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#thank u to my friends and allies who helped me track down those sources for the scripts being late. i remembered them but couldn't find any
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ik you were joking but I would be genuinely interested to hear about the flux cowriting credits strife if you feel like going into detail on it
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So I have a big conspiracy theory about season 13 of Doctor Who ("Flux"), namely that there's a lost episode was scripted and even possibly filmed in near entirety, but ended up being cut and cannibalized in post production due to behind the scenes issues, and the fandom has yet to pick up on it.
For anyone who doesn't watch the show: Flux is a miniseries of Doctor Who; a full season was not commissioned because it was produced during Covid. The most important stuff about it for the purposes of this post are:
It's 6 episodes long (¹). The episodes are all directly continuous and could not be shuffled around. (I should clarify here that, no, the showrunner can't simply choose on a whim to make 10 episodes, or only make 4; they had to stick to 6, as that was the amount they were picked up and scheduled for)
The showrunner, Chris Chibnall , wrote every episode apart from episode 4 (Village of the Angels) which he has a co-writing credit on.
(More subjectively but perhaps relevant) The season is largely considered to be kind of a structural mess and (less subjectively) there appears to some abnormal and consistent production issues (²)
So the first thing I need to evidence here is that Chris Chibnall, aforementioned showrunner and writer of the entire season, was late. Like, really late.
Word of mouth gossip had been circulating for a while that there was some sort of on-set problem involving filming having to be paused because he was still finishing scripts: (³)
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This would later be confirmed at a Gallifrey One panel (⁴) with Matt Strevens, the executive producer, who suggests that filming stopped to allow Chris Chibnall to finish scripts; he further implies that large swathes of episode 5/Block 2 weren't written until Episode 4/Block 1 (in which Kevin McNally debuts) was filming:
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So with that context, let's talk about that Episode 4, "Village of the Angels", the only episode not attributed solely to Chris Chibnall. Co written by Maxine Alderton.
The filming pics reveal an interesting bit of trivia for Village: namely, the clapperboards show that the story was actually filmed as episode 5, not 4:
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As the above tweet suggests, this doesn't make much sense. The miniseries is, again, a single continuous plot. It's not like they flipped Village and the current episode 5, Survivors of the Flux; the latter explicitly takes place chronologically after it. And yet, Village having been intended as the penultimate episode 5 is further evidenced by the original trailer for it, in which a character states that the story takes place on the 28th of November. This line is dubbed over in the final episode and subsequent trailers to instead say the 21st:
Why is this line important enough to dub? Because that's meant to line up with the air date of the episode. Episode 4 aired on the 21st and 5 on the 28th. But something happened in post production, and now it's episode 4 on the 21st instead (⁵):
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So if none of these episodes were moved around but it does seem like Village was meant to be episode 5, where and what is the original episode 4?
I have a theory.
Flux has a recurring subplot involving two side characters, a married couple (Bel and Vinder) who have been separated by the titular disaster and are traveling the universe to reunite with each other. This story is told through segments sprinkled throughout the episodes. These have a different writing style (including a diary-esque narration only present in these scenes) and an internally consistent visual style that looks somewhat different to the other parts of the season.
Village of the Angels, for instance, is a moody, dark episode set in a village in the 1960s:
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However, Bel and Vinder's segments in the episode have a somewhat different look:
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On top of this, they never intersect with the episode's A plot (literally or in any clear thematic way), and the majority of these segments piece together into one single scene that seems to have been cut up.
So, what I think is that the bel and vinder scenes across the middle of the season were originally a single full story, an episode 4 that took a breather from the main plot and characters to follow the lives of these two side characters; the differing visual and writing style is due to it originally having been filmed separately and with a somewhat different artistic intent. I believe Chris Chibnall's cowriting credit on Angels exists because these specific scenes are from a script he wrote, but that otherwise the Angel script can be credited solely to Maxine Alderton by normal cowriting standards.
"But wait," you might say, "I thought there were already 6 episodes that are all plot relevant? If no episodes existing right now can be cut, how could this 7th episode exist?"
Remember this tidbit:
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The adventures in question comprise a large amount of the next episode (Episode 5: Survivors of the Flux), nearly 20 minutes of a 50ish minute runtime (and frankly, much of the rest of the episode is somewhat fluffy build up that feels like it's taking advantage of an extended runtime). A version without this added plot would, in my opinion, only warrant one final episode rather than two.
I think the showrunner, still scrambling to finish scripts as the episodes were being filmed, and making a snap decision to include a new major subplot (⁶), wrote a finale script so long and with so many plot threads that the only way to keep all this material of was to split it into two episodes, 5 and 6. And because they only could only make 6, he had to get rid of one of the previous 5 episodes - the already scripted and filmed ones - to make room for this new episode 5. A tough order when it's a plot-heavy miniseries... if not for episode 4 being a standalone divergence from the main plot about the lives of two side characters, one that could, in theory, be cut up and dispersed throughout the season without continuity issues for the main story.
(Some notes and clarifications under the cut)
(1) some sources initially reported the episode count as 8; this wasn't inaccurate - the 2022 new years/easter special were part of the episode order. Flux itself was always meant to be 6 episodes long. (2) A few of the production issues include: - episodes filming without a second draft:
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- the fx team that had been on the show since 2005 abruptly leaving midseason (because they "didn't feel like part of the team anymore") and returning as soon as the creative team changed, including the head of the studio implying they weren't properly credited (mild vfx body horror warning in link):
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- people working on additional projects such as books not receiving clear information on the characters they were assigned to write:
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- and likely a director who was put on hold due to a script being rewritten:
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Among other things I can't directly cite at the moment, including vfx artists having to do whole episodes solo in crunch time and writers not being told their work was massively overhauled until it aired due to major changes being extremely late in production.
While I don't wish to pontificate too much here and many of these things are pretty normal by themselves, I do think it could paint a picture of a production where an episode well into filming may genuinely be cut on a whim and without consideration for the crew, artists, etc. working on the show. (3) This reddit post comes from a leaker who was known to be consistently accurate. (4) Gallifrey One does not allow filming of panels. I know Kevin's livetweets of panels to be accurate. (5) It's very, very unlikely the entire season was moved back a week, as the premier is a Halloween special that was certainly always intended to air on Oct. 31st. (6) I don't wish to insinuate Chris Chibnall is, throughout his career, an inherently poor showrunner, but I do think that maybe his jump from police procedural - a genre that doesn't involve quite as much concept art, vfx work, marketing, convention panels, set building, episodic storytelling, and keeping in touch with expanded universe producers - to flagship science fiction adventure show may have contributed to some of these issues, especially when he was already in the mindset that things could be changed on a whim (perhaps not such a major issue when it's broadchurch and no new sets need be built)
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(source) Basically I don't really think this is "the showrunner's fault" or anything; more that a perfect storm of a showrunner who was habitually late on scripts, used to writing lowkey cop dramas, covid, an entirely serialized season, etc. may have led to these issues
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hey! so in honor of good omens’ 30th anniversary and the drama’s 1st anniversary, here’s something i’ve been working on and off for about a year now...
presenting our side, a good omens story playlist!
i was inspired after coming across so many fantastic songs that work for aziraphale and crowley (many from listening to other peoples’ playlists, actually) and i thought it would be interesting to recount their entire journey through those songs. my goal was to make it feel like you were listening to the story just by listening to the playlist.
you can listen to the playlist on spotify or youtube! track list, lyric links, and story markers are under the cut.
special thanks to @rcmclachlan, @askazicro, and other good omens playlist makers for helping me discover many of these songs. i’m also including their playlists/tags under the cut if you wanna check out even more songs! also thank you to thomas ginnona for some classic rock consultation.
extra special thanks to my fantastic friend @humananalytica for helping me this entire time i’ve been working on this, sending me songs to listen to, helping bounce off ideas and give a second opinion every time i pester her, beta-ing, and for just in general being someone i can share my love of good omens with.
