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第八个电邮

谢谢你!

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第七个回答

To be brief, I will give you some tips. 1.Just like other areas along the coast in the world, the environmental problem of overfishing is also very serious in Hai Nan. 2.As San Ya is a tourist attraction, many visitors go to Sanya every year.,and some visitors didn't throw rubbish bin.What is going on is very easy to think of. 3.Although Sanya is near the coast, The problem of lack of clean water is always going with the city. 4.The last problem is about Sanya this city itself.The problem of the raised dust and that Industry patted the sewage are still exsit. 发自我的华为手机

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第七个电邮。

我知道你很忙，但是我的老师说我们这个星期四需要三个引用。我的伙伴可以问他的笔友，但是我不知道如果她可以给我们三个关于三亚的引用。如果你可以告诉我一个多关于三亚的环境问题的句子，我觉得我不需要别的东西。谢谢！

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第六个回答

I am very sorry to tell you that, I am very busy this week. So it may take you some time to wait for my letter. 发自我的华为手机

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第六个电邮

耿靖轩， 谢谢你为了你的帮助。我们决定我们会关于三亚（和海南）的环境问题讨论。如果你知道一些关于三亚的环境情况的东西，请你发给我。我们需要为了我们的计划受到三个引用。 安明

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第五个回答

Oh, well, I think maybe it's my turn to say sorry to you.I write this letter, almost one week after you wrote yours. Oh, well, you say you want to know some environmental problems of China. I think in Shanghai who can do the summary of what a pollution and air pollution.But, in my opinion,I think you can get this information in America. So, the more important one to you may see problems in your own eyes.Maybe you can go to some small museum, and you can get direct contract and different way.Besides, I remember that you will go to Chengdu. I haven't go there,But I have to go on to the city near it. Its natural environment is very amazing. And then, I think you can do a survey on the loess plateau. I remember that the loess plateau Is a forest in a acient time. I think it can be a good information to your survey. The thing I wrote below is not in good order. In brief, I give you some recipe.Lanzhou, Tangshan,the loess plateau and Shanghai are all good choices for you. By the way, you know industry in shanghai is clean, but they are also an important part in Shanghai pollution. Oh well, I don't know why I say that. Don't think deeply about it. Now come to grammar problems. You wrote “不足的电邮”，but in our daily life We always say “写的邮件比较少” instead. According to the game, you say you like playing. I feel surprised that you are keen on FPS. I think we can exchange our account in Blizzard Game so that Organization will be more convenient. My email is 'gengjinghuo@qq.com'.You can search for me by it. Thank you for reading this. 发自我的华为手机

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第五个电邮

对，我想关于中国污染或者别的欢环境问题学，因为我们需要做一个计划。 我每次给你歉意因为我的同学们经常发他们的笔友电邮，但是我只一两个星期发给你一个电邮。所以，我觉得我发不足的电邮。

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第四个回答

TO be brief, this is not the complete letter to you. I just want to tell you something. First, you don't need to apologize to me In every letter.As we are all students, we all know that we are both very busy. So I think there is no need for you to apologize to me every time. Second, I want to know what you wantto know is about the pollution in China, isn't it? The others which I want to tell you will be written in the next complete letter. No hurry. 发自我的华为手机

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第四个电邮

你好，耿靖轩， 再说一次-- 对不起，我的上个星期很忙所以我不可以发你电邮。我不但有AP和SAT的考试，而且有一张英文文章和一个化学考试了。谢谢你为关于上海的食品和古迹地方告诉我-- 我会需要跟我的朋友做一些研究。关于朋友我应该说-- 我的中文课马上必须做一个中国文化活动。我们会关于一个中国城市的水土问题说，所以我们现在看到三亚。 但是，我们不知道如果我们想不想为三亚做，所以如果你知道一个有很多水土问题的中国城市（除了北京，上海，西安等等以外）, 我感同身受。如果你想发我一个录音，我会听到。但是，我可能发你电邮，因为为我很���易。 谢谢， 安明/Quinn

