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Thank you so much for chapter 45 and what a chapter too. Seeing a confident Reggie was just perfect, but I am wondering if he still jealous of MacNair even though he seems to realise that His Maddy is with the boy for something than having actual romantic feelings for him?

I hope we get Reggie's perspective of His Maddy in rock clothes.

He's still jealous haha he's a bit bitter about the bracelet too.

There will be no chapter with Reg's perspective on maddy's rock clothes, unfortunately. The story must go on, and other things needs to happen.

But there will be regulus's POV in the next chapter, so you can look forward to that!

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Chapter 45's ✨Snippets✨

Barty senior, on the wisteria reveal

Barty sr : *realized it was from a boy

Barty sr : *red faced and ready to ruin the moment

Mama Crouch : ((cast a silencing hex))

Barty sr : *????

Madeline : How nice of father to restrain himself during this moment.

Alphard after Regulus and Sirius raided his home

Alphard : those little shits

Alphard : *set a magical trap in case they came back

Sirius : *came back and stole another trinket

Sirius : *confused raccoon face when his stolen goods disappear the next day

Madeline & Regulus when walking to the carriage post

Madeline : *why isn't he saying anything?

Regulus : *please say something

Regulus & Madeline : *awkwardly stayed silent till they part

Regulus and Rabastan when Madeline dressed as a rock girl

Rabastan : *glanced at regulus

Rabastan : hey remember first year when -

Regulus : yes.

Rabastan : do you think -

Regulus : yes.

Rabastan : have you always kno -

Regulus : yes.

Regulus while everyone oogled Madeline

Regulus : i think someone previously mass obliviated a crowd with the help of a thunderbird

Regulus : i should buy one.

Regulus when first seeing Madeline in the rock girl outfit

Regulus : salazar - is this one of those dreams again?

Barty when first seeing Madeline in the rock girl outfit

Barty : huh? That girl's legs are not covered at all? And that fishing net on her legs is so useless? Wait until Maddy sees this.

Barty : wait a minute -

Barty : ayo mad what the actual fu -

Regulus when Madeline winked at his general direction

Regulus : *heart almost stopped

Regulus : *watched someone else literally choked and almost died

Regulus : *somehow had more reasons to love her

Regulus when first seeing the rings

Regulus : i'm getting married? I have to write to mother -

Regulus, after realizing it wasn't a couple ring with Madeline

Regulus : ... alright, i'll just have to make her wear it.

Regulus after Madeline told him to not expect any answer from her

Regulus: since she didn't refuse the idea outright...

Regulus, watching Madeline all bothered and confused by him

Regulus : this is fun? I should do this some more.

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It will bloom in time

And its bloom will be eternal.

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I took inspo from these photos for madeline

I know. They don't exactly look like rock fans - but just picture a ledzepelin tshirt with this outfit and hopefully it helps lol. Amanda originally wanted to give Madeline a ripped jeans, but Madeline really isn't fond of the idea. The ripped jeans go to Jeremy Terrence, the one partnered with her in this 'rebellious rock fans' themed outfit

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Thank you for chapter 43, but I found this chapter such a huge turn point for Reggie because even though we always knew he is in love with His Maddy, he admitted he loves her but not only that but because he loves everything about her the good, the bad and with flaws and all. To me that is very mature because children that age are very much into looks.

He believes that MacNair is in love with Maddy, but because he's a wannabe Death Eater I find myself difficult to understand his(MacNair)concept to fall in love, but is Reggie right that his arch nemesis is in love Maddy and if that is the case then I feel sorry for him?

I can't wait for Barty and Maddy to go to the dueling club and wipe the floor of the wannabe Death Eaters.

Well, as you may know, madeline seduced Macnair with some gruesome facts about muggles, like muggle weapons and some morbid muggle science facts... macnair loves the pretty girl who can match his morbidness, not knowing it's a crafted persona...

He really likes the mask madeline use.. but it's just a mask, hence why hermione-maddy thinks he doesn't truly like her.

But regulus's point still stands. While macnair might be in love with a mere mask, it doesn't mean his feelings are any less real. Madeline refused to see macnair's feelings as real, and she really was being cruel to him.

