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oooh have you ever done a post about the ridiculous mandatory twist endings in old sci-fi and horror comics? Like when the guy at the end would be like "I saved the Earth from Martians because I am in fact a Vensuvian who has sworn to protect our sister planet!" with no build up whatsoever.

Yeah, that is a good question - why do some scifi twist endings fail?

As a teenager obsessed with Rod Serling and the Twilight Zone, I bought every single one of Rod Serling’s guides to writing. I wanted to know what he knew.

The reason that Rod Serling’s twist endings work is because they “answer the question” that the story raised in the first place. They are connected to the very clear reason to even tell the story at all. Rod’s story structures were all about starting off with a question, the way he did in his script for Planet of the Apes (yes, Rod Serling wrote the script for Planet of the Apes, which makes sense, since it feels like a Twilight Zone episode): “is mankind inherently violent and self-destructive?” The plot of Planet of the Apes argues the point back and forth, and finally, we get an answer to the question: the Planet of the Apes was earth, after we destroyed ourselves. The reason the ending has “oomph” is because it answers the question that the story asked. 

My friend and fellow Rod Serling fan Brian McDonald wrote an article about this where he explains everything beautifully. Check it out. His articles are all worth reading and he’s one of the most intelligent guys I’ve run into if you want to know how to be a better writer.

According to Rod Serling, every story has three parts: proposal, argument, and conclusion. Proposal is where you express the idea the story will go over, like, “are humans violent and self destructive?” Argument is where the characters go back and forth on this, and conclusion is where you answer the question the story raised in a definitive and clear fashion. 

The reason that a lot of twist endings like those of M. Night Shyamalan’s and a lot of the 1950s horror comics fail is that they’re just a thing that happens instead of being connected to the theme of the story. 

One of the most effective and memorable “final panels” in old scifi comics is EC Comics’ “Judgment Day,” where an astronaut from an enlightened earth visits a backward planet divided between orange and blue robots, where one group has more rights than the other. The point of the story is “is prejudice permanent, and will things ever get better?” And in the final panel, the astronaut from earth takes his helmet off and reveals he is a black man, answering the question the story raised. 

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I hate I when I get an idea for a novel. Like oh no here starts the slow sad slip n’ slide to dissapointment again.

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Cozy Fantasy and Why It Doesn't Work

I think I am among many who feel like they should love cozy fantasy and have found it an incredibly lacking genre.

This newly branded "cozy fantasy" genre that has taken readers by storm since 2020 and while it is new that books are now marketed as cozy, the genre itself isn't new. Howl's Moving Castle by Diana Wynne Jones is a great example of the genre before it was labeled and also how to make it work.

Cozy fantasy is defined by many as fantasy with low stakes. Fantasy aesthetic but less sword fights. On paper, it sounds great. But the execution has been less than stellar for readers like me. The lack of physical stakes has also impacted the emotional stakes of these books, creating forgettable characters with boring problems. As a romance reader, I find this frustrating. Romance is known for being a predictable and formulaic genre, the now defunct Romance Writers of America defined romances as needing happy endings, a term romances have continued to follow. Yet these romance texts manage to have low physical stakes (how to date your neighbor, how to confront your toxic friends, etc) while still maintaining high personal stakes that keep readers invested and begging for more. So I was initially confused why cozy fantasy authors struggle to write texts that connect to readers like me.

I think I have found the answer which is the genre is just here for vibes. It is all about aesthetic, not even worldbuilding that fantasy is known for as most cozy fantasy I read have so many problems as soon as you ask one question. It is hard to acknowledge that a genre that is pitched to work for readers like me doesn't work for many of us. Especially because occasionally there is one that works beautifully to my taste.

I often say my favorite cozy fantasies that are more contemporary are short and visual, which I plays into the idea of the genre being an aesthetic. The Bakery Dragon by Devin Elle Kurtz is a good example because it is a simple story that is given the perfect amount of pages and gorgeous visuals without dragging on when the message is very clear and easy to understand. Books like The Phoenix Keeper and Legends and Lattes have absolutely nothing for me, their very clear message hitting the reader over and over so the readers don't miss it and focusing on the aesthetic of worldbuilding rather than the reality of the fantastic elements within the world.

I guess my point is. . . I realize this genre isn't for me since I have realized it is more of an aesthetic than anything. .. .but I want it to be. Should I let it go and put my efforts elsewhere? Or should I keep exploring this new trend and find the hidden gems?