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第三个回答

Hi, An Ming. First of all, just as you I am also very thankful to you for pointing out my mistake in grammar. It may have great help on my grammar. In this letter I am sure I will give you some advice about going sightseeing in Shanghai. At this part, I will also tell you your mistake in written Chinese. Fist, 常常可以看懂你”is not a proper use of Chinese. Instead, we say“你的文章我还是看得懂的”.Second, “大多希望”is very strange to Chinese in this condition. We always use“主要还是希望”instead. Third, just after below sentences in letter is another problem. We would rather use“当然”than “虽然”to connect them. To be brief, I just write corrected one to your mistake. 但是我有时候也会看一些；而我的妹妹出生在六月二日，现在13岁；很多时候我们互相会有些嫌弃；The last one, may have some differences in meaning because I cannot catch your idea.我很珍视她. In this passage, I think I should work out my main work, telling you feature in Shanghai. Although I born in Shanghai, I didn’t know very much about this city, and I will just tell you just what I know. Fist, Shanghai is a modern city, and its business is very advanced. I know that you from America, I think you won’t have interest on it, but I also tell you that Nanjing Road is very outstanding. Second, traditional part may have stronger attraction to you. Chenghuang temple must be a good Choice to you. You can taste almost all varieties of traditional Shanghai snack, such as……Oh, will I don’t know their English name, in Chinese we call them “生煎，小笼包，黄金糕，汤圆，春卷”and so on. To breakfast,“四大金刚——油条，大饼，豆浆，粢饭（粢饭糕、粢饭团）”may be great choice. To main meal, “八宝辣酱、白斩鸡、红烧狮子头（不是真的狮子头）、松鼠黄鱼、水晶河虾仁。。。。。。”are all great choice to you. Last, if you want to know Shanghai in go sightseeing, two kind of place may be proper to you. The bund and the area around it saw Shanghai history from 1844 to 1930. Buildings there cover style, such as British style, Italian style, French style and so on. Beside, you can go to places like 新天地、新华路”to see that style. The other kind is about much older Shanghai history and area around Shanghai’s history. Place like “新厂古镇、练塘古镇”are good choice. Give you a tip , the further you get in it, the more you will know about that history and that kind of Shanghai’s style. But noticing “七宝老街、枫泾古镇、朱家角”may not real. Environment there are too much close to business. By the way you can feel country style in places like “南汇、青浦”. I think this letter must be too long for me to write. To be brief, the games you say are not familiar to me, and I may search them on Steam later. Although I have much thing I want to write, but I think I must stop know. Also you can write everything you want to write. At last, I have a question. I want to use speaking rather than writing, so I would use record with important detail in writing. What do you think about it? 发自我的华为手机

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第三个电邮

耿靖轩， 为帮助我的语法问题，谢谢。你的英文可能比我的中文好，但是你有时候不用时态-- 英文有很多的词性（conjugations)。别担心，我常常可以看懂你。在我的学校，我现在大多希望我可以上一个很好大学，我不真的知道我想做的工作。虽然，我可能想做金融或者工程。 我的中国假期不只是一个语言假期-- 在我们的小组，多数人不说中文。所以，我们会在成都有一个游导。我会需要尝伤心凉粉， 谢谢你！ 我喜欢玩overwatch和counter strike，但是我有时候看到一点儿League of Legends-- 在我的学校我们没有很多时候，所以我常常不可以玩每个电脑游戏。 在我的家庭，我是最老的孩子-- 我的妹妹六月二日会变得十三岁。（我不知道如果我可以用变得在这个句子）很多的时候我们互相有嫌，但是我们一直是兄弟姐妹-- 我会只有一口妹妹。 你去过美国吗？如果你有一些关于英文或者美国的问题，我可以给你一个回答。 也，你觉得在上海最好的活动在哪儿？我想做一些研究。 --安明/Quinn

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第二个回答

Hi,Anming. According to what to have said,I decide to tell you your mistake on your letter.By the way,if you can also tell me my grammer or other in my letter,I will be very happy. First,I feel sorry to tell you that just after you say you want me tell you your mistake,you make a mistake.In China,we seldom use “企图” to describe that mood,and we always use“我会尽力把中文写得更好”.Second,we usually use such as “我读得不标准”，“我发音不太准” instead of saying “我的声调很糟糕”. Third,we like to use “通过邮件交流”rather than“在电邮上写”.The last problem I want to write may be more than a problem about grammer as it's more related to culture.“我也是一个男人”isn't proper to be used to at that condition. The article after this paragraph are the main part. I like math class,chemistry class,physic class,biology class.I have strong interest on these subjects.And my ambition is to join company like Neuralink.I want to do something to fasten the developmemt of that technology.It's very difficult for me to tell you about that technology'detail,so you can only surf by yourself you want to gain more information about it.By the way,I also have strong interest to know your dream. When I have saw the last paragraph in your letter,I just think you may be crazy during your trip in China.As you know,different part of China say Chinese in different ways and espacially in Chengdu.As one of the result,many of their spoken English is also far away from yours.If you want to speak official Chinese,I give you a suggestion.That is speak to natives in Chengdu as seldom as you can.But now there comes another how can you know their culture.It's difficult to say.But there must be a good way which is eating.You may find uneasy to eat food there as if my thought is true.Also,according to what I have learnt,the snack which is called “伤心凉粉”is very famous,and I think you should take a try. You say you like playing computer games and I'd like to know which games you like to play.I know I must have some grammer on when to use doing and when to use to do,during your reading,plesae don't care about it. I almost forget that problem.Are you the elderest children in your family?How do you feel about have brother and sister?May be these problems are a bit rude in your culture,but also don't care about it doing your reading. The other cities I may write next time if I remember this event.And if you write that again,I'm sure I will.introduce another city. The last thing I want to say is about anime，and they are just viedo about thing which have small possibity to happen in our world.We also call them two dismension.Because we see them from 2D plane. Now here is the end.Also,you can say and ask me whatever you want to chat with me. 发自我的华为手机

