m4ttsturn

[m4ttsturn]

my brother's best friend (part 6)

pt 1 pt 2 pt 3 pt 4 pt 5

pairing: Matt Sturniolo x reader

summary: you find yourself falling for your brother's best friend

warnings: use of y/n, swearing, kissing

(not proofread)

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(Matt's POV)

I've been lying in bed for an hour, staring at the ceiling like it has the answers that I don't. my body is still but my brain won't shut up.

I keep replaying that night on the floor - her lips on mine, the way her hands slid under my shirt like she was made to touch me. and the one earlier today when we made up in the kitchen - the desperation, the way she wouldn't let me pull away. I haven't stopped thinking about it. about her. about how wrong it should be, but how right it felt.

I shouldn't want her like this. not Nate's sister. not the girl that's been off limits since the day I met her. but that hasn't stopped me. it's worse now. now that I know what she tastes like. now that I've felt the way her body fits against mine like she's the missing piece. I cover my face with my hands and groan softly, the guilt twisting in my stomach. if Nate ever found out...

a soft knock at the door pulls me out of it. I sit up quickly, heartbeat picking up. "Matt?" her voice is quiet, careful. shit. of course it's her. "Yeah?" I respond, keeping my voice low. the door creaks open and she peeks her head inside. her hair is pulled up in a messy bun, and she's wearing one of those oversized t-shirts that makes it hard to think straight. she steps in and closes the door gently behind her.

"I just-" she starts, eyes flicking to mine, "couldn't sleep." I nod "yeah, me either." she stands there for a second before walking over and sitting next to me on the bed. not too close, just close enough. "I'm sorry again. for ignoring you. for being a dick after everything." I rub the back of my neck. "it wasn't fair to you."

she's quiet for a moment. then, "I just wished you would've talked to me. Instead of acting like it didn't happen. but we're good now, we've been over it." I look at her, feeling the need to explain again anyway. "I didn't act like it didn't happen, I've thought about it everyday since. because I do want you y/n, and that scares the hell out of me." I murmur, my voice slightly hoarse.

silence stretches between us like a wire pulled too tight. "I don't want to be a secret Matt." she whispers. "I know." "I don't want you to pretend I'm a mistake." "you're not." I reach out and take her hand. She looks down at it, our fingers slowly tangling together.

"we can't let Nate find out." I say. It comes out quite than I meant it to. more like a confession. She lets out a breath. "then we just... don't get caught." I chuckle softly, even though there's nothing funny about this. "you're serious?" she shrugs, but there's a tiny smile on her lips "are you?" I lean forward, just enough to press more forehead against hers. "god help me," I whisper, "but yeah. I am."

she closes the gap between us, her lips brushing mine in a kiss that's soft this time. familiar. the kind of kiss that doesn't ask for anything, but promises everything. we stay like this for a few minutes, tucked into the quiet of the room, the world on pause. it's reckless. stupid. dangerous.

and I'm all in.

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(y/n's POV)

the next morning, I wake up with a smile on my face and a secret in my chest. I don't even care that I barely slept - my mind kept drifting back to Matt's hands, his lips, the way he said I wasn't a mistake. I sneak back into my room before anyone else is up and shut the door quietly behind me. my phone buzzes with a message from Matt.

Matt: "meet me in the kitchen in 5. before Nate wakes up."

my heart skips. I throw on a hoodie and tiptoe out of my room. when I get to the kitchen, Matt's already there. pretending to scroll on his phone. when he sees me he smiles - just barely, but its there. we don't touch. we don't speak. but our eyes say everything. that is, until a voice cuts through the air.

"you two look guilty." my heart drops. I whip around to see Chris standing in the hallway, one eyebrow raised and a smirk on his face. Matt clears his throat. "morning." Chris narrows his eyes at us, then walks over to the fridge like he didn't just deliver a threat disguised as a casual observation.

Matt glances at me, and I look back at him. Shit. This secret might not stay quiet for long.

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a/n: I'm trying to pick up the pace in the story :)

[m4ttsturn]

my brother's best friend (part 5)

pt 1 pt 2 pt 3 pt 4 pt 6

pairing: Matt Sturniolo x reader

summary: you find yourself falling for your brother's best friend

warnings: use of y/n, arguing, swearing, kissing, (anything else?)

