#also op of the original post i'm sure you're perfectly capable as a writer to run with this concept and i'd love to see it !!!

[oloreandil]

i will ramble later about the french death note audio drama in general because. truly i have so many thoughts. but after this post by @smallsinger5901 i simply HAVE to talk about Naomi and Raye's death scene immediately

canonically in the audio drama, the victims manipulated by the death note know that they are not in control of their actions. everything that is not explicitly prohibited by the instructions surrounding their deaths, they can do, but whatever specifications are written down they must obey. if Light, in this case, writes that Raye Penber is not allowed to speak a word after he sends the email asking for the names of his FBI colleagues, then he will leave Naomi in their hotel room without a sound as she asks him where he's going

the whole scene is just. harrowing. they are not even able to speak to the audience to tell us what is going on, everything has to be described in detail by Light (to Ryuk - their conversations replace the internal monologues he has in the manga). this pushes him to be more explicitly cruel, since he has to fully explain his indefensible actions to a god of death that mocks his justifications every step of the way, and Alexis Tomassian's delivery is BONKERS. the way his voice drips with contempt gives me chills each time

Light is not just taking their autonomy away for "his own safety" (so they don't warn L about him), he revels in it. controlling people through the death note is a power trip, that the audience witnesses, unable to do anything about it, just like his victims. right after he writes Naomi's death, he tells her he knows why Raye Penber died. and after describing it, he says:

And I know you want to move and that you want to hit me. I know what you want most of all… to take your gun out of its holster. But none of that will happen, because I orchestrated your last moments already. Everything I'm telling you just proves that I am the one in control here.

(almost) full translation of Raye and Naomi's death scene under the cut. still screaming about it tbh

Light: Hello, Raye

Ryuk: What's going on... why isn't he able to answer ?

Light: Do you remember me, Raye ? I was sitting in that bus, on Christmas Eve, with my friend Yuri.

Ryuk: What did you do to him, Light ? Why isn't he answering ?

Light: My name is Light Yagami. But I imagine you know me under another name, right ?

Ryuk: Oh, I get it... Everything's going according to what you described in the notebook. Let me guess... He can't speak, walks into the train, and waits for you like a robot.

Light: I would love to talk, Raye... so much. But I cannot take that risk. All I needed was your real name, to control you. And that envelope is for me, right ? Thanks.

Ryuk: What's in there ? Hey, what's in there ?

Light: Raye knows already, right, Raye ? This morning, he woke up with the uncontrollable urge to ask his boss for information on the other agents, and to print the list of all their names. All I'm going to do now is sit here for the afternoon, and think about their fate. Don't be afraid, Raye... Everything will go very quick. I'm not a monster.

Ryuk: What about him ? Is he gonna sit and watch you write ?

Light: Correct. He can't move. He will spend the next hour and a half sat here, waiting for the next command from the notebook... Raye won't make a noise while I write the name of all his workmates in the Death Note. And what will happen to them around... let's say, 4:42pm ?

Ryuk: They will all die right this moment... Splendid.

Light: I'm gonna let you in on something, Raye. I will make sure your last moments give you a little bit of joy. Simply touch this notebook, you'll have an idea of what that lunatic saw in the bus before launching himself under a car, ha ha ha. Here you go ! I'll show you the notebook by placing my hand against yours.

Ryuk: Yeah, panic will do... Like the one I can read in your eyes, sweetheart...

Ryuk: Hey Raye, my name is Ryuk, I am a god of death...

[musical interlude]

Light: So that's how it went, Naomi, Raye just sat there. His eyes grew slightly larger, as if he panicked, you know ?

Light: But he couldn't move, just as you now. My instructions were very precise, you know ? When I planned his death, it wasn't just bam, lightning fast, and done.

Ryuk: He could have done that, but he didn't...

Light: No, I needed those names... As soon as I had them, I could do whatever I wanted with these people.

Ryuk: As long as they died in the end. The rest is, one might say, a way out...

Light: Because I can order 11 agents to ask for their colleagues' details to cover my tracks. And I can kill them all at once.

Ryuk: I think Raye got it, at some point.

Light: I think so too... If one could kill with just a look.

Ryuk: Hmm, without a word, Naomi, tight as a clam.

Ryuk: Ha ha ha... If one could kill with just a look !

[Task Force interlude]

Light: All Raye could do was wait until the time had come, then get up.

Light: And he got down from the train at [station].

Ryuk: And then he died...

Light: Yeah, one can say. On the platform.

Ryuk: He held his hand out, like in a bad movie, as if to say "I curse you", or something...

Light: And that is how Raye Penber died - which I regret.

Ryuk: Because he was not a murderer, just like you, Naomi. You were just in the wrong place, at the wrong time. Collateral damage...

Light: But I think you understand, Naomi. I can't let you live, not if I want to carry on with my work ! And I know you want to move, that you want to hit me. I know what you want most of all… to take your gun out of its holster. But none of that will happen, because I orchestrated your last breath already. Everything I'm telling you just proves that I am the one in control here.

Ryuk: What will you do ? You had enough time to write that in your notebook.

Light: Naomi doesn't want to cause trouble...

Ryuk: Will she shoot herself ? Here, in the middle of the street ? Bang !

Light: No. Did you see what I wrote on my first attempt ? I just changed the name. In the next 48 hours, Naomi will commit suicide without anyone knowing. She will make sure her body is never found.

Ryuk: And she will speak to no one, not scream anything...

Light: Exactly. She will simply vanish. I don't know the details, but she's very smart, I'm sure she will prove herself... resourceful.

Ryuk: She must have been a very proper woman.

Light: Yeah. So. Naomi, I think you know what you have to do. Go, now.

Ryuk: And here's how she left... Ha ha ha. A woman on a mission.

Light: Hey, Naomi ? Do you want me to call my father ? Do you still wanna talk to him ? Tell him all about what you've learned today ? He he he. She goes on her way.

Ryuk: She didn't even say goodbye. I hope it was worth it... This new path you're on, it's gonna change everything.

Light: What new path ?

Ryuk: Ha ha ha... from now on you're not just a mere criminal, you're a cop-killer.