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for your spotify wrapped thingy... 17 :3

Jade Dime Gentlemen’s Club

You and @tc-doherty sent me this number too, so thank you for it lovelies! I have only one snippet idea for this song, a non-canon Sasin scene I really liked but don’t think will make it canon. Or at least not in this early version, but we’ll see, because it’s too much fun.

Small Context: Kil and Anam are looking for a shapeshifter in the enemy clan's territory.

DYNAMIC EXPLORATION | NON-CANON | WC: 468

“What can I get for the gentlemen?” the bartender asked, his voice smooth and silky.

“Something import for me and,” Kil stopped, looking at Anam with visible waiting in his gaze.

“A glass of water with lime, please.”

“And that. Thank you, sport. Oh, and don’t split it, we’re together.” The man — boy, really — locked eyes with Kil once after the comment. Then, he brought out two crystal glasses and the bottles of drinks. While the cleaning water gulped inside the glass, he put a leather dossier on the counter with gilded edges that read “Repertoire for The Refined” in golden letters. The movement was so subtle, it reminded Kil of the card tricks Bald Yun taught him.

The boy glanced up again while cutting up the lime. “We have a well-curated wide range in the Jade Dime. Is there something particular that you crave tonight, sir?”

Kil decided to like the boy’s approach, forward but pinched with enough mystery to tickle one’s primal curiosity. He was leaning back to the counter with his back, halfway keeping his eyes on the singer on the stage. Her flapper glittered in the reflector like firecrackers at New Year’s, and her voice wandered from a sensual feline to a crackling fire you want to put your hand into just to touch it. He didn’t take his eyes off the woman, while he spoke. “Something a man can’t experience anywhere else.” A nod towards the silently listening Anam. “Something he would want to touch.”

The boy pushed their drinks closer to the counter, both glasses chilled instantly. “And for you, sir?”

“I’m just here to watch.”

The bartender followed his gaze, then as if Kil would have told him an inappropriate joke at a formal event, a small smile crept on his lips.

“Right away, sir.”

When he scurried away, Anam shot Kil a look.

“Are you sure this is going to work?” he asked, his quiet voice nearly drowned out by the talking and laughing guests in the room. Girls entertained important-looking men in one corner, while others simply enjoyed the glittering show on the stage. No one paid much attention to the other.

Kil tapped the dossier with his forefinger ring.

“He understood we’re here for more than just the shop window. And the one underneath this glossy surface is where they’ll be. Trust me.”

The song crescendoed to its peak, while Anam sighed into his drink as if to say: As if.

Kil smiled, turning back to the last of the performance, and lighting a cigarette. Soon, it was going to be their turn for a show, and working their way through together wasn’t a question or a choice.

But fun, it still could be.

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HEY YOU

Yeah, you.

If you've ever enjoyed my writing advice, deep dives, literary analysis, or fiction, go to my Patreon right now and give me your opinions.

I am planning my strategy for 2025, and your feedback matters to me!

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i made a whump wheel

want to beat up a character but don't know how you wanna do it? same here, friend. behold, the whump wheel! it currently has 60 different prompts/tropes on it and is ready for use! 🎉 i...love this thing. it is wonderful for writing exercises. (if you wanna know what's on it before using it, take a peak at the screenshot below)

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Weird Questions for Writers (because writers are weird)

1. What font do you write in? Do you actually care or is that just the default setting?

2. If you had to give up your keyboard and write your stories exclusively by hand, could you do it? If you already write everything by hand, a) are you a wizard and b) pen or pencil?

3. What is your writing ritual and why is it cursed?

4. What’s a word that makes you go absolutely feral?

5. Do you have any writing superstitions? What are they and why are they 100% true?

6. What is your darkest fear about writing?

7. What is your deepest joy about writing?

8. If you had to write an entire story without either action or dialogue, which would you choose and how would it go?

9. Do you believe in ghosts? This isn’t about writing I just wanna know

10. Has a piece of writing ever “haunted” you? Has your own writing haunted you? What does that mean to you?

11. Do you believe in the old advice to “kill your darlings?” Are you a ruthless darling assassin? What happens to the darlings you murder? Do you have a darling graveyard? Do you grieve?