(not proofread)

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it's been a week since Matt and I kissed. a week since he touched me like i was something precious. a week since Matt pulled away like I burned him. seven days of being treated like a ghost. Matt hasn’t said more than a sentence to me at a time, if that. he’s barely looked at me. our usual banter dissipated in to the air. nothing.

after the kiss, he just shut down. like it meant nothing to him. like I meant nothing to him.

the ache in my chest hasn’t gone away since. I keep playing everything back, over and over in my head, trying to figure out if I did something wrong.

it’s Friday night and Nate’s gone again. he went out with some of his coworkers, dragging Chris and Nick along with him. the boys have been staying with us while they get their house fixed due to a flood, so that means Matt’s left here with me, again.

I’m curled up on the couch, scrolling on my phone without actually paying attention to anything on the screen. Matt walks into the kitchen like I’m not even here. “are we seriously still doing this?” I call out. he pauses, his back to me. his shoulders rise slightly like he took a breath, but he doesn’t turn around. “I don’t know what you mean” he says flatly, which causes me to scoff.

“yeah? you’ve ignored me for a week, Matt. you barely look at me. but when you do, when you think I’m not paying attention, you’re staring. so don’t pretend you don’t know what I mean.”

finally, he turns around. his expression is unreadable, but his eyes look exhausted. like he hasn’t slept right since that night. “it’s complicated.” he mutters.

“oh my god” I snap, standing up from the couch abruptly. “stop saying that. you kissed me; you touched me like you wanted me. and then you spent the last seven days pretending I don’t exist. that’s not ‘complicated’ Matt, that’s called being a coward.”

he winces, but quickly covers it up. as if it was a whisper of what he’s feeling. I step closer. “if you regret it, say that. if it didn’t mean anything, say that. but don’t sit there and act like you’re the only one with something at stake.” “I don’t regret it.” he says suddenly, his voice low.

I freeze, my heart hammering against my chest. “I think about it every night.” he continues. “about the way you looked at me. about how good it felt to kiss you. and yeah, I’ve been avoiding you. because if I don’t, I’ll do it again.”

I stare at him, my chest heaving “is that supposed to be a bad thing?” his jaw clenches, “it is when you’re Nate’s little sister.” “god Matt.” I laugh bitterly, “you keep using that like it’s a shield. like it cancels out the fact that you want me. like it’s an excuse to pretend I’m not standing right here infront of you waiting for you to make a fuckin’ decision.”

his eyes flicker, pain flashing across his face. i walk right up to him. “if you want to ignore me, fine. but at least have the balls to say it to my face.” i speak through gritted teeth. “I’m not ignoring you because I don’t care” he snaps, stepping into me. “I’m ignoring you because I care too damn much and I don’t know how to stop.”

I blink, and for a second neither of us moves. then he grabs by waist, like he can’t stop himself, and crashes his lips onto mine.

the kiss isn’t slow. it’s messy and desperate; full of frustration, heat, and all the words we haven’t said. I respond immediately, curling my hands into his shirt and yanking him closer, daring him to stop this time.

he presses me back against the counter, lips still moving against mine like he’s been starving. his hands grip my waist tightly, thumbs brushing under the hem of my shirt and leaving a trail of fire in their wake.

when we finally pull apart, we’re both gasping, eyes locked. he rests his forehead against mine. speaking quietly, like it hurts to say, “I’m sorry for ignoring you. I didn’t know what else to do.”

I nod, swallowing hard. “Next time just talk to me you fucking idiot.” “I will” he says, brushing his nose against mine. this time, when he kisses me, it’s softer. and this time, I know he means it.