i’ve worked really hard on it so i’d be delighted if y’all can give it a listen! thank you very much!! m(_ _)m
TRACK LIST:
OVERTURE: A Tale of an Angel and a Demon
“Come With Me” - Chxrlotte
“A Rainy Night in Soho” - The Pogues
“I'll See Your Heart and I'll Raise You Mine” - BellX1
ACT I: The History of the World, Before the Armageddon
It Starts With a Garden
“From Eden” - Hozier 
"I'm With You" - Vance Joy
“An Act of Kindness” - Bastille
Hereditary Enemies
“Iris” - Goo Goo Dolls
"Losing Battles" - Josh Ritter
Policy Decisions
"The Garden" - The Crane Wives
“A Thousand Years” - Sting
"The Only Way (Hymn)" - Emerson, Lake, & Palmer
"Antichrist" - The 1975
Invitations
"Valentine" - Hope Tala
"Sit Next to Me" - Foster the People
"Try to Be" - Bonny Doon
The Arrangement
"Running Up That Hill (A Deal With God)" - Kate Bush
"Heads/tails" - Hotspur
"Walk Across the Water" - The Black Keys
Fraternizing
"How Does a Duck Know?" - Crash Test Dummies
"Monster" - Pomplamoose & dodie
“Chasing Twisters” - Delta Rae
Sorry, Consecrated Ground
“Do I Wanna Know?” - Arctic Monkeys
"What Kind of Man" - Florence + The Machine
A Bag of Prophecy Books
"The Thief" - Brooke Fraser
“Who Is In Your Heart Now?” - Studio Killers
“I Can't Behave” - Caravan of Thieves
“Devil's Backbone” - The Civil Wars
A Thermos Full of Holy Water
"Pick U Up" - Foster the People
“Holy Water” - Tommy Newport
“Waiting for the Miracle” - Leonard Cohen
Slowing Down
“How Long” - Matchbox Twenty
Delivering the Antichrist
"So Desperate" - The Mountain Goats
"The Things We Do For Love" - 10cc
“Good Old Fashioned Lover Boy” - Queen
Purely Social
“Drink!” - They Might Be Giants
"Heroes" - David Bowie
The Gardener and the Nanny
"Keep Her Closer" - Swimming Tapes
"Snakes and Lovers" - Spandau Ballet
"Five Years" - David Bowie
Harry the Rabbit
“Just Like Heaven” - The Cure
"1999" - Prince
"Someone's Missing" - MGMT
The Naming
"Apocalypse Please" - Muse
"London Calling" - The Clash
INTERLUDE: Crowley Yells at Some Plants
“Music to Soothe the Savage Snake Plant” - Mort Garson
ACT II: The World Has Started to End
To a Little Village in Oxfordshire
“Absolutely No Decorum” - The Ark
“Ride” - Clans
Tip-Top Shape
“Damn Your Eyes” - Etta James
Four Letter Words
"I Am Not a Robot" - Marina and the Diamonds
"When You Die" - MGMT
Velocipede
"Pedal Your Blues Away" - R. Crumb and the Cheap Suit Serenaders
Foolish Principalitie
"Put Down the Duckie" - Sesame Street
"Baby Blue Eyes" - Peter the Human Boy
"666 Conducer" - Black Rebel Motorcycle Club
The Third Alternative Rendezvous
"Just Between You and Me" - Lou Gramm
“End Love” - OK Go
"Allies or Enemies" - The Crane Wives
“Stomach It” - Crywolf
“December” - Collective Soul
It's Over
"Leaves" - Gregory and the Hawk
“Silence & Sirens” - The Narrative
"Drowning Shadows" - Sam Smith
A Plea (If She's Listening)
“Bad Blood” - Sleeping At Last
The Lords of Hell
"Warrant" - Foster the People
“What If the Storm Ends? (The Lightning Strike, Part I)” - Snow Patrol
Alpha Centauri
“Something Happened on the Way to Heaven” - Phil Collins
“Origin of Love” - Mika
"Eternally Missed" - Muse
“Flowers for a Ghost” - Thriving Ivory
God's Spokesperson
“The Truth” - Foster the People
"All These Things I've Done" - The Killers
How to Navigate
“Gravity” - The fin.
"Dear Wormwood" - The Oh Hellos
“Hold the Line” - Toto
No Longer Keeping Score
“Hurts Like Hell” - Fleurie
"Can't Smile Without You" - Sleeping At Last (cover of Carpenters)
“Never” - Seira Kagami*
Aziraphale's Plan
“The Sunlight Through the Flags (The Lightning Strike, Part II)” - Snow Patrol*
“Sure as Hell Not Jesus” - Cosmo Jarvis
Crowley Drives Through the Flaming M25
"Get Yourself Together" - The Black Keys
“Burnin' For You” - Blue Oyster Cult
"Dreams and Disasters" - Owl City
Things That R.P. Tyler Would Like to Say (But Can't)
“You're On Fire” - They Might Be Giants
Aziraphale and Crowley Watch the Others Stop the Apocalypse
“Dream Sweet in Sea Major” - Miracle Musical
Adam's Satanic Father
"Hells Bells" - AC/DC
“Get It Together” - Mystery Skulls
Beside You
“The One Moment” - OK Go
“Daybreak (The Lightning Strike, Part III)” – Snow Patrol*
Agnes Nutter's Last Prophecy
"Butterflies and Hurricanes" - Muse
If You'd Like
"Breakfast Square" - Hana Vu
"Landscapes" - Gregory and the Hawk
The Swap
“Heaven or Hell” - Digital Daggers
Holy Water and Hellfire
"Crossfire" - Brandon Flowers
“Sinners” - Lauren Aquilina
Temptation Accomplished
“In Our Bedroom After the War” - Stars
"Heaven Is a Place on Earth" - Belinda Carlisle
CONCLUSION: The Very First Day of the Rest of Their Lives
“First Day of My Life” - Bright Eyes (covered by Jesse Daniel Smith)
“Nobody” - Hozier
"Our House" - Crosby, Stills, Nash, & Young
“A Nightingale Sang in Berkeley Square” - Vera Lynn
* indicates a song that’s only included in the YouTube playlist
Sources: rc’s music tag/playlist, askazicro music tag/community playlist, michael sheen’s hardcore gomens playlist, other referenced playlists (x x x). also my local cvs. yes really
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ladyseaheart1668 · 6 years
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Endless Summer Fan Novel (Book 3, Chapter 4)
Malatesta swears fluently under his breath. Jake edges closer to me.
“Ol' Nessie is harder to shake than mono!” he mutters ruefully. Helpless frustration bubbles up in my gut.
“Damn you, Cetus!” I scream. “Why can't you just leave us alone?!”
Dark clouds rush in overhead, following the ocean Guardian. A peal of thunder crackles through the air, and Cetus lets out an ear-splitting roar. As if answering him, the storm erupts in earnest, bright lines of lightning arcing across the angry sky as rain batters us below.
“I don't think he came to mess around this time, yo...” Craig says nervously.
“Back to the reef!” Sean shouts over the rising storm. “He can't get to us in the shallows!”
Yvonne and Malatesta struggle to turn the boats in the choppy water, but a dark shape rises to block our path back to the atoll.
“Oh, god,” Diego whispers. “That's his tail!”
“The grinning devil has us trapped!” Yvonne growls.
“Cetus!” Varyyn roars furiously. “I swear on my mother's grave, I will cut off your head and mount your skull over my throne!”
A wave swells beneath us, sending us scrambling to keep our balance. Michelle's backpack slides across the boat, wedging beneath an oar handle. The light of the Island's Heart streams through the half-zipped flap. Cetus' terrible visage turns, drawn by the brilliant light. For a moment, there is relative calm. Quinn stands on the prow of our boat, facing Cetus boldly.
“Guardian!” she shouts. “I command you to leave this place!”
