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i love m!seven trust me i do but i really love f!seven and i always get happy when i see more and more people playing with f!seven i think shes a delight

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Kill Credit card Companies

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do you ever start writing a comment on the internet and then think “oh what the fuck am i going on about” and delete it

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THANK YOU FUCKKKKKKKK

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it is honestly amazing how much of writing and editing is just. logistics. like... do i use a name here or a pronoun? if i move this dialogue tag to the middle of this line and break it in half, does the end of the line hit harder that way? what if i move the tag to the front? what if i remove it entirely? ...wait, whose point of view am i in; can i reasonably say this character is appalled, or must i say they look or seem or sound appalled? is this a deliberate action or a step-removed one; is her hand closing on his shoulder, or is she closing her hand on his shoulder? environment environment environment, we need to break all this dialogue up with some narration, the scene is coming untethered. what! are! they doing! with! the rest of their bodies that are not hands! fuck fuck fuck FUCK i forgot we covered this two chapters ago and now i either need to cut this whole chunk or find a reason to reprise the conversation from earlier. name or pronoun? name or pronoun? name or pronoun? move this clause around in this sentence? oh i'll add this phrase-- nope, never mind, past!me added the same phrase two lines down. okay, if i add too much environmental narration it's going to take away from this bit, but not enough and it won't feel grounded. what if i move this to its own line? where the FUCK are their hands?

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butch vampire who likes to show up at your door in the middle of the night, covered in blood and grinning at you, the light glints off their fangs as they ask for your permission to enter, and of course the way your voice shakes with fear and anticipation as you say "yes"

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the breaker box boys.

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dislike and discomfort are normal and healthy parts of the human experience actually

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only real pieces of advice i can offer for those of you new to dragon age:

1. embrace cringe and ocpost. kind of a rare but beautiful thing about this fandom is that we love coming up with little guys & putting them in situations. fandom where we are all playing tuoys 🥰

2. tags essays are basically fine. just like. don’t be a racist in there (please)

3. word of god is not word of god. be prepared for everyone around you to discard the stupid shit dgaider & co have said about these games. it is the only way we can stay sane 👍

4. brainrotting about your blorbo is not only fine but encouraged. yap about them to your heart’s content <3

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there needs to be more celene & leliana content bc they are parallels and also have a buckwild relationship in One Single Book

but also bc in a worldstate w divine leliwarden w an elf, you can imagine meetings w the hof on leliana's lap getting their hair played with while celene and briala Leave Room For Andraste bc celene 5d chess outplayed herself into thinking the decision HAD to be made for the good of orlais to be distant and briala only encouraged her bc she's playing her own game of 5d chess

it's not even an important meeting

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would you like a nice glass of

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Sera in between Inquisition and Veilguard

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the very normal host and crew of a public access tv station

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less "can you handle a mean female character" or more "can you handle a female character that has unpalatable traits to you personally but would shrug off if a male character had them"

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Blake and Iva for @makersbreathchild! Thank you <3<3<3

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i adore the idea that volt is all of eddie's suppressed emotions. causal intimacy/connection, sexuality, charm, homosexuality—