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Live, grow and die. These all are in Your hand my almigthy God.

See you when I see you dearest uncle ❤💔

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Don't Worry About Fallings

Everyone must have life goals and plans for their future, but sometimes the plans we have prepared carefully are not in line with what we expect and in the end, failure becomes a feared thing. Talk about failures, from this article explain there are some successful men, who have failed but it did not break their enthusiasm to move forward. Ryan Meyer is basketball coach of Led Depaul University who never regret when his team dropped its first game after 29 straight home-court victories and he took the victory into a stepping stone for his team. Karl Wallenda is a great tightrope, who shares his story about failure. Karl says falling does not mean failure in the midst of the conversation. As for the comments of William Smith Burg the chairman of Queen Oats, Fletcher Byrom the presidency of the company and Tom Watson the founder of IBM. Some of thesse successful men have experienced failure, but that failure kept them going forward and conclude that failure or a mistake is just another way of doing things. This shows that, mistakes are not failures but a race so that we continue to do something else for being better than before.

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Dear Grace, I have read your writing and I would like to give a coment. I think maybe you need to put some words that would be the conclusion before you ask people to come and visit your hometown.

Thankyou sissy (:

JAYAPURA

Jayapura is like haven fall down in to the earth. My hometown is the best place that I ever seen in my life. If you come to Jayapura you do not want to come back to your town because there are so many good places to visit. I am living in Jayapura since I was born. Jayapura is the best place to stay because there are a lot of amazing places that you can visit like Lake Sentani, Hamadi Beach, Love Lake, Base-G Beach, Holltekamp Beach, Pasir 2 Beach, Arlen Beach and there is so many beaches. And Jayapura is like Indonesia miny because you can find all people from all over the town from Indonesia live there, So why you have to wait. Lets go visit Jayapura 😊

‘Grace

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SENTANI

Sentani is a town in Papua. Sentani has a big wonderful lake with many islands called Phuyaka phu in Sentani language. Sentani also has a high mountain called Cycloop or Rophonghollo in Sentani language (my mother tounge). The weather in Sentani is not as cold as in Salatiga. It is not only about the nature because there is one thing that could make you feel like in heaven. There is papeda ikan kuah kuning. This one is one of the traditional food in Sentani. Sentani also has a culture which is too strong and unique. Sentani is a good place to be visited. So When you go to Sentani then you will see many people live in Sentani. There are people from Java, from Medan, and many people from other ethnics live there. People who live there are different but they are loving and appreciating the others . So this makes Pancasila look alive there. I would take a conclusion that My hometown is a nice place ever to be visited. So, come and visit my hometown. You will never regret.

Thankyou (:

📷: from google

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Dear Grace, please check the punctuation for your writing. After the words " Writing is the most part of all other courses for me, " you should write " Writing is the most part of all other courses for me."

Thankyou.

Nice try sissy 😊

Writing Challenges & Expectations

Writing is the most favorite part of all other courses for me, I like it because when I transfer my idea or words to the paper is like I have my own satisfication, I started writing in English since I am in Junior High School, but there are a lot of mitake that I have been doing until now like grammar, spelling, how to put comma and, etc. This semester, I am taking Writing For The Media course. In this course, I expect or hope to learn how to write a good essay or paragraph for an online audience so they can understand easily.

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Kak Anggun please check this sentence " In other side, I also have a hope...."

Writing is An Intriquing Way to Learn English

As it is said in the previous sentence, I actually try my best to have a positive way to support myself in writing. In contrast to the fact that in order to write, I have to make my sentences be understood by the readers. The challenges that I have experienced was

how to combine my sentence in a grammarly correct way and what I meant to say could make the reader got what I wanted to say in my writing.

In other side, I also have a hope that nothing is impossible unless I do try my best. So, I hope in writing I can be freely expressive to write in a right way based on my interests. It is hoped that by expressing my way of thinking to write, I am also acquiring English in a good way.

Thank you for your understanding. Let’s write! I said to myself. (:

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Hi, my name is Laura Orpa. I have a challenging experiemce about writing in English. I wrote in English when I was in Junior High School for the first time. I wrote about love and that was for our school magazine . The most Challenging experience is, my grammar. I confused about tense that I would use for writing and I cannot write anything till the deadline. I wrote and my teacher said, she did not understand everything when she read my writing. My teacher guided me and we wrote the new one together for our school magazine. I have my own expectations for this class. I wish, I could write in English well than before and I also could have good score for my grade. Thankyou.