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第二个电邮

耿靖轩， 对不起， 我忘了给你我的回答！上个星期很忙-- 我需要做了很多作业。为了我的兄弟姐妹评语，我忘了中国只让家庭有一个孩子。中国和美国很不同，在美国多数家庭有二三孩子。我知道我的中文水平不太好，所以如果我写不对，请你告诉我。我会企图写中文写得好，但是这个语言很难。我也是一个男人。我也不知道如果我的句子看上去你的课本，但是中文语法和英文语法不一样，所以我有时候可能用英文的句法。对了，你的英文比我的中文好！我的声调特别糟糕-- 因为我们在电邮写，我觉得高兴。在你的店有你说你最喜���anime，比如什么？我不看很多的电影或者电视，但是我玩一些电脑游戏。我忘了问你，除了中文科和英文课意外，你上什么课？你喜欢什么课？我喜欢英文课，因为我的英文写作很好。 也，在上海你喜欢去哪儿/做什么？在这个夏天，我和一些学生一起去成都，上海，和香港-- 我不知道我想做的事。

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安明， 你好，我叫耿靖轩。在开始长篇大论之前，我还是先回答你的三个问题吧。我在上海出身，具体出身医院想来你也不太会有兴趣知道。其次，关于兄弟姐妹的问题的话，表亲倒是有几个，一表哥、一表弟。最后，这个问题令我有些无语(中国网络用语，用英语来说就是“What you said I feel very asecial ,amazining and even a bit strange”)。其实情感也不至于那么夸张，不知你有没有听说过国欠妹、国欠哥之类的说法(前面那几个词英译就是这样一种感觉“Why you have a sisiter or a brother?Why our nation avoid us doing that?Because of these problem we can know our nation must owe us a brother or a sister.”)对于这个问题的回答简言之就是:国家计划生育，没什么可能有兄弟姐妹。 现在开始正文，说实话我有点担心这次写很多的话下次还有什么可写的。当看到你那份邮件的中文时，我那叫一个庆幸啊，想着自己不用再去看英语阅读了。忽然想起我全用中文写，对于你貌似也像看阅读一样.......(指明一下，此处省略号的用法是用来表达上文提到过的“无语”这种情感的)这样来看的话，下文都用英语，遇到一些网络用词是我会有会中文。 After I finished reading you letter, I feel a little amazing or some srange.If when you write your letter ,you just follow your teacher's instruction or you write on your own became the first problem I want to know. You know we learn Engish, and according to our text book ,the form you write is very similar to that in my text book. The next thing I want to say is you must be a shining.......Oh no! I have forgotten to ask you about your sex.I am a boy, what about you?Come back to my aim, you mst be very shining, and I'm very different from you. In Chinese, we call it “宅”.It is used to describe someone who is very like to stay home ,and also like to see anime. I think I should stop now, you can write whatever you want to say to respond me. Wish you respond to me.(你那封信里最后那句“希望又说”就中文而言貌似有些怪) From Geng Jingxuan

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第一个电邮

耿靖轩， 你好！我是安明，或者在英文，Quinn。我是在波士顿出生的，也我还住在波士顿的市郊。我有一个妹妹-- 她叫凯莉，她十三岁。我十六岁，还有我现在在按豆腐(Phillips Andover) 的第十个年级学习。我住在一个校内的宿舍跟四十个学生和三个老师。我学中文学了四年，但是我第一年和第二年差不多一样。上课以后，我打网球，壁球，和踢足球，和我喜欢参加辩论，小联合国（Model UN），投资社团，和马赛克-- 按豆腐的跨国人的小组。我参加马赛克因为我的外公外婆一起从马来西亚去美国，但是我爸的家是美国人。我已经关于我自己说一说，但是我认识你-- 你是在哪儿出生的？你有没有兄弟姐妹？你在哪儿学习? 我期待你的回答，也希望我们会又说。 --安明