Cetus turns his attention on her, but only seems to be angered by her words. He howls furiously. Sean and Michelle rush forward to protect her.
“Stop him!” Varyyn suddenly cries. “He has the Heart!”
“What?!” I whip around to see Malatesta raising the shining half-sphere toward Cetus.
“Ye want this, do ye, monster?!” he roars. “Then take it!” Before anyone can react, he lobs the Heart at Cetus. Horror floods through me as I watch it arc through the air and disappear into the serpent's cavernous maw. Cetus closes his jaws. Then, as soon as he appeared, he is gone again, disappeared beneath the raging waves.
“Did he just...eat the Heart?” Diego asks incredulously.
“Yup,” Jake confirms numbly. “That just happened.”
“Malatesta, you bastard!” I hear myself screaming as I come out of my stupor. “Do you have any idea what you just did, you selfish, double-crossing...”
“Plague-eating gut worm!” Yvonne finishes for me from the other rowboat.
“I did what none of you wallflowers were willing to do to keep us alive!” he snarls. Deafening thunderclaps explode overhead. Forked tongues of lightning strike the waves with ear-splitting pops, and a piteous cry rises from somewhere below.
“He's leaving!” Estela shouts. “But the storm's only getting worse!”
She's right. The waves are getting higher and stronger, and our rowboats are bucking and rearing, rising and falling like roller coaster cars.
“Hang on! Everyone just hang on!” I grab the oars, trying to control the boat. I row furiously against the tide, and the boat steadies slightly as we climb and descend the waves.
“Yeah! What a ride!” Craig crows. I turn frantically to look at the other rowboat, and a flash briefly illuminates a cluster of rocks directly ahead of Yvonne's boat.
“Yvonne, left! Break left!”
Yvonne pitches her weight left, turning the boat. They narrowly miss the rocks. I turn help them, but my eye catches the sight of the sea turning and falling away.
“Guys!” Craig cries. “It's a tidal wave!”
Caught in the current, the boat is drawn higher and higher by a towering wall of water. The dark sea churns beneath us, looking at least a mile off. As the wave crests, I find myself airborne, and hear screaming all around me. Some of it is probably my own. Then the dark water breaks painfully underneath me, rushing in to close over my head. Sinking figures surround me as darkness fills my vision, and even the rush of water singing against my ears starts to fade into silence...
… Light suddenly stings my eyes. My chest feels tight. There is a salty-tasting mouth pressed against mine, surrounded by scratchy stubble. Air rushes into my chest.
“Come on, Princess,” Jake pleads desperately. “Come back to me.” His mouth presses to mine again, and another rush of air sends a wave of seawater crashing up my throat. I feel my whole body seizing violently as the water in my lungs explodes out of me in a fit of coughing.
“Oh, thank goodness!” I hear Quinn breathe. I try to focus my vision. Jake is beside me, Quinn and Diego are kneeling at my other shoulder. Jake helps me sit up. He pulls me into his arms, trembling and kissing my hair.
“You're okay...you're okay, Princess...”  
“I'm fine...” After taking a moment to catch my breath, I pull back to look at his face and gingerly lay a hand on his injured ribs. “Are you okay?”
He flinches at my touch, gasping sharply, but he forces a smile. “No worse off than before, I think.”
Diego smiles weakly at me. “How many near-drownings is this now, Allie?”
“Too many,” I admit. “Honestly, it's getting embarrassing.”
I glance around me. Besides Quinn and Diego, I see Sean, Michelle, Raj, Craig, Estela, and Varyyn are all gathered nearby, all soaking wet, but apparently unharmed. Jake kisses my forehead.
“There's no sign of the pirate duo,” he murmurs. “Maybe they washed up somewhere else.”
Abruptly, Quinn frowns, tipping her head to the side. “Hey...does anyone else hear that?” We all go quiet, listening. A faint melody is drifting through the trees, strains of an acoustic guitar.
“What the hell?” I murmur.
“Sounds like we ain't alone,” Jake remarks with a frown. He helps me to my feet. We all make our way into the rainforest, following the dulcet tones until we reach a ruined stone structure almost completely overgrown with clinging vines. At the center of what must have once been an impressive courtyard, an amphitheater descends toward a small stage.
“I think these are Mayan ruins,” Diego says. “I learned about them in Pre-Colonial Art History.”
“Yeah,” I murmur. I can't help pausing for a moment to admire them, to imagine them whole and filled with people living their daily lives. How many generations have walked this ground before me, unaware of what will come in the future, unconcerned about what came before them? Consumed with their own lives, their own problems, each making a thousand tiny decisions that shape the world into what it is now...
The mysterious guitar strains break into my thoughts again. I look toward the source of the music, which turns out to be a handsome young man sitting against a wall at one side of the stage. He's ruddy-skinned, with dark hair that brushes his shoulders, wearing a brown military-looking uniform and dogtags, like the kind Jake wears. Sensing our presence, he pauses.
“Hello? Someone else here?” We're still mostly concealed by the trees and the decaying building, but after scanning his surroundings, he seems to notice us. He starts to put his guitar away.
“...He's kinda cute,” Diego murmurs, with an unmistakeable grin curving his lips. “Don't you think so, Allie?”
“Down, boy!” I quip.
“He's more than cute,” Michelle replies. “He's downright dreamy.”
“No argument here,” Quinn agrees.
Jake raises an eyebrow. “You kiddin' me? That's a paratrooper kit he's wearing.”
“He's probably got some firearms on him,” Estela says flatly. “We'd better watch ourselves.”
“Definitely,” Sean agrees, he glares at Michelle and the others.
The man in the paratrooper kit walks over to a small pot perched atop a campfire and stirs its contents.
“Plenty of room here if you'd like to share my camp,” he calls.
“...Should we?” I ask uncertainly. “Call me paranoid, but I'm inclined to be suspicious of humans here who aren't...you know, us.”
“I'm with Alodia,” Craig agrees. “This guy is waaaaaaay suspicious.”
“Yeah. But we should find out what he's up to,” Sean murmurs.
Quinn rolls her eyes. “Oh, come on! Did you guys even hear that music?”
“Yes,” Varyyn says mildly. “It was very beautiful.” I can't tell if he's agreeing with Quinn or with us.
Sean shakes his head and steps warily toward the young man. The rest of us follow.
“Hey!” Sean calls.
The young man smiles warmly. “Hey, Mac. Pleased to meet you. I'm Kele.”
“You with Arachnid?” Sean demands.
“Arach-what?”
“Don't try to play dumb, bro!” Craig growls. “Lundgren give you all this gear?”
“Hey, look, don't snap your cap, pal. I don't know anything about any Arachnid or Lundgren. I'm on my own out here. Have been since the Shenandoah got brought down by U-boats.”
“You sayin' submarine torpedoes sunk your ship?” Jake asks, frowning.
“Germans really know what they're doing with those things,” Kele says ruefully. “We got hit in the zero dark hundred and we were taken totally unaware.”
“We're stranded on La Huerta, too,” Quinn admits.
“Now that's a sure shame.” Kele smiles disarmingly at her. “Pretty girl like you must have a lot of friends back home.”
Quinn blushes. “Oh, well, heh...Actually, all of my friends are here...”
Jake leans over to murmur in my ear, “Princess, his uniform is downright antique!”
“Kele,” I say, “don't take this the wrong way, but what year do you think it is?”
He shrugs. “Last I saw a calendar, 1941. But there's not much use in keeping track of time here.”
“So you are a World War II soldier!” Diego exclaims. “You were fighting Nazis before it was even cool!”
“Yeah, something like that.”
I feel Jake relax beside me. “Well, you got my respect.” He steps up to Kele and holds out a hand. “Jake McKenzie, former Navy pilot.”
Kele shakes the offered hand. “Oh, a flyboy. Pleasure.” He returns to the pot and starts stirring.
“How long have you been here?” Estela asks.
“Long enough to stop worrying about it,” he replies. “Can I interest you all in some chili or do you wanna keep beating your gums all day?”
