#my girls in the drivers seat and i'm just a peon tapping away dbsbdjsbsjsbsjabwjwb

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clover! your writing is wonderful and ill say its always a great time reading any of your replies. i love how each sentence and paragraph flows easily, how its enjoyable to read, and how you vary your structure and sentences to keep things engaging. good details. good insightful and personal thoughts. hikari is also a bit of a wildcard and is fiery, but she seems to also have a softer and vulnerable side. its always nice to see those differences and contrasts residing within the same person. im interested to see how she comes into her own, and how shell make peace or reconcile with being merciless.,.

UWAAYGGHH HIEN THIS HAS ME IN TEARS. I look up to you n your writing a lot so this really made me feel super good. I worry abt a lot of those points sometimes, ie. if hikari's accent is readable, or if my sentences are either too long or too short or have too many commas ( or parentheses-- talk abt an ironic joke ) but!!!

i try to have her hold a ton of strength with tenderness just below the surface. People think one person can be one thing in writing, but hikari is intentionally nebulous and even at times contradictory, to the point where like... sometimws idk what she's thinkin when she does shit.