#and we're supposed to believe a comment about sushi would affect aziraphale's mood. at all.
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SORRY but the nightingale line was so fucking annoying maybe i have an incredibly low tolerance for self-referentialness but why would that line mean anything to the two of them
#and in the middle of a killer scene at that#also if we're complaining about dialogue during the scene. the word toxic was jarring#let me be a script editor i need to get my hands on that fucking thing#the jump out of a window confrontation needs to be moved UP the antagonism/disgust there needs to remain consistent throughout#muriel and heaven need to pose a larger threat. THE BOOK OF LIFE THING DIDN'T EVEN MATTER?? WHY MENTION IT THEN#also the fucking. shax trying to get at maggie's insecurities thing WHO CARESSS WE DON'T KNOW HER WELL ENOUGH#and we're supposed to believe a comment about sushi would affect aziraphale's mood. at all.#I'm just SOOOOOO. i need to get in there w a red pen let me fix your godawful writing#good omens spoilers
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