Raj chuckles. “Dude's unflappable. I like him.”
“I saw him first,” Michelle retorts.
“No fair!” Quinn laughs.
“I guess he's all right,” Sean finally relents. “So, you really don't know anything about the Arachnid paramilitary outfit? Or Rourke?”
“Oh, you mean the machine men? Yeah, they've been around. I saw a bunch of them come out of the ruins. Looked like they were searching for somebody.” He frowns, looking up at us. “...Is it you they're trying to find?”
We all exchange glances. Finally, I take a deep breath. “Well, the short answer is...yes.”
“Huh.” He shrugs. “Well, you can hide here for as long as you like. There's a vista over a waterfall a few minutes away that's good for scouting.”
“Probably a good idea to send a couple people up there to keep lookout,” Jake remarks.
“Not you,” I say firmly, before he can volunteer himself. “You're still injured.”
“Alodia's right,” Michelle agrees. “We won't even know the real extent of the damage for a day or two. You need to rest as much as possible.”
“I'll go,” Sean volunteers.
“Not alone you're not,” I say. “I'll go with you.”
Kele arches an eyebrow at me. “Think I've figured out who your CO is.”
Jake chuckles. “That's Alodia. She may be tiny, but don't tangle with her. She's a firecracker.”
“Duly noted. I'll show you how to get there.” Kele puts down the ladle and wipes his hands.
“Need any help in the kitchen in the meantime?” Raj asks.
“Sure. More cooks means more food. There are some mangoes you could slice up in that rucksack.”
“Comin' right up!”
Kele directs me and Sean on the proper route up to the vista. We take the hill in silence for a few minutes, concentrating on keeping our footing on the steep, uneven terrain.
“It was good of you to volunteer,” I remark after a time. “I know you really haven't had much time to unwind since we found you. But if you hadn't, I know Jake would have, and in his current condition...”
“It's fine. Honestly, I kinda think I needed this.”
“Yeah?”
He sighs, flexing his fingers anxiously. “I dunno. So much has happened in the last few weeks, but there's so little that I was able to do about it. Don't get me wrong, it's nice to get a break, but...I just need to feel useful right now.”
“I feel like I ought to be telling you to chill out,” I reply ruefully. “But the truth is, I totally get it. It's just generally tough to enjoy yourself when you feel like you're not doing enough for those around you. And in a situation like ours...honestly, I feel like I'm forgetting how to relax.”
“I think it's like using any muscle. If you don't practice with it, it gets weak.”
“Well, for my money, staring at a waterfall together has to be a pretty good place to start.”
“Only one way to find out.”
I can hear the water rushing before it comes into view. When it does, my breath catches in my throat. I have found myself on the edge of the placid pond that spreads from the bottom of the waterfall. The water that flows over the cliffs above me is clear, crystal blue, and the whole scene is framed with mottled green and brown foliage. Beside me, I look out to see verdant greenery rolling below us.
“...There's worse places to be lookouts, that's for sure,” I murmur. I take a seat on a large boulder beside the waterfall and pat the spot next to me. “Sit down. Take a load off.”
Sean comes to sit beside me, casting his gaze over the valley. The gentle smile on his face starts to fall. He points somewhere in the distance.
“That's where Craig and I were held,” he says softly. “When we were captured.”
“So close?” I taste alarm at the back of my throat, but Sean quickly shakes his head.
“They moved camp awhile ago, so we're fine. ...It's just weird to see it again.”
It takes a moment for my heartbeat to return to normal, for my breath to descend from my chest into my abdomen. “...That must have been really hard...”
“It was,” he agrees. He is quiet for a long time, searching for the words. Finally, he shakes his head again. “It's hard to explain.”
“...What were they going to do with you?”
“I'm not sure. They clearly weren't there for us to begin with, which explains why we stayed in one place for so long. They would ask us questions sometimes. If we knew where the Heart was. Or what the Vaanti were planning. ...About halfway through, we overheard Aleister talking to someone about how we were the only survivors.”
I swallow hard. “...Shit...God, Sean...”
“...That was really hard, hearing that. After all that time, it seemed likely. And then after awhile, they wouldn't let me or Craig speak unless spoken to...”
“...Did they hurt you?”
“Some of them got a little rough, but nothing too bad. ...Aleister made sure they didn't treat us like garbage, so that was something.” He sighs. “I bet everyone thinks I was insane to ask him to come with us.”
“It's not insane, Sean. You saw something in him worth saving.” It's my turn to sigh. “The others...just aren't in a place to even ask that right now. They're still too raw.”
“That's fair,” he admits. “Regardless, I'm glad you had my back on the ship. It felt good to not be alone on this. ...It just hurts, Alodia. To see what he was doing. How he was doing it. I mean, I won't say Aleister was my favorite person to begin with...”
“You're not the first to feel that way,” I admit wryly.
“But while we were captured, I realized how similar our lives were. We both had to pretend to adore our fathers when they were horrible behind closed doors. We both felt this pressure to carry on a legacy, terrified of failure. Sometimes I would see him at the campsite, and all I could see was myself. Maybe I'm just scared that if I give up on Aleister...”
“...That you're giving up on yourself?” I finish for him. He nods, leaning a little closer to me, perhaps unconsciously. “...It's taken a lot of courage and strength for you to get where you are. But in the end, this is Aleister's journey to figure out. It won't matter how strong you are if he just won't move.”
“You're right. I know you're right. It just...sucks, you know? Seeing someone make the same mistakes you did?”
“I know. But you gave him more chances to do the right thing than anyone. It's not your fault he didn't take any of them.”
He regards me thoughtfully, a smile lifting one corner of his mouth. “What's it like, always knowing the right thing to say? It seems pretty great from here.”
I chuckle. “Oh, you know. I try not to let it go to my head.”
A sudden sharp breeze whips over the waterfall, sending a tepid spray over us. Sean puts himself between me and the waterfall, shielding me from the soaking blast. As the spray dies down, he smiles at me.
“Hi there.”
I grin back up at him. “Heh. Thanks.” Impulsively, I give him a light shove, enough to throw him off balance, and he topples over into the shallow pool. He lands with a splash, sputtering. Soaking wet, he emerges in the knee deep shallows.
“Oh, now you've done it.” With a wicked grin, he lunges at me, grabbing me just under my hips and throwing me over his shoulder like a sack of potatoes. I yelp as I find myself upside down, staring at his backside.
“Sean? Sean, w-what are you doing?!”
“If I'm getting a bath, so are you!” I shriek indignantly as he turns and marches straight for the waterfall, pounding at his back with my fists.
“You put me down, Sean Gayle! Put me down this instant!”
“No way!” Taking in a deep breath, he rushes in to stand directly under the frothy falls. “It's shower time!”
I yelp with helpless laughter as the lukewarm water crashes over me. “You are a dead man! The moment you put me down, you are so dead!”
“Well, then I guess I can't ever put you down, can I? I guess you live on my shoulders now.” With a few shifts of his weight, he shifts me from sack-of-potatoes position to drape me over both shoulders like a baby lamb. “God, you're tiny, aren't you?”
“I'm not tiny, you're just a big ol' hulk!” Still under the waterfall, he starts to spin in place, making me shriek again. And then I hear another shriek answering mine from somewhere in the hills, a shrill, inhuman cry fused with a cackle. The sound sends ice trickling down my spine. Sean stops cold, quickly setting me back on my feet.
“...What was that?”
“Nothing good,” I answer grimly.
“Hey, you two!” Quinn's voice drifts up the cliffside. “Food's ready! Come and get it!”
Sean looks down at me. “...It...might have just been the wind. We can't let this place make us jump at shadows, right?”
I smile in spite of myself. “Heh. Look at you relaxing.”
“What can I say. You're a great teacher.”
We head back down the trail toward the ruins, where everyone is gathered around a roaring campfire. Craig is clumsily picking at Kele's guitar. Michelle sighs wearily.
