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Black Blade Aldwin
This was a ballad I wrote for a creative assignment. The entire piece is in tetrameter-trimeter, so each pair of lines is 4 beats followed by 3 beats.
One merry morning midsummer’s day
A fleet doth dock in landing
For King Edward’s great French campaign
Had come to a beginning.
The bright July sky-beacon shown
The port of which they met
The great men of Saint Vaast la Hogue
Who would see no sun set.
Bretons, Germans, Welsh, English,
Did Edward send to fight
Did take the port-town those great men
Who fought until the night.
What anger seethed under his skin?
What upset that great lord?
King Edward wanted Gascony
To stay upon his board.
And so he marched his many mounts
Down South into French ground,
And on he marched towards River Seine
To sack a lovely town.
From town to town they came and went
And burned down every home,
For Edward wanted Gascony
To keep an English throne.
In Caen they burned and drank and stole
And ate their own good fill,
They all indulged save one good man
Who not had the same will.
He stayed and watched from a distance
With disdain in his heart,
This Black Blade soldier, his good soul
Denied that he take part.
That great sword, Aldwin, held his hilt
He looked over the town,
And as the smoke poured into night
Could not he but look down.
“Not ye want to take your fill
Do not ye want indulge?”
Asked one soldier unto the Blade
So did the Blade divulge:
“I take no part, this vile game
Does not entice my soul.
Had I stolen and drunk my fill
My heart be not but coal.”
The soldiers sacked Caen for five days
Yet not did Aldwin once,
He led the capture of the town
Yet not he led the hunts.
The first of August did depart
King Edward’s many blades,
And leading the front of the march
The great Aldwin’s brigade.
Across the Rivers Seine and Somme
The English fought their way,
For they needed to feed themselves
And North they made their way.
Black Blade Aldwin led the charge
That broke the French’s line,
He was no knight nor man-at-arms
Yet still he spilled blood-brine.
Further North outside Wissant
As night blazed into day,
King Edward held a council meet
Which chose to take Calais.
“Hark here my good kin, listen close,
For we have decided.”
The great King spoke, his men agreed,
No opinions divided.
“We’ll siege their gates and block their ports
Deny them any goods,
We’ll cut off all their food and drink
Deprive them of their woods.”
And so as the leaves fell from high
And changed from green to brown,
Great Edward sent his hefty men
To rupture Calais’ ground.
The men-at-arms and cavalry
Went charging at the gate,
Yet Black Blade Aldwin led no charge,
He chose to lie in wait.
Calais’ walls were heavy wrought
With moats and marshy swamps,
The charging forces stood no chance,
Their boots no place to stomp.
So settled then did King Edward
A settled camp he built,
Dubbed Nouville did the English stay
Till’ Calais’ red had spilt.
Yet Edward came and bade of him
That fabled blackened Blade,
He asked for Aldwin’s swordsmanship
Under his small tent’s shade.
“Aldwin I come to ask of you
To lead one final line.
I wish to break Calais’ thick gate,
That great door’s armored pine.”
Aldwin sat and rest his helm
Upon his leathered knee,
He thought about it long and hard
A decision made he.
“Great Edward, sir, I will oblige,
I’ll take your final run,
But do not expect blackened blades
To glisten in the sun.
I honor thee with my own soul,
I offer it to you,
For loyalty to my great land,
I’ll birth my blade anew.”
And so he led his men in front,
He tamed that wild crew,
He manned Edward’s tough men-at-arms
And led them through cold blue.
Through water, mud, and embankments
He marched his plate and steel,
He led the knights and cavalry
To Calais’ wooden seal.
Aldwin came upon the gate
That blocked his return home,
To take down this final defense
He’d sacrifice his bone.
Unleashed upon great Edward’s men
Calais fired its volley,
And out came iron pike-bearers
Who led Aldwin to folly.
Fight hard to breach the walls did he,
Did Aldwin wish to fight,
Yet to the ground his left hand fell,
Sliced by a nasty pike.
The English slayed those pike-bearers,
And fended from the arrows,
Yet before they could make their way,
Calais’ entrance had narrowed.