And what does this say about madeline's future thoughts on regulus's feelings? With the recent discovery and madeline's secretiveness, what he have seen all this time might be a mere mask. Would she, someone who always viewed as kind, dismiss his feelings? That's the thought that made regulus so shaken, and why he pondered over madeline's carefully hidden self such as her ambitions and motivations. If the mask is removed, would he still like her?

We all know the answer for that haha

I know that regulus decided that he still liked her so quickly, but you have to understand that regulus is just being regulus. When orion basically said 'get over your feelings' he pettily said 'no' and realized he still liked her. he didn't want to get over his feelings.

Anyway, i'm excited for the duelling club scene too!!

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It's the logo on the fax! Which will be the logo for the company! An Ai-generated picture of an Occamy wrapping itself around the globe, minimalistic style

An occamy is a magical creature, specifically a choranaptyxic beast, meaning it can grow or shrink to fit the available space. They are native to the Far East and India and are described as two-legged, plumed creatures with serpentine bodies and wings, often resembling a cross between a snake and a bird. Occamies are known for being aggressive, especially when defending their eggs

It symbolizes adaptibility, creativity and the ability to shift one's pespective, and protectiveness.

An occamy that grows to the size of the world and protects it. It's the company vision.

I still haven't decided the company name though TT i wanted something magical and whimsical - like all the shop names in the HP universe. Is Crouch's Magical Mechanics whimsical enough? What about Crouch's Cogwork Lab?

Give me your thoughts!

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Thank you so much for chapter 43, but I was a little disappointed that Maddy is not being overly honest with the two people she's closest to(Barty and Reggie)who I feel would be able to understand and help with regards to MacNair. I absolutely love her relationship with them but I feel she's being a bit unfair. Will she eventually open up to them about her plans for MacNair?

Now I loved Evan in the beginning but now I dislike him because mainly his treatment of Barty, using him(Barty)with his homework and hanging out with older students who are bullying others. I really hope for his sake that he realises that people from the dueling club are not his friends and he may lose the person(Barty)who accepted him for who he is. Is that friendship doomed to recover?

Could you please reassure me that Barty won't join the dueling club, because that would break my heart?

I cant tell you ><

Don't give up on evan yet! And don't worry, barty's conflict with them will be over soon.

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Hi, I don't know how to go about this, so sorry if this is wrong, but what awful thing is Maddy using McNair for? I love this story and delving into the slytherin personalities and dynamics! I do hope we get more of Maddy interacting with Remus!

Well, it involves a ritual she was searching in the black's library when she visited grimmauld place. I won't tell you much about it, but this is the surveillance projet, that is the project that would allow her to know the slytherins and the dark lord movement. As it involves a ritual, it just can't be done too soon and so easily.

And remus will appear again! But only after barty's conflict with the duelling club is finished! And that will happen soon.

Thank you for loving the story!

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I love mad adventure so much! How do you manage to create relationships with so much depth and nuance?

I just let their lives consume mine.. Kidding, lol.

In my opinion, creating relationships with depth needs characters with depth, so i just focus on their characters and their internal and external developments.

For example, barty. He has complicated feelings about most people in his life right now. He resented his father for being absent and confining them in the manor during his childhood, but he also wants his attention and love because that was just something that he always wanted as a child. As he grew up, he grew his opinions about his father's treatments for his sister and for his mother. More often than not, that opinions leans towards the negative, so his general attittude towards his father was negative.

Barty loves maddy, adores her to the bones. His entire childhood was filled with her, and she's magically awesome. For the longest time, she was his cool sister who is kind and knows everything. But then hogwarts started, madeline faced reality, and barty finally saw his sister for what she is. Someone drowning in secrets, someone who was striving for something only she knows. She left him in the dark and he resented her for that, because madeline was always, always, everything to him and it sucks to realize that he was not everything to maddy. He grew to realize her flaws - the way she could just focus on one thing and ignore the rest, how she lies and keeps on lying to protect her secrets, how she could be perceptive about others but not when it was related to her, how she lied to herself to make 'good' opinions about others, how she was too hung on her principles and forget that they lived in a society. He came to terms with these flaws, and realized she was still his cool sister. So he worked around it, and if madeline starts to use her manipulations on him to hide her secrets, he manipulates her back to make her open up.