“Okay, Craig, whatever you're trying to play, just stop.”
“Isn't it obvious? It's that song about going over rainbows.”
“It's not obvious,” Estela deadpans. “Not at all.”
“At least you're better than Jake,” Diego says with a grin.
“Hey, my rendition of Wonderwall was beautiful!” Jake snaps back.
“I'm sorry to have missed that,” I quip, coming to sit beside him. He regards my freshly soaked clothes with a smirk.
“What happened to you, Princess? You fall in?”
“Something like that. I had help.” I shoot a mock-glare at Sean.
“Hey, she started it,” he retorts. Jake chuckles.
“Somehow, that does not surprise me,” he drawls, softening his words with a kiss on my cheek. I still stick out my tongue at him.
Kele and Raj are leaning over a bubbling pot on the fire, grinning from ear to ear.
“Smells like you've been busy,” Kele remarks.
“I'd love your feedback, dude.” Kele ladles out a bit, blows on it, and takes a sip. His eyes go wide.
“This is...amazing! How did you get so much flavor in there?”
“Coconut milk! And love. Always cook with love.”
Kele gets out a few shelled-out coconut halves from his rucksack. Sean takes the ladle and starts to fill the makeshift bowls, passing them out.
“Sit down, Raj,” he says. “You've earned it.”
When we've all been served, we raise our spoons in a toast and dig in. I sigh rapturously as the flavor collapses across my tongue, savory and hearty with just the right amount of spice.
“Oh my god,” Jake mumbles appreciatively around a mouthful.
“Best chili I have ever tasted,” Estela agrees. Craig has already wolfed down his bowl and gone back for seconds. I am not far behind him.
“Buddy's still got his skills!” Craig declares enthusiastically.
“Thanks to Grandma,” Raj says with a smile. He passes a grateful look to me as I ladle out another helping. “...and Alodia.”
Any reply I might have made is cut off when a sound floats up from out of another part of the ruins, something between rustling, chattering, and shrieking that makes every hair on my body stand to attention. Ice trickles down my spine.
“...Please tell me I'm not the only one who heard that...”
“I heard it,” Sean confirms lowly. “What was that?”
“Oh, that?” Kele shrugs nonchalantly. “That's just the ghost.”
The collective look we give him suggests he has just removed his own head and set it beside him to spoon-feed.
“Just a ghost?” Michelle repeats.
“How auspicious!” Varyyn says brightly. “Has it been here long?”
“Not sure. I've not tended to stay in one place.”
“So, is this a Casper the Friendly Ghost Situation or--” Diego is cut off as the noise surges in strength. We all drop our bowls, clapping our hands over our ears until it dies down a little. “Nope. That's definitely a Dementor.”
A loud crash comes from the trees on the other side of the clearing. My heart wedges in my throat.
“Everyone hide!” I hiss. We all scramble ot flatten ourselves to the ground and huddle against a ruined wall. I dare to peek my head out, and spot a flash of Arachnid armor. Jake grabs my hand, his breath catching, but the soldiers are too busy retreating to even notice the campsite.
“Squad Beta Commander to Control,” one of them calls frantically into his comm unit, “we need backup here! Repeat, requesting backup!”
“Wait!” the other soldier cries. “Don't leave me behind here!”
They vanish into the trees again. As their voices fade, we cautiously emerge from our hiding spots.
“That is not a friendly ghost,” Raj declares.
“Actually,” Estela murmurs, “I...think it might be...”
“Katniss, you did see the soldiers running like babies, right?” Estela pulls the photo of her family out of her pocket.
“Remember the thing that approached me on the beach? What if that spirit is this spirit?”
“I hear you,” Raj agrees. “That ghost thing pulled me out of a real tight spot.”
Sean rubs his father's watch on his wrist. “Helped me, too. Whatever this spirit is, it's definitely a friend.”
“Friend or not, if the soldiers are here, it probably means Rourke's interested in it,” Quinn points out.
“You think it has to do with the Heart?” Sean wonders.
“If Rourke wants it, it's likely,” I agree.
Diego groans a little. “Guys, this isn't fair. I left my proton pack at home.”
“How do we keep a friggin' ghost out of Rourke's hands?” Jake asks.
“Forget that, how do we get it to talk to us?”
“Maybe we should offer it tribute?” I suggest.
“We could light candles and make sugar skulls,” Diego says. “Like my abuelita on Dia de los Muertos.”
“And where would we get either candles or sugar?” Michelle asks irritably.
“We could kill a small animal,” Raj offers. Sean makes a face.
“As delightful as that sounds, Arachnid could be back any moment. We don't have time for that.”
“Why not just walk in and see what we can find?” Kele suggests with a sigh.
“Stay out of this, Jason Mraz,” Jake snaps. “We don't need your help.”
“Jake, be reasonable!” Quinn chides.
“Walking in does seem like less work than killing a squirrel,” Raj concedes.
“How do we know this won't end like a horror movie?” Diego asks nervously.
“I think there's only one way to find out,” I answer grimly.
“I'm coming,” Michelle declares. “But only so I can say 'I told you so' when we get murdered.”
We all turn toward the dark doorway at the end of the courtyard. As we approach, the noise fills our ears again. I grit my teeth, trying to block it out.
“It's not too late to turn around yet, is it?” Diego mutters.
“Come on, bro,” Craig says. “We don't have time to chicken out. Let's just do this before it gets dark.”
“You mean like you did at the haunted house sophomore year?” Michelle drawls.
“I got no idea what you're talking about,” Craig replies haughtily. “The zombies led me out the emergency exit so I could see the real hardcore part of the house.”
I sigh and gather my courage, gently shouldering by Craig to start walking up the steps. I fold my arms tightly over my chest, trying to disguise the fact that I'm shaking.
“See?” I hear Michelle say. “Alodia's going! You can't not go now!”
Craig grumbles under his breath, but he follows after me. As we all walk through the shadowy doorway, the rustling noises seem to close in around us. I shiver, feeling as if I've just stuck my finger in an electric socket.
“Is it just me, or is it really cold in here?”
“Hey, Spirit Dude,” Raj calls softly. “Buddy, ol' pal, ol' friend. We're not here to hurt you. Be nice. Pleeeeeeeease...”
“It's a ghost, Raj, not a puppy!”
I make my way down a rough, uneven staircase, stumbling slightly on one loose step. I put my hand on the wall to steady myself.
“You okay there?” Quinn asks.
“Yeah, fine. I just...” I trail off as I happen to look at my hand. It's smeared with blood. I look up at the wall and find words written in thick swaths of blood: STAY AWAY
“This is friendly-ghost-speak for 'Hi, be my friend', right?” Diego deadpans.
“There's more!” Kele remarks. “Cast an eyeball at this!”
I look where he's indicating, and see more bloody messages: YOU DON'T BELONG HERE and I CAN TASTE YOUR FEAR
“What emo punk band is this ghost listening to?” Jake mutters.
“Hopefully one that's pacifist,” Raj says.
“All right, gang, we don't know when Arachnid is coming back,” Sean points out. “Let's look around and be quick about it.”
We all fan out to poke around the ruins. Sean immediately pulls himself into the branches of an overgrown tree entwined with one ruined wall.
“Think the ghost is hiding up there?” I call up with a smirk.
“No stone unturned, right?” he calls back.
“Well, if by stone you mean branch, I guess that works.”
Quinn wanders over to a crumbling stone fountain. Picking up a stick, she gingerly stirrs the algae-thick water. She recoils slightly, putting a hand over her mouth and nose.
“This is like stirring soup,” she mutters. “And it stinks!”
“Hey, Allie. Come take a look at this.” I turn my attention to Diego, crouched with Varyyn near what appears to be a makeshift shrine. I come closer and find trinkets spread around a small wooden figurine.
“What's this?”
“Do you remember the religious war my people fought?” Varyyn asks. When we both nod, he continues. “Some sects believed that praying to individual Catalysts would bring them sooner.”
