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alkcomics · 1 year ago

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Ghost! My shadow! Caress me!

Saw Cherry Glazerr play 'Moon Dust' live a few weeks ago and it fucking ruled. Been going through old pages for Reasons and u know my emo ass can't pass up a good song quote image post

Full-Spectrum Therapy (2016)

#playlist #that song is so fucking good #so this section of ch4 is top of my 'needs edits bad' list #i think it's a common place people stop reading #its shape in the narrative is like a weird knot that adds complexity and confusion at a point where it should be a first clear revelation #breakdown of safety structures -> finding solace in the void -> we see him actively affect the void -> he decides to get OUT #whereas damien is still trying to scrounge up safety structures and hasn't yet resorted to actively seeking solace in the void #like this scene should have much more emphasis and be a much more direct parallel to the climax of the story w damien staying in the void #i would just like that all clearer on a first read #this page is still fun tho #anyway remember this page for limiter huehueh #fullspectrumtherapy

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