#also removing a whole sibling is not changing a ''minor detail'' that's like... a prominent detail

[highlifeboat]

The new movie mostly changed minor details, to make some details more coherent :p

Biggest changes are: Matilda is now only child (her father constantly forgets she's a girl), story is set in UK (it's mostly noticeable in how old the school looks and that children have uniforms), mrs. Honey's backstory was expanded and mrs. Phelps (the librarian) got bigger role of being Matilda's second mother figure (yes, Matilda ends up with two mothers in this one🤣🤣)

(Also, Wormwoods flee the country because father tried to swindle Mafia and not because of FBI, but Wormwood parents were mostly cut out of the movie due to time, so it's not that noticeable :p)

That kinda sucks that they got rid of her brother. I liked their toxic sibling dynamic. Plus I feel like shitty siblings aren't very common for some reason. And they were like... a really good depiction of it.

Actually it kinda sucks if we don't get much of Matilda's family/home life in general. I think the idea of showing that sometimes even your family can suck and you're allowed to find better people was great. (I mean, I guess you don't need all the context of the old movie, but still.)

I dunno, I guess it doesn't really matter, but still kinda sucks.

I think more Ms Honey backstory is cool (I'm gonna assume she's still related to Trunchbul. If not that will be the one choice I call stupid), giving the librarian a bigger role seems kinda weird. I guess they swapped that in instead of showing more of Matilda and her family.

[dcubang]

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While in search of a missing Batman, Clark lets his closeness and feelings for Bruce get himself caught. Now both Superman and Batman are in the clutches of Hell Mistress Tala, and she's intent on causing as much chaos as she possibly can, and what better way than invading the minds of the two most powerful members of the Justice League? She is well on her way to chaos, but no plan can ever go smoothly; Batman has lost his memories due to her efforts, and invading Superman's mind is not as easy as she had thought. But, how long can Superman hold out before she fully invades his mind, and just what sort of information and truths will she uncover while in there?

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The bitterness inside of Loki has been bubbling and growing for millennia. A prophecy is on the verge of being fulfilled and Loki must tread lightly, or all the centuries of careful planning will be undone, but if he can keep his tongue silver and lie well, he will come out of this conflict with the final pieces required to move his plans for revenge forward.

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The noncon parts are frequent throughout, with Tala nonconning Superman and mind raping him. Graphic violence occurs, but in less detail than the noncon.

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Pseudo-sibling incest between Thor and Loki. Graphic violence in the form of battle and torment happen, Loki’s children are murdered in some detail, as are torture methods. Mpreg mentioned, but no graphic details.

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Username: LuciferxDamien Word Count: Around 30k total, 28k written Completed Percentage: 93% Title: The Smoke in Your Eyes Genre: Drama, Action, Romance Fandom/Universe: Superman and Batman, no particular canon, but I am more partial to the Animated Series Characters/Pairings: Clark/Bruce; Tala Warnings: Noncon, graphic violence, mind rape Rating: NC-17 Summary: While in search of a missing Batman, Clark lets his closeness and feelings for Bruce get himself caught. Now both Superman and Batman are in the clutches of Hell Mistress Tala, and she's intent on causing as much chaos as she possibly can, and what better way than invading the minds of the two most powerful members of the Justice League? She is well on her way to chaos, but no plan can ever go smoothly; Batman has lost his memories due to her efforts, and invading Superman's mind is not as easy as she had thought. But, how long can Superman hold out before she fully invades his mind, and just what sort of information and truths will she uncover while in there?

The story is set in multiple different locations, definite locations include Metropolis and Gotham, as well as Wayne Manor or the Batcave. Primarily it is set in an alternate dimension/cave-like setting or in the mind.

The noncon parts are frequent throughout, with Tala nonconning Superman and mind raping him. Graphic violence occurs, but in less detail than the noncon.

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Username: LuciferxDamien Word Count: 30k-ish Completed Percentage: 80% (25k written, a few scenes to finish) Title: To Lie and Wait Genre: Drama, Action, Romance Fandom/Universe: MCU with a heavy Norse Myth twist Characters/Pairings: Thor/Loki; Doctor Doom, Heimdallr, Óðinn, the Avengers Warnings: Incest, mpreg, graphic violence, torture, death Rating: NC-17 Summary: The bitterness inside of Loki has been bubbling and growing for millennia. A prophecy is on the verge of being fulfilled and Loki must tread lightly, or all the centuries of careful planning will be undone, but if he can keep his tongue silver and lie well, he will come out of this conflict with the final pieces required to move his plans for revenge forward.

This story takes place partly in Ásgarðr, and partly in Avengers Tower and New York, where a large battle with Fenrir and Jörmungandr will take place.

Pseudo-sibling incest between Thor and Loki. Graphic violence in the form of battle and torment happen, Loki’s children are murdered in some detail, as are torture methods. Mpreg mentioned, but no graphic details.

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