I squint at the idol, trying to make out some distinctive feature, dragon wings, a wolf's head, bear paws...
“Can you tell which one of us this is for?”
Diego lifts the idol to inspect it. As he does, something drops from a hole in the side into the dust at his feet. I bend to pick it up. It's a tarnished silver pen, with an engraving along the side: Grace Tamara Hall. My heart beats faster.
“This belongs to Grace!”
“What?” Diego snatches the pen from my hand to read the engraving. “She was here?”
“Perhaps,” Varyyn says.
Diego swallows and meets my gaze, his dark eyes troubled. “Allie, this pen looks old. I mean like old. This much tarnish on silver...”
“NO!” Craig's terrified cry makes us all jump. We all rush over to where he is stooped inside a narrow alcove, cradling something in his arms. My blood turns cold as it rushes out of my head to collect at my feet. Time seems to stop.
A body, mostly decayed, rests in Craig's arms. Still attached to a flap of rotting flesh on the scalp is an unmistakeable streak of maroon hair.
“...No...”
“...Th-that can't be Zahra...” Quinn whimpers. “...Right...?”
Trembling violently, Craig slips the bracelets off the corpse's bony wrists. They're familiar. Too familiar. Raj sucks in his breath sharply, hand flying to his mouth. Michelle backs away, her face ashen.
“No...”
“Th-there's writing over here,” Raj says weakly, pointing to the wall. “It says, 'You will be next.'”
Quinn dissolves into tears beside me. Sean curses under his breath, furiously kicking at the tree. I stare numbly at the grotesque pile of sloppy flesh and brittle bones. It...it can't be. It's not possible. ...I passed the test. They were alive...they were all alive... At least...they were alive when I reached the Threshold. But now the cycle has been broken. And this may have been my last chance. ...Have we lost her for good this time? Our Zahra? Our snarky lich queen, our brilliant hacker, our strong, fearless crow? I never saw her flinch, never saw her break. In another lifetime, I watched her singlehandedly destroy Rourke's entire empire. ...How could she be the first to go now, of all of us, when I was supposed to have finally gotten it all right?
Craig straightens slowly, clutching the bracelets, his face a twisted red mask of grief and fury.
“We had only just...I was going to...” He chokes on a sob, looking uncharacteristically small and helpless. Michelle reaches out to lay a hand on his shoulder, but he pulls sharply away, whirling to slam his fist into a wall with a furious cry.
“Hey, man, hold on--” Sean steps forward to pull him away, but Craig throws all his weight into a shove that actually sends Sean sprawling to the stones. His breath starts coming out in fast, shallow gasps.
“Craig, stop!” I cry. “Craig, you need to breathe!”
He ignores me, whipping around to face the dark recesses of the ruin. “Hey! Ghost! Come out so I can kick your ass!” He beats his fists wildly on the stone walls. A loud snap echoes across the plaza. Suddenly, the floor under my feet is trembling.
“Uh, Big Guy, I think you made it angry...” The floor drops about a foot beneath us, throwing us all off balance.
“Hang onto something!” Kele shouts. The stone under our feet starts to split apart, receding towards the walls and leaving us less room to stand on by the second.
“...I told you so,” Michelle mutters.
“Grab onto the walls!” I shout. I grasp whatever handholds I can find on the uneven stone walls, looking worriedly over my shoulder at my friends. Everyone scrambles to get onto the walls or the trees. Except for Craig. He stands still as the floor recedes. His back is to me, but I don't need to see his face to guess at his thinking.
“Craig, don't be stupid!” Michelle screams. “Grab hold of something!”
Before anyone can stop him, he jumps into the gap.
“No! Craig!” There is a distant thud as he lands. Suddenly, the gap in the floor starts to close again, edges slowly creeping together.
“Dammit!” Michelle jumps off the wall and runs toward the narrowing gap.
“What are you doing?!” Sean cries.
“I'm not letting him get stuck down there alone!” she snaps, scrambling over the edge. She lets go of the ledge and disappears.
“Hold on!” Sean yells. “I'm coming too!” One by one, the others jump down into the gap. I raise my eyes to meet Diego's beside me. He smiles weakly.
“All for one and one for all, right?”
“...Here goes nothing...” I turn myself against the wall and reach out to grasp his hand. Together, we launch ourselves into the gap. As the stones snap shut over our heads, all I see is darkness. We tumble through the air and land in a pile with the others.
“Whose elbows are in my back?” Estela groans.
“My arm is goin' numb,” Jake complains.
“This is not an ideal cuddle puddle,” Raj concedes.
As we slowly untangle ourselves, my eyes start to adjust to the darkness, broken by one small shaft of light from above. It illuminates Craig as he pounds his fists against the wall.
“Come out, asshat!” he howls. “I need to punch you out of existence!”
“Dude, the ghost might not even have a corporeal form,” Raj points out.
“I don't care!”
Sean seizes Craig's shoulders and turns him around, forcing them to lock eyes.
“I know it hurts, man,” Sean says gently. “I know. I feel it too. We all do. We all cared about Zahra. But just take a second. Breathe. Just let yourself feel whatever you're feeling.”
For a long moment, Craig just stares at his friend. Then his face crumples, his lips quivering. He pulls away sharply and collapses onto the stairs. I rush to his side to put a hand on his shoulder.
“Craig. I promise, we'll avenge her.” I grip his shoulder, speaking through clenched teeth. “I swear, whoever or whatever took Zahra from us, we will make them pay.”
“Hell yeah we will, Alodia.”
“Will both of you stop and think for two seconds?” Estela snaps impatiently. Craig scowls at her.
“Of all people, I thought you'd understand!”
“I do understand. But whatever this ghost is might have information about the island.”
Craig's shoulders sag under the weight of his grief. “I'm just...I'm so tired of never being good enough. I wasn't good enough to get drafted--”
Sean looks sharply at him. “Wait, what?!”
“I wasn't good at school,” Craig continues, ignoring Sean. “I wasn't...I couldn't get to Zahra fast enough. It's just...why couldn't it have been me?!”
“Oh, Craig...” Michelle murmurs.
“She beat me at everything!” he cries. “She was smarter, cooler, always knew what to do...Why is she gone and a dumb, worthless loser like me still here?!” He dissolves into ragged sobs, tears running down his cheeks in rivers. For a long while, no one speaks. Then Diego yelps, raising a finger toward a glowing rock wall.
“Is that what I think it is?”
“There! That's it!” Estela exclaims.
Sure enough, the glowing ghostly figure is coming through the rock wall and descending the stairs toward us. Shock and disbelief momentarily halt Craig's tears as he stares at it. Then his face twists with rage.
“You! You killed my friend!” He lunges at the figure, throwing punch after wild punch, but his fist passes through it. The figure endures Craig's furious assault placidly, not moving. “I hate you! I hate you! I...why isn't it hurting me?”
“...Because it's Zahra?” Michelle suggests.
“What?!”
“Think about it. Who else's spirit would do things to try to help us?”
“Of course,” Sean murmurs. “It does make sense...”
Craig's face twists with fresh anguish. “Z-Zahra...? I'm...I'm so sorry...” He clasps his hands in what looks almost like a prayer. “I didn't find you fast enough. I wasn't there when you needed me. I was so sure that you'd be okay, and then I...I...I failed you...”
The ghost bends toward him, holding out its hand. A small, silvery ring rests in its palm. Craig looks at me, his eyes begging for guidance. I nod.
“Take it. I think you'll want to see this.”
He stretches out a trembling hand to accept the ring. “It's my class ring,” he mumbles. “My parents picked this one out a while ago. They were gonna give it to me at graduation.” I hold out my hand, silently asking permission to touch it. He passes it toward me, and I feel the familiar weightlessness as the world around me dissolves.
A football stadium, packed with spectators. “Ultra Bowl” is emblazoned on the grass beneath the players' feet. The Eagles lead the Condors by four points, with five seconds on the clock.