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a/n: has it been over a year, yes. am i still posting this, also yes. sorry guys i lowkey forgot i was writing this. let me know what you want from the next part :)

[m4ttsturn]

my brother's best friend (part 4)

pt 1 pt 2 pt 3 pt 5 pt 6

pairing: Matt Sturniolo x reader

summary: you find yourself falling for your brother's best friend

warnings: use of y/n, fem arousal, kissing, swearing (let me know if I need any others)

(not proofread)

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as soon as we get home I decide to take a shower, wanting to rid myself of the rest of the sand that's stuck all over my body. I turn the water on, letting it warm up as I undress myself and brush out my hair. I step under the shower head, the almost scorching water relieving my muscles. I pour shampoo into my hand and start massaging it into my hair.

my mind begins to wander, depictions of Matt appearing. my face flushes. i attempt to rid myself if the thoughts, but nothing is working. I think about how Matt's body felt pressed against me when I jumped on him. I imagine what it would feel like to press his lips against my own; what it would feel like to have his hands running down my body. a familiar feeling stems in the pit of my stomach and my heart rate begins to fluctuate.

a knock on the door snaps me out of the trance. Nate's voice filling my ears "hey y/n, we're going to an escape room. you wanna come?" "uh, no thanks" I respond, doing my best to make sure my voice isn't shaky. "okay well call me if you need anything" "I will, have fun"

once I hear Nate's footsteps receding from the door I let out a breath. I finish up the rest of my shower quickly, embarrassed by the whole situation. I get out and dry myself off with a towel before putting on a clean pair of clothes, doing my best to ignore the demanding ache between my legs.

I walk out of the bathroom and into the living room. the sight of Matt on the couch only making the ache more intense. "oh hey, I thought you went with Nate?" I speak, clearly confused. "didn't really feel like it, I'm a little tired from the beach and the one they're going to is going to take forever" I hum in response, taking a seat on opposite end of the couch.

After about 30 minutes of just scrolling on my phone I let out a huff, which draws Matt's attention to me. "what's up?" "nothing, I'm just bored" I reply. "honestly, me too. you want to do anything?" the thoughts from the shower flood my brain which causes my cheeks to heat up. "uhh we could make cookies or something" he seems to think for a moment before nodding and getting up from the couch.

Matt walks into the kitchen and I follow after him. I watch as he pulls out a box of premade cookie dough from the fridge. "oh no no, we're making them from scratch" I tell him "fine, but if they come out bad it's not my fault" he says as he puts the cookie dough back in the fridge. I smile at him before turning to the cupboard and pulling out the ingredients.

I set them out on the counter and heading over to grab the mixing bowls from the cabinet. I sigh as I realize that Nate put them on the top shelf. I step on my tippy toes, but I still can't grab them. suddenly Matt presses his front to my back, reaching above me to grab the bowls. I turn to him and mumble a quick thank you, moving away from him and setting the bowls on the counter before he can see my cheeks heat up.

I preheat the oven to 350 degrees and walk over to Matt, who is now standing in front of the counter waiting for something to do. I put a cup of butter into one of the mixing bowls and place it on the counter in front of Matt, along with the beater. "Okay so I need you to beat this until it turns an off-white color." Matt nods in acknowledgment and begins to beat the butter. While he's beating the butter I sift and measure out flour before placing it into a separate bowl, mixing in some baking soda.

"I'm finished with the butter, now what?" I walk over and check the butter "nice job, looks good" I praise him, which causes a smile to form on his lips. I then pour white and brown sugar into his bowl, "mix this in with the butter until it's fluffy." he immediately turns back to the bowl and begins to incorporate the sugar into the butter. I watch as his muscles flex while he stirs. He turns off the beater once he's done, drawing my attention.

I then crack an egg into his bowl and add some vanilla extract. he begins working on mixing in the new ingredients. now that everything in the bowl is now thoroughly combined I add in the four mixture. He turns to me, once again, as he finishes. I then pour the chocolate chips into the dough and knead them in. I move the bowl over to where I set up a pan with parchment paper, using a cooking scoop to put them onto the tray. Once I'm done I slide the pan into the oven.

"okay now all we have to do is wait 12 minutes" I smile happily, he smiles as well. I begin to clean up the flour before deciding to throw some at Matt, laughing. He gasps and chuckles a little before grabbing a handful himself. I shriek before running away from him, still laughing. He chases after me and we run all across the house, trailing flour everywhere. I stop abruptly to catch my breath, this causes Matt to slam into me. I fall and Matt lands on top of me.

both of us laugh since flour is now all over both of us. Matt seems to notice our closeness first, stopping his laughter. my heart skips a beat as he stares into my eyes. my eyes flicker down to his lips before I speak "Matt-" my sentence is cut of as I feel his lips on mine. the feeling was absolutely intoxicating. one of my hands travel up to his hair as I kiss him back, butterflies bursting in my stomach.

