#but then again fitz isn't present for every single scene in those 120
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2k words later I've gotten as far as *checks notes* chapter 1
i want SO BADLY to see the first part of keeper from Fitz’s pov. you’re on another one of your dads stupid missions, expecting nothing, and then you find “the girl”, but you can’t quite get out of your head that somethings different this time. and it turns out she’s the girl, after 12 years. and you desperately try and convince her to believe you, to trust you. you show her things you’re not supposed to, and you can’t stop looking at her in wonder. because she’s real. you tag along as your father shows her around, explains things, but she keeps looking to you for comfort and confirmation. that’s why your father brought you after all, because you’re her lifeline. and then you ruin her life. she drugs her family and even though you met yesterday you hold her as she sobs on the floor, and you race to find her stuffed elephant to try and offer her some comfort because you did this to her. your search is finally over and this is what it cost. and even though you met yesterday, you care. and are gentle with her, and try to help as much as you can even though she’s your fathers project. because you want her to feel safe, and you want to get rid of that look you put on her face, and even once she leaves and your life is “normal again”. no more mystery girl, no more mystery missions and missing school like you have for years. you can’t stop thinking about her. the girl you held so close who looked at you with wonder. do you see my vision
#kotlc#2k words to 12 pages ratio#when there's like 120 pages to cover#one sec doing the math#20k words potentially. if I keep this rate up#but then again fitz isn't present for every single scene in those 120#but then again...i want to add a few sophie doesn't see...#so. I guess we'll see!!#i need to maintain my reputation as someone who understand's fitz's character I need to do this well
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