“We can still pull this off, Craig,” Sean says. “Can you make a hole for me?”
“All day, every day, bro,” Craig replies.
“All right, let's do this. 64, 96, Fireball...Hut hut!”
The defensive lineman barrels down toward the quarterback, but the linebacker pushes him hard to the side. The quarterback scrambles up the middle, flying past the front line. Two defenders come from the side and begin to pull him down. He laterals the ball to the linebacker before he's taken down.
“Get it!” Sean yells.
The defense goes for the linebacker, but he rolls through them, straight into the endzone.
“I don't believe it!” the announcer shrieks. “The Condors win! The Condors win the Ultra Bowl!”
“That's what I'm talking about!” Sean crows as fireworks explode over the field.
In a comfortable, cheerful office, Sean and Craig set down their controllers and high five each other. On the computer screen in front of them, animated figures are carrying out a giant trophy. The sound of a cheering crowd floats out from the speakers. Sean, dressed in his purple and black Condors uniform, grins at his friend.
“You're as good a lineman in game as you are in real life!”
Craig, dressed in jeans and a plain T-shirt, laughs. “Maybe real-life me five years ago!” he says, ruefully poking at his belly, which has grown a little bit rounder. “Not a lot of lineman training behind this desk.”
He closes the test rig on the screen, and Sean leans back, lacing his fingers behind his head. “It's good.”
Craig grins. “For real, bro, thanks for coming in for our cover photoshoot. You've become Touchdown 2021's biggest selling point.”
“Hey, anything for you man. Just gotta make sure the game only has my good plays in it.”
Craig snorts. “Dude, don't worry. We literally had to nerf your stats because you were so OP.”
Sean smiles, casting his eyes over the office. His eyes fall on a photo sitting on the desk in front of him, of him and Craig in their Hartfeld uniforms, side-by-side. Craig notices where his gaze has landed and frowns a little.
“...Hey, Sean?”
“Yeah?”
“How do you know when you're good enough at what you do?”
“Where's this coming from?”
“Okay, so you're literally one of the best athletes in the world, Raj basically owns the NomNom Network...Sometimes, I just...don't know if I can keep up, you know?”
“Aw, dude--”
“I know, it's dumb.”
“You're working on one of the biggest game franchises in the world. You found a life that makes you happy. Honestly, man, I'm really proud of you.”
“...Really?”
“Since getting this job, I gotta say I feel like you've come into your own. You stopped trying to pull people down, and found something you loved. I think that's awesome.”
“And I haven't even told you about CheeseFry-day.”
“Is that where you get cheese fries on Friday?”
“It's the best, dude.”
A photographer wanders in from the next room. “Mr. Gayle, we're ready for you. Follow me, please.”
“That's my cue.”
“Sure is,” Craig agrees. “And I got a meeting coming up. But hey. Thanks, man. I mean it. I don't know how I woulda gotten here without you.”
“Nah.” Sean claps him on the shoulder. “This is all you, Craig.”...
… I'm back in the cavern again, my hand and Craig's still on the ring. The others stare at us and the ghostly figure between us.
“Did...did you just see...?”
I smile. “Yeah. I did.”
The ghost is shining brighter now. Craig turns toward it. “I think...I know what she's trying to tell me.” He offers the spirit a watery smile. “Zahra, if it's you, I just wanna say something, before you go...”
The spirit looks down at him, apparently waiting for him to continue. He draws in a shuddering breath.
“I...I think I'm in love with you. And I don't know how to stop. I don't think I can. I just started to think that I could be your Player 2...” His voice cracks with anguish, and he covers his face. “I wish I could've stopped this from happening. But I know why you showed me the future. You want me to keep going. So...I'll do my best.”
The spirit starts to recede into the wall, but it keeps its hand stretched toward Craig. As it fades, Craig dissolves into fresh tears, crying brokenly into his hands. Sean and Michelle rush forward, wrapping their arms around him as he sags toward the floor.
“We're right here, Craig,” Sean murmurs, looking ready to cry himself. “Right here.”
“I'm such a wuss,” Craig says bitterly. “Why couldn't I tell her...?”
“...Tell me what?”
Everyone freezes at the unmistakeable voice behind us. We turn slowly, hardly daring to believe it. But it's true. Her dark hair is ragged and uneven, as if she's been stubbornly maintaining her undercut with sharpened rocks, and her signature maroon streak is faded and somewhat off-color. But there's no mistaking her. It's Zahra.
Quinn is the first to say it. “...Y-you're alive!”
Estela blinks, looking back towards where the ghost has faded. “Then what just...”
“Z...?” Craig's voice trembles. “Is that you?”
Zahra coughs awkwardly, shifting her weight. “Craig, did you, uh...mean all that stuff? About me dying?”
Craig is off like a gunshot, pulling Zahra into a crushing embrace. She yelps as the breath rushes out of her, grimacing. Craig lifts her bodily off the floor, bouncing with elation.
“It's you! You're not dead! You're really not dead!”
“To be not dead, I need to breathe!” she croaks, squirming. He sets her down, but he only pulls back slightly.
“Sorry about that. Actually, not sorry. You're alive!”
“If I do die, you are not allowed to speak at my funeral. That was cheesy as hel--” She's cut off by Craig's lips pressed firmly to hers. Quinn laughs.
“Aww!” she cooes.
“Should we turn around?” I quip, aware that I'm grinning like an idiot and not really caring. Zahra, kissing Craig back with passion, puts her middle finger up at us. After a moment or two, they reluctantly break apart. Zahra looks Craig over.
“I guess it's cool that you're not dead or whatever either.”
“So...Zahra, you're buddies with the ghost?” I ask. She looks reproachfully at me.
“No, you doofus. I am the ghost.”
“Then, the spooky noises? The floor opening up?”
She grins, clearly pleased with herself. “Speakers playing sounds based on a randomized time interval.”
“The blood?” Jake asks.
“Had to eat a few squirrels the last couple months. Figured the blood was a nice touch.”
“A couple months?!” Raj yelps.
“Yeah, let's skip past that part,” she mutters.
“What about the floor?” Michelle asks.
“You mean my masterpiece,” Zahra answers with a wicked grin. She digs a small flashlight out of her pocket and points it at the ceiling. A large series of wires and supports rest under each stone square. I whistle lowly.
“You have been busy. And you managed to fool those Arachnid troops.”
She laughs. “Did they piss their pants this time? I hope I got it on video.”
“Okay, I get pretending to be a ghost,” Quinn says. “But why fake your own death?”
Zahra shrugs. “Rourke can't kill me if he thinks I'm dead.”
“You almost convinced us,” Sean replies softly.
“Yeah, well...you're here. I'm here. It all worked out.”
“That still doesn't explain the glowy thing that's trying to give us stuff,” Raj points out.
“Glowy thing?” Zahra repeats, blinking. “I didn't have a glowy thing.”
“Okaaaaaay,” Jake drawls. “Then who the hell is Beetlejuice and why is he coming after us?”
Heavy, clunky footsteps on the staircase distract us from speculating further. We shrink into a protective huddle, turning towards the sound. I feel my blood run cold.
Oh, no...please, no...not here...not now...
The Endless stands in front of us, her aged face once more concealed behind her visor. The flame that once danced over her mechanical right hand is gone.
“I'm afraid there is something else you need to worry about.”
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25 Questions
Thanks for the tag @rain-likes-to-ramble ! It’s the longest tag game I’ve done, so I’ll put it under the cut. Be warned, it gets progressively more sarcastic.
1. Is there a story you’re holding off writing for some reason? 
I’ve been wanting to try and rewrite some of my fanfic from when I was 13/14 for a while to make it less cringy and have a direct comparison on how my writing has changed. But the main thing I’m holding off is a novel(la) called The Scramble. It’s in the same universe as my other WIP’s (with some of its events being mentioned in The Indignant including an appearance from Chris) but it can be read standalone. I’ve got the cast and rough plot sorted out but as it was originally fanfiction, it’s taken a while to weed the fandom parts out of it. 
