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This is my first attempt at a poem! I've been feeling really sad about going to college and leaving my friends behind, but I know it'll work out in the end.
We sat around the table
Our hearts filled with mirth
I'd never felt more stable
Sure that where I am
Is where I'm supposed to be
But joyous laughter turns nostalgic tears
And then I'm agian secure
Secure in my fears
As my journey begins
But for noe I'm here and so are they
So my joyous laughter is restored
But it's different this time
For this time I'm not feeling so sure.
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This is a story about body snatching in 19th century England. It does talk about stealing a body and sickness, but nothing graphic. Thank you for reading!
The anatomy teacherâs door was one of intricate patterns, the kind of patterns youâd only notice should you have been condemned to anxiously stand in front of it, as I have been for well over 2 minutes now. You see, about half past nine, I had received a letter that the aforementioned professor wanted to speak with me, regarding what the letter failed to say, simply stating to meet the professor at precisely a quarter past midnight, not a minute earlier nor a minute later. Though the lack of reason for the meeting set me on edge, my penchant for punctuality did not allow me to miss the meeting. Which is why at exactly 12:15, I pushed open the wood door and cautiously stepped into the office.
   Professor Bullard sat at his desk, still dressed in the clothes he taught in, looking expectantly at the door, anticipating my arrival.
âAh yes, Mr. Clement, right on time. Come sit, sit.â The professor gestured to the seat across from him, cheery and inviting as ever. I smiled at the professor, though uneasiness continued to clench at my organs, and sat as he requested.
   âHello professor, I do not mean to be rude, but might I enquire why youâve summoned me at this late hour?â
   Professor Bullard moved his hand in a dismissive gesture, as if batting away the apparition of my words. âIn due time my boy, for now, tell me, how is your mother, is she any better?â
   My heart twisted painfully at the mention of my mother. âShe is still unwell sir, the doctors say her days are limited.â
   The professor nodded, âSurely there is something they can do to help her, is there not Mr. Clement.â
   I hesitated, the out of character curiosity of the professor greatly concerned me. Still, I answered politely, âAs of right now sir the best they can do is prolong her life with constant surveillance, but as of right now, neither my father or I can finance it.â
   The professors expression dropped, hardening into intense urgency. âWhat if I told you, I had a plan that could save your mother?â
   I leaned forward in my chair, intrigued. The older man placed his hands flat on the table, gazing at me intently.
   âWhat Iâm about to say mustnât leave this room, and if it does, I will have your reputation destroyed, have I made myself clear?â at my solemn knodd he continued. âThere is a cemetery two kilometers up the road. I have it on very good authority that a poor farmer has recently died with similar symptoms ascribed to your ailing mother. Under the security of night, I want you to take the body, leave every belonging, clothes, jewelry everything, just take the body. In return, I will pay you 61 pounds, enough to keep the doctors at your mother's bedside.â
   Shock filled my body, and I sat muted in my chair for several moments. âSir Iâm afraid I do not understand you want me to steal a body? For what purpose?â
   âAnatomical research Mr. Clement, you and I, under the cloak of darkness will find the deepest secrets of the human body. With any luck we will find what diseases your mother and discover a means of a cure. Donât you want to be a hero Mr. Clement?â
   âBut itâs immoral sir, and illegal Iâm certain.â I protested.
   âIt is merely a misdemeanorâ professor Bullard said, as calm and cool as always. âAnd what is even more immoral is the state would rather have people die than provide scientists with necessary tools to solve these problems. We have a chance to change the world, maybe even save it. If you want to ease the horrors of the deed, learn a lesson from statesman and drink on the job.â
   I thought of my kind hearted mother, dying of pain and sickness, she didnât deserve that. The professor was offering me her salvation, I would do anything for my mother. âAlright sirâ I said nodding resolutely âIâll do it, for society, for my mother.â
   Professor Bullard clapped his hands once in delight. âWonderful my boy, simply wonderful. I will give more details in a letter tomorrow, for now get some rest.â
   I nodded once again, getting up from my chair and opening the door. âAnd remember Mr. Clement, discretion is of the utmost importance.â
   âYes sirâ I said as I took a step past the oak door and let it thud shut behind me.
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