Much longer did the English wait,
Yet not could they shed blood,
They kept trapped the town of Calais,
Encased in bloodied mud.
‘Twas a rough day for Englishmen
For a defeat they felt,
Still not could they breach those thick walls
Yet further, Aldwin knelt.
No longer could he join the fray,
No longer his sword swung,
That Black Blade soldier, now a knight,
Was sent to see his young.
He returned to his English town,
Far sent from his short home,
Yet the battle still followed him,
And came for his land’s throne.
King Philip wished to save his folk
And act as such did he,
He called upon those noble Scots
To venge that land of thee.
And so the Scots, noble in deed,
Did they choose to comply,
At Neville’s Cross King David came
To light ablaze the sky.
The English had very few men
To protect their homeland,
Yet outnumbered ‘round two to one,
Ralph Neville did command.
He led those men of Edward’s kin,
Struck Scots from far and wide,
And of those men who Ralph had led,
The Blackened Blade did ride.
Although he only had his right,
His left did still do work,
For a plate shield mounted his wrist,
Under a blade doth lurk.
Upon his hilt, that blackened blade,
As wrought as it was born,
He entered for the final time,
A battlefield long torn.
For countrymen and kinsmanship,
Aldwin chose to protect,
The slaying of his families
A concept he’d reject.
For country, honor, and the crown,
Aldwin did dedicate,
For just a man he truly was,
Yet death he’d aggravate.
For long did he with scratch and wound,
Continue on his steed,
Until the final Scotsmen fell
And David’s push would heed.
A sad day for the Englishmen,
Again did the skies gray,
For no longer did Aldwin breathe,
Nor live another day.
The next midsummer did arrive,
One morning they did go,
His family sought to honor him,
And flowers did they grow.
They took them to his burial
And laid them on his grave,
Then came a many men for him
They wished to do the same.
For honor, glory, rectitude,
For kinsmen and for young,
The great Black Blade gave up his life,
Brought silence to his tongue.
For honor, glory, rectitude,
For family with no strife,
Great Black Blade Aldwin gave himself
For his young’s gentle life.
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Wiglaf's First Battle
This assignment involved creating the first battle of Wiglaf, the loyal warrior who succeeds the famous Beowulf in the story of Beowulf.
Rising from his throne, the great King
Wiglaf felt the earth shake below his greaves,
Trembling with the might of Hell itself,
Clawing its way from the fiery depths,
Burning the land with its flaming fumes.
His people came crying, weeping to their Lord
For his hand, his guidance against this beast
That had risen; through his castle’s gate he saw
A giant, the mountains moving, marching onward,
A titan of stone and earth, tearing his forests and
Torturing his people with its torrent streams of
Steam and flame. Beowulf’s chosen one stood
At his gate and swore, spoke to his people and
To the heavens; “This great beast shall know nothing
But the bitter taste of the earth, no smell but the stench
Of Satan’s fiery kingdom. I shall send him back from
Whence he came, back to his horrid pit, struck down
To lay forever in his filth, an endless black slumber.”
The great king then went with his men,
Searching until he happened upon the greatest
Smith he could find; Wiglaf brought with him
The great horns of his long-felled foe, the spears of
Beowulf’s killer, the great and furious dragon,
To forge the strongest sword, the toughest steel,
The edge with which the people’s great savior would end
His gentle land’s powerful peril. The smith
Took that twisted ivory, those charred
And cursed thorns, and beat and bent them,
Brined them in hell-rock until they
Glowed with an angry blaze. He took them,
That skilled servant of salvation, intertwining
Them with the finest metals, pounding and
Polishing until the blade itself gleamed with a Light
Only known to shadowed life, only shone from
The eyes of the beast from which this cursed
Blood-bringer was born. Wiglaf, with his great
And holy touch, gripped the blade by its hilt,
Held that cursed root until it bent to his will,
Fought with his spirit and lost, and came
One and all under his mighty command.