Brief summary: Sigurd Losnedahl, being the backstabber he is, decided to get involved with the Norikan Civil War despite insisting to his two sons he wouldn’t. Now Eirik and Halldór are stuck in the epicentre of the battle and since neutrality is even more dangerous than picking sides, they’re scuppered. After being taken under the wing of enigmatic Taisto Astergaard, Eirik is entangled with the man’s adopted daughter, Christine, and the only way the polar duo will live is through them ending the decade-long war. The only problem is, his father’s so obsessive with his cause that he now will do anything to put a bullet in his head. And Halldór’s disappeared- how convenient.
2. What work of yours, if any, are you embarrassed about existing?
The fanfiction that I mentioned in Q1 that I plan on rewriting. 
3. What order do you write in? Front of book to back? Chronological? Favourite scenes first? Something else?
Front to back. I tend to leave exposition and descriptions out of the first draft (unintentionally) so I’ll fill in those when I feel like it.
4. Favourite character I’ve written?
Phineas. He was originally a one-dimensional villain (I created him when I was 9) but he’s now one of the most complex characters in the series with the undoubtedly the most well-developed backstory. He’s also developed a great sense of humour over time, and his relationship with Jonathon (who I haven’t introduced on Tumblr yet but I need to. He’s a close second) is one of my favourite things to write.
5. Character you were most surprised to end up writing?
Vladislav. In my plan, he was only supposed to appear in 2/41 chapters. After his personality change, he quickly became one of the major characters. Originally, he was a vain flirt with an ego out the roof. Now he’s a sensitive but righteous boy training to be a lawyer to persecute his mass murdering uncle. Pretty big development for someone who was only created 7 months ago.
6. Something you would go back and change in your writing but it’s too late/complicated to change now.
I’d have added a District based on somewhere in South Asia and also one based on somewhere in Africa. I’m thinking about adding them at the end (since I’ve already stated in my novel that more Districts will come with time), but it’s too late to add them from the beginning.
7. When asked, are you embarrassed or enthusiastic to tell people that you write?
I love telling people I write but hate the follow-up questions, “Tell me about your book!” *pulls out garbage which doesn’t even reflect what my novel is about*
8. Favourite genre to write.
Speculative Fiction. While making characters is my favourite part of writing, I also love world-building. 
9. What, if anything, do you do for inspiration?
I actually play High School Story, Hollywood U and The Sims with my characters inserted. It’s been helpful for one-shots and AU’s more than anything but has given me traits about characters to add to their dimensions for my main works, so it’s win-win.
10. Write in silence or with background music? Alone or with others
Background music and alone. The music has to be a specific genre though.
11. What aspect of your writing do you think has most improved since you started writing?
How I portray emotions. In my older drafts, characters recovered from the deaths of their close friends/relatives in 10 minutes and seemed callous. Now they are all crybabies to compensate.
12. Your weakness as an author?
I rely too much on dialogue and miss out a lot of description.
13. Your strength as an author? 
I write a pretty mean villain (pun intended). This man was reading my work over my shoulder since I mostly write on the bus home and the first thing he said after, “Are you okay?” was “I like Rylan even though he’d scare me sh*tless from the looks of things.” I think I should put that as a review on the book’s cover once it’s (hopefully) published. A 70-year-old man I met on the bus does sound like a reputable source.
14. Do you make playlists for your work?
I have a playlist for Cyrus and that’s it which 90% is Eurobeat since he has a needo for speedo. There’s only has one chapter in his POV.
15. Why did you start writing?
I was a cocky six-year-old and thought I could write a better version of a film I’d just watched. It ended up being about two best friends in a milkshake parlour despite the original film being about a castaway girl. The connection still makes more coherent sense than the fact I got the idea for The Mastery from Mario and Sonic at the Vancouver Winter Olympic Games 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃
16. Are there any characters who haunt you?
Alex in his angsty stage. He would threaten to kill people 25/8 because he found out he was adopted.
17. If you could give your fledgeling author self any advice, what would it be?
Keep writing. If you’re that dedicated to your project that you have to write it straight away, remember you can always edit in the future if it’s not up to your standards. And even people who’ve been writing decades are still improving as writing is wayyyy too subjective to be ‘perfect’ at.
18. Were there any works that affected you so much that it influenced your writing style? 
George Orwell’s 1984 has affected my world-building. Malorie Blackman’s Noughts and Crosses and Maggie Stiefvater’s Wolves of Mercy Falls series gave me the idea to write under two characters alternating POV’s.
19. When it comes to more complicated narratives, how do you keep track of outlines, characters, development, timeline, etc.?
Charahub and a timeline which I’ve drawn by hand on the back of some unused wallpaper.
20. Do you write in long sit-down sessions or little spurts? 
Either 5 words or 5000, no in between. It depends on whether I feel inclined to write or have inspiration.
21. What do you think when you read over your older work? 
Cringe at all the unnecessary words and repetition- one sentence in my 2012 draft of The Mastery is literally, ‘Alex got up off his bed, walked out of his bedroom door, walked down the stairs, walked into the living room before standing in the doorway of the dining room’. 
22. Are there subjects that make you uncomfortable to write?
Anything to do with extreme physical or sexual assault. Or sex in general since I’ve not written much smut before. 
23. Any obscure life experiences that you feel have helped your writing?
Meeting my biological father at 16 rather than knowing him from birth. Also, one of my characters has impaired vision like me so its easier since I knew all the terminology and experiences without much research.
24. Have you ever become an expert on something you previously knew nothing about, in order to better a scene or a story?
Handguns. I’ve used rifles before (I’ve gone clay pigeon shooting before) but since handguns are illegal where I live, I’ve not seen one in person nor had any idea of their usage or the terminology. Quite a few of my characters own them as a precaution so I had to learn. 
25. Copy and paste a few sentences or a short paragraph that you are particularly proud of.
(It’s not short but I freaking love how Chapter 36 of The Mastery panned out. Note this is the chapter 70-year-old man liked)
“Cyrus, Keung. Not the most ideal reunion. How has the family been since I was disowned?”
Keung’s jaw twitched, “I think the reason you kicked out was valid enough. You killed your own grandmother, Rylan.”
Rylan, another one of my many cousins, let out what from his mouth movement looked like was a hearty laugh but sounded like a giggle, “It sounds more impressive than getting disowned for supporting the black sheep in an argument, does it not?”
Keung’s hand had been on his spoon all this time, and he was clenching it to the point his arm shook, “I know grandfather wants nothing to do with either of us Rylan, but that doesn’t mean I want to associate myself with a murderer.”
“You stayed under the Xu thumb for long enough. There are fewer fingers in this room than the number of people Tatsuo has killed. Some are justified, I’ll give him that, but others were falsely accused with no chance at justice.”
He leaned at an angle so that he could stare at me, “It’s good to know that you’re being independent for once in your life, Cyrus. Regardless, it’s a real shame you subsequently allied yourself with another family of murderers.” 
“What else could I have done?” I said, “The Ninth District needs allies, and I have genuine friends from Ivanska, Phinea and Willsborg.”
He cooed as he came to lean against my back, “Considering how we’re he half-breed scum of the family, I thought you’d have considered an alliance with me. You’re the only relative of mine I like and who hasn’t seemed to have fallen under Xu indoctrination.”
“Grandmother accepted the fact we didn’t decide to be half-breeds,” I hissed, “Out of everyone you could have killed, why her?”
He lowered his voice to a whisper, “I intended to kill Tatsuo. The fact she drunk the poison I’d slipped into the Mansion was a mistake. I don’t have many regrets but that is one of them.”
He distanced himself, “I have little in common with the man who I once saw as my dear grandfather, but one of the few things I’ll admit is that if we need to, we’ll both use blood to make a point.”
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