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lyricalambrosia · 1 year ago

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I'm struggling so much with how to start chapter 3 of can you feel the sun.....ive spent (checks notes) 2?? Days??? Just staring at the same three sections because the pacing feels so wrong to me but ive kind of put myself in a Situation™ here so. Ugh. Gonna have to rewrite already 😔

#sighs heavily #maybe i'll open up a separate doc and see how the slower version goes because i have been thinking about it #but i really dont want to spend more time in octovern than i have to. i want them to go already 😭😭#but the current version i have is way too fast i feel like i need to give them time to adjust before throwing even more changes at them #being a writer is so fun! i say through frustrated tears and gritted teeth #jk i do love it but when i get stuck like this its The Worst.#anyway i just needed to rant </3 none of my friends have watched/read trigun so i cant ask for their opinions sadly 😔🔫#the worst part is i have paragraphs i really like in both sections that i dont think i'll be able to keep in the slower ver #without it being awkward :c oh well. im sure ill figure something out

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