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Guns N' Puzzles - Toad's Trampoline Travaganza (Part 5)

<< Damaging Decisions || Assisted Escape (END) >>

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The results are in, and the truth shall be revealed!

You have selected; Assisted Ending!

END IS NEAR! CHOOSE THE WAY TO GO!

Careful now!! These previews are deceitful! Good luck!

Originally; I was going to draw out all 3 ending routes after Toads Trampoline Travaganza, but due to my current life situation I will have to cut things short or risk leaving them completely unfinished. ;w;b

I still have Mr. Puzzles Tutorial to continue along other works I wish to finish before my fixations shift once more.

If possible, I would appreciate reblogs to reach as many people as possible who might've stumbled upon this "Left Turn AU" I accidentally created.

It's been an absolute blast reading your reactions and tags, and I'm super thankful for the new follows as well.

Hope you had fun! Let's see what ending you guys want. <:3c

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END IS NEAR! CHOOSE THE WAY TO GO!

Careful now!! These previews are deceitful! Good luck!

Originally; I was going to draw out all 3 ending routes after Toads Trampoline Travaganza, but due to my current life situation I will have to cut things short or risk leaving them completely unfinished. ;w;b

I still have Mr. Puzzles Tutorial to continue along other works I wish to finish before my fixations shift once more.

If possible, I would appreciate reblogs to reach as many people as possible who might've stumbled upon this "Left Turn AU" I accidentally created.

It's been an absolute blast reading your reactions and tags, and I'm super thankful for the new follows as well.

Hope you had fun! Let's see what ending you guys want. <:3c

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When English is not your first language...

But you squint and go "wait a minute, something ain't right here"...

And thankfully realize to fix it.

I know there's been typos and grammar errors already in these but ffs I actually cracked up when I checked the correct meaning for the fist phrase. 🤣💦

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FAITH IN HUMANITY HAS BEEN RESTORED AS HAVE THE ART!

Thank you so much Kooke & Ukko666 for helping me redo these! 💜

Unfortunately Mr. Puzzles, Mr. WPNZ and Toomp are not going to be fully added into Wplace.

If anyone has time, could you also report these individuals via email to contact@wplace.live for breaking the rules and hate crime, it'd be appreciated.

This was 12+ hours of work just deleted due to shits and giggles I guess. Thank God I did the originals on SAI.

This was a fun experience but I'm done. If anyone wants to add these designs, somewhere more Puzzle loving area, feel free to do so.

Thank you!

antirune #2984126

mhm #3002049

ilkeä ukkonen #1852077

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Unfortunately Mr. Puzzles, Mr. WPNZ and Toomp are not going to be fully added into Wplace.

If anyone has time, could you also report these individuals via email to contact@wplace.live for breaking the rules and hate crime, it'd be appreciated.

This was 12+ hours of work just deleted due to shits and giggles I guess. Thank God I did the originals on SAI.

This was a fun experience but I'm done. If anyone wants to add these designs, somewhere more Puzzle loving area, feel free to do so.

Thank you!

antirune #2984126

mhm #3002049

ilkeä ukkonen #1852077

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When I say I have plans...

I have plans...

Will be slowly adding this to Wplace near my actual location. :3c

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Gotta see if I can finish this off in the morning, gotta head to bed now.

Will be slowly adding this to Wplace near my actual location. :3c

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Will be slowly adding this to Wplace near my actual location. :3c

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Human Gunshow Family Time. (REDRAW)

Human; Mr. Puzzles, Mr. WPNZ, Ophelia, Charles, Cat Leggy & Hamster Toomp belong to @starteas & @crypticscarecrow !

Why a redraw?

Because the original concept was basically a colored doodle I just wanted to get out of my systems. My pride as a creator wouldn't allow that kind of work to be printed as it wasn't in a quality I would personally approve for such purposes.

Baked in my logo so it wouldn't pop out from anywhere, hope ya like!

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Did a collab with Michi for this! :3c

Big fan of whatever his ship dynamic is

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Just a heads up, I'm either going to draw to keep myself distracted or be too distracted to draw.

