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These ghosts appear in the University of Maryland, College Park yearbook of 1967.

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Perspective exercise but with snoms

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I genuinely think there was no greater insight into the modern Christian mindset than when the Pope said he very much hoped Hell was empty and he was absolutely hounded by both Catholics and Protestants outraged at the idea of a man who wanted a place of infinite suffering to have nobody in it.

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another writing pet peeve that I'm noticing more and more is, voice.

So... the words you pick, express more than just their meaning? I've noticed more and more in books published a kind of wooden? overly formal tone, a lot of words to impress your SAT tutor.

Particularly in first person the words you pick the way your character speaks and thinks and the words in which they do that, tell us the readers things about them. Are they smart are they good at school, bad at school, not articulate, etc you can tell me a character likes poetry without ever mentioning that they read it by how they express themselves.

and oh btw if you have two characters in dueling narrative, I should get a distinct difference between them, two different people shouldn't be written just the same way, how they talk and think should be different.

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Healthcare issues reflected in yaoi ✊😔

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Anyone ever notice Garnet can be a little competitive . . . ?

That's one Gem who plays to win. . . .

GARNET WINS.

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The worst loneliness is not to be comfortable with yourself.

Mark Twain (via thoughtkick)

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