#you resolved to boil some water. then offscreen u don't turn on the stove and you just dump out the water and then suddenly its years later
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Imagine a roller coaster slowly climbing the first hill. Then once it finally gets to the top, you have to get out and walk across a playground that has that deep gravel that's annoying to walk in. "Oh well it'll be worth it once I get to ride the rest of the coaster". Then you go down the shortest straightest plastic playground slide imaginable. And also it's kinda damp. A single firework goes off in the distance, but there's some trees blocking the view. Then the ride's over.
#that yuri tag feels like bait#and i hate when the last few chapters all have years-long time skips when everything before was pretty consistently paced#especially when it seems something was definitely just about to happen before and just. nothing. less than nothing even#i like timeskips for conclusion/epilogue or to show change over time but sometimes it's like#you resolved to boil some water. then offscreen u don't turn on the stove and you just dump out the water and then suddenly its years later#and there's no consequence or even angst over not boiling the water and it isn't even mentioned again
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