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Chapter One: Sollicitus

(Asriel writes his diary)

Chara mutters in her sleep again.

Every night she has nightmares, ever since she fell here.

Trying to learn more, she keeps refusing to tell me anything.

But then one night…

Her mumbling could already be made out.

(Picture Chara's emotions. Their room in the new house. The terror on Chara's face.)

"No! I'll never do that! No! YOU'LL NOT FORCE ME!!!"

I wanted to cry every time I saw her face. Instead of a pleasant and ruddy smile, it looked at me… the frightened face of a child who can't explain anything.

She guffaws and lies to my eyes, saying she doesn't know what I'm even telling her. Nevertheless, it reveals her often flickering gleam in her eyes.

How can you not understand, Chara! I love you, and I want to protect you from everything.

Why won't you let me help you!

(Waking from her nightmare, Chara looks at Asriel, and he looks at her.)

"Chara!"

"Wh-What is it Asriel?"

"Enough! (Sob), it's nice to think every time you look at you… (sob)"

"Come on. (Hugs) Big babies don't cry, do they?"

"Chara, I just… (sob) why are you…"

"Asriel, don't. It's all right."

"You always say that!"

"Asriel!"

"WHAT!?"

"You know I don't want a partner who will think about the consequences of anything."

"You know what happens when someone tries to get in my way."

"I want… no, WE want to do this, and if you're going to be embarrassed about anything…"

- Well, then I will do it myself.

"I promised to help you with everything (sob)"

"That's good. Our cause will help the whole Underground."

"I guess it's time, don't you think?"

"Okay… tell me, what's it going to take?"

(Picture a Delta Rune symbolizing their unification)

Many years later…

(Mt. EBOTT, monsters coming to the surface)

(Note: Frisk, at the time of the first chapter, is 15 years old)

"Reunited"

Mt. Ebott that contained within it the people imprisoned, by the people of the Barrier has been destroyed.

A person named Frisk, having freed the monsters from their prison, who eventually became their ambassador, gave many new hopes and dreams.

And even Him: one who had lost all hope of his "happy ending."

Coming again to the very beginning, to the hall with the golden flowers, He was still there.

(Asriel lay sprawled, looking up at the light above, tears oozing from his eyes as golden petals enveloped his head)

Frisk had been coming back all this time to save HIM too.

Finally, it was a matter of little else.

(Asriel cried quietly to himself until Frisk disturbed him again)

"What made you come here again?"

"Do you really enjoy watching my suffering?"

*You tell Asriel that you have unfinished business and that you will need his help to complete it.

"Heh… what business can there be that doesn't matter to me anymore…"

*You show him your SOUL, which is REALLY in tune.

"Hmm… You want me to take your SOUL, like in the not-so-old and not-so-good times?"

* You show the impossible. Your SOUL is even divided in half. But it did not disappear.

(Asriel is shocked, continues to watch as one piece transforms into an empty vessel)

* You tell Asriel to put his unstable SOUL into a stable shell.

"I can't believe it… how?"

* And the reason is that it would take too much blah-blah-blah to explain.

"But wait! What about your determination?!"

* You perseverancely on telling him to shut up, spit on other people’s consequences, and finally get his - "Second Chance."

"Heh, guess you and I really are friends, huh?"

* You apologize for...

"Just put away your dialog box and let's go!"

(Petals fall off)

* You are happy and relieved that it's all behind you now…

(Before they leave, a faintly discernible silhouette appears behind them over the gradually rotting golden flowers, with a sweater in green and yellow stripes, eyes filled with red anger, and a black liquid flowing from his mouth, - in a wicked grin)

Later…

"The King's House"

Before later, and also before the war…

The Dreemurr family lived here, for many years in their dynasty, even before the war, and before it began, when all the monsters began to be evacuated to the Underground, Asgore and Toriel created a barrier that protected the family mansion.

(Scene in the cozy hall)

Toriel returned to the house, though she still couldn't forgive Asgor. But as she told Frisk:

"I need time…"

Since then, Asgore has had new hopes of reuniting with his ex-wife. But they have increased when…

(Forest)

* You tell Asriel not to worry or hesitate.

"Y'know, I can't Frisk… It's more complicated than just… turn back into a flower?"

* You say it was a very flowery excuse.

"Frisk :'("

* You're determined to keep punting him, if he doesn't follow you now.

