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iightwoodbane · 5 months ago

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i'm only 20% into heir of fire and i already deeply Deeply dislike rowan. i know it's supposed to be a hate to love situation rn but my god did sjm completely butcher this. how the fuck do you introduce a love interest by having them punch the mc in the face?? even worse you have the mc excuse it by saying "i deserved it" and "at least he was holding back"??????

#just abysmal writing i'm sorry #mind u i'm not even morally opposed to the punch itself #its a fantasy series she's an assassin....yea its gonna happen #its the way she reacts afterwards that bothers me #idk it gave me the ick so bad like why try to make it better #by saying he couldve crushed her jaw but he didnt........WE ALREADY KNOW #mine

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