Matt bites down gently on my bottom lip and I can't stop myself from moaning. he presses his tongue into my mouth. I pull him closer to me as he wraps his hand around my waist, our tongues now fighting for dominance. I trail my other hand under his shirt, causing him to let out a moan.

the oven timer dings, bringing us back to reality. Matt pulls away quickly and I whine at the sudden loss of contact. he gets off of me and pulls down his shirt, walking away. I follow after him. I see him walking into the kitchen, he pulls the cookies out of the oven before slamming it closed and putting his hands on his head. "Matt?" he shakes his head at me " we shouldn't have done that" "why? was it that bad?" I look up at him, my eyes full of sorrow. he looks me in my eyes and I can see many different emotions flash across his face. "no no, I didn't mean it like that, fuck, y/n you're Nate's little sister, we can't be doing this."

"he doesn't have to find out, I won't say anything" I say undoubtedly. he shakes his head, "I can't do that to Nate." I nod, unhappy with his response but understanding it. we both start to clean up the flour mess. not saying another word to each other for the rest of the night.

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a/n: sorry this part took so long to get out, I've been studying for exams. anyway do you guys like the the colors with the dialogue or should I switch it back to just white?

[m4ttsturn]

my brother's best friend (part 3)

pt 1 pt 2 pt 4 pt 5 pt 6

pairing: Matt Sturniolo x y/n

summary: you find yourself falling for your brother's best friend

warnings: none

(not proofread)

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I watch as the sun sets over the water, painting the sky with different shades of reds, oranges, and yellows. the air has now grown frigid, goosebumps beginning to set along my skin. I curse at myself for not bringing warmer clothing as I wrap myself in my towel. even with the brittle air the boys are still in the water, pushing each other around and launching their bodies over each wave that comes.

with nothing else to do, considering it's now grown too dark to read my book, I watch them. well, mostly Matt. He shoves Chris into the next wave, laughing as the water crashes over his face. seeming to feel my eyes on him, Matt faces in my direction. he smiles at me and begins to wave, but since he's distracted Chris takes this as his chance to get him back. I can't help but laugh to myself as he gets knocked down.

when he gets up he mutters something quickly to Nick, Nate, and Chris before walking over in my direction. "hey" he greets me, "hi" I smile at him. "you cold?" he questions, "mhm, it's freezing out here". he reaches down and picks up his hoodie, dusting the sand off of it and hands it to me. "thanks" he just smiles and nods in response as I put on the sweatshirt.

"you think they'll be ready to go soon?" I ask Matt. "uh probably, Nick said he was starting to get all wrinkly from the water and wanted to get out soon before he starts to look like a raisin" "of course he did" I giggle. our conversation dwindled away quickly since we were both tired. we sat in comfortable silence as we waited for the others to get out of the water.

I laid back in the sand, staring up at the stars that have now formed in the sky. I sigh contently, picking up a handful of sand and admire how each grain feels as it falls back to the ground. I turn to face Matt, only to find him already looking at me. I find myself appreciative of the darkness that surrounds us which hides my blush.

Matt looks like he wants to say something, but as soon as he opens his mouth Nate pushes him on the shoulder. "you guys ready?" Nate asks. "uhm" Matt pauses and looks at me "yeah we're ready" he answers. Matt stands up, offering me a hand. I take it gratefully, using it to pull myself off the ground. I notice that his touch lingers on my hand as he looks me in the eyes ones again. After a moment he pulls his and away and clears his throat.

everyone grabs their stuff off the ground and begins to walk towards the cars. each of us rinsing off at the showers to help get rid of the sand that has accumulated on our skin. we decide to meet up at mine and Nate's place before we get into the vehicles and start driving.