"I'm going, don't worry about it."

(Clear excitement and strong nerves, tears oozing from his eyes)

(A royal door)

* You have knocked on the door of a royal house, of royal proportions.

"(Nervous mooing)"

* You put your arm around Asriel.

"It's okay, I just…"

"One moment, I'm almost done with the cleaning."

* A moment later, your mother goat opened the door.

"Um, Frisk, you know you can come in here without knocking, right?"

* You tell Toriel that you've always been a strange child. And you also want to introduce… (Silhouette of a vanished person), well, you're not surprised.

"What is it, my child?"

"Toriel, who's there?"

"Has Frisk honored us with her presence, Dreemurr, or do you have to touch to see?"

* You smiled at them both.

* You tell them both to follow you.

(They follow her)

"Why should we?"

"It's obviously important if you're asking us to follow you, isn't it?"

(Asriel is on the verge of hysteria - hiding behind a large tree)

This is ALL very complicated! In seconds, I was supposed to turn into a flower, and now… But… how will I look them in the eye! After all the things I've done to them, even if they don't remember… but… I...

I... I...

"(Cries)"

* You found Asriel - he only complicates things - you're trying to keep the bravery in him.

"Heh… So many feelings and I'm wasting them on tears."

(Smiles sweetly and snotty)

"Is someone crying here, Frisk?

"I think it's here."

* It's getting to your bones.

(Asriel hides behind Frisk's back)

"Frisk?"

(Both see someone crying behind Frisk's back)

"Hey, who's crying, what's wrong?"

"Is there anything we can do for you?"

* The moment of truth has arrived. Asriel came out from behind you.

* Impossible…

(They can't believe it)

The king and queen fell to the ground. Asriel completely burst into tears as he approached them.

A chorus of tears began, of joy of course. Frisk stood behind them and watched the final reunion of the Dreemurr family. Clinging so tightly to their son, the king and queen were afraid to let him go. Asriel clung to them.

* Tears flowed involuntarily from your eyes.

They turned their attention to Frisk and Toriel asked again:

"Frisk, are you sure you have somewhere to go?"

* You have heard these words before. But this time you answer that you would like to stay with them, but are afraid of being a burden to them.

"We'll (sob) become a family, won't we?"

"We wouldn't mind if you shared the burden of this life with us."

* Will you stay?

Yes or…

* You say you'll stay with them.

* It's your choice now.

"We'll take care of you, you have the King's word!"

(Asgore shed a tear)

"My dear Frisk…"

*You are embraced, you feel warmth.

(They go)

*Father and son went forward, Toriel stopped you, and she has something to say to you.

"My child, you really have done so much for us and I am so sorry that I can't pay you anything as special as this."

* You say it's enough for her to be the best goat mother ever for you.

"Heh… you remind me so much of my first human child, her name was Chara…"

(Unnoticed fear on Frisk's face to Toriel)

"...your resolve is indeed very similar. To be honest, I noticed it immediately when I saw your SOUL."

* Your heart froze. The inner demon is laughing inside of you.

* You feel your strength going away, but you mustn't ruin this day for your new family!

* You try not to feel the cold and ghostly blade running down your neck.

* Through the strength of a smile, you continue to remain resolute.

Happiness has been returned.

People began to accept monsters.

And now deep, deep in every soul, a new flame flares up.

And only one, some doubts are brewing.

[dangebaddel]

Chapter One: Sollicitus

(Asriel writes his diary)

Chara mutters in her sleep again.

Every night she has nightmares, ever since she fell here.

Trying to learn more, she keeps refusing to tell me anything.

But then one night…

Her mumbling could already be made out.

(Picture Chara's emotions. Their room in the new house. The terror on Chara's face.)

"No! I'll never do that! No! YOU'LL NOT FORCE ME!!!"

I wanted to cry every time I saw her face. Instead of a pleasant and ruddy smile, it looked at me… the frightened face of a child who can't explain anything.

She guffaws and lies to my eyes, saying she doesn't know what I'm even telling her. Nevertheless, it reveals her often flickering gleam in her eyes.

How can you not understand, Chara! I love you, and I want to protect you from everything.

Why won't you let me help you!

(Waking from her nightmare, Chara looks at Asriel, and he looks at her.)

"Chara!"

