outof--theshadows
Rewriting Warriors
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outof--theshadows · 4 months ago
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also there's no one stopping you from loving a badly written woman. in fact sometimes a badly written woman will crawl inside your brain and live there forever.
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outof--theshadows · 4 months ago
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outof--theshadows · 4 months ago
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world’s worst dad
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outof--theshadows · 4 months ago
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FINAL POLL!!!
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outof--theshadows · 4 months ago
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Critters
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outof--theshadows · 4 months ago
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The first arc is fantastic. The next few are okay, once you finish OoTS it goes downhill.
As Amber said, it's not good. Like it's really not good. The worldbuilding sucks. You can make the characters any sort of animal and the story won't change. You can make them humans and the story will hardly change. It just is not written well. The biggest draw for me nowadays is rewriting it. Warriors is a great book series to pick apart and rework if you like that sort of thing, but honestly it holds little value it and of itself.
And as the books go on, the writers get more and more careless. You may have heard about the Moonpaw incest controversy - Moonpaw, the protag of the next upcoming series, her parents are cousins. This happened because of a few factors. One, the writing team doesn't keep track of familial lines. Two, they pair up any two cats at random because they're very Christain and that reflects in their work. Three, they don't care enough to keep track of things. Afaik it hasn't been changed yet. (This also lead to an outstanding surge of disgusting behavior in the fandom towards children of incest)
But it's really what you make of it. I adore the first arc. I think it's pretty solid on its own (though the prose leaves a lot to be desired) and it has some great characters, interesting ideas, and a solid story to be told! Granted, there are many issues with it, but it's quite fun to read : )
I'm really tempted to read Warrior cats for the first time.
I love cats (special interest), xenofiction and enjoyed Watership down (second favourite book).
I'm intimidated by its sheer size of series. Maybe I should try audible first? I would have to get audible though.
Is felidae good? I know nothing about it.
@lepurcinus @amber-tortoiseshell you two know about these books. Is it worth it?
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outof--theshadows · 5 months ago
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my favourite thing about every warrior cats fan who is the number one stan of some random unimportant background character is that almost without fail they will be convinced that their guy has right of succession. they’ll have a whole au where secretly their fave character is the main character of warriors holding the whole story together and it will be convincing as HELL and you’ll go fuck….. smallear should have been the one to save thunderclan you’re right….. I eat it up every time
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outof--theshadows · 5 months ago
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a nice lady
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outof--theshadows · 5 months ago
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He wants Ravenpaw to die so bad hes not even pretending to hide it
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outof--theshadows · 5 months ago
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the one scene where jayfeather briefly wonders if leafpool had been in love with ashfur got me thinking if leafpool’s rendezvous with crowfeather isn’t gonna happen in your au…….. i think it could also work with ashfur. like. ashfur is trying to force himself to get over squirrelflight and to him, leafpool is the closest thing to her in his proximity, so he projects her sister onto her. he also at the same time wants to make squirrelflight jealous, wants to make her realize what she missed out on, which is why he proposes that he and leafpool run away together. leafpool believes that she reciprocates and agrees to leave with him for the same reason she does it with crowfeather; she craves the intimacy her position in the clan forbades her from having and is increasingly frustrated with the constraints of her designated station, but she does not have the tools to adeptly identify these feelings and where they come from so she assumes that they must be love. it can play out pretty much the same from there where they spend a few days away from the clans and then midnight tells them to go back (ashfur particularly feeling encouraged after learning that squirrelflight is in danger, seeing this as an oppurtunity to show squirrelflight that he loved her enough to return to thunderclan for her and ultimately “chose” her over her sister. this does not stop him from dropping the same passive aggressive remarks about how leafpool also eventually abandoned him by valuing her position as medicine cat over their love of course, because he’s still bitter over having another failed relationship) at which point they terminate the relationship. them being clanmates would pose a different dynamic than if they were from different clans but i similarly think leafpool’s interactions with ashfur from this point on would again be similar to the ones she had with crowfeather, with her attempts to engage him starting out amicable enough only to end with ashfur simply stating that they have both moved on and leafpool would never be able to have loved him as much as she loves the clan anyways etc etc. and of course: the drama of the fire scene playing out with squirrelflight being like “these aren’t my kids, they’re yours”
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outof--theshadows · 5 months ago
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when i was younger i imagine purdy as purple because the “pur” in his name evoked a purple cat in my head
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Taiwanese Warriors site intro (2008)
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outof--theshadows · 5 months ago
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"it's so important to teach kids that it's ok to move on 🥺" yeah between graystripe and firestar and crowfeather and berrynose and clear sky and gray wing and thunder and all the other times the wc universe has graciously provided a guy character with a woman who fawns over him and licks his wounds as a consolation prize for being sad this is definitely a groundbreaking writing choice. meanwhile can you name me any female character in the series who notably 'moved on' after being widowed? oh there was tallstar's mom who tallstar expresses discomfort towards for not staying loyal to her late husband? the one that also is on the whole written as an inadequate parent who emotionally neglected her son in being unable to stop grieving for her dead daughter? there's her and no one else? damn that's soooo weird. probably doesn't mean anything though
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outof--theshadows · 5 months ago
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i remember the classic den dad fernsong scenes that definitely happened. the ones we all know and love that the authors took the time to actually show instead of making a one off line about how he was gonna do it and then never actually showing it. it's so awesome about how we all read about this definitely happening.
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outof--theshadows · 5 months ago
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im a simple man i love firestar so much
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outof--theshadows · 5 months ago
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just opened twitter this is the first thing i saw
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outof--theshadows · 5 months ago
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FICTIONAL WOMAN: *Exists and has relationships and emotions* PEOPLE IN FANDOM, FOR SOME REASON: UR GETTING IN THE WAY OF MY YAOI YOU SHE-DEVIL
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