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a/n: sorry this ones a little short but I wanted to get the next part out

[m4ttsturn]

my brother's best friend (part 2)

Pt 1 Pt 3 Pt 4 Pt 5 Pt 6

pairing: Matt Sturniolo x y/n

summary: you find yourself falling for your brother's best friend

warnings: swearing, mentions of losing virginity

a/n: the first part is just the first day you met Matt, so you really don't have to read it. hope you enjoy (not proofread)

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(now)

"hey," Nate knocks on my door, "we're all going to the beach, you wanna come?" "sure, who all is going?" I ask him "it's Me, Nick, Matt, Chris, and you can invite a couple of your friends if you want" he responds. "ok, just give me like 25 minutes and we can head out" he nods and leaves the room.

I get up and call my friend Quinn, telling her to meet me at the beach. After I get off the phone I put on my bikini and a set of clothes over it. In a bag I pack a towel, sunscreen, my hairbrush, sunglasses, and a claw clip. I slip on a pair of tennis shoes and leave my bedroom.

"Nate I'm ready to go" he gets up from the couch and grabs his keys off the table. "alright, let's go". I hop into the passenger seat of his car, plugging my phone into the aux. we chat lightly, music filling whatever silence there may be as we make our way to the beach.

Once we arrive the triplets are already there, walking up to Nate's car. "dude what took you so long?" Matt questions. "sorry man I had to wait on y/n to get ready", they all turn to me and I just shrug. they all make their way down to the beach, caught up in their own conversation. Nick turns around once he realizes that I'm not following. "Yo y/n, you comin'?" "I'll meet you guys down there, I'm waiting on Quinn" he nods, giving me a small wave goodbye before turning back around and catching up to the others.

it takes about 5 minutes for Quinn to get here, she walks over to me and we start making our way to the beach. once we get there we lay our towels down on the sand next to where the boys set their stuff, and take off our cover clothing. my eyes find Matt, watching as he takes off his shirt, the sun perfectly illuminating his skin. my heart flutters.

"y/n, are you even listening to me" Quinn asks. I turn my head to hers, snapping out of the moment. "uh- what, sorry" "I was saying that its crazy you're 18 and still haven't lost your virginity" my face flushes at her comment "I know, I know, I just haven't been interested in anyone really" "the only reason you're not interested in anybody is because you've had a crush on Matt since like 7th grade" she practically screams. "Quinn!" I push her gently "keep your voice down" I look at her, and then look to Matt, only to find him already staring at me.

"fuck, I think he heard you" I speak, "no way he did, he's literally 20ft away from us" she sighs "look all I'm saying is if your so hung up on him, just ask him to take it. He's been with girls before, so you know he has experience, and he's hot". I whip my head towards her as she's speaking. I think for a moment then I shake my head, "Quinn, you know I can't do that, he's one of Nate's best friends" I say defeated.

our conversation changes, bouncing from topic to topic as the hours pass by. we continue to lay on our towels, the warm sun tanning our skin. the feeling calms me, lulling me to sleep. When I'm woken up, Matt's running towards the water with me in his arms. "Matt what the fuck, put me down" I scream at him. "if you say so" he smiles before dropping me into the water. "this is so uncool" I try to be mad at him but I just end up laughing, he laughs with me.

not long after, something grazes my leg "something just touched me!" I jump onto Matt, attempting to get away from it. "chill out y/n, it's just seaweed" he laughs. once I realize that I'm not in any danger, I take in my sudden closeness to Matt. my legs are around his waist, and my arms are wrapped tightly over his shoulders. I blush at the feeling of our bodies pressed together, I look into Matt's eyes, glancing down at his lips quickly before looking back up.

Matt also seems to notice how close we are and he stops laughing. he looks down at me, licking his lips, before looking over my shoulder. Nate is standing a few feet away from us with his back turned. he sets me down gently before turning away and running his hand down his face.

"sorry, I probably shouldn't have jumped on you like that, I was just scared" I attempt to apologize, wanting to get rid of the tension that's now formed between us. "it's alright, wouldn't want anything happening to Nate's little sister." he gives me a half-smile.

his words hit me like a slap to the face, reminding me that I shouldn't have feelings towards one of Nate's best friends. "uh, I'm gonna go grab some snacks, you want any?" I ask, trying to rid myself of the pit that's begun to form in my stomach. Matt shakes his head. I nod, turning to get out of the water. once I make it to the sand, I glance back at Matt, only to see him watching me. he seems to snap out of it, shaking his head to himself as he walks over to Nate and his brothers.

