone around him with constantly growing wrinkly skin... Dr. Iatris: A doctor... of torment.... Aichmoa: A beast covered in sharp blades, spikes, and other such surfaces. It is relentlessly hostile. Catoptrein: A mirror-wielding jester that plays deadly tricks. Baron Apeiron: An eternal being with unknown powers... Logizomechanus: A hyper-intelligent computer with a hatred for humanity. Scoperat: A paparazzi who posts everything about who they stalk on the internet. Spectromire: A phantasm that takes the form of those who look in his mirror, but embodies the worst parts of them.... Koinonipru: A room that locks people inside it, making the most challenging escape room ever known. Automysormy: A chubby frog-like being who makes everything dirty, and follows whoever it's crushing on. Dromostega: Living streets that consume whoever crosses them. Vocale: A humanoid who projects voices in your head, driving you mad.... Ergomill: A CEO who forces his employees to work, even after death.... Decidorqua: A man on the crossroads, forces people to make the choice of which to cross. Genomia: A succubus who appears to virgins not allowed to be deflowered. Hypnow: A hypnotic entity who lures people into eternal slumber..... Megaliath: A large chrononaut that consumes things to increase it's size. Gyromeh: A spectral serial killer that manifests on streets. Mycothet: A mushroom that, upon being eaten, slowly regresses people into hallucinating, hostile zombies. It's also addictive so... Acribys: An odd little imp that lurks inside bookshelves, scrambling the text on reading material and making it unreadable. Hexakosioihexacontahexamazu: A ghost made up of 666 sinful spirits... Sesquipedaloi: A short lecturer who grows larger the more he lectures, growing hostile at a certain size. Gnosio: A purveyor of books who forces forbidden knowledge into people's heads. Hydrosopa: A creature constantly covered in sweat, who is a little too affectionate.... Dorosmas: An old witch who gives gifts... Rather dangerous gifts.... Koumpouneed: A patchwork doll who makes "Friends" by sewing cursed buttons into people. Lachanavlar: An odd giant radish-like root filled with caterpillars that can come out and infest other people's bodies, turning them into gourds.... Nephothium: A cloudlord that traps people in it's pocket dimension. Ombrolite: A rain woman with a freaky face and mysterious abilities... Pentheralir: World's most evil stepmother Pogonorris: Badass beard. Chairolian: A fiendish comedian with a sick sense of humor... Philorake: An angelic hunk with the abilities of cupid and twin derringers he calls his "Love Guns" Deipnofens: A dinner party host who reveals his party to be eternal at the last minute.... Punchumatthree: An assassin who always leaves a dot in the forehead of his victims.... Reterio: An annoying kid who makes you misspell everything. Emojizus: A weird figure that bombs people with emojis. Selfia: A chick that takes selfies of everything. Ignorizu: A possessor that afflicts it's host with the inability to be noticed by anyone... Somniun: Basically, a scarier version of Freddy Krueger. Countrolapse: A daredevil who befriends people and then convinces them to face their fears, which invariably kills them. Stasibasiu: A living pillar that manifests under people, ascending to the point where whoever is on it is forced to stand until exhaustion causes them to pass out.... Domatorik: A living house that keeps people inside it's extradimensional interiors. Anthroplauz: An endless group of people who attempt to assimilate others. Lalotily: A woman who's presence forces those around her to speak, even after death. Clinopkin: A bed mimic who forces all who lie upon it into a pocket dimension of evil plushies and mountainous pillows Anemoster: An air controlling pot-like figure. Peladorute: A balding brute who leaves his enemies and victims completely hairless. Simmetronian: A psychopath who carves himself and others to be perfectly symmetrical Nostoreign: An entity that dwells inside one's home while their away, waiting for them to get back so it can strike... Xanthocrep: A creepy yellow claymation esque alien with eye-stalks protruding from it's torso. Kathiselloma: A lazy kitsune with a seductive personality and various magical powers. Arachybutyrogah: A land whale with a sticky substance constantly dripping from it's mouth, which it force feeds others. Ideabulbor: A light bulb headed man with the ability to forcefully project thoughts into the minds of other's. Oikobodie: A living meteor that forces appliances against their human masters. Ecora: A witch that inhabits houses and seems hospitable, until it drains your life energy... Logoaster: A man with power in his words... Neotoymin: A cutting-edge toy and gift maker who offers his services to those who can't comprehend all of his incredibly advanced tech, usually scaring them to death. Gymnomeul: A naked, genderless gymnast who demanifests all clothing around them. Anabley: An odd, female entity that lurks above a certain human, threatening them that if they look up, they will be killed.... Chromotomie: A monopoly man pastiche with a half-gold, half-silver comedy mask, usually acting as a game show host. Zoonaren: A shapeshifting beast with the compulsion to seek out and kill humans. Cyclore: A bicyclist, if he rides near you, death will soon follow you... Alliumnew: A garlic-headed "Vampire" hunter, he hunts down anyone he sees eating plant matter. Acarowan: A mosquito-masked vampiric butler. Syngenextruom: A "Giving tree" who collects people and forces them to be part of their "Family", no matter what... Ranida: A "Princess Frog" amphibian humanoid who wants to find her "Prince" Meteora: A space wizard with an appetite for destruction and a nihilistic philosophy Uranachel: An angelic enchantress. Kleptryck: An impossible thief Teratomonger: A shapehifting monster who basically just wants to eat children. Ochoplang: An a.i. with a psychotic obsession with death who inhabits vehicles. Plutorius: Universe's wealthiest man. Acerapatchley: A lemon-headed candy-maker and citrus farmer. Eat his citrus, you're head will pucker up, fall off, and become a lemon tree. Aeroacrack: A hoard of head-shaped balloons that seek out people to carry away to the land of nightmares.... Aeronausiying: An angel-esque green alien  constantly projectile vomiting. Agatuject: An asylum inmate who constantly projects his insanity into the area around him. Agliothorpe: A sadistic entity made of torture devices who feeds off of pain.... Agraki: A mass of tentacles that violent copulates with anyone it sees... Agrizooma: A wild unidentifiable beast that actively hunts down any potential prey. Ailuria: A catgirl who traps people in a "Feline dimension". Albuminerak: A snake that crawls inside sleeping victims to take bites out of their kidneys... Alektorui: A giant killer chicken-like entity. Allodoxic: An androgynous humanoid who constantly argues with everyone else, forcing his opinion into everything. Amathilartha: A maid who controls dust. Amaxord: A car that absorbs people into it, giving them a ride that literally lasts forever. Amnezinu: A weird cthulhian alien that eats memories. Amychus: A gremlin-like creature that scratches people's organs out. Ancraoderlar: A wind-manipulating spirit resembling a kamaitachi. Androman: A masculine man who can adapt to any attack. Apisivy: A roughly bipedal hive with aggressive bees swarming him at all times Anemonu: A construct of old wood that breathes cold air at people. Angini: A woman with a fetish for choking people... to death. Anglosax: An English nationalist who turns everything around him, well, English. Angrosaur: A man with uncontrolled rage, basically Red Hulk. Anklyuine: A lizard that climbs inside people's bodies and eats their control nerves. Anthomuss: A realistic flowey with much more violent tendencies.... Anthroid: An android who studies human culture... A little too closely.... Antloros: A being whose mere presence causes floods. Anupturei: A ghost who haunts a host's romantic partners, keeping them single forever.... Aphenphosmoid: An orb of darkness that produces hands that continuously "Bad touch" the victim until death.... Apotemnuli: A human centipede of amputees. Arithmoss: A mass of numbers that gives people arithmomania. Arrhenthron: A man of manliness. Arachnoarch: The king/queen of spiders. Arsonuthrope: A pyrovorous entity that enjoys making living beings his next food source. Asthenruff: A living air that causes a slow-acting disease. Astromarus: An entity of starlight. Asymmetriun: An entity that creates asymmetry. Ataxion: A spark that causes Ataxia. Ataxozor: A husk doll that causes disorder and untidiness. Atelin: A mimic that haunts people with OCD. Aten: A millipede-like being that causes ruins. Athazagor: A casual 30-year-old with the abilities of goetic demons as well as the ability to make people forget who they are, turning them into sad, soulless, featureless wandering gaunt figures. Atomosaun: A soldier with a severely deformed head resembling a mushroom cloud. Atychi: A nixie that annoys people into failure, slowly driving them mad. Aulonote: The pied piper's much creepier cousin. Auronarch: A king of bling who can turn people into his servants made of gold. Auroranus: The mystical spirit of the northern lights. Autodysomue: A vile spreader of bad odor.. Automatonus: A creepy humanoid construct of mannequins, marionettes, and other such things that lives to drive people mad with paranoia. Automespair: An entity that whispers into people's ears when their alone.... Bacterion: A humanoid conglomerate of countless bacteria. Bacillonic: A massive "Microbe" Ballistor: An insanely hostile robot that relentlessly searches for victims to fill with bullets and missiles Bolshevikro: A bizarre russian amalgamation of clones of various bolshevik politicians. Barobaro: A metal and wire construct that controls gravity. Bathmoreist: A sandworm-like creature that manifests any place at the bottom of something, hoping to sate his hunger. Batolei: The living city. Batrachiu: An amphibious aberration. Belonu: Pinhead's more disturbing cousin. Blennos: An amorphous slime entity, much more intelligent than any of his ilk. Bogygumon: Father of all bogeyman. Botanolylei: Mother of plants. Bromidrosiru: A man with the stench of a thousand corpses. Cacoca: The world's ugliest aberration Calygina: A clone of Tomie from Junji Ito's manga of the same name Cardiacaxe: A golem completely made of still-beating hearts of various species Carnoff: Mooshoo pork from Gex meets Hog the Ripper from Mutants Genetic Gladiators. Catagel: An extremely effective critic Catadepi: An entity that distorts height perception in order to induce suicides. Cenothu: A brain-like entity that forces close-minded people to accept their beliefs might be wrong via psychic torment. Chaeti: A mass of hair that infests people's bodies. Chaimatren: The eldritch bearer of endless winters Chemoclo: A hazmat entity leaking chemicals Cheroli: A ditsy girl who spreads gaiety Chioneue: The mistress of savage snowfall Chiraptor: A presence that haunts people, making them feel as though they are constantly being violated in every way possible. Chiroptos: Manbat on demonic steroids. Cholerianna: An undead diseased woman, killed during the oregon trail, now she takes vengeance on all those who refuse to help her. Choron: A gaunt entity who kidnaps people to dance with him, problem is, if they stop dancing with him before