12. If a genie offered you three writing wishes, what would they be? Btw if you wish for more wishes the genie turns all your current WIPs into Lorem Ipsum, I don’t make the rules

13. What is a subject matter that is incredibly difficult for you write about? What is easy?

14. Do you lend your books to people? Are people scared to borrow books from you? Do you know exactly where all your “lost” books are and which specific friend from school you haven’t seen in twelve years still possesses them? Will you ever get them back?

15. Do you write in the margins of your books? Dog-ear your pages? Read in the bath? Why or why not? Do you judge people who do these things? Can we still be friends?

16. What’s the weirdest thing you’ve ever used as a bookmark?

17. Talk to me about the minutiae of your current WIP. Tell me about the lore, the history, the detail, the things that won’t make it in the text.

18. Choose a passage from your writing. Tell me about the backstory of this moment. How you came up with it, how it changed from start to end. Spicy addition: Questioner provides the passage.

19. Tell me a story about your writing journey. When did you start? Why did you start? Were there bumps along the way? Where are you now and where are you going?

20. If a witch offered you the choice between eternal happiness with your one true love and the ability to finally finish, perfect, and publish your dearest, darlingest, most precious WIP in exactly the way you've always imagined it — which would you choose? You can’t have both sorry, life’s a bitch

21. Could you ever quit writing? Do you ever wish you could? Why or why not?

22. How organized are you with your writing? Describe to me your organization method, if it exists. What tools do you use? Notebooks? Binders? Apps? The Cloud?

23. Describe the physical environment in which you write. Be as detailed as possible. Tell me what’s around you as you work. Paint me a picture.

24. How much prep work do you put into your stories? What does that look like for you? Do you enjoy this part or do you just want to get on with it?

25. What is a weird, hyper-specific detail you know about one of your characters that is completely irrelevant to the story?

26. How do you get into your character’s head? How do you get out? Do you ever regret going in there in the first place?

27. Who is the most stressful character you’ve ever written? Why?

28. Who is the most delightful character you’ve ever written? Why?

29. Where do you draw your inspiration? What do you do when the inspiration well runs dry?

30. Talk to me about the role dreams play in your writing life. Have you ever used material from your dreams in your writing? Have you ever written in a dream? Did you remember it when you woke up?

31. Write a short love letter to your readers.

32. What is a line from a poem/novel/fanfic etc that you return to from time and time again? How did you find it? What does it mean to you?

33. Do you practice any other art besides writing? Does that art ever tie into your writing, or is it entirely separate?

34. Thoughts on the Oxford comma, Go:

35. What’s your favorite writing rule to smash into smithereens?

36. They say to Write What You Know. Setting aside for a moment the fact that this is terrible advice...what do you Know?

37. If you were to be remembered only by the words you’ve put on the page, what would future historians think of you?

38. What is something about your writing process YOU think is Really Weird? If you are comfortable, please share. If you’re not comfortable, what do you think cats say about us?

39. What keeps you writing when you feel like giving up?

40. Please share a poem with me, I need it.

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ive gotten quite a few questions about this so i sat down and wrote it all out for a discord power point night. here it is. no mystery, only chaos, and if novellas have no fans then i am dead.

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yes

Fuckkkk how long are chapters

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I'm sorry your writing strategy is WHAT?? I'm going to need a thorough explanation of this because I'm FASCINATED

[brian murphy voice] I DIDNT SAY ANYTHING WEIRD!!!

okay i did. but also! if it ain’t broke…

here’s how this crumbles cookie-wise. sometimes (as is currently the case) i feel like i am trying to hold onto a whole novel in my brain at once. this does not feel particularly good because the novel doesn’t belong in my brain it belongs Out There. so i make a very detailed outline and then i start at chapter 1, and i write to 100 words (give or take a few). then i move on to chapter 2 and write to 100 words. then to chapter 3 and so on until i have at least 100 words in each chapter. then once i’ve run through the whole book, i go back to the beginning and make sure each chapter is up to 200. then i’m usually in the Meat of each scene so i’ll get everything up to 500, then 1000, then 1500 and then usually i clock out of chapters around or just under the 2k mark.

this appeases the hyperactive part of my brain by making sure i’m never bored, and helps the project manager in my brain so i can keep track of many moving parts in the novel and also ensures that scenes at the end speak to scenes at the beginning since i’m (sort of) writing the whole book at once.

NOTE: sometimes i get lost in the sauce and write way past 100 or wherever im at, and that’s fine. it just means i probably skip that chapter during my next pass since it’ll be past my goal wc for each chapter of the run.

that is all. try it, if you want. i honestly don’t know how to write books any other way

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So Source is like, a pseudo-magical force basically. It's a type of energy that humanity discovered under the earth's crust when they finally broke through to the mantle layer and were getting really weird readings and eventually they figured out it was something they hadn't really encountered before!

