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i've been rereading the no.6 novels

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"You're blushing." Prompts

“You’re blushing.” “Yeah, so? Never seen anyone fall for your charm before?”

“Are you okay? You look a little…” “I’m fine!”

A tries to hide their blush from B by turning their head away, but the latter doesn’t let them.

“I can’t help it (when you look at me like that).”

“Are you actually blushing?” “No! Shut up.”

“You, uhh… You… Sorry. I didn’t mean to make you… I mean…”

A smiles fondly when B starts to blush and draws them closer, allowing them to hide in their embrace.

“Awww. Did I fluster you?”

“This never happened, do you understand?! If I find out you mentioned this to anyone, I’ll…”

It appears A made B blush, and in response their own cheeks heat up.

“Stoooop. Stop making me all…” “All… what?”

“Just admit that…” (e.g. you like when I look at you like that.)

A has never blushed when they asked that question/made such a comment before. (Before what?/Has something changed?)

“… You’ll never let me live this down, will you?”

A touches their own heated cheeks (, maybe to confirm that they really are blushing. Not that they didn’t already know.)

“Why am I blushing?!”

A and B try to figure out who can make the other person blush first/the hardest.

“I call bullshit. There’s no way you never blush. No way.”

“Months/Years later, and you still make me blush.”

“I’m not blushing. It’s from the cold.” “Yeah. Sure.”

“Sorry. I just... like seeing that I have an effect on you, I guess.”

“God. You look adorable/etc. (when you’re blushing).”

A is curious/confused/etc. Once, they easily were able to make B blush. Nowadays, it seems almost impossible.

“You’re blushing.” “So are you.”

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CAT by  By 九米 / Zhaobangni (1631123)

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Please fill this out if you are a content creator in the Gratsu or Stingue fandoms, or would like to be!

Reblogs are really appreciated.

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Hummingbird is relaxing after drinking a lot of flower nectar.

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I think it’s time we as a species realize that harry potter was never good. it was just marketable and gave impressionable kids a lot to project onto.

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Yes I re-read my own fics because I wrote them for ME

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6 types of story feedback and what to do with each.

I’ve encountered a lot of feedback over the years.

Feedback that’s good, bad, or cocktail of both — from the 15 workshops I joined in college (including my time in the MFA) to my current experiences as a copywriter.

I’ve also learned how to get the most out of all that feedback. So this week I decided to share six types of story feedback and what do with each.

The Opinion is completely subjective feedback, and its purpose is to gauge what is and isn’t working for readers on a personal level. Isolated opinions offer some insight, but in general, you’ll want to pay attention to the patterns that emerge from multiple readers’ opinions.

Focus on: doubling down on the things your readers tend to like, and consider dialing back the things they don’t like.

Ignore: suggestions for phrasings, story elements, or plot directions that are purely a matter of taste and go counter to your vision.

The Misdiagnosis is feedback where the reader has noticed something wrong in your writing, but they struggle to identify the issue — so they “misdiagnose” the problem. It’s tempting to think this is a False Alarm (#6), but this type of feedback is actually very common and well intentioned, so be on the lookout!

Focus on: reverse engineering the true problem by closely reading the feedback and the passage it applies to. After identifying the real issue, work on a solution.

Ignore: their original diagnosis and any suggestions that are now irrelevant.

The Bad Remedy gets one step further than the Misdiagnosis. Here, the reader correctly identifies the problem, but the solution they provide either doesn’t solve the issue, is overly subjective (see #1), or has a negative ripple effect that the reader didn’t expect.

Focus on: determining a new solution that works for your story and style.

Ignore: any solutions that aren’t right for your story.

The Right Cure is the best kind of feedback, because it not only properly diagnoses a problem in your story, but also provides an effective solution. This feedback is easy to identify when it hits like a lightning-strike revelation — but sometimes the accuracy of the feedback or the tone of its delivery puts us on the defensive. We might try to write it off as an Opinion or False Alarm, but it’s important to accept the Right Cure when it’s offered.

Focus on: following the feedback. You can still tweak or build upon the solution if better ideas come to you; just make sure you’re still solving the problem.

Ignore: any temptation to dismiss the feedback out of pride or a feeling of being wronged due to an uncouth delivery.

The Divination is any feedback that provides the right solution to a problem, even when the reader misdiagnoses (or doesn’t try to diagnose) the problem itself. This often arises when a reader critiques mostly by feel, and while they may struggle to articulate why something is wrong, they feel something is wrong and are able to identify an effective solution. This type of feedback can often look like an Opinion since it lacks justification, but it’s always worth considering.

Focus on: identifying whether their suggestion improves the story, and if it does, implement it.

Ignore: the feedback if you’re confident it’s just an Opinion that doesn’t align with your vision for the story.

