citrusbeat

[citrusbeat]

This is very much a failed attempt . I wanted to work on dialouge and work on giving the story depth but it turned out to just be a simple narration. I wanted the superhero to be less player focused and more in game world focused. IT was like the npc was fighting te player but instead I wated him to fight the character the player plays make it more creepy and scary. A shame but im here to imporve it. Ill keep writing and posting stuff no matter how bad it is just so my mind can work properly.

NON PLAYABLE NO MORE

In the digital town of Lan, speciffically a suburb live many average people. One of them is Ricky, an NPC. He works everday just opening doors for people. Each day is the same for him. Wake up. Walk by the flower shop and greet his crush, then go to work and go back home at night. Thats what he does no matter what. He never really put much thought into it. There is a certain somebody tho who passes ocassionally by him. Hes a local superheros favourite to be kicked an abused. Ricky is always a victim from the great Silver Protector. He tapes random stickynotes on his back. Kicks him. Bruisies him. Peen on him even. Ricky cant remember aday when he didnt finish his day because most of the times he dies.

Today starts the same. ricky puts on his favourite jacket and heads to his work always passing by the flower shop. He gazes though the window to see his dear Martha. "Hey! umm...." his throat closes up. Every morning he tries to talk to her but no words come out. Martha looks at him confused and he leaves to reach his destiation. He clocks in at the big plaza in the city center. The building is big and white. Your average souless capitalist urbanism. He stands outside the entrance opening the door. Its Silver Protector. The crowd cheers and so do you. silver protector walks up to Ricky and pulls out a weaponand presses it against his forehead. Ricky is frozen infear. Its what his code does. But this isnt your average weapon. Theres clealry been an update in the game. Its a huge rocket launcher. Silver Protector pulls the trigger and Ricky gets blasted out of the map. Its an unusual place. everything is slow....and cold. The game suddenly resets and Ricky is back in his place. This time Ricky feels different. He has his own thoughs. "What is this. I can hear my own thoughts." Before Ricky has any time to explore this new found sennsation Silver Protector is back to assault Ricky. He pulls out a granade launcher and fires but Ricky dodges it. He has never dodged anything. NPC's dont have reflexes. The Silver Protector as he is the player chases after Ricky as he runs to hide. Hes brutally killed.

Ricky wakes up. "Im in my bed? How the hell is this possible." he can feel his stomach ache. everything hurts. He remebers everything. He tries to ocntinue his day normally but constantly gets killed in brutal ways. He cant take it anymore. The constant repeating in peoples behaviours, strage patterns...its all too much. Ricky snaps and starts collecting all the weapons around the map that Silver Protector has. He decides to fight back the only was he can after he realizes that facing the player is impossible. He starts using the weapons to throw as many props possible around the map so he can freeze and glitch the game into crashing and corruptimg the file. In his insaity Ricky gets pleasure from the sweet release of digital death.

[citrusbeat]

NON PLAYABLE NO MORE

In the digital town of Lan, speciffically a suburb live many average people. One of them is Ricky, an NPC. He works everday just opening doors for people. Each day is the same for him. Wake up. Walk by the flower shop and greet his crush, then go to work and go back home at night. Thats what he does no matter what. He never really put much thought into it. There is a certain somebody tho who passes ocassionally by him. Hes a local superheros favourite to be kicked an abused. Ricky is always a victim from the great Silver Protector. He tapes random stickynotes on his back. Kicks him. Bruisies him. Peen on him even. Ricky cant remember aday when he didnt finish his day because most of the times he dies.

Today starts the same. ricky puts on his favourite jacket and heads to his work always passing by the flower shop. He gazes though the window to see his dear Martha. "Hey! umm...." his throat closes up. Every morning he tries to talk to her but no words come out. Martha looks at him confused and he leaves to reach his destiation. He clocks in at the big plaza in the city center. The building is big and white. Your average souless capitalist urbanism. He stands outside the entrance opening the door. Its Silver Protector. The crowd cheers and so do you. silver protector walks up to Ricky and pulls out a weaponand presses it against his forehead. Ricky is frozen infear. Its what his code does. But this isnt your average weapon. Theres clealry been an update in the game. Its a huge rocket launcher. Silver Protector pulls the trigger and Ricky gets blasted out of the map. Its an unusual place. everything is slow....and cold. The game suddenly resets and Ricky is back in his place. This time Ricky feels different. He has his own thoughs. "What is this. I can hear my own thoughts." Before Ricky has any time to explore this new found sennsation Silver Protector is back to assault Ricky. He pulls out a granade launcher and fires but Ricky dodges it. He has never dodged anything. NPC's dont have reflexes. The Silver Protector as he is the player chases after Ricky as he runs to hide. Hes brutally killed.

Ricky wakes up. "Im in my bed? How the hell is this possible." he can feel his stomach ache. everything hurts. He remebers everything. He tries to ocntinue his day normally but constantly gets killed in brutal ways. He cant take it anymore. The constant repeating in peoples behaviours, strage patterns...its all too much. Ricky snaps and starts collecting all the weapons around the map that Silver Protector has. He decides to fight back the only was he can after he realizes that facing the player is impossible. He starts using the weapons to throw as many props possible around the map so he can freeze and glitch the game into crashing and corruptimg the file. In his insaity Ricky gets pleasure from the sweet release of digital death.