he's ready to stop, he kills them. He also never gets tired so.... Chromatyzxyl: The color out of space repurposed. Chronomentron: A massive clock automaton that encases a pocket dimension of collected history eternally locked in clockwork torment. Cleithrisio: A being that traps people in various items and keeps them trapped until they solve the puzzle, which could take forever. Cnidrio: The broodmother of an aberrant hoard of countless insects somewhere between parasitoid wasps, japanese giant hornets, and mosquitoes. Climacroat: The figure under the stairs that makes them last forever. Cometacean: A crab-like alien that uses a comet as a shell. Coimetroffer: An undead gravekeeper. Coitall: An aberration whose presence forces the nearest people to engage in intercourse, no matter what. Contreltio: A repulsive molester. Consecotale: Imagine if in IT Chapter 2 Pennywise did more than the fortune cookies.... Cremni: The girl inside the precipices.... Cryon: The embodiment of ice, frost, and other such wintery elements. Crystallicanth: A living giant diamond that floats and emit lasers that encase everything in a crystalline substance. Cybernite: A cyborg dominated by an A.I. that acts like the Warpers from Subnautica but with Batman's tactics. Cymokymo: A living wave of pure energy. Cypridianne: A prostitute that turns into a diseased monstrosity. Dementrox: While some can drive other's insane, it drives the world itself insane.... Daemonos: The amalgamation of one piece from all demons. Demoras: The endless crowd that assimilates all who enter. Dendroid: An atronach of wood who fiercely guards the woodlands it inhabits. Dermatosion: A fiend endraped in skins, covered in everything from acne to leprosy Dormator: A figure with arms made of stinging whip-like tendrils Diabetro: A fat bastard who traps people in diabetic death mazes Didaskelein: A shapeshifting entity who usually takes forms like a tyrannical headmaster, a douchy jock, a micro-managing professor, and all other forms in order to make school a living hell. Dikuriel: An angel with a blindfold, but eyes cover the rest of her body. A flaming sword in one arm, an endless length of chain in the other, she relentlessly punishes all injustice. Dinu: A living vortex that causes all dizziness. Diploplone: An entity that goes into people's eyes and causes double, triple, and even beyond that vision. Dipsuil: A man in tubes parodying Bacchus and Dionysus. Dishabiliulsiv: A perverted freak who watches you undress yourself. Disposite: A being that steals everything you don't want to get rid of... Dorarori: A furry mass that turns people into his pets in a horrifically painful way. (Basically Furries) Doxiel: A therapist who controls her patients with subliminal messaging, forcing them to act inappropriately, and say all their thoughts aloud. Dutchley: A dutch nationalist kidnapper who forces people to live in his bunker/simulation of his beloved home country. Dysmorphine: A presence that makes itself known by causing horrific deformities. Dystych: A jynx that causes countless accidents. Ecclesior: The ancient knight of the unknowable church. Eicie: A living house with an extradimensional interior. Eisoprau: The man on the other side of the mirror. Electrote: A being of electricity that can possess all that rely on his element. Eleutheruth: The being who frees all who don't want to be. Elueryo: The cat of the most ill of omens. Enetin: A drugged up fiend that attacks with a combination of heroin and agony.  Enochu: A crowd of people that will randomly fly into an inhuman murderous frenzy. Enosio: A being that convinces church-goers that they have committed an unpardonable sin. Entomohive: An eldritch mass that produces lovecraftian insects. Eosounclair: The fiend that comes with the dawn. Epistaxioeleed: A weird creep that likes to drink nose blood. Equinos: A nightmarish horse that stalks the fields. Eremor: A specter or shadow that feeds on loneliness and depression.... Eruethri: A weird woman who blows gas into people's faces, causing them a disease that starts with blushing, and escalates to [DATA EXPUNGED] Ergasino: A hallucinatory entity that haunts surgeons. Erotach: A being that appears attractive to taunt hedonists, in order to feed on them when their alone together... Euno: A being that delivers good news to people, they only realize too late that that's the last good thing that will ever happen to them. Eurotina: A massive, all-consuming vagina. Erythro: A being known only as "RedLight", people exposed to it gain a fear of red. Febrivasque: The red death with alot more emphasis on fever. Felinus: Bast was kidnapped and brainwashed.... Francoux: The worst of the french all compiled into one being. Frigoimit: The winter hermit, father frost's secluded brother who is a grim reflection, yet much more unassuming than your ordinary Krampus.... Gateru: A massive cat who toys with humans Gamoril: The ideal bride and/or groom... Until the wedding night, when all hell breaks loose. Gelion: A jester that makes his victims the laughingstock of all who know them before taking their lives.... Genium: Inter-dimensional chin. Genuruuki: A spider-like humanoid abomination of countless knees. Gephyre: The thing under all bridges.... Germanus: A nazi-esque character of an alternate history where Germany won WWII, he spreads his ideologies no matter the cost.... Gerascu: The thiever of youth Gerontos: World's oldest human.... Geumi: A being that crawls into people's mouths and controls taste-buds. Gnosion: An eldritch collector of knowledge. Graphornix: A being who writes fate... Gynoir: A misogynist's worst nightmare.... Hadesemoah: Hell is alive.... St. Hagius: A tyrant who uses holy imagery and poses as a saint. Hamart: The prince of sinners. Harpax: World's most effective robber. Hedonestra: Mistress of pleasures. Heliun:  The sun's apostle. Hellegenologet: A being who only speaks in Greek terms who is vaguely associated with complex science. Helminth: A humanoid infested with a hive-mind of worms. Hereseio: A challenger of the doctrine. Herpetill: An insectoid reptile. Heteron: A humanoid literally split down the middle, both genders hate each other... Hierophantes: The priest of Yvriolketl Hipporse: The steed of Yvriolketl Hobomo: A creepy beggar that turns cities to slums Hodoragg: A tourist who attracts followers through charm and takes them on a never-ending road trip..... Horman: A masculine humanoid robot with shock fists. Homilareth: A sectarian reveren in red Hominid 0: A man who seeks the endless experience, he who wants to do it all. Homoro: The spirit of monotony Hoplic: A heavily armed man who shoots anything he sees. Hydrargyol: A human melted into a poisonous mercurial woman, not the sexy slime girl you might be imagining... Hydrozom: A former swimming champion, now he is the drowned fiend. Hydripholc: A massive hell hog that was the first thing to have rabies. Hyelic: A glass figure that shatters itself into others before reforming inside their bodies. Hygrox: A living mist that brings moisture, dampening everything around it until it's essentially a swampy mess. Hylen: The materialistic embodiment. Hylogger: A territorial treaunt who fiercely guards his home with creative yet thematically appropriate curses. Hypegion: A catastrophic force that causes disasters in order to test humanity, but also causes the least prepared to be the leaders. Hypnoid: A weird creature that keeps people asleep in order to enter their dreams. Hypsidooni: Regardless of the funny name, this being is a force that pulls people over the edge. Ichthyon: The fiercest of fishkind Illyngios: A ruglike entity that waits for people to walk onto it, and causes disorienting illusions. Iophio: A master of poisons. Insectorus: A tiny bug that controls all arthropods in a 50 mile radius. Isolotu: A living dimension that absorbs people into it, feeding on loneliness and isolation. Isopterr: A massive termite queen. Ithyphallon: A being who's favorite food is erect penises. Japani: A being that is all of Japan rolled up into one weird anime creation. Judeus: A golem who protects the sacred land of a forgotten sect of Jews. Kainoloth: A masked mage who sends people to unknown dimensions. Kakorrhaphi: A being who knows all your mistakes and failures, and never lets you forget... Katagel: A subconscious harlequin that knows how to trigger your anxiety Katsaridan: A hoard of roachfolk who spread their "gifts" Kenos: A living void that consumes all Kinetis: A being of movement. Kolpoi: A woman with mutated genitals. Kopor: A brown smoky substance that zaps people's energies. Konio: A certain species of living Dust. Kosmicut: A space lord of cosmic phenomena. Kymoci: A living tsunami. Kynole: A foamy substance that attracts animals, and makes them serve it's twisted whims. Kyphek: A lord who overworks his subjects, his demands usually lead them to become hunchbacked slave creatures. Leproser: The marquise of lepers Leukem: An albino herald of the white calamity. Ligyron: A floating machine that constantly generates eardrum shattering noises. Lilapsid: The living hurricane, it inhabits an old native american shaman. Limnius: Lady of the ancient lake. Linoni: An entity that uses lines to cut people to bits. Litifica: A prosecutor who gets all her opponents sued. Lockitrude: A malformed brood mother of mutated fetus creatures. Lui: An attractive man with highly contagious syphilis, once you're infected, everyone around is too... Lutrane: An otter of unusual size... and hunger.... Lygomorr: A skeletal spirit similar to Dusknoir who brings people into the dark void for eternity.... Lyssoam: An addictive white cream that causes instant madness. Macrone: A being that turns waiting into an eternal limbo (The state of existence, not the game) Mageir: A sinister cook that causes various horrific events. Maeius: A baby that crawls into pregnant woman to devour the fetus and pretend to be their horrifically deformed child until it kills them. Malaxuzz: An insectoid that keeps a "Lover" hostage and keeps them alive but also force feeds them, rapes them, and other such detestable acts... Maniax: A mad caricature of humanity, similar to The Mask or Judge Doom from Who Framed Roger Rabbit. Mastigot: The grey punisher, he disciplines all misdeeds of one specific person until they die. Medomalan: A being that takes away all sexual desire. Medorth: A lizard that bites, giving an endless, ludicrously painful erection. Melist: A walking corpse that is also a hive of mutant bees. Melani: A black portal that sucks people into the Omega Reality. Melov: A living melody that brings obsession to all who hear it. Meningitane: A brain inside a cloud that causes brain disease. Meniuc: Living menstruation Merinth: A dominatrix goddess Metallance: A steel inquisitor. Methasriol: The entity of change Methysto: The alcohol demon Metroich: A mad poet Micronome: A pixie that torments people with tiny items Molysomoir: A being that tricks people into following it into the world of filth Monopand: A void that isolates people for eternity.... Monopathos: A being that uses humans to culture countless microbes... Motoret: A living mass of various motorized vehicles. Mottenus: A mothman that causes various disasters over a prolonged period of time. Murina: A mouse woman with a tail that acts as her evil side. Myrmecuni: A queen of an ant dimension Myhtroel: A gatherer of countless stories. Myx: An odd material that can take on any property, also happens to be alive.

