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tempestaurora · 7 years ago

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so i read the whole captive prince novel this morning, and considering i was told it was an erotica, there was almost no sex depicted, rather than it being an overarching theme. all in all, i wouldn’t give it more than 3/5, the writing wasn’t great (when your teachers stress the anti adverb opinion so heavily, you can’t help but notice them every time), there were a few grammatical errors i noticed - but i liked the characters and the idea behind it all. my only real problem was that it feels unfinished. a trilogy shouldn’t just be one book separated out, it should be three separate stories that interlock. captive prince feels really unfinished and like nothing really happened - like it was only the first 25% of a novel that i now have to buy more copies of to finish.

#bethany talks #and the copies are really fucking expensive #i've ordered the next novel but it wont be here for a few weeks and tbh will there be any more story in it than there was in the first????#i imagine that when laurent and damen get together it'll be cute and rewarding but rn #theres been no development #neither have changed at all for the other #theyre still enemies #and tbh if i'd been the agent of this novel i would've asked for the next part to stick on the end of it #it feels so unfinished #maybe i'll selotape the next novel to the end of the first one so i can pretend its all one book

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