Edit: My mother's been diagnosed with cancer. I'm not feeling well.

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Human Gunshow Family Time.

Human; Mr. Puzzles, Mr. WPNZ, Ophelia, Charles, Cat Leggy & Hamster Toomp belong to @starteas & @crypticscarecrow !

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Guns N' Puzzles - Damaging Decisions (Part 4)

<< The Morning News || Toad's Trampoline Travaganza >>

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Have some scrapped panels while I try to sweat out the new ones. ¯_(ツ)_/¯

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It's not easy being made out of sugar...

I'd also like to clarify couple things while I'm trying to reshape myself, since I've seen mixed comments in reblogs and tags:

I absolutely LOVED Guns N' Puzzles, but as a someone working for quality assurance, there of course were parts that really irked me. Hence why I whipped up a quick "fix it fic", was it..? Simply to show how the movie could've been elevated just a bit more in my opinion. [...]

And again; Everyone did an amazing job on the movie!

I'm just an old nitpicky lump o' sugar with quick wrist movements.

Personally, I felt like Meggy's (n Crew's) parts were underwhelming and meaningless as all their prep kept turning into a nothing burger... There was no reward for them and it threw me off after the first initial part from their POV. (Meggy trying to cook again was hilarious though, and "charcoal surprise" made me lol.)

I understand they were made to balance out Mr. Puzzles, Mr. WPNZ and Toomp's high energy hijinks, but as you already saw (no you did not, whops! Welp- spoilers for Part 4 I guess), I would've loved to see Meggy actually have a stronger resolve on helping Mr. Puzzles, instead of going wishy-washy. (I GET IT, SHE'S TRAUMATIZED, BUT THAT'S NOT THE ISSUE HERE.)

Nobody helped Mr. Puzzles while Mr. WPNZ beat him. Not even her after thinking he'd changed. SMG4 could've activated the turrets and warned the trio not to move. But nope. Everyone just froze. Didn't feel like the crew was themselves still, even when Mr. Puzzles didn't actively control them, you could feel them still have that invisible thread above their heads. I get that, but man did it feel stuffy and again, a nothing burger... Just shallow NPCs.

Also, if a specific writer happens to come across this; who ever wrote about Mr. Puzzles needing to get out of the prison to meet Meggy; how dumb did you feel Meggy was for asking that, or is there Squid-lore I've missed where the prisoners can exit a high security prison at any point for a meet up? Especially if they didn't agree about it with the guards due to legal sense? She should've gone to meet HIM. (Either behind everyone's back or grab Tari/Mario for emotional support!!)

Get them into prison phone-booth with Puzzles and make Toomp fuck shit up in the background instead which makes her weary of him once he reveals he released Toomp! There's your motivation for Mr. Puzzles to get even more desperate to GTFO from the prison to get back over to her to try and explain everything. Like- come on... He got a death cube sentence. You told he used "his community hours" to help an "old feebly man". Again meaning he wouldn't be able to exit that easily.

Also, the clocks were really bothering me due to the movies lighting making it seem more of an night/evening time rather than a day, only being revealed at the end that they were possible rain clouds that messed with the lighting. Like- he got the sentenced few hours before twelve, Mr. Monitorhead telling he'd be executed that night and to enjoy his final hours, showing the time was little past twelve when puzzles got Meggy's last active call, and then suddenly, it's half an eight in the evening. I get travel takes time, but GDI I would've appreciated more updates on them then during their travels. Just to get the feel on how long their travel time actually was. If you use clocks, make sure there's clear indications what time it is on their surroundings. Or even comment how many hours Puzzles exactly had before he'd face the music.

Also also: HOW DARE YOU, to give us the divorce immediately in the movie!? There should've at least been a honeymoon phase at the end of the movie and a home life attempt in second episode, before it turning to divorce in the third! You would've had more footage in the flashbacks for fucks sake instead of repeating the same ones!! I personally hate it when situationships are rushed like this!! I saw it coming with the flashbacks being shown and I fucking wished Mr. Puzzle would've taken that left turn instead of right!

Well, that's the beauty of it, you get the fans to write the fix for ya. 🤡