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Roughdraft/Notes Grieftale Act 1 part 5

screams, the hot metal burning her hand. She sinks to the ground, leaning against the door. She looks back at her unconscious mother. "Mommy--" The ceiling collapses onto them. Lucian watches from outside the roof cave in and his body tenses. "P-please stop this madness..." a voice echoes in his head. His eyes clear and he smirks "Why do that, when this is so much more fun?" "Because it's pointless...!" Lucian hesitates. His hand reaches up for his empty eye socket. The eye still sits in the kitchen, glimmering in the fire. There's a flashback of a flashback (one scene of him learning about his responsibility to eradicate all, and the scene of him turning to the bunny, and her saying "lucian?") then back to him, taking his hand away from his face. His face goes sour and he sits against another building, waiting for the fire to die down. "Pointless. Just like everything else." When the fire is put out by the citizens and the people clear away, lucian walks through the ashes and picks up his eye. He walks to the river to rinse his eye when he's suddenly grabbed by the neck by a huge furry hand. It's the werewolf. n head:*grins at his host's soul* That's why i do this... That and it's just too damn fun... ???: But it's my body! Lucian: Not my fault, you agreed to it... *sends him back to his memories* Now, leave me alone for a bit. *he grins at the wolf* So you found me out....

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Roughdraft/Notes Grieftale Act 1 part 4

grillby's eyes twitch towards the bear, then stay on you. He sends a thin fire blast your way, clearly avoiding lighting his bar on fire. He's trying to make a curtain of flames to blind you as he tries to escape. you walk in, grillby is suspicious, you attack, grillby dodges and blindsides you with fire, trying to get out. the bear walks in and blocks his way by accident, grillby watches the room suddenly turn dark. he turns his attention away from the bear (whispering "tungsten?" and the bear is killed. we can't see what killed the bear but we see a piece of his face and some dust. grillby turns around and a malicovore is facing him (i imagine they actually look very similar to grillby). they put their hand on grillby's shoulder and say "this is a cold day for me." grillby shakes him off, baking up towards the backdoor and keeping a careful eye on lucian and the malicovore. Lucian is leaning against the bar, watching with his arms crossed and grinning. Suddenly grillby's flames turn more yellow, with bits of green. he winces and holds his head. his flames start to turn blue and his clothes begin to burn. He realizes what's happening and attacks the malicovore, his flames much much stronger than before. the malicovore puts his arms up to guard from the attack, but he's knocked into a booth, breaking the table. brillby attacks again then his flames cut off as his color starts turning purple. He collapses onto his knees, breathing heavily. his clothes are on fire, normal fire. "Looks like things are getting a little heated." Lucian chuckles, and grillby lashes out at him. He tries to block the attack but it's extremely powerful, and you gasp in pain as you feel your skin boil and melt. The malicovore raises his hand and grillby's attack ends, he's now a bright shade of purple. his groans and gasps turn to screams, and he burns away, his body losing shape and shrinking until it's gone. the room returns to normal. the malicovore approaches you and kneels. "My lord, are you alright?" Lucian makes the malicovore dissapear, groaning as you hold your face together. "blood... I need blood..." Lucian stumbles outside, on hand stuck to his face and the other leaving skin on the wall. He turns and starts headin up, trying to get out of sight. Suddenly he feels a tug on his burnt clothes. "What kind of monster are you? I've never seen a melty monster before!" He opens one eye painfully, and it's a kid around his age and height. a bunny. "You look tired, wanna go back with me to my mommy's inn?" "You're about the right height." "huh? for what?" he grabs the bunny's neck and slams them against the wall, knocking them unconscious. he pulls off their clothes. He reaches for where his knife would be then finds nothing. He sighs. "damn comedian..." his nails grow into claws and he slices the kid's arm down the middle, blood spurting out as his heart beats. he sucks at it greedily, then lets it splatter over his skin. his skin returns to normal and he slumps against the wall, covered in blood and panting. the child next to him turns to dust. He traces his face with his fingers, and begins to laugh quietly to himself. in the next shot you see he's wearing the bunny's clothes (striped sweater and pants, you can pick the colors that would suit lucian), and he's washing his face in the river, the blood running off in the water. L:*grins, singing a song in latin, roughly translated would be* The Blood will run, the flesh will burn, The innocent will die, the guilty will get what they deserve (Etc. etc.) "I like your song. I don't recognize the language." (it's the green librarian that looks like alphys) they sit next to you and dip their feet in the water, pulling out a book. You look up and make eye contact, and the green monster frowns. "Oh, wow. Those are not the eyes of a child, little one. You must have been through so much. Tell me, where did you come from? New Home?" *He puts on his masking act* I-i don't remember... All i remember is... That song.... "y-you don't..." he looks you up and down and his eyebrows furrow. "hey, wait here for a minute, will you?" he gets up and starts to leave, will you indulge in his request? L:*decides to humor them* You sit back and relax, looking leisurely over to where the green monster came from. he returns shortly afterwards, speaking quietly with a rabbit woman. she looks over to you and at first smiles, then looks shocked, then confused, and finally she approaches you and kneels. "hello there, little one. I hear you have problems with your memory. Do you recognize the name 'Sammy'?" N-No... *is internally smirking* "Oh! Well... you see... the reason i ask is... you're wearing his clothes. Listen, sweetie, why don't you come with me? you must be a friend of his." she reaches out to take your hand, the green monster is rubbing his head awkwardly. L:*Takes her hand, we get a view at a few aspects of Lucian's inner struggle* Tyrant L: Damnit! Why'd we keep the kid's clothes? Killer L: As a trophy.... Obviously. Tormentor L: Ok, as much as i would want her to remember her son is dead, we gotta remember, how is this gonna impact us later? Manipulator L: Simple, we improvise... L:*secretly leaves a Music Box behind for the Green Lizard* She guides you back to her inn, where a toddler bounces happily behind the counter. "Mommy mommy! I took care of the house! A man walked in and wanted to sleep, i gave him room fwee!" "you mean 'three', Laila. and good job sweetie! But... oh no, now there are no rooms for this young man." she looks down at you and squeezes your hand a little. "it's alright. You can stay in Sammy's room for tonight. Are you tired? You look a little shaken, like something scared you before." (yup. fire melting your skin off can do that to ya.) "In the morning we can talk a little more, and try to figure out your issue with your memory." *Lucian is internally growling at them showing him compassion* Tormentor L: Oh c'mon, this is Humiliating! And i know were Masochists and all that, but we have standards! Tyrant L: Agreed, we shouldn't be taking these lowly creatures offers for help... I feel sick just wearing one's clothes. Manipulator L: Relax, it's all part of the plan... (Once they open the music box, it's true lyrics drive them into Suicidal Insanity....) you enter sammy's room, feel free to explore. she says she's going to call sammy's friend's parents to see if he's at their house. Meanwhile the green monster falls into the river, and the werewolf dives in after him to rescue him. He pulls him out of the water (since he's so huge and strong) and carries him towards his house (the one next to the slimes). the entire time the green monster has this expression of emptiness and dread, like he's just a shell of himself. The werewolf wraps him up in blankets. "What happened back there? What happened to you? Hey! answer me, friend! What's with that expression?" The green monster is still fiercely clutching the musical box, which gurgles out a few notes. The werewolf looks at it and starts to get a weird feeling. He grabs it and slams it shut. The green monster's eyes clear up slightly, and he starts to cry. "Aw geez, it's gonna be okay..." "I don't know why i'm crying!" he sobs, wiping his tears away uselessly. "I don't know what's come over me I just-- I don't see the point of-- why am I like this?!" "tell me what's wrong, friend." "I love my job-- i have few but loyal friends-- my sister's the royal scientist-- I love my family-- so why do I feel like this?? Why do i just want to DIE?!" "WHOA there! buddy... I had no idea... Listen, you should stay with me tonight. i can't let you go in good conscience." "o-okay. I don't think I want to either.... i think... god i'm so confused!" "It's okay, try to relax. i'll call your sister to tell her i'm taking tomorrow off." (The green lizard's sorrow turns to something else... he has some... dreams... he feels as though life is meaningless, until a red winged "Messiah" Showed him the greatest Pleasure known to all, Malice Indulgence. It's basically the same as how Cthulhu made his cult, the first thing the Lizard finds himself doing, is cutting his mouth into a grin to match his "Savior's") (Meanwhile, Lucian has somewhat of a prophetic vision, he gazes into a window and witnesses his defeat in this timeline, however, being the self-entitled, ostentatious, arrogant demon he is, he only thinks it's a Possible future, not a definite one....) The werewolf and the green monster fall asleep together on the couch, the werewolf didn't dare get up and let him leave his sight. The green monster has the dream and wakes up in a cold sweat. he gets up and wakes the werewolf by accident while he walks into the bathroom. he looks at his face and frowns. "Why can't i smile... Why can't i SMILE?" He grabs the werewolf's razor (the knife kind) and carves a grin, gripping the sink and screaming. He's unable to carve the second half before the werewolf rushes in, grabbing him and taking the knife away. "STOP! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" The green monster looks up, his half smile bleeding fiercely. "I just want to be happy again... it hurts! It hurts!!" the werewolf pulls him by the hand towards the kitchen, where he tries to feed him some cinnamon bun. "heal yourself, man! my god!" "But I-- it's the only way for me to smile!" he practically forces the cinnamon bunny into his mouth, and he heals. "why did you do that..." the green monster whimpers "Listen, buddy, you're not okay. You're SERIOUSLY not okay. I'm taking you to your sister. I can't protect you forever." "My sister?" he whispers, looking hopeful. "I want to see her again... she'll fix me..." the werewolf looks heartbroken. He picks him up and heads out, not even taking the time to call alphys in advance. meanwhile you wake up to the sound of a gentle knock at your door. The bunny mother walks in with a plate of steaming cinnamon buns. "Good morning! i brought you a little something..." she sets the plate down at your bedside and kneels near you, brushing the crumbs off her high-waisted pants. "i called sammy's friends and they haven't seen him all night. i'm starting to get worried. I'm sure he wanted to help you, he's such a gentle heart, but i can't figure out why he wasn't with you when i found you. I tried to contact the dogs to search the river... but they didn't answer. none of them did.... sorry, i don't mean to scare you. What i'm trying to say is i suspect sammy fell into the river near where you were, and the dogs found him closer to waterfall. I'm going to go there today and see if I can find them. Would you like to come too, or stay in town and rest? it's your decision." Um... i need to do someth-!!! *It's here we realize that he has had a glass eye the whole time, he "Accidentally" Knocks it out* *The green monster starts hearing voices, having no choice but to obey them* The only way to have happiness... Is to take it from others.... Take his life... *He suddenly finds himself driven completely insane, and in a state where he sees the Crimson Avatar as a messiah, and one of his teachings is death.......* His eyes go blank. "The crimson soul..." The werewolf holds him tighter. "What?" "The crimson soul is filled with blood." "Oh my god... just hand on buddy we're almost there!" *they enter hotland* "I'm... I'm sorry..." He grabs his neck and squeezes hard. The werewolf trips over himself in surprise, and falls on top of the monster. The green monster's head hits the ground hard and crunches dangerously. " "oh no! oh no oh no oh no..." he picks up his dying friend and runs harder. the green monster's hp drops steadily. "You're going to be okay!" meanwhile "there's someone coming, sweetie" the robotic voice says. alphys is staring hard at her screen, you can see she's looking at the house lucian's in at the moment. she's eating noodles. "Mmph, i'll checpf" She presses a button and the screen switches to the werewolf approaching the door fast. alphys coughs her noodles all over the bottom of the screen and jumps up "JULIAN?" she cries "oH-OH that's disgusting.. I--" she dances back and forth between the door and the screen, then finally goes "arg!" and runs for the door to open it. "oOooOoh my gosh--- oh my gosh julian!" she runs up to him and takes a quick look. "how did this-- he can't eat like that... i need to h-hook him up! come with me!" She runs for the door to her secret lab and turns around "ON SECOND THOUGHT WAIT HERE." She slams the door and the werewolf stops, boucing nervously and constantly looking down at his friend. 33hp 30hp 15hp "No no no no ALPHYS HURRY" "i'm here i'm here!!" she cries, running in with a needle connected to a bag of glowing white liquid. she stabs the needle into his arm and the white liquid oozes in. 10hp 5hp 4hp 5hp 10hp 15hp They sigh together in relief. She puts her brother on the fold out bed upstairs and they sit at her desk, watching him. The werewolf talks about his sudden personality change, and the music box, and the crimson soul, and alphys regretfully explains that she knows about it already, and that they have to have faith the platinum soul will prevail in the end. the werewolf stands, furious alphys has done nothing to stop the crimson soul. as alphys tries to explain he storms out, heading back towards snowdin. meanwhile the bunny mom is screaming in surprise. "oh my! oh my goodness, your eye! don't touch it, i'll wash it for you! she takes it and runs out of the room. *As she gazes into the eye, it stares into her soul, making her see all the atrocities commited by us, every war, every murder, every torture session, it plays endlessly in her head, she passes out. Lucian walks out, locks everyone inside, makes sure he's hidden, and burns the place to the ground, Meanwhile, inside the body...* ???: P-plz... stop this madness... L: Why do that, when this is so much more fun? ???: Because it's pointless... L: Just like everything else… "Oh my goodness- your eye! Let me clean that for you!" She grabs it and rushes out of the room. In the kitchen, she delicately washes it with a cloth. The eye turns up to face her. (insert Lucian's backstory here. It's the perfect time. We start slow, with a dialogue scene between him and another person (probably about his responsibilities and destiny), then it gets faster pace (almost just flashes with small dialogue or locations) until the all out war happens. i want to know his ENTIRE backstory so i can write this part effectively. you should include something about his mother/mother figure to explain why he desitated to kill her for an entire day) She gasps, brought back to the present. The end of the flashback could have been someone dear to lucian dying, or/then lucian turning and actually looking at her. hence the fourth wall break) She looks around, as if forgetting where and who she was. her hands and legs shake aggressively. "Lucian?" she whispers, the world going blurry and dark. (this is the FIRST time his name is said in the series. it will make her character important for the plot and it will make the moment more powerful). she collapses against the counter, then onto the ground. Lucian walks past the kitchen, not seeing her, and goes outside. (i would love it if his eye trick was permanent. It means that he actually cared enough for this stranger that he wanted her to know everything about him, even if she was about to die. plus, it shows a change of pace and of character, and him missing an eye is pretty cool. "eyes are the reflection of the soul" so he can only share his soul twice before he goes blind owo... just a thought. plus, he could retrieve it later out of the ashes) He takes an umbrella from the umbrella from the umbrella stand, inspects it, and mutters "too obvious" and puts it back. He takes the keys from the key rack and walks out, locking the door. He walks to the back of the house and snaps his finger. the snap creates a spark that turns into a stream of flames, igniting the house. Meanwhile, Laila (the bunny child), is sleeping in her bed. She wakes up to screams. "Mister?" she mutters, rubbing her eyes. She coughs and looks up, realizing her room is filling with smoke. Her eyes widen and she coughs more, getting out of bed. She walks slowly to her door and opens it. A wall of fire bursts in and she narrowly dodges it, screaming. When the initial wave dies down, she wanders into the hallway, covering her mouth with both hands and crying from the smoke. "Mister?" She calls out, and she can hear screaming from an open room. The man she had submitted to the inn runs out of the room, on fire, and runs towards her. She screams and the man turns to dust right before he hits her, covering her in dust. She looks up, shocked, and starts to cry. "MOMMYYYY!" she howls, burying her head in her hands. "MOMMYYYY!" She starts to walk down the stairs and one of the stairs breaks. She jumps down the remaining steps and lands on all fours like a rabbit. Her landing was perfect but she still sways and falls forwards, coughing. Her eyes are filled with tears that blur her surroundings. She can see through the living room into the kitchen, where she spots her mom's hand on the tiled floor. "Mommy--!" She gasps, bursting into another fit of coughs. She slowly gets to her feet and walks towards her, he movements slowing down. Her mother is on the ground, the eye next to her hand. The kid reaches for her mom and pulls on her hand. "Mommy, get up! get up!" Her mother doesn't respond. The little girl starts pulling her mom, sobbing "we have to get out! please, mommy!" She laboriously pulls her mother towards the front door, falling over twice. She finally reaches the door, her face twisted with pain as her lungs fill with ash. She grabs the handle and