"Wh-What is it Asriel?"

"Enough! (Sob), it's nice to think every time you look at you… (sob)"

"Come on. (Hugs) Big babies don't cry, do they?"

"Chara, I just… (sob) why are you…"

"Asriel, don't. It's all right."

"You always say that!"

"Asriel!"

"WHAT!?"

"You know I don't want a partner who will think about the consequences of anything."

"You know what happens when someone tries to get in my way."

"I want… no, WE want to do this, and if you're going to be embarrassed about anything…"

- Well, then I will do it myself.

"I promised to help you with everything (sob)"

"That's good. Our cause will help the whole Underground."

"I guess it's time, don't you think?"

"Okay… tell me, what's it going to take?"

(Picture a Delta Rune symbolizing their unification)

Many years later…

(Mt. EBOTT, monsters coming to the surface)

(Note: Frisk, at the time of the first chapter, is 15 years old)

"Reunited"

Mt. Ebott that contained within it the people imprisoned, by the people of the Barrier has been destroyed.

A person named Frisk, having freed the monsters from their prison, who eventually became their ambassador, gave many new hopes and dreams.

And even Him: one who had lost all hope of his "happy ending."

Coming again to the very beginning, to the hall with the golden flowers, He was still there.

(Asriel lay sprawled, looking up at the light above, tears oozing from his eyes as golden petals enveloped his head)

Frisk had been coming back all this time to save HIM too.

Finally, it was a matter of little else.

(Asriel cried quietly to himself until Frisk disturbed him again)

"What made you come here again?"

"Do you really enjoy watching my suffering?"

*You tell Asriel that you have unfinished business and that you will need his help to complete it.

"Heh… what business can there be that doesn't matter to me anymore…"

*You show him your SOUL, which is REALLY in tune.

"Hmm… You want me to take your SOUL, like in the not-so-old and not-so-good times?"

* You show the impossible. Your SOUL is even divided in half. But it did not disappear.

(Asriel is shocked, continues to watch as one piece transforms into an empty vessel)

* You tell Asriel to put his unstable SOUL into a stable shell.

"I can't believe it… how?"

* And the reason is that it would take too much blah-blah-blah to explain.

"But wait! What about your determination?!"

* You perseverancely on telling him to shut up, spit on other people’s consequences, and finally get his - "Second Chance."

"Heh, guess you and I really are friends, huh?"

* You apologize for...

"Just put away your dialog box and let's go!"

(Petals fall off)

* You are happy and relieved that it's all behind you now…

(Before they leave, a faintly discernible silhouette appears behind them over the gradually rotting golden flowers, with a sweater in green and yellow stripes, eyes filled with red anger, and a black liquid flowing from his mouth, - in a wicked grin)

Later…

"The King's House"

Before later, and also before the war…

The Dreemurr family lived here, for many years in their dynasty, even before the war, and before it began, when all the monsters began to be evacuated to the Underground, Asgore and Toriel created a barrier that protected the family mansion.

(Scene in the cozy hall)

Toriel returned to the house, though she still couldn't forgive Asgor. But as she told Frisk:

"I need time…"

Since then, Asgore has had new hopes of reuniting with his ex-wife. But they have increased when…

(Forest)

* You tell Asriel not to worry or hesitate.

"Y'know, I can't Frisk… It's more complicated than just… turn back into a flower?"

* You say it was a very flowery excuse.

"Frisk :'("

* You're determined to keep punting him, if he doesn't follow you now.

"I'm going, don't worry about it."

(Clear excitement and strong nerves, tears oozing from his eyes)

(A royal door)

* You have knocked on the door of a royal house, of royal proportions.

"(Nervous mooing)"

* You put your arm around Asriel.

"It's okay, I just…"

"One moment, I'm almost done with the cleaning."

* A moment later, your mother goat opened the door.

"Um, Frisk, you know you can come in here without knocking, right?"

* You tell Toriel that you've always been a strange child. And you also want to introduce… (Silhouette of a vanished person), well, you're not surprised.

"What is it, my child?"

"Toriel, who's there?"

"Has Frisk honored us with her presence, Dreemurr, or do you have to touch to see?"

* You smiled at them both.

* You tell them both to follow you.

(They follow her)

"Why should we?"

"It's obviously important if you're asking us to follow you, isn't it?"

