#cool sorcery scene about finding the hat in the building a 'ohhh evil alderman' moment
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yeah the paint thing was confusing — I thought it was an illusion, at first, like with the... when he was underground in the first book, in the safehouse or what it was, fake paint guy charged at him; I though it could be something like that. as it was, it just felt unnecessary? the concept was there, and with it being there, it felt like she should have lived.
For a series that literally starts with the protagonist’s resurrection the Matthew swift books do a pretty good job of establishing that This Is Not A Universe Where People Come Back From The Dead. The circumstances of Matthew’s resurrection are so convoluted that there’s no reason to expect them to happen to anyone else, (not to mention that it’s clear that an entity as powerful as the blue electric angels is needed to make that work) and while there’s plenty of ghosts and memory fragments and half-alive necromancers in the setting, nobody Just Comes Back (not even Matthew, if the whole transporter problem conversation is to be believed.) and there was never a moment where I as a reader actually expected anyone to be resurrected after death had been established
#I was looking at it with the perspective of having read a (maybe yours?) post about how everybody around matthew dying so I figured#Vera was probably dead? but I really didn't want her to be#.....looking forward to finding out what was obvious no other option I the court#though I do fear how the 'no killing for the greater good' thing will be handled in the future cause#end of mayor left me going like. it could've been done better! on a purely technical plot lines level it could've easily been done better!#I'm halfway like — I was skipping paragraphs by the end there which is a bad habit and. I'd like to see it done right like —#unapologetically?#like — there was#like he refused to do it and there was like fifty of the spectres and I was like 'no way this ends without a bodycount' which was like#if he's fine with aldermen dying then okay — but narrativley as a writer — either address that or don't make him face that choice#and maybe it was addressed and I just skipped it cause it was near the end of the book and it was late and. well; bad habit#but — he could have figures it out earlier#he could have never put forth the idea of killing the sorcerer — could have figured it out on his own investigated —#cool sorcery scene about finding the hat in the building a 'ohhh evil alderman' moment#this is so off-topic to the actual post#(sorry)#(I do also really like how they handle necromancy and resurrection)
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