[rebeltheanomaly]

Roughdraft/Notes on Grieftale Act 1 Part 3

Papyrus turns around and spots you. "AH! HUMAN! DON'T WORRY ABOUT THE SPIKES, THEY'LL GO DOWN WHEN YOU SOLVE MY PUZZLE!" he grumbles to himself "THAT'S THE ONLY WAY I CAN GET PEOPLE TO SOLVE THEM" then he perks up "REALLY? YOU HAVE A PUZZLE? HAVE I FINALLY MET SOMEONE AS PASSIONATE AS ME?" *Grins* The manufacturer doesn't need it, the buyer doesn't want it, and the user doesn't know he's using it. What is it? "OH! I KNOW THIS ONE! SANS TOLD IT TO ME WHEN HE WAS FEELING MORE LAZY THAN USUAL! IT'S A TOMB! *his grin falters a tiny bit, just to the point that it looks like a condescending smirk* Here's another one, would you rather know the date or cause of your death?* "HMM I DON'T KNOW THIS ONE..." He bends over and rubs his chin and he tries to think. 

*Asks another disturbing question* Would you rather murder 3 innocent children or 3 of your closest friends? "I- I WOULD NEVER MURDER ANYONE! THE ANSWER IS NO ONE!" Papyrus cries. "THERE'S ALWAYS ANOTHER WAY! *smile falters, but is internally laughing like a maniac at what is in his eyes, a "Pathetically Naive Idiotic Child who doesn't see the world for what it is", he makes his face one of concern to mask his true intentions* Oh, i'm sorry... I just... Tend to dwell on those things.... Being through what i've been through will do that to you.. Papyrus looks concerned... then perks up. "HERE! SOLVE MY PUZZLE! IT WILL MAKE YOU FEEL BETTER! THEN WHEN THE SPIKES ARE DOWN I CAN GIVE YOU A BIG HUG!!" Ok...*looks around at the puzzle, strategizing, then completing it with ease* "YAY! YOU'RE SO GOOD AT PUZZLES!!" He exclaims, pulling you into a hug. "YOU MUST CARE ABOUT PUZZLES LIKE ME! YOU'LL LIKE NEXT NEXT ONE EVEN MORE!!" He runs off, even floating off the ground, and you see sans a little up ahead, waiting for you apprehensively *Sans senses the demon still in control, and can feel it's aura, it's nothing like Chara or any other fiend he's had to deal with....* Sans feels for the knife in his pocket, gripping it tightly. he stares wearily at you but doesn't make a move, since his brother is still alright. "Hey kid... about what you were trying to do earlier..." he can't seem to bring himself to make eye contact. "nevermind. good job on the puzzle. go on, my brother is waiting for you. just... don't try anything you might regret, okay?" *Grins* The other kid will regret.... *he then walks off* sans's eyes go dark and he tenses, holding himself back. "Calm down sans." he thinks to himself. "They haven't done anything yet. You made a PROMISE." *He runs along, tripping on an icecap "hey, watch the hat!" icecap snaps. "i mean, what hat? i don't have a hat." *grins and runs off with his hat, leading him on a chase* "H-hey! i need that to look cool!" i cries, chasing you up the hill *grins evilly* Have it your way then... *throws it and... basically cuts his head off, like that one guy from Mortal Kombat...... FATALITY!! he turns to dust, his body first, then his head with a shocked expression that says "the ironyyyy" you're now at the top of the hill, and you can see that to safely cross the ice you need to solve another puzzle *goes on, sees the nice cream guy's stall* He looks over at you enthusiastically. "Hey there! Care for some nice cream? It's the frozen treat that warms your heart. I started my own business! See-- every nice cream has a nice message inside the wrapping!" he pulls one out and offers it to you *the gelato suddenly melts and pools at his feet, way more then what's possible, to the point that he's standing in a puddle of it. Suddenly, a giant hand comes out of the puddle and crushes NCR (Fallout joke) guy in it's fists. Lucian looks upon the gorified rabbit creature and sniggers* Guess it's not just revenge that's best served cold... (Insert CSI "Yeaaaahhh!" here) nice cream guy gurgles, his blood turning to dust. he looks down at you with tears in his eyes as his head disappears. You see a fork in the path, the right leading down a hill where you can see sans standing at the bottom, not noticing you. L:*grins, then grimaces, he felt an unpleasant sensation as his skin touched a certain kind of metal, which is picked up by one of Alphys's cameras.... (FORESHADOWING HIS WEAKNESS) He growls and takes whichever path leads to a dead end, scowling to Sans's amusement, though he doesn't know the true extent of his evil yet, he at least knows it's taking control of the kid's body, and that's never a good sign* you find another door to the ruins, with mushrooms in the front. on your way out you find a deer-looking creature, adorned to his dismay with christmas decorations *Ignores it at first, he then takes a vial of blood out of his pocket and rubs it on the burn, soothing it* the deer notices and grimaces (or is that just its face) "that's disgusting." it says. Sans looks over to you, curious. "SANS WHY ARE YOU NEVER WHERE I NEED YOU TO BE" you hear from up the hill. Sans looks up and disappears, leaving you with the deer. (Grins and splashes the rest of the bottle in the deer's face) The deer groans in disgust, rubbing their face in the snow *He finds the decorations become incredibly heavy* the deer is unable to lift their head from the snow, they start to suffocate and struggle, kicking wildly until they run out of breath and energy T^T (The child's leg suddenly turns into a talon as it crushes the Deer's head in with it, grinning) It's so annoying i can only show parts of my true form while i'm stuck in this hideous body... *His leg changes back* But atleast i'm making good progress.. you peer into the cracks in the walls and spot eyes, upon further inspection an entire family of deer are stuck in the ruins, they watch with bloodshot eyes, seeing through you, as if they've stared outside for so long they've lost touch with reality *Looks at them, kinda liking their appearance* Hehe.. *pulls out his Bladed gloves he got from the box, grinning madly* *He lunges at them, ripping one clean in half* (Meanwhile, Alphys discovers an archive on the last creature that had a Crimson soul) Computer: A soul of true evil, those who possess this soul come to spread suffering, madness, chaos and misery. They gain incredible power, and if they manage to kill everything that opposes them they can even destroy the world and remake in their own twisted image. The last one with a Crimson soul comes from prehistoric accounts, when monsters were in their dark ages, for humans hadn't yet came into existence. The Crimson Devil caused several disasters and countless fatalities that happened before earth’s continents were separated. *She sees truly terrifying images, which seem to be artist's interpretations of the event... she has too warn them* Lab:*Alphys's Lab A.I. responds to the words from the computer* So, is it ok to start panicking? "oh my g-goodness, o-oh my!" she gasps, watching the (dog army?) get ripped limb from limb. "this... this is what the files were talking about! i h-have to warn everyone!" she fumbles with her phone, dialing undyne or asgore or anybody that could help. Lab A.I.: Wait.. *rewinds it a little bit, seeing Lucian burn himself on that metal* Do you see that? "Th-this could change everything! I c-can save everyone! oh my gosh, I have to investigate!!" Lab:*scans it* Platinum... Maybe you should look at the archives for the Platinum soul… She scurries to the opposite wall (not visible in the game), which is lined with shelves covered in books. She begins scanning for a book relating to human souls or platinum. The Crimson, unyielding Malice, The Charcoal, Unending despair, and the Platinum, Undying hope... The Crimson will rise and bring utter cataclysm to the world, having learned from it's past mistakes, it will target the one who is destined for the weapon that last took its power. After taking the the body, it will suppress the soul until it is weakened enough to take the body of them, then will challenge the most powerful being that it hasn't yet destroyed, _S__E_ __E___R All will seem hopeless, until the Platinum, along with the Crimson's victims, will all empower the being, now godlike. Even for all the power it has gained, it will fall back to lick its wounds, but not before inflicting the Platinum with an utterly despairing melady The Platinum will turn Charcoal, and even though most of the damage has been reversed, the destined one's family will still be dead by their hand. They will only be saved when the following has been achieved: "The Angel will fall upon belief he is a demon His newfound comrades will cause him to rediscover meaning in his life A black weight will lift on his shining heart And so the new age will begin" i’ll call undyne and we can both support the charcoal soul so it can become platinum again! Lab: Are you really willing to take that chance? Alphys, this isn't some Anime you watch, this is real life, i mean that Prophecy could be only partially true, i mean, this was back when Monsters still believed in Gods for Science sake. (Atheist humor) “monsters will believe again after asgore becomes one, just like i believe in this human!! undyne is going to help too, i just know it!” she dials and explains the situation to undyne, who immediately interrupts her with “WHAT? THERE’S A HUMAN?? WHERE?” Lab:*lets out a long groan* Welp, we're screwed... alphys: oh hush, look we can see the platinum soul in action!! L:*is ambush comedied by Snowdrake* "M.. m.. macaroni and freeze! You gotta chill out, man, or i'll fight you in cold blood!" You slash him across the face. "You're not funny." "THIS won't be funny either!" He cries, sending crescent blades at you, which you dodge effectively, except you slip on the ice a little and take a small cut in the neck. You growl. "Is your flesh rotten as you?" he heckles, continuing to attack you. You dodge more easily this time and get close, smirking. "..heh." You say, staring him right in the eyes. "What are YOU laughin' at?!?" Snowdrake barks, pretending not to be upset. You wanna hear the biggest joke of all? (Incoming Joker reference) "i bet it won't be better than mine." he utters with false bravado *Proceeds to insert nihilism into his head* Everything! All you creatures have ever valued or worked for.. I't all ends... So why care about anything? When everything burns... *grins sadistically as his words worm their way into his mind* One day, you and everything you care about will be gone, and no one will remember it... Life is but a successful virus clinging to a speck of mud suspended in endless nothing... They struggle to make a retort, and slink away utterly crushed… *Grins and manifests his newfound despair as endless jokes playing in his head, constantly reminding him of how pointless everything is, he eventually can't take it anymore...* snowdrake bursts into tears, wiping them away uselessly with his wings. he approaches the river... and just keeps walking until he falls in "as if by accident". in his head he thinks "i guess i walked into that one... ugh that was terrible." he lets himself sink to the bottom, letting out all the air in his chest. (grins and walks on, finding the snowman) Lab: YOU SEE alphys: he was just being rude, he didn't kill him! he just walked off!) "hello traveler! i wish i could see the world like you... please, take a piece of my snow, so that i can?" Lab: I picked up something from that, he was using despair fields to manipulate his emotions... And don't tell me that grin doesn't just scream "Sadistic Psychopath" to you. L: *grins and melts him with Crimson energy, kicks him into the lake, and walks away, he doesn't see the thing rising out of the lake behind him Alphys: What happened to that snowman??? Lab: the negativity magic he radiates... it could have merged with his snow. when he hit the water it froze around him. Lucian:*turns around and grins* This should be interesting.. the ice golem trudges out of the water, its yells incoherent, though if you concentrated you think it might be saying "betrayed" It sends a shower of ice shards down at you *His body lights up in flames of Hatred, then jumping into the golem* your searing heat melts straight through it, leaving a gaping hole in the middle. In the middle hole is a very small, broken soul, which turns to dust. The golem shudders, and turns into water, dousing the area. (grins at his work, he walks on, once again seeing the damned flower) I suppose you want to die too weed? Flowey looks almost intimidated. he's not doing a good job of hiding his nervousness. "unlikely, you overpowered idiot. I'm the prince of this world's future, and you'll get what's coming to you." (he ends up trying to fight back, which happens several times btw) (L guffaws) Goat boy, you had your chance long ago… Flowey starts to grow taller and taller, yet still staying proportional. His face turns dark and twisted. "Now's fine, you idiot" (L's host gains claws, wings, a scorpion-esque tail, and horns) Hehe, you pathetic creatures are all the same... Either too dumb to live, or too weak to fight… Flowey's vines strike the ground like spears, which you dodge successfully, but you get slashed across the arm (not too serious) by one of the last ones. "If it's dumb but it works then it's not dumb, trashbag." flowey says, grinning. (grins) The more damage you do to me, the stronger I become... (tail slashes him) “What? That doesn’t even make sense, you’re just saying that to look cool.” flowey retorts, curving his body away from the tail and sending a shower of pellets Then let me show you... (he realizes attacks that are supposed to do damage only give him more Hp, Atk, and Def.) "What the hell?! HOW ARE YOU DOING THAT?!?" He attacks you with all he has (he pins him to the ground, and stares into his eyes) You clearly don't realize what you're up against! "I..." shit! he thinks. I have to get away! he shrinks at an unexpected rate, weakening your hold of him. He wriggles back into the ground. "don't think this is over, barf brains." he heads for alphys' lab. (he grins and wanders on, wondering if there's any more monsters on the way to snowdin) You approach the bridge, Papyrus and sans waiting on the other side. "HUMAN! THIS IS YOUR FINAL AND MOST DANGEROUS CHALLENGE! BEHOLD! THE GAUNTLET OF DEADLY TERROR!" Deadly objects pop out of a wooden structure above and below the bridge. "WHEN I SAY THE WORD, IT WILL FULLY ACTIVATE! ONLY THE TINIEST CHANCE OF VICTORY WILL REMAIN! ARE YOU READY? BECAUSE! I! AM! ABOUT! TO DO IT!" L: Go ahead.... "well? What's the holdup?" sans asks his bro. "HOLDUP? WHAT HOLDUP? I'M... I'M ABOUT TO ACTIVATE IT NOW!" "that uh... doesn't look very activated." "WELL... THIS CHALLENGE SEEMS... MAYBE TOO EASY FOR THE HUMAN TO DEFEAT. YEAH! WE CAN'T USE THIS ONE! I AM A SKELETON WITH STANDARDS! THIS METHOD IS TOO DIRECT! NO CLASS! AWAY IT GOES" The deadly devices retract into their positions, and papyrus sighs with relief. he runs off, and sans smiles at you awkwardly. "Well... I don't know what my brother is going to do now. Thanks for playing along, i really appreciate it. Just make sure you understand blue attacks, and you'll be fine." (Grins at him, and references his conflict with gaster) I wonder how your father would react..... Knowing you don't even try to save him.... Sans stiffens, his eyes wide and shocked. He rests his hand against his skull, thinking hard with a manic expression. "k-kid... how do you know about gaster?" (he chuckles) You'll know soon enough... (he walks into snowdin, no one seems to have evacuated yet) Sans watches you walk away, unsettled and shaken. He chuckles nervously, grabbing bunches of his sweater in his fists to keep them from shaking. "Heheh... that's right... they probably learned about him in a reset..." He lets go of his sweater, but his hands are still shaking, so he stuffs them into his pockets. His finger brushes against the cold surface of the knife he confiscated. He thinks to himself "I don't remember a reset where they faced gaster... Jeez, I don't have the energy to deal with this right now." He teleports to the entrance of the ruins, sitting down, looking exhausted from the stress. He knocks on the door without thinking. "Knock kno-" his eyes settle on the slight color difference between the snow and toriel's dust in front of him, and his soul squeezes painfully in his chest. He pulls his hood over his head and brings his knees to his chest, burying his head in them to keep warm. he thinks: "The kid's creepy, there's no denying it, but they've been okay so far. They looked genuinely scared and confused when tori-- It couldn't have been them. It had to be a mistake. In any case, they're good to Pap. I'm sure Papyrus will have fun with them... I have time. I'm just... so tired." His eyes close and he drifts to sleep. (explaining why he doesn't save papyrus) (he looks at all the people, he steps inside grillby's, which has no one but a certain fiery bartender at the moment...) His eyes narrow and he stops cleaning his glass. "I'm sorry, we've just closed." (he grins) Then I'll just take my order and leave... (gazes at him) Grillby stares back without any hint of emotion, clearly waiting for you to order. You can sense he's on edge, but nothing he does gives it away. *He grins and slashes at him* Your life. Grillby sort of expected this based on your behavior, so he dodges quickly and throws his glass at you. You dodge as well, but cause a large enough racket that the bear outside walks in. "hey what's goin' on in here? As mayor i need to know!"