(Asriel is on the verge of hysteria - hiding behind a large tree)

This is ALL very complicated! In seconds, I was supposed to turn into a flower, and now… But… how will I look them in the eye! After all the things I've done to them, even if they don't remember… but… I...

I... I...

"(Cries)"

* You found Asriel - he only complicates things - you're trying to keep the bravery in him.

"Heh… So many feelings and I'm wasting them on tears."

(Smiles sweetly and snotty)

"Is someone crying here, Frisk?

"I think it's here."

* It's getting to your bones.

(Asriel hides behind Frisk's back)

"Frisk?"

(Both see someone crying behind Frisk's back)

"Hey, who's crying, what's wrong?"

"Is there anything we can do for you?"

* The moment of truth has arrived. Asriel came out from behind you.

* Impossible…

(They can't believe it)

The king and queen fell to the ground. Asriel completely burst into tears as he approached them.

A chorus of tears began, of joy of course. Frisk stood behind them and watched the final reunion of the Dreemurr family. Clinging so tightly to their son, the king and queen were afraid to let him go. Asriel clung to them.

* Tears flowed involuntarily from your eyes.

They turned their attention to Frisk and Toriel asked again:

"Frisk, are you sure you have somewhere to go?"

* You have heard these words before. But this time you answer that you would like to stay with them, but are afraid of being a burden to them.

"We'll (sob) become a family, won't we?"

"We wouldn't mind if you shared the burden of this life with us."

* Will you stay?

Yes or…

* You say you'll stay with them.

* It's your choice now.

"We'll take care of you, you have the King's word!"

(Asgore shed a tear)

"My dear Frisk…"

*You are embraced, you feel warmth.

(They go)

*Father and son went forward, Toriel stopped you, and she has something to say to you.

"My child, you really have done so much for us and I am so sorry that I can't pay you anything as special as this."

* You say it's enough for her to be the best goat mother ever for you.

"Heh… you remind me so much of my first human child, her name was Chara…"

(Unnoticed fear on Frisk's face to Toriel)

"...your resolve is indeed very similar. To be honest, I noticed it immediately when I saw your SOUL."

* Your heart froze. The inner demon is laughing inside of you.

* You feel your strength going away, but you mustn't ruin this day for your new family!

* You try not to feel the cold and ghostly blade running down your neck.

* Through the strength of a smile, you continue to remain resolute.

Happiness has been returned.

People began to accept monsters.

And now deep, deep in every soul, a new flame flares up.

And only one, some doubts are brewing.

[dangebaddel]

* by ∆™ㄖㄖ卩丂™∆

[dangebaddel]

* omg, that's look so cool (I▽l)

* the void

* by ∆™ㄖㄖ卩丂™∆ 

[dangebaddel]

Anothertale

DISCLAIMER

The provided content for review is protected by copyright. To use any given information without asking and without attribution - well, probably and so it’s clear.

At the moment, the Alternative Timeline (or AU) is in active development, where all the information posted is not complete however like everyone else and always when someone starts something, right?

In short, other blah-blah-blah related to the disclaimer lmao

Plot

In order to avoid serious spoilers, only what will be said about the plot on which it’ll be directly based.

Tie

It seems that a happy ending has been reached. But, as is usually the case the ghosts of the past continue to remind Frisk of another timeline, where everyone was killed. 

And as a consequences, those who’re destined to die will die.

Is it worth relying on Hope when it already seems that the soul sees nothing but endless darkness?

Chara-cters

As a visual material, some concepts, arts and other things are provided that I think I can publish.

This art material is FORBIDDEN to use without permission and without attribution.

* P.S. Sorry for not showing all the characters, they are not ready yet, heh, heh, sorry (ಥ‿ಥ)

Concept: "How the comic is planned to will look"

Watch this blog * P.S. Please ignore the text there. . .

Additional material

Future plans:

By the end of 2021, achieve at least some results, i.e. release the first chapter.

It is planned to upload the comic on the following sites:

- Amino Undertale {Rus}

- Tumblr

- acomics.ru (no links yet)

* Purpose of the idea: Interpret your own perspective on the continuation of your favorite story in order to free yourself from it.

Thanks for attention! I hope to not disappoint anyone now!

I promise that the comic will come out and whoever is interested, he’ll be able to familiarize himself with it. And that's all for me!