The False Alarm is feedback that tries to solve a problem that isn’t there. This type generally comes from a reader who’s distracted, reading too quickly, or trying too hard to find things to criticize (which can occasionally happen in formal critique settings like workshops, where some feel pressure to always contribute). Note, however, that this type of feedback is rare; what you think is a False Alarm is more often than not a Misdiagnosis, a Bad Remedy, or even a poorly delivered Right Cure.

Focus on: identifying whether the feedback actually is a False Alarm or something legitimate.

Ignore: the feedback, but only if you’re absolutely confident it’s a False Alarm. (If you find yourself receiving a lot of False Alarms, reflect on whether you’re dismissing too much feedback, and if you aren’t, consider looping in some new readers.)

Some Parting Rules of Thumb

Now that you have a grasp on these different types of feedback, I want to leave you with some general rules of thumb for revision:

Assume all feedback has the potential to improve your story, even if parts of it are misguided.

Know that everyone is capable of providing helpful feedback, even if they’re less experienced than you are.

Remember your vision as a writer matters, so don’t feel obligated to follow feedback that pushes your story in a direction that contradicts what you set out to create.

Never mistake the need for feedback as a shortcoming; instead, recognize it as an opportunity. Everyone needs feedback, but not everyone is willing to seek it out.

Good luck, and good writing, everybody! I hope this helps you sift through the feedback on your next story.

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You have stories worth telling; I want to help you tell them well. For tips on how to hone your craft and nurture meaningful stories, follow my blog.

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Please return us to a world where Notp and squick are used for a ship you don’t like instead of just making up a load of bullshit about how immoral it is or w/e lol 

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Let's get this party started!

Victory is up for grabs because the nomination period is open!

From August 1st - 31st you can decide who among the fandom as artists and writers alike deserve a shot at glory for all their hard work!

How to nominate:

Submit your nominations to the blog using our nomination formats.

Don't worry! Your submission will be anonymous and only seen by the mods.

You can send in multiple nominations in one submission as long as the nomination format is used for each of them.

For fic nominations please pick carefully, spelling and grammar play a big part!

Anything deemed insensitive/ unacceptable by the mod team will be disqualified.

When nominations are completed, the list of accepted nominations will be posted for viewing before the voting period has begun.

Nomination format for fanfiction:

Category: (name of category chosen)

Nominated by: (YOUR screen name)

Title: (Title of Fanfic)

Rating: (Fanfic's rating)

Author: (The screen name(s) of the author(s)

Website- (Add link/s where the story can be found)

**Note, For 'Best In-character' list the character's name**

Nomination format for Fanart:

Category: (name of category chosen)

Nominated by: (YOUR screen name)

Title: (Title of Fanart)

Artist: (Name of the perosn who drew the piece)

Website: (Add link/s where the story can be found)

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So what are you waiting for? Send in those nominees!

Have anymore questions about nominations? Shoot the blog a message or reach out to one of our mods: @sassybratt9791 @rougescribe @phoneboxfairy @ratretro @phoenix-before-the-flame

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In light of the recent PostPlus nonsense tumblr is trying to pull, here's a reminder that monetization of fanfiction can lead you to legal trouble. On Ao3 it's against the TOS to even mention any money-sending site at all because of the conditonal protection they offer.

Putting your entire fanfiction blog behind a paywall is like pointing a neon sign saying "please sue me". I bring this up specifically because tumblr mentioned fanfiction in the post that they made and that is going to leave a lot of people misinformed.

Remember: Do NOT paywall your fanworks.

And rest assured, my blog will never be pay-to-read, even if this weren't a fanfiction blog. I think the whole thing is ridiculous.

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Shadowlight Week 2021

Event Fan Art by @oryu404​

Welcome to Shadowlight Week 2021, a celebration of the friendship/relationship between Sting Eucliffe and Rogue Cheney of Sabertooth!

We’re very excited to run this event for a third year, and we hope you can join us! Our prompts are for inspiration only, so please feel free to submit others if they work better for you. We’ll be accepting pretty much anything to do with this pairing:

Fanfics (any length and in any language)

Poetry

FanArt (any kind)

Edits (edits,aesthetics,videos,memes)

Headcanons

Playlists

Social Media Posts

Incorrect quotes

Manga Coloring

Event Rules:

All content must be original and previously unpublished. Updates to an existing multi-chapter fic are not eligible but standalone one-shots from an established work/AU are fine.

Pairing or Brotp only

There should be no character bashing of any kind, this event is meant to be fun and positive.

Please tag all triggers and adult content appropriately

We will not accept any work that contains incest or pedophilia.

You may enter as many times as you want!

Late entries will be accepted!

We will track the tag shadowlightweek2021 so make sure it’s in your first five, or mention @shadowlight-week​ in your post. If you have any questions, please reach out to us through Asks. We’ll be happy to answer  them.

Our event page has a complete list of rules and answered questions.

@fairytailevents​ @fyeahstingue​ @faneventshub

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