His relationship with evan is also complicated because evan has been his friend for a long time. He felt a bit competitive with him also because for the longest time, he only had evan to compare himself with. And he also worried for evan, because evan has his own situation (such as a troubling and potentially abusive family). But he is also mad at evan, because evan started to hang around older students (older students that didn't even look barty's way) and spending less and less time with him.

His relationship with regulus was also a bit complicated. He's his first friend he made after he went out the confine of his house. But regulus likes madeline so hard, maddy became a large part in the relationship between regulus and barty. And while he likes regulus, he also thinks his family is a bit much. And when he visited the blacks, he realized that regulus is also a bit 'much', he just hides it better. Hanging out with regulus is still fun though, and the older boy is quite dependable and smart so barty has positive attitudes towards him.

Meanwhile, he has negative attitude towards the marauders because they bothered maddy that one time and negative attitude towards gryffindors in general because of his house and because of that one kid who insulted his second hand book. That attitude then affected his relationship with them.

So.. yeah. That's a small part of barty's journey. Characters and relationships, they're affected by the events in their life, and those events are also affected by the characters and their relationship.

Thank you for your kind words! And do enjoy the ✨nuance✨ of their relationships!

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So glad to have you back !!! Your story is being recommended on Reddit btwwww🥳

Woah, i'm honored! ><

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I really love this story I love the bond between daddy and Barty so much, I can't wait for her and reggie to be together 😆

Are they going to be get togheter in hogwarts or after they graduate ?

They will get together before they graduate!! I can't tell you exactly when but something big will happen soon :3

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Regulus's current status :

Betrayed by a friend, betrayed by a girl, betrayed by an owl.

Would like to crawl under a rock and die.

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I was so excited when I got the email notification that you updated this fabulous story, because I was almost afraid that you may have decided to let this go. So thank you for the wonderful update and reading this chapter from Reggie's perspective was even better, because I love getting into what makes him tick and his feelings and thoughts.

I really hope that he won't give up on His Maddy because I actually love his possessiveness of her and it's tasteful than toxic, and I know we don't know and read much about James and Lily thank goodness, but that sort of relationship is unhealthy because of the fact J and L don't have a basis of friendship or even study together for them for them to know if they would work as a long term romantic relationship. Whereas Reggie and Maddy's romantic relationship would work long term because they are friends, study together and he may be obsessive and only has eyes for her but he's letting her do what she wants and doesn't call her by her surname like James calls Lily by hers. But back to Reggie, he won't give up on His Maddy will he?

I know that Rab betrayed Reggie, but will the two boys ever become best friends again? I hope so, and I really hope for Reggie's sake Barty helps him with his Maddy's dilemma lol.

Now this is probably getting ahead of myself, but because Maddy's deep blue eyes are his weakness lol, will one or two of their children have her eyes considering he loves them?

Hi genevieve!

I'll give you a bit of spoiler. Regulus is feeling a bit down at the moment, and because barty said it was maddy's wish to go out with macnair, he feels like there is nothing he can do. Surprisingly, he will cling on Sirius's advice for some time.

Regarding James and Lily, i want them to get together in my story, if only because baby harry is a must! In my fic, Lily and James are attracted to each other physically since the very beginning, and due to madeline's interference, Lily started to befriend james earlier. Snape is therefore less bullied (because lily actually talked to james about her dislike for his bullying), though the marauders and snape are still enemies.

Rab and reg.. those boys need to grow up first and get over themselves before they can reconcile. And in another universe they never did, and regulus died alone :" oh well.

Maddy's children.. i'm undecided but they'll be jaw-droppingly beautiful!

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Maddy's dress on her first slughorn dinner on her fourth year! Bold and sexy? You bet!

(Barty made her use a shawl to cover up, though. He said it was too much skin. Now that he's in his third year, he is now invited to join the dinners!)

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Girl where are you we missed you

Licking my wounds and ready for action!

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Regulus finally meets Bethany and Amanda!!

Regulus, at first : I'm not sure about them..

Regulus, after Amanda made that comment : such nice friends. Madeline should keep them by her side all the time.