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Roughdraft/Notes on Grieftale Act 1 Part 2

*hides the knife, his tongue stretches inhumanly long and pretty much cleans himself, he lets the other soul take over, he quivers, curled up in a corner* Toriel walks in, pulling out her phone to call you, when she spots you in the corner. "how did you get here, my child? are you hurt?" she notices your gash i your leg from the spikes and the carving you did to yourself. "Oh my goodness! I knew i shouldn't have left you alone!" She picks you up and rushes into the house, carrying you to your bed. "you lie down, my sweet, i'm baking something that should restore your health to full!" She leaves the room *he looks at her as she leaves, he begins crying when she leaves* He never left.... you wake up to see you'd been tucked in, and a piece of butterscotch cinnamon pie was left on the floor for you. (he gets up and goes to Toriel, crying) she's in the living room, reading. She pulls off her glasses and closes her book, looking shocked. "my child, what's wrong? Did you not like the pie?" i-it’s not that... he said..... he's gonna... I need to leave… "oh... but THIS is your home now. Um... would you like to hear a snail fact?" I can't have a home... He'll only destroy it and.... Kill my family... again.... "No! That's why i'm keeping you here, so you can be safe! No one can find us here! No one..." She ponders sadly for a moment. "I have to do something. Stay here." She gets up and briskly leaves the room. (he catches up to her) He's inside me.... I can't escape him...... you run down the stairs and find her at a door (where you deliver your dialogue) "No. he's not. i know of who you speak, and this is the only exit to the ruins. once i destroy it, Asgore will never hurt another human again." She raises her hands and they ignite into huge orange flames. She turns and holds her hand against the door, trying to fuze it shut. *L takes control, Toriel hears a voice that's utterly dripping with spite* No, I don't think you do. *once again, his mannerisms change* she turns around slowly, her flames dying out. "My... child?" Your child isn't here right now, would you like me to take a message? *laughs* or maybe you should see him yourself. *shows her his soul, it's being suppressed by a larger crimson one, Toriel now understands......* "Monster! Devil! torturing a poor, innocent youth! I should slay you where you stand!" she cries, her arms erupting into flames. She looks down at the soul and the flames die out. "No... I- I can't!" tears pool in her eyes. "Bring them back! bring the child back to me!" *he chuckles* Wow, giving up without a fight? See, this is why your first two kids died... *grins* Of course I'm not giving him up easily. "What are you... how do you know that??" tears flow down her face, blurring her vision. She pushes her hands up against the door behind her back and starts to fuze them shut again, her flames have turned blue. "I will not let you leave the ruins! I have someone... I want to protect." Well, this should be an interesting challenge. (grins madly) (jumps on her back and slashes her) you jump up to slash her and she ducks out of the way with a gasp. You slash the door, leaving a huge gash in the stone. The door loosens and opens a little, letting in a cold breeze. She pants, holding her flaming hands out in front of her. "My child... can you hear me? Are you there? You have to fight them! Come back to me... and go. up. STAIRS!" She releases streams of flames from her fingertips, what do you do? (i recommend standing still for dramatic effect) (grins as the flames hit him) Is that really the best you can do? (a wave of crimson energy launches from his hands) She can't see your attack through her own and she is struck against a wall. She cries out, slumping forwards but not falling, supporting herself on shaky legs. "So much power... it's inhuman... I can't... I'm going to --!" She looks around wildly and spots the door. She dashes for it at incredible speed, blinding you with fire. She breaks through the door and lands in the snow, trying desperately to get on her feet. "Help! Someone help me!" she screams. (he manages to pin her down just before he gets to the door, but just as he's about to land the killing blow, something repulses him, and an Azure soul inserts itself into Toriel) Grrrrrr. "What? I... this feeling..." She stands, easily knocking back a child that weighs a fraction of her. "Are you free of him? Can I... attack?" she asks the soul inside of her "No... it's... (insert name of child with azure soul)? How can this be?" She stands confidently, her wings unfolding behind her. "Surrender now, demonling, and no harm will come to you. i am unsure of my current strength. If i resort to using force... I may kill you as well as the child you possess." *grins* Fine by me… Toriel stiffens. She considers her options... and... She unleashes a powerful fire attack at close range, closing the distance between the two of you in an instant. *seemingly teleports out of the way, then appears behind her, and sends her to the ground with a kick* she braces herself before hitting the ground, not taking any damage. she turns around and spits fire, her expression filled with DETERMINATION uses his host's soul as a shield, Toriel hears ??? in pain* She gasps and the fire is cut off. "Don't worry, my child, I can save you! I'll take your soul too!" She grabs you by your sides and her hands burst into flames. your health is reduced to half. (he falls back, and Snickers) There's only one way to be rid of me. (he holds up his host's soul) You have to kill him... (grins, realizing Toriel could never bring herself to do that) Toriel tries to bluff. "That may be so... but they'll come back to me! Like (insert azure soul's name here)! then we can all be together, safe!" she laughs almost insanely "i'll fight asgore... and take the souls he stole! We'll all live happily together, inside of me! And all i need to open the barrier.... IS YOU!" Tornadoes of flames surround you, closing in. Toriel looks like her sanity is slipping away. "What's this feeling? I feel so... DETERMINED!" *grins* Leave the insanity act to those of us with actual problems, or in my opinion, those who see the world for what it really is. *holds up his soul* He can't come back to you... He gave his soul to me, I just made it look like a much better deal then it actually was... *grins* he deserves to burn in hell... *Toriel is pissed but realizes she can't fight him without killing the child* The flames die out again and her eyes clear, before filling with tears. "What am I doing? What am i DOING? Heh... Pathetic, is it not? I cannot defend even a single human child." she buries her head in her hands as her breath trembles. (tps behind her, grinning, and brutally "extracts" the human soul from her, which then flies off, leaving her at death's door You hear a branch snap, and your face looks concerned. Your expression changes to one of fear and guilt as the child is allowed control of their body. "No... I... NO!" you cry, running to Toriel as she collapses in the snow. Toriel groans, her vision blurry. She tries to get up, but hardly moves at all. She looks up and sees a vague pale figure in the distance running towards her. She smiles weakly, panting. "Heh... why did... the goat monster... stay in the snow all night?" "I-- I don't understand!" The child sobs, wiping their tears. Toriel isn't looking at them, but at the figure. She can see her own fingers dissolving into dust. Muffled words dance in her ears. She can't hear a thing. "Because... she was... a numbskull..." She collapses into dust, spreading over the snow and all over the child. The pale figure, we now recognize to be Sans, reaches her just as she dies, the dust sprinkling onto his slippers. Sans looks horrified. He turns, his eyes landing on the child sobbing. At first his eyes are full of hate, but seeing the state the kid is in, his expression changes to fear and sadness "Kid... what the HELL happened?" L..... He killed...My family long ago ... (sniff) and now this.... (Sans senses the Demon) Sans looks concerned, his eyes darting to the tree lines, searching for the culprit. he looks back and sees the dissolved emotional state of the child and their racking sobs. He sighs and puts his hand in his pocket for a moment, then takes it out again. "Listen, kid, all i know is... I made a promise to her. You're safe with me. Cmon, get up. Don'tcha know how to greet a new pal?" he holds out his hand to help you up. No... He kills everyone who I end up caring about.... I'm sorry… (he runs off) (along the path, L takes control again but keeps up the act) I... deserve to die.... he won't hurt anyone else if I'm dead... (he pulls out a knife) You eye the knife as you run, your face twisting into a grin, when suddenly you smack into someone. You look up as two hands are placed on your shoulders. "OH MY GOODNESS, I'M SORRY LITTLE-- " his eyes go wide "OH MY GOSH. ARE YOU A... HUMAN???!" Sans runs to catch up behind you. "Kid, wait!" You eye the knife, your face twisting into a grin. Suddenly you grimace and collapse to the floor mid-run, the child gaining control. "If no one else will kill me, i'll have to do it myself!" he cries, raising the knife to stab himself in the stomach. Suddenly you freeze, the knife an inch from your sweater. Your soul is visible, and blue. a faint blue aura covers your body. "Human! Kid!" Sans yells, running to catch up. At the same time you hear a gasp of surprise and delight. "A HUMAN? OH MY GOSH SANS, DID YOU CAPTURE A HUMAN?" Papyrus trots up to you eagerly, not noticing the knife at all. "OH SANS, I KNEW YOU WEREN'T A LAZYBONES! THOUGH I WISH IT WAS I, THE GREAT PAPYRUS, WHO CAPTURED THIS HUMAN... HOW WILL I EVER BECOME THE WORLD'S MOST FAMOUS ROYAL GUARD NOW?" "Pap, listen, this isn't just any human..." Papyrus thinks about it for a second, then his face lights up. "YOU'RE RIGHT! WE NEED TO SEE IF THEY ARE A HUMAN WHO LIKES PUZZLES!" "Pap, wait --" Papyrus picks up the human, still under the influence of blue magic. "I'VE GOT LOTS OF PUZZLES TO SHOW YOU! YOU'RE GOING TO BE SO CHALLENGED BY ME, YOU'LL SURRENDER AND ACKNOWLEDGE THAT MY PUZZLES ARE REALLY GOOD!! SANS, LET GO OF THEIR SOUL!" Sans eyes the human suspiciously. He walks up and takes the knife out of their hand first, then their soul vanishes from view, no longer blue. You glare at him with a face that says "you have no idea what this is, do you?" Sans stares back tiredly with a "I've got a pretty good idea, kid." Papyrus puts you down and gasps. His head turns to sans "SANS! YOU HAVEN'T CALIBRATED YOUR PUZZLES YET! WE ARE NOT PREPARED FOR THE HUMAN'S ARRIVAL! HUMAN, I'M GOING TO GO CALIBRATE THE PUZZLES. YOU CAN VISIT WITH THE DOGS IN THE MEANTIME." Sans' hand shifts in his pocket, where the knife still sits. "paps, you sure you don't want to take the human along?" "THEN THEY WILL SEE HOW TO SOLVE THEM! THE DOGS ARE VERY NICE, THEY WILL KEEP THE HUMAN COMPANY AND I WILL CAPTURE THEM LATER!" Papyrus spins away triumphantly, hovering off the ground. Sans sighs. "listen, kid," he says, turning to the child "if you feel... i don't know... really bad about what happened to that lady back there... just know you can move past it eventually. So don't, uh... try anything." He waits for you to reply, sweating. I-i can't control him.... (Lucian takes control once again and waits.... Meanwhile, it turns out Alphys's cameras picked up footage of Lucian and Toriel's battle, and saw that the Crimson soul is extremely dangerous, so the entire Royal canine unit was sent to dispatch him, they show up when Sans and Pap aren't looking) Sans sighs at your (the demon) silence, and adds "I'll be keeping an eye socket out for ya." And teleports away. You stand there alone for a few moments, then a twig breaks and you spin around, seeing almost half a dozen pairs of shining eyes in the bushes. Out steps a dog in light armor, shield and sword; a dog in heavy armor and a sweet pudgy face, a canine couple in tracksuits, and a dog in cougar tights. They seem intent to fight, but a little clueless. the armored dogs bark with happy expressions, the couple think you smell like a weird puppy, and the knife-wielding dog mumbles "don't move an inch" while looking somewhere close to you. *he lures the dogs into the woods, then separates them from each other* You throw a stick to your right and the lesser and greater dog take off after it, not finding it and wandering away from each other. You then dive into the dirt and snow and slide between doggo's legs, slicing one of his tendons. He gasps and cries "S-S-S-Something attacked me... Something that isn't m-m-moving..." You stand and doggo and dogaressa stop chasing you, looking confused. they now think you're a weird puppy. They follow you curiously into the woods, leaving doggo behind as he can barely walk in his state. (he climbs a tree and pulls out some modified scalpels, planning something special for each of them, though he already had plans for the couple, something he always wanted to try.... he thinks about the vile acts he has planned and once again has his Cheshire cat esque grin plastered on his face) (casts a few illusions around dogamy and dogaressa, one of them beheads the other, thinking they are someone else, then calling off the Illusion, they realize what they've done) Dogaressa beheads dogamy, then as the illusion breaks she screams and covers her face, collapsing the the ground and whimpering. she drops her axe and covers her face with her hands (appears behind her, giggling with malicious Glee, she smells something alot different now, like blood, hatred, and charred flesh, it's horrible....) she spins around in shock, grabbing for her axe, but it may be too late-- Well, the main reason you chose to go on is gone now... (grins as he starts messing with her head) You can be with him again you know... If you know what to do with that axe... (convinces her she has no reason to go on) she stops in her tracks, her grip tight on her axe. She starts to shake, her head turning slightly so she can glance back at her husband's body, now turning to dust. She leans over and nuzzles it, getting dust all over her nose. She stands, her knees trembling, and holds the axe outwards. With surprising strength she brings it towards her face, cutting deeply into it and killing herself. She collapses to the ground, the dust spreading over her husbands'. they really are together again. (smiles and utters a line from Romeo and Juliet, the one about cutting him up into stars or something, before climbing up into the trees to stalk the others) lesser and greater dog are near each other but far enough away that they could be taken separately, doggo is still on the path (strategically throws a scalpel into lesser dogs eye, not killing it) lesser dog recoils, his neck extending as he falls backwards. His cries are attracting attention, greater dog notices his injury and whines (summons a lesser malicovore disguised as a rabbit to lure greater dog off, while he comes down and rips out lesser dog's spine, he keeps pulling and pulling and....) Zaeldarach, it's like a goddamn magician's ribbons!!! (yep, as greater dog Chase's the "rabbit", he finds he cannot stop running, so he eventually exhausts his heart....) Greater dog becomes very tired and falls over, his tiny dog body rolling out of his armor (no matter how hard he tries, his body refuses to give up, it's as if persistence has turned against him) Greater dog keeps running,his little heart beating far too fast for his little body. Suddenly he cries "hurk!" and collapses, his panting slowing to a stop Malicovore: My Lord, I have killed one! L: Good, now go back to the lava pits. Malicovore: But master, you promised if I helped, you would allow me to accompany yo-erk! (it is now being picked up by the throat) L: I lied, you must be new... (eats the now screaming demon, he walks back to Doggo) Doggo pants, sweating and he holds the wound in his leg closed, she turn and spots you coming out of the shadows of the trees, blood around your mouth, and tenses, holding up a knife (moves only when he isn't looking, like a weeping angel or Scp-173) "Damnit... where are you you freak?!" he hisses, trying to find you. the drip on his knife stiffens and he slashes out wildly (his Dagger is whipped out of his hands, he feels something on his back....) "Get off of me!" he yells, trying to break into a sprint (the hideously deformed beetle drills into his skin) doggo rolls over onto his back to try and get it off!! (it eats him from the inside out) doggo's eyes turn white and he falls forward, his dust scattering across the path. ahead of you is a table with frozen spaghetti on it, and further than that the path turns left. (he skips along with all the glee of a demented child, one could've sworn he was in Disneyland...) you find a series of rocks bordering two blue Xs on the ground. ahead of that are spikes, and Papyrus stands behind them with his back turned. he's humming his own theme song happily. there's a little sign that says "turn Xs into Os" *starts screwing with Papyrus's head in a more... subtle way* I've got a puzzle you might be able to solve....

