#she just ended up on a different path following amos up a mountain and now we're here and where are we going?? i dunno
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Shit like that is why Tangerine should've stayed in Ericson! She must take care of her leg but nooooooo! People in Ericson was mean to me :'(! I'm not surprised she caught a fever considering she's ignoring her wound. Sorry for sounding so bitter.
It's a big issue with the "Clementine left Ericson willingly" plot point in this trilogy. Aside from it just being out of character for her based on what we see in TWDG, it lessens the amount of sympathy we're willing to give as readers.
If she was forced to leave Ericson, whether because they kicked her out or it was under attack, she would have no choice. She'd have to leave, and then these situations wouldn't feel like her fault, y'know? You're more likely to see her suffer, fall down, or get an infection, and feel bad because it's not her fault, she was dealt a shitty hand.
But this angle of her leaving because she was unhappy or because she felt like a burden... she still left the safety of place where she could've properly healed from an amputation. Losing her leg isn't just another injury you can be like, "Oh just keep off it, it'll heal." That's a lot of healing and physical/emotional trauma to get through and she would've had a better chance of it if she stayed with AJ and Ericson.
Since she left, we're kinda just sitting here saying, "Yeah, Clementine... you have to take care of your leg. You have to wash it. You can't be running around on it all the time while it's still healing. You're going to be more prone to infection, and in the zombie apocalypse, that's super not great. What were you thinking? You should have stayed at Ericson. You should not be here at this ski lodge or running through the woods."
A lot of problems with the story and characterization stem from that decision and unfortunately, it's weakening the story.
#ask#twdg clementine#clementine book two#like i don't really understand why we're taking that angle... at least i don't understand yet?#i mean a lot of tillie's stories do involve people leaving places where they're supposedly happy#and the logic in them is just kinda..... not relatable? for me anyway so i have a harder time understanding it#because i can understand that insecurity and trauma weighing down on clementine after she loses her leg#i can understand why she would feel like a liability or why she might *feel* like the others see her as such#how she can't do things she could before and how she struggles with that#all very interesting and emotional things that could be explored#but then she plans an escape from Ericson and sneaks off without any goodbye? what if aj DIDN'T find her?#he would've just woken up one morning and oop clem's gone uh oh#and where exactly is she going? we don't know#she just ended up on a different path following amos up a mountain and now we're here and where are we going?? i dunno#it's all so... not great sksks
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