It's a science fantasy story because it plays with a lot of fantasy tropes, but in a scientific/futuristic type setting with a few sci-fi tropes thrown in as well. :D

Basically I found the term Athenaeum back when I was figuring out what to call the buried library (which evolved into the Athenaeum network I mentioned as I did more worldbuilding), and "athenaeum" was a synonym. So it's technically named after Athena in that it's named after Athens I guess xD

And, I did see that graphic on my dash, yeah! I did some spitballing with my brother-in-law, who's writing his own fantasy story, about different modes of travel. He suggested sand speeders like in Star Wars and I was like yknow? That might be perfect actually! I haven't done a lot of thinking on it since then though. Other projects taking up my attention, etc. xP

Happy WBW! 🌍 What piece of your world would you say you've done the most work on, and what piece would you like to work on a little more?

Happy WBW! In the world of my distant-future post-apoc science fantasy story Athenaeum, I've done the most worldbuilding on the events that led up to the cataclysm that nearly destroyed humanity. I've got a whole folder in my story wiki about the discovery of Source power, the eras of how it was used/controlled by people, the different factions that vied for power, and how/why that ultimately led to disaster.

I'd like to work a little bit more on the titular Athenaeum itself, which is a dormant global network of Source-powered nodes that has been hidden for a thousand years underground. I know a lot about it but I want to figure out the best way for my characters to discover/interact with it!

I'd also like to work on the geography a bit more, and figure out better travel methods than just walking because the society in my story has reached a fairly advanced state again after rebuilding everything.

Thank you for the ask! :3

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How do the seasons work in your world? How do your characters celebrate the changing of the seasons?

I haven't given a lot of thought yet to weather in Athenaeum, but the weather in Rocket Boosters is pretty integral to the main plot/themes of the story so we'll go with that!

Rocket Boosters is set in a nearish-future where the climate crisis has gone unchecked, and the freakish weather we're seeing even now has escalated to the point where 'seasonal weather' no longer corresponds to the calendar. We've got 'autumn weather' going into January, we've got really bad rainstorms in what used to be the hot months, we've got scorching heat in what used to be the temperate months.

The people in the area where the story takes place don't celebrate the changing of the seasons so much as Prepare for what's ahead. Repairs are made to food storage facilities, the back-up greenhouses are checked for structural integrity, and there are a lot of amateur meteorologists out there keeping a constant eye on the quickly-changing weather patterns that plague the desert and its surrounding areas. They do celebrate the first harvest of their quickest-growing crops, though, because it means they'll have food to wait out the inevitable storm that's just around the corner :D

Thank you for the ask!

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Happy WBW! 🌍 What piece of your world would you say you've done the most work on, and what piece would you like to work on a little more?

Happy WBW! In the world of my distant-future post-apoc science fantasy story Athenaeum, I've done the most worldbuilding on the events that led up to the cataclysm that nearly destroyed humanity. I've got a whole folder in my story wiki about the discovery of Source power, the eras of how it was used/controlled by people, the different factions that vied for power, and how/why that ultimately led to disaster.

I'd like to work a little bit more on the titular Athenaeum itself, which is a dormant global network of Source-powered nodes that has been hidden for a thousand years underground. I know a lot about it but I want to figure out the best way for my characters to discover/interact with it!

I'd also like to work on the geography a bit more, and figure out better travel methods than just walking because the society in my story has reached a fairly advanced state again after rebuilding everything.

Thank you for the ask! :3

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Work training is super boring! Time for WORLDBUILING WEDNESDAY

reblog this post if you want asks!

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Reading dialogue of the way people actually talk would be tedious. Stylized speech is good and fine for the sake of story actually

writing dialogue is easy until you realize real people don’t actually talk like your characters

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EmberWrite Beta Testing is open!

For the past few months I've been part of the alpha (and then the beta) testing for EmberWrite, and it's been a lot of fun! I've enjoyed putting it through its paces, giving feedback, and seeing a lot of that feedback implemented.

The beta is now open for general sign-ups, and there's a server to hang out in where you can give your feedback, make feature suggestions, and connect with other writers!

Check it out!

ps this isn't sponsored or anything I've just enjoyed being part of this process :)