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hantise (fr., n.): an obsessive character of an idea, a thought, or a memory; a concern that is constant and which one cannot get rid of Patreon || Twitter || Join the email list
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Do you ever write a sentence and then realize “Nah, that’s too self aware for you” and backspace a bunch of times.
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with this first person pov rewrite, lots of things are changing. in a good way i think? significantly, jack and eli's banter is lighter. their scenes are kind of a welcome break from all the horror and angst. idk i think it works because it shows that jack's character/their relationship is a beacon in the dark that elijah needs to fight for
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really love dynamics that are like 'it honestly doesn't matter if you view them as romantic or platonic, the point is that they love each other. the type of love is inconsequential, all that matters is that it's there'. gotta be one of my favorite genders.
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also an excerpt, to give a little peek into what the new draft is like:
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I am flying through this draft rewrite. I started it last week from scratch, and a week later I'm at 11,000 words. i think this is meant to be.
#i have doubts every SECOND of writing this but i'm like nope shut up i gotta get this down lol#sam rambles
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In for the Night - William H. Hays , n/d.
American,b. 1956 -
Color linocut reduction on wove paper, 12 x 9 in.
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i don't know if anyone remembers la hantise? i was going to rework it as an original novel, but the project kind of stalled. until i decided to rewrite it in first person - and oh my god it works so much better. Elijah as a MC is just coming alive. a few of my favorite passages from the rewrite of chapter 1 so far:
like he's such a bitch and i love him actually
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okay but "the symbolism is Real and Trying to Kill You" is my favorite kind of symbolism
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“what if the house was haunted” what if the house WASNT haunted. what if your continual presence there is what corrupts. what if you are what haunts this house
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Writing advice #?: Have your characters wash the dishes while they talk.
This is one of my favorite tricks, picked up from E.M. Forester and filtered through my own domestic-homebody lens. Forester says that you should never ever tell us how a character feels; instead, show us what those emotions are doing to a character’s posture and tone and expression. This makes “I felt sadness” into “my shoulders hunched and I sighed heavily, staring at the ground as my eyes filled with tears.” Those emotions-as-motions are called objective correlatives. Honestly, fic writers have gotten the memo on objective correlatives, but sometimes struggle with how to use them.
Objective correlatives can quickly become a) repetitive or b) melodramatic. On the repetitive end, long scenes of dialogue can quickly turn into “he sighed” and “she nodded” so many times that he starts to feel like a window fan and she like a bobblehead. On the melodramatic end, a debate about where to eat dinner can start to feel like an episode of Jerry Springer because “he shrieked” while “she clenched her fists” and they both “ground their teeth.” If you leave the objective correlatives out entirely, then you have what’s known as “floating” dialogue — we get the words themselves but no idea how they’re being said, and feel completely disconnected from the scene. If you try to get meaning across by telling us the characters’ thoughts instead, this quickly drifts into purple prose.
Instead, have them wash the dishes while they talk.
To be clear: it doesn’t have to be dishes. They could be folding laundry or sweeping the floor or cooking a meal or making a bed or changing a lightbulb. The point is to engage your characters in some meaningless, everyday household task that does not directly relate to the subject of the conversation.
This trick gives you a whole wealth of objective correlatives. If your character is angry, then the way they scrub a bowl will be very different from how they’ll be scrubbing while happy. If your character is taking a moment to think, then they might splash suds around for a few seconds. A character who is not that invested in the conversation will be looking at the sink not paying much attention. A character moderately invested will be looking at the speaker while continuing to scrub a pot. If the character is suddenly very invested in the conversation, you can convey this by having them set the pot down entirely and give their full attention to the speaker.
A demonstration:
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“I’m leaving,” Anastasia said.
“What?” Drizella continued dropping forks into the dishwasher.
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“I’m leaving,” Anastasia said.
Drizella paused midway through slotting a fork into the dishwasher. “What?”
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“I’m leaving,” Anastasia said.
Drizella laughed, not looking up from where she was arranging forks in the dishwasher. “What?”
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“I’m leaving,” Anastasia said.
The forks slipped out of Drizella’s hand and clattered onto the floor of the dishwasher. “What?”
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“I’m leaving,” Anastasia said.
“What?” Drizella shoved several forks into the dishwasher with unnecessary force, not seeming to notice when several bounced back out of the silverware rack.
See how cheaply and easily we can get across Drizella’s five different emotions about Anastasia leaving, all by telling the reader how she’s doing the dishes? And all the while no heads were nodded, no teeth were clenched.
The reason I recommend having it be one of these boring domestic chores instead of, say, scaling a building or picking a lock, is that chores add a sense of realism and are low-stakes enough not to be distracting. If you add a concurrent task that’s high-stakes, then potentially your readers are going to be so focused on the question of whether your characters will pick the lock in time that they don’t catch the dialogue. But no one’s going to be on the edge of their seat wondering whether Drizella’s going to have enough clean forks for tomorrow.
And chores are a cheap-n-easy way to add a lot of realism to your story. So much of the appeal of contemporary superhero stories comes from Spider-Man having to wash his costume in a Queens laundromat or Green Arrow cheating at darts, because those details are fun and interesting and make a story feel “real.” Actually ask the question of what dishes or clothing or furniture your character owns and how often that stuff gets washed. That’s how you avoid reality-breaking continuity errors like stating in Chapter 3 that all of your character’s worldly possessions fit in a single backpack and in Chapter 7 having your character find a pair of pants he forgot he owns. You don’t have to tell the reader what dishes your character owns (please don’t; it’s already bad enough when Tolkien does it) but you should ideally know for yourself.
Anyway: objective correlatives are your friends. They get emotion across, but for low-energy scenes can become repetitive and for high-energy scenes can become melodramatic. The solution is to give your characters something relatively mundane to do while the conversation is going on, and domestic chores are not a bad starting place.
#this is all of hantise when elijah and jack have important conversations#i stumbled upon this advice years ago and kept it close ever since!#writing stuff
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another daily update - jumping to another chapter to edit it. a little horror for your morning coffee.
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another daily update - jumping to another chapter to edit it. a little horror for your morning coffee.
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here we are again, with a little update! i wrote an unexpectedly (for me, anyway) emotional scene between Elijah and his oldest brother, Michael. In the first draft I wrote Michael as a raging asshole and that was the end of it, but now as I'm editing I'm trying to give him more nuance. A little snippet from their conversation:
#ch: elijah durand#ch: michael durand#update#i've written a lot over the past few days so these updates are becoming daily - who knows how long that'll last lol
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I've decided to breathe a little life into this blog and give (semi) daily excerpts of what I'm writing for this story. Hopefully it'll keep me motivated, too! So without further ado, a snippet from a scene I'm currently writing:
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I've decided to breathe a little life into this blog and give (semi) daily excerpts of what I'm writing for this story. Hopefully it'll keep me motivated, too! So without further ado, a snippet from a scene I'm currently writing:
#excerpt#ch: elijah durand#ch: jack novak#i'm going full throttle on writing this story again!! i WILL finish a draft!#writers on tumblr#original writing
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Thank you for answering! I promise you, we haven’t forgotten. I regard la hantise as one of my favorite fics, and I can’t wait to see the finished result!
thank you so much<3 i can't wait to show you the original fic version!! I changed a lot, but hopefully for the better. <3
#anon ask#answered ask#anon you made my day yesterday!#and i think the excitement of someone being interested in the story actually made me have a big brain moment on a plot point#that i was struggling with#so thank you<3
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