The sword claimed the title Fjällmördare,
And at once its fire burned in the hands
Of the people’s Lord, sang with fury
The strength of a thousand men,
Screamed forth fate to bring down
The terror that marched along its own
Path, a trail of horrid glory. Wiglaf ventured
With his men to the great mountain’s
Violent pounding soles, drew his
Flame-forged fiend and proclaimed;
“I am the great King of this land
Of which you lay waste; the ruler
Of this emerald plain, protector of
This holy empire. Come now, beast
Of havoc and suffering, and feel the
Wrath of those you have left raging,
Weeping in your horrible wake!”
The people’s savior flew swiftly from
His soles of soiled earth; His great
Burning blade was brought down at once
At the mountain’s grinding knees, and
In an instant the air shook with a might
Only felt at the end of God’s last breath.
Rock and root ruptured and crumbled, falling
Back to the same earth that once imbued it
With its horrid life; That towering mountain,
Billowing over the hills of that great King’s
Pride, came crashing down, its legs fractured
And frayed, falling back into its cold and stony
Grave. The beast collided earth and Hell together
And sealed the gates from each tight and firm,
Never to be crossed again by God’s gross burdens;
The mountain again was laid to rest, its
Fuming torment silenced, its skyline
Replenished, another night now protected
From the horrors of Satan's favorite child.
Wiglaf returned home shortly, that last
Far-flung fighter, crowned again with
The victory and songs of his people,
Left to live another day, to see another sky,
To rejoice and dance the glory of his
Strength and honor, the likes of which
He carries ever onwards from the past,
To protect what was once stolen from
A great man, to prosper in his honored name,
To sing his fervent songs until
The sun rises no more.
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Lifeguard
This was an assignment I was given where I had to "modernize" a poem titled Landlady by P.K. Page from the year 1943. I reused a few of the lines from the original poem for the sake of effect, but for the most part the words are my own.
Through blazing air families clump and thin,
cold like rain. Hide blindly
the thirsting silence drowning her thoughts;
towels flutter like hawks over prey.
Because of her their souls unwind;
dives and strokes wordlessly chosen;
sunglasses encrypting wandering eyes. Oh,
her ears, an uneven crash of waves.
Nothing is beyond her theory. They set their chairs
about them as they snack and frolic, each face
a facade of quiet thought. The edge of her seat,
stippled, curious, pounding chest;
heart rate increasing, pulsing on a table,
paces the poolside in their absence,
rummaging purses and pouches, searching
for clues, the soul, hitherto their return.
Curious in their shade, startled as they splash,
daydreams the day they overindulge, lusting
to know the currents of their thoughts;
swimming unto the mouth.
Even so, guesses better of them then their neighbors:
their swimsuits, the many rules of their games,
their favorite snacks, their deepest dives,
secrets, open and locked, theirs and hers.
Knows the extent of their energy, how frequently
they break, their curvature of health,
all that drives them onward, pouring,
but even so, is not content.
Parched like a beggar, crying, pleading,
yearning for the day one may slip;
to spill outward the yolk of their souls--
hoping the worst.
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Cracked Glass
So, before I start introducing some of the projects I've been working on by myself, I wanted to upload some of the assignments I have done in school. This is a social commentary poem I titled Cracked Glass.
Finally, finally! The day had arrived!
The innocent could now join his friends,
the rest of the living world!
He was given a phone, so shiny, so sleek!
So pure and absolved, so far beyond naive.
To the innocent a land of grandeur had unlocked its doors,
yet to the world,
an omen of death had fallen upon the cold earth.
Carelessly he sought out the secrets of the world,
his soul, his eyes, gifting unto him endless euphoria.
Clear without restraint, naive and unsuspecting.
Those who flourish in suffering arose.
One wrong step, one click too far,
the innocent fell deep into the gruesome stench,
horrid, putrid, vile.
Falling, endless,
the rot imbued the innocent’s soul with hatred,
its sleek and shiny screen fractured, resenting.
No longer was the innocent pure,
the fallen rising, shattered fragments blazed,
darkness rose from the corpse of the light.
Never again will the fallen heal,
never will they dance and sing,
their shining, sweet soul,
broken, blinded.
Forever will the rot grow, forever will it fester.
Unto others a soul is blessed, and thus
unto others does a soul crack.
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