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a/n: I'm not sure how I feel about this part tbh

[m4ttsturn]

my brother's best friend (pt 1)

pt 2 pt 3 pt 4 pt 5 pt 6

pairing: matt sturniolo x y/n

summary: over the years you find yourself falling more in love with your brother's best friend.

warnings: none yet

this is the first story I've ever written, so sorry if it's bad. anyway, hope you guys enjoy.

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(the first day i saw him)

"mom!" I ran down the stairs. "yeah, what do you need?" "where's Nate? he said he would go to the movies with me over an hour ago." I was beginning to get upset, Nate promised that he would take me to see Spider-Man Homecoming with him. "I'm not sure, he said he would be home by 5" she responded. I let out a heavy sigh before walking out of the kitchen.

I went into the living room and sat on the couch, aimlessly scrolling on my phone. I watched as the minutes on the clock slowly ticked by, my eyes flicking to the front door every few seconds. it had been 3 hours before Nate had finally showed up, laughing as he walked through the door. three boys followed close behind him.

"dude that movie was so good" Nate said as he kicked off his shoes. "yeah, I still can't believe the way Spider-Man saved the Avenger's plane" one of the other boys spoke. I coughed loudly drawing the attention of my brother and his friends in the entryway. making eye contact with Nate, his face flashing with realization. "oh shit, y/n I'm so sor-" Nate tried to speak, but I stood up abruptly off the couch walking to my room and slamming the door.

the second I closed the door I could feel my eyes watering. it was one thing for Nate to blow of our plans because his practice ran late or something, but for him to go without me even though we had planned this out ever since the trailer came out, hurt. especially since he went with three people I've never met instead.

I jumped onto my bed, burying my face into the pillows. I could hear four sets of footsteps approaching my bedroom before someone knocked on the door. I knew it was Nate because he used the secret knock combination we came up with in order to tell if it was each other or our parents knocking. "go away Nate" my voice was muffled by the pillow. Nate had opened the door anyway, "y/n look I'm sorry, I totally forgot that we were planning to go to the movies today" I turned to face him when he spoke "yeah, yeah whatever Nate."

I glanced around him, taking in the appearance of his friends, each looking similar, but I could tell the differences once I looked a little longer. I made eye contact with the boy who was standing behind them all, almost not visible. I blushed and turned my head away so none of them could see it. "you can go, you obviously want to hang out with these people more than me anyway." Nate gave me a sad expression before walking out of my room, closing the door behind him. as I listened to the sounds of footsteps furthering from my door I decided to read a book instead of wallowing around.

the next time I looked at the clock it read 12:37 am. I decided that I might as well call it a night and changed into my pajamas, which consisted of a tank top and a pair of women's boxers. assuming that Nate's friends had gone home by now, I didn't bother to put on something more presentable as I left my room to grab a glass of water.

when I walked into the kitchen I was met with three pairs of eyes on me, with Nate being in the bathroom. "oh, you guys are still here" I uttered as I went to grab a glass. ''yep, seems like it" the one with longer hair spoke. my back was to them as I filled up the cup with water from the fridge. once finished I turned around to face the three boys. "look I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be rude, its just that Nate promised me he would take me to see that movie months ago. anyway I'm y/n." holding out my hand to them. The one with a nose ring takes it first "Nick" he shook my hand. "I'm Chris" the one with long hair spoke, dapping me up. "and you?" I turned to the last boy, realizing it's the one that I locked eyes with earlier. "Matt" he smiled slightly as he took my hand. my face flushed feeling the electricity buzzing through my fingertips.

"okay well nice to meet you guys, but I'm off to bed. tell Nate that I said he better take me to see that movie tomorrow, I don't care if he just watched it." "will do" Chris spoke, Matt and Nick nodded along. I headed back towards my room and closed the door, still thinking about the feeling of Matt's hand on mine. "well this is going to be a problem" I mumbled to myself before shutting off the light and snuggling under my covers.

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Nate had brought the triplets over again, many times over the next few years. each time my crush on Matt grew a little stronger. besides that I had actually gained a friendship with all of them.

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a/n: I'm probably going to move this story on pretty quickly I just wanted to get a little backstory out first.

let me know if there is anything I can do to write better, criticism is appreciated