And remember:

"Waiting is rewarding."

[dangebaddel]

* 💙patience and anticipation💜

* by ∆™ㄖㄖ卩丂™∆

[dangebaddel]

* Revive the environment =)

* I want who will see this to congratulate everyone on the past holidays and. . .

* in fact, that's all lol.

* p.s. sorry for broken english (-‿-)

[dangebaddel]

* Всем привет! - Hello there!

* я очередной челек, который будет засорять мультивселенную undertale новой AU. - I am the next man who will litter the multiverse with a new AU undertale.

* Ну цель у меня одна, постараться написать интересную историю, за которую, пока не менее мне было бы не стыдно - да, публикую лишь для себя, выставляя на показ =\, ну да ладно… - Well, I have one goal, to try to write an interesting story, for which, for the time being, at least I would not be ashamed - yes, I publish only for myself, exposing =\, but oh well…

* Не много Stories: ещё в 2018 году - ещё до всех этих пандемий и пр. - сидел я значит как-то за столом и, внезапно захотелось что-то написать по undertale. - Not a lot of Stories: back in 2018 - even before all these pandemics and so on - I was sitting at a table somehow and, suddenly, I wanted to write something on undertale.

* На этом всё =)  - That’s all =)

* Дальше я забросил всё это, считая, что сделал какой-то бред… - Then I abandoned all this, believing that I had done some kind of nonsense…

* Затем, я начал ощущать, что что-то я в жизни упускаю. И когда я увидел очередную вышедшую серию Glitchtale - Господи когда же он закончится - я подумал и пришёл к выводу, что… я должен… - Then, I began to feel that I was missing something in my life. And when I saw the next released episode of Glitchtale - God, when will it end - I thought and came to the conclusion that… I must…

* Все выкладывают своё творчество и мне тоже захотелось сделать это, только… всё что у меня было - это лишь текст, а навыков рисования, - а также делать эти блоги и пр, - у меня напрочь отсутствуют, - шо поделать, ток срисовывать умэю, да копировать. - Everyone is spreading their creativity and I also wanted to do it, only … all I had was just text, and drawing skills - as well as doing these blogs, etc., - I don’t have at all, - what can you do, copy current I know how to copy.

* И вот недавно, гуляя по просторам Amino Undertale я сговорился с одним художником, который согласился мне помочь с осуществлением моей цели. - And just recently, walking through the vastness of Amino Undertale, I conspired with one artist who agreed to help me achieve my goal.

* И данные иллюстрации являются его первыми результатами. - And these illustrations are his first results.

* Я проверял его. Поэтому не удивляйтесь, что выложил тупо его черновики, но не переживайте - кого же опять конечно же заинтересовало, - хотя кого я обманываю 50 на 50 эта вероятность “=) - в дальнейшем он будет рисовать на компьютере… - I tested it. Therefore, do not be surprised that I posted his drafts stupidly, but do not worry - who, again, of course, was interested - although who am I deceiving 50-50 this probability “=) - in the future he will draw on the computer…

* короче, всё как у всех будет =) - in short, everything will be like everyone else =)

* И теперь я, DangeBaddel - ник ничего не несёт, просто рандомные буквы - и  ∆™ㄖㄖ卩丂™∆ - так��в ник у него в Amino RUS undertale - будем стараться насыщать новой активностью данный сайт, который я решил выбрать ради всего этого. - And now I, DangeBaddel - my nickname does not carry anything, just random letters - and ∆ ™ ㄖ ㄖ 卩 丂 ™ ∆ - this is his nickname in the Amino RUS undertale - we will try to saturate this site with new activity, which I decided to choose for all this.

* Буду надеяться, что теперь у нас [у меня] всё получится =) - I will hope that now we [me] will succeed =)

P.S. Для меня пока что всё это только в новинку, поэтому, извиняюсь за огромное кл-во воды и т.д. - For me, so far, all this is just a novelty, therefore, I apologize for the huge amount of water, etc.

PP.S * for English-speaking users: I plan to release a comic strip in two languages: Russian and English, but English requires a translator, and Google, as you understand, is not suitable for this =)

* but, I will try to find a person who knows this language well.

PP.SS Давайте наполнятся РЕШИМОСТЬЮ, чёрт возьми =)

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Let’s be filled with DETERMINATION, damn it =)