[rebeltheanomaly]

Roughdraft/Notes on Grieftale Act 1 Part 1

Opening Scene:*a kid crawls up a mountain, seemingly panicked* Im not... Gonna let you... Hurt anyone else.... *he ties a rope around his neck, and falls into Mt. Ebott, only for the Rope to snap, letting him fall into the vast underground world below* The thump echoes off the cavernous walls, the only sign of life. They feel something soft against their skin... golden flower petals from dozens of crushed flowers. Somehow, they were enough to keep the fall from becoming fatal. *the kid awakens, covered with scars, not from the fall, but from... something else... he wanders on in hope of... something* You find a large stone doorway, leading to a hall filled with a playful tune... or is it in your head? in front of you is another golden flower, alone this time, grinning at you happily. "Howdy! I'm Flowey! Flowey the Flower! Hmmm... you're new to the underground, aren't cha? Golly, you must be so confused. Someone ought to teach you how things work around here! I guess little old me will have to do. Ready?" *he cowers* Please... don't hurt him... *he seems to be talking to someone else, Flowey feels a threatening presence, but shrugs it off, after all, it's just a human.... Right?* Flowey looks uncomfortable, his smile wavers. "Haha.. of course I won't hurt you! here we go!" Suddenly, the light in the room seems to be sucked out, and a white perimeter forms around you. You feel a weight in your chest, and look down to see a heart-shaped red glow underneath your striped sweater. "See that heart?" Flowey explains, "that is your soul, the very culmination of your being! Your soul starts off weak, but it can grow strong if you gain a lot of LV!" *His soul is Obsidian, which means he's being controlled..... Or his soul is a host to something* Flowey's grin wavers. He looks like he wants to say something, then recovers. "W-what's LV stand f-for? Wy, LOVE of course! You want some LOVE, don't you? Here!" Half a dozen white pellets appear around the flower. They shoot towards you at an alarming rate. Flowey's expression darkens. "Get as many as you can." H-he says you want to hurt me... *at this point, Flowey gets the impression that he's probably just insane* *As soon as the pellets make impact with his soul, his mannerisms change from that of a shaky nervous teen too some kind of killer, he moves at impossible speed and pins Flowey against the wall, grinning and laughing in a completely different voice* ???: Sorry Goatweed, but i kinda need this body.... *His voice, grin, and penetrating red eyes seem..... Familiar to the little flower, like a really bad nightmare....* Flowey looks shocked, his face changes into that of azriel "C-chara? You're back! T-take it easy -- it's me!" *Laughs* You think i’m your girlfriend? (I’m just gonna say Chara is a girl for this) No, i know who you are Goat. *throws him to the ground* And you will stay out of my way if you know what's good for you. Flowey stares up in shock as he slinks away. ???:*lets the human take control as Toriel comes* "Oh my! You poor innocent youth, i thought I heard a commotion, are you hurt?" H-he's gone now... and so is that weird flower..... toriel takes a knee "my child, who hurt you? Who was here?" He didn’t hurt me... L might've hurt him though… "You don't have to hurt anyone ever again, my child... i'll protect you." she extends a hand to you *inches away* Plz stay away... He might hurt you too… She grabs the child's hand anyway (he takes her hand) Oh-ok… The goat monster smiles reassuringly. "My name is Toriel. What is yours?" She says as she walks with you into the next room. You notice a golden star in between two staircases... something is off about it. It isn't casting light on anything. It's almost as if it isn't even there. I-i... I cant remember... He's taken away most of my memories... *cries* "Oh, my child! The things you must have gone through!" She gasps, falling to her knees and hugging you tightly. "We'll both be happier now that we've found each other, i'm sure." Maybe.... he'll leave me alone for once.... "Of course, it'll be just you and me." She guides you up the stairs, and into a room with six pressure plates and a door. "Welcome to your new home, innocent one. Allow me to educate you in the operation of the ruins. The ruins are full of puzzles: ancient fusions between diversions and doorkeys. One must solve them to move from room to room. Please adjust yourself to the sight of them." She walks on four of the pressure plates, and the door slides open. In the next room, there sits a dummy. "As a human living in the underground, monsters may attack you. Stall for time, I will resolve the conflict. I promise. Here, practise talking to the dummy." *he looks at the dummy, and hugs it* Toriel's eyes shine with joy. "You are very good!" She walks ahead of you, and when she's not looking a frog monster jumps in your way. It looks like it has bad intentions as it charges forward for an attack “P-please stay away little frog..* The frog doesn't seem to understand you, but it hears the fear in your voice. Before it can make another attack, Toriel turns around and glares at it. The frog slinks away, embarrassed. You and Toriel find a long path of spikes barring your way. "Here, take my hand" She says, and steps forward. *he takes her hand, halfway through, one of the spikes shoots up higher then normal and gives him a small cut* I-im sorry L! "Oh don't apologize! L? What a cute nickname for me! I usually let people call me the first half of my name." Toriel seems completely oblivious, but is saddened by the cut. "Puzzles seem a little too dangerous for now." She leads you into a vast empty room, the lighting prevents you from seeing too far in. "You have done excellently thus far, my child. However... I have a difficult request to ask of you. ...I would like you to walk to the end of the room by yourself. forgive me for this." She runs off into the darkness, abandoning the one she'd sworn to protect. Y-your not L.... He punished me.... *when he sees Toriel run off* No! *he runs quickly, panicking* you chase after her, but she is nowhere to be seen. *he gets to the end of the room, she hears faint whispering around him, she can't tell what it's saying... But it doesn't sound pleasant...* Suddenly, Toriel is by your side. "Greetings, my child. Do not worry, I did not leave you. There was an important reason for this exercise... to test your independence. I must attend to some business, and you must stay alone for a while. please remain here, it's dangerous to explore by yourself." She thinks for a moment. "I have an idea, I will give you a cell phone! if you have a need for anything, just call. be good, alright?" She stays where she is for a moment, as if reconsidering, then brisky leaves you... for real this time. (as Toriel leaves, his other side comes out, and exits the room, with the grin of a madman) You exit the room and immdiately get a call. "Hello? This is Toriel. You have not left the room, have you? There are a few puzzles ahead that i have yet to explain. It would be dangerous to try and solve them yourself. Be good, alright?" *he waits until the call is over, then knocks the candy bowl over without even taking any, he then walks out of that room* You spot another golden star hovering over a pile of leaves. A froggit eyes you suspiciously L: *seems repulsed by the star* Grrr... it reminds me of hope.. A Whimsun flutters out of the leaves and encounters you... it looks like it's fighting out of fear. *grins and grabs it by the neck, preventing it from escaping* Well, what have we here? *Grins menacingly, seeming enjoy the fear in it* The whimsun gasps for air, it's wings fluttering aggressively. "i can't... handle this!" *rips off its wings, limbs and tongue and leaves it for dead, laughing* You stand over the dead creature, watching it turn to dust. The froggit behind you recoils in horror, then bravely charges forwards. *picks it up and hurls it into the wall with inhuman strength* its skull shatters against the wall and it crumbles into dust. Two more froggits try to jump you from behind! *grabs them and crushes their heads with his bare hands *walks into the next room* You find the ground ahead of you looks unstable... it reminds you that these really are ruins. A whimsun flutters over the problem area, whimpering at the sight of the dust on your hands Throws a sharpened stick at it with startling accuracy, impaling it* It crumbles with a whining cry, and the stick drops onto the uneven ground, dust sprinkling onto it *He tastes some of the dust, like the sick freak he, or more accurately the demon possessing him is* You take a few steps on the unstable looking ground... and your leg breaks through the floor! You crash a story down, landing on a pile of leaves. You are now in a room with two doors on either side of the leaves, surrounded by half a dozen whimsun, ready to fight for their lives *Uses something humans aren’t normally capable of: Magic. He summons a storm of crimson energy, forcing them into the worst pain imaginable* they drop from the sky, their attacks disappearing, writing on the ground as they slowly turn to dust. You leave through the door on the right, the stairs lead you through a small gap into the hallway with the broken floor. You're on the other side of the unstable ground, allowing you to move forwards. *He goes onto the next room, avoiding the unstable ground* Suddenly, your phone rings. "Hello? This is toriel. For no reason in particular... which do you prefer? Cinnamon or Butterscotch?" *Imitates the other kid's voice* I-I-I don't have a preference.... I haven't eaten anything sweet in so