#i think i've always resisted this bc of how much slower it is to me
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have a lil snippet from the siren AU! changing up my writing process for this piece - I'm drafting this one in prose rather than my usual zero-drafty style, so we'll see how that changes things!
The first thing your uncle says to you when he picks you up from the station is: "Stay away from the water."
You pause halfway in the front seat, mouth still poised to shape the syllables of, Fine, how are you?
If this were coming from anyone else, you would have written it off as a joke. You may not know your uncle very well - you wouldn't even have recognized him if not for your mother showing you his picture before you got on the train. The crease between his eyebrows, though, tells you that this is not a man who smiles very often, let alone laughs.
"...What?" you ask warily, car door still open as though leaving yourself the chance to bolt right back onto the next train home.
"The ocean," Dojima clarifies. "You've never been, right?"
You shake your head. If you're being honest, there isn't much you're looking forward to about this trip - a city boy through and through, you're far too familiar with all of the horror stories about the countryside - but the one exception to that is the ocean.
It's one thing to know that you live on an island, to know that Japan is surrounded by water: the Sea of Okhotsk, the Sea of Japan, the East China Sea, and the crown jewel, the Pacific Ocean. But picturing it is something you've never managed to do. Sure, you've seen pictures of the ocean before - but where does it end? What must it feel like, to be faced with that much raw power? To gaze out at that endless expanse of blue, and see no end in sight?
#persona 4#persona 4 fanfic#seta souji#yu narukami#ryotaro dojima#fic snippet#i also am doing this on my typewriter hehe#it kind of helps actually! because i know that I'll have to retype everything#that's a usual part of my editing process#but i guess it feels different when it's a necessity rather than a choice#the main thing with this drafting style is with my usual one#it's a very 'trust the process' kind of style#because there isn't anything resembling prose until the very last step#which does make things like sharing wips a lot harder#and also it's really hard to cross that hurdle of actually starting to edit#i literally have like 200k words in my drafts that i will probably never edit#but this style#i like that i can walk away at the end of the day actually feeling good about what I've written#i think i've always resisted this bc of how much slower it is to me#but i guess slower is definitely better than never finishing at all#and maybe actually liking my progress will stop me from falling into the trap of#'oh this sucks and i hate it so i won't finish it'#which....i do a lot LOL#nemali writes
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