long… "Oh! You sound like you're getting a cold! Well alright, thank you." You take a few steps and she calls you back "You do not DISLIKE Butterscotch and Cinnamon, do you? Would you turn up your nose if you saw them on your plate?" No, they're alright...... I mean, i can't remember what they taste like... *at this point, Toriel thinks he has some kind of Trauma-related mental illness* "Right, right. I understand. Thank you for being patient, by the way." She hangs up, and you look around you. Three rocks sit near three pressure plates, and ahead of them is a bridge of spikes. *he pushes the two rocks, then goes to the third one* "Whoa there pardner! who said you could push me around?" *pulls out a drill* Hehehe… "Whoa... wait.. wait! I'll move!" the rock exclaims, sliding into place correctly. The spikes slide down. *drills it to bits as its on the button* I was gonna kill you anyway... Thanks for cooperating... *walks on* You take a few steps when the spikes shoot back up, pieces of the rock crumbling away from the pressure plate. You shriek in pain and feel your health drain away… *with the demon in control, the damage seems to make him stronger, hell, he seems to enjoy it, continuously scraping his arm across it* you move on, and spot another golden star next to a table with cheese on it. There's a mouse hole on the opposite wall *Walks on, hissing at the star* You hear a voice echo in your head: DETERMINATION in the next room you find a ghost lying on a pile of leaves... it starts to fade away You spear them with your stick. they stop fading away, looking at you with a blank expression *Gazes at the ground below Napsta, it starts sucking him in* Napstablook's face shifts from blank to shocked "W-What? What's happening? Oh no... I always knew I was a waste of space... at least now I can finally die..." Napstablook looks like he's letting himself get sucked in. *hands shoot out of the ground and drag him to hell, i'm sniggering all the while Napstablook's eyes go wide "I.. I- I changed my mind! I don't want to--" the hole closes, cutting napstablook off. You can now see there's a fork in the path *Looks at where the hole was* Doesn't matter, (grins) Suffering is all that exists, everything else is an illusion....*He enters the Spider bake sale* a little spider crawls down a web and greets you with a smile. "All proceeds go to real spiders!" she chimes happily *Grins and stomps on the webs, killing countless spiders, Muffet would never even receive word of the sadistic monstrosity from them, from someone else on the other hand.... You walk along a long, empty hall. Suddenly your phone starts ringing again (He answers) H-hello? *contemplating leaving a demonic latin message* "I just realized that it has been a while since I've cleaned up. I did not expect to have company so soon. There are probably a lot of things lying about here and there. You can pick them up, but do not carry more than you need. Someday you might see something you really like. You will want to leave room in your pockets for that. toriel hangs up, and you find yourself in a new room with six obviously damaged areas in the flooring. You get the feeling they can't support your weight for very long. At the end of the hall is another row of spikes. you walk to the one nearest to you. It collapses with a thunderous crash, and you land on a pile of leaves. While you dust off your clothes, a Vegetoid monster pops up from the ground, alongside dozens of carrots it's shooting towards you as an attack *he dodges with inhuman speed, picks it up, opens his mouth impossibly wide, bites the lower half of his body off and spits it out* I've always hated plant-based food… the vegetoid makes a high pitched shriek and dissolves, you taste dust in your mouth. You notice stairs leading back up *goes back up, and goes into all 5 of the broken areas* most are empty, one had a ribbon in it. On the fourth try, you notice in the room a glitched white shape, almost completely transparent, that keeps getting sucked into the ground and coming back up. "I.. I- I changed my mind! I don't want to-- I.. I- I changed my mind! I don't want to-- I.. I- I changed my mind! I don't want to--" they repeat again and again. "I -- I... I -- I -- I!" They pop out of existence, as if they were never there. *Grins and goes back up, walking out of the room* On the fifth try to find the switch and press it, and the spikes retreat successfully, revealing a loox. "You rude little snipe!" it cries, and strings of bubbles pour out of the walls, bouncing off surfaces at random *Grins* Is that all your gonna call me? *Pulls out the Ribbon, which he had turned into a lash* you whip the bubbles and they explode on impact, sending you sliding a few feet back but you stay on your feet. "Don't pick on me!" It yells, and you're finding it harder and harder to dodge the bubbles (Moves faster then it can keep up with and impales it's eye with his stick) It screams and the bubbles pop harmlessly. The tears from its eye manifest into attacks, then dissolve away as he does. you're in a room with three pillars, three buttons (red, green, and blue), and for the love of god more spikes *rips off one of the spikes and starts giving himself a sin mark, basically the Demonic equivalent of a tattoo* you step through the gap in the spikes and find another identical room, with a pile of moldsmalls bouncing happily and obliviously *grins and tackles one, ripping it to pieces* The other three rise up into Moldbyggs, thrashing their bodies and attempting to strike you like hammers *absorbs their life force by merely opening his mouth, at this point from beyond the fourth wall, though no one in universe seems to notice it, his skin gets more and more pale the more kills he makes, along with his hair growing and turning metallic silver very subtly, his teeth get sharper and more pointed, along with his nails * you walk on, and find yourself at another crossroad: straight ahead through brambles and bushes, or turn left where a bed of leaves forms a cross *he steps through the brambles* you find yourself on a balcony overlooking the ruins, it's breathtakingly beautiful (not that you care XD) you turn and spot the fake knife and grin, reaching for it, when a vine wraps around it. from behind you hear "Are you happy, you sick freak? is this what you were looking for?" flowey grimaces, blood dripping off one of his petals. "this isn't the first time i've watched a child wipe out monster kind, but never the way you're doing it. this is my warning: if you don't reset when you've finished having your fun... i ' l l s l a u g h t e r y o u . he pops back into the ground, and lets the knife go *smirks when he's gone* As if he can stop me... *picks up the knife and converts it into a Kukri, which is basically an Australian hunting knife, he then walks back and goes down the path untravelled* you hear toriel approaching. you realize you are still covered in dust and carrying the knife.

[rebeltheanomaly]

Undertale Roleplayer Needed

Hello, people who are reading this, how are you, insert additional greeting here. I have joined this website for one purpose (Though i will probably stay for other reasons). Basically, i am here to find someone who can be my coauthor/roleplayer for a series of Undertale Fanfics. Now if you want to contact me and possibly collaborate should warn you of a few things. 1. I need someone to act as all the cast of Undertale except Frisk, (as he/she is going to be replaced in this series) as well as the general game itself, though i will allow Ocs. However, I need you to be detailed, ESPECIALLY with the dialogue. Keep in mind their faced with a seemingly hopeless situation orchestrated by a truly evil character, (Unlike Flowey, who is simply devoid of emotions and therefore baseline psychopathic) so being able to come up with original lines for each character is a given. The level of detail expected is the same as below. www.deviantart.com/crimsonrebe… www.deviantart.com/crimsonrebe… www.deviantart.com/crimsonrebe… www.deviantart.com/crimsonrebe… www.deviantart.com/crimsonrebe… 2. I must warn you, this A.U. touches on some grim subject matter, Including Intense Guilt, Suicidal depression, Existential torment, Extreme sadism (and not the kinky kind), Eternal suffering, Hopelessness, Gruesome death, Various more relatively benign yet Unsavory acts (though it's only mentioned), and of course, My two main characters. One is a demon lord who's arguably worse then Satan himself, He's conniving, narcissistic, psychotic, and sadistic demon lord who embodies everything evil in the world. And his end goal, is to turn earth into a wasteland of nothing but unending misery and suffering, and he's willing to sacrifice the entire demon race to bring this goal to fruition. He's also a major plot device as he's the orchestrator of some of the events in the story. Basically, if you want to know this character, check out this song parody www.deviantart.com/crimsonrebe… . And then you have my replacement for Frisk, A year before the events of the second story, which takes place in the edited timeline (long story), a tragic event occurred in which he was used as a puppet to kill his family. Unlike how Kratos reacted and went on a rage fueled killing spree, he had a "What have i done?!" Moment and developed a severe guilt complex, extreme suicidal depression, severe self-hatred, extreme nihilism, and a belief that his existence is parasitic. Just that alone is how deep in the dark these AUs will go. 3. This will take quite a while, so please, make sure you can go without getting burned out for at least 6 months. So, if there's anyone willing to try, your more then welcome too comment