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I read the chapter with one eye open last night bcz the other eye got cream inside and was watery but anyway... EVEN WITH ONE EYE I AM STOKED AT HOW FABULOUS THIS ENTIRE CHAPTER WAS OMFG??? That gun sequence???? It was like watching a crossover between the fast and the furious and some 007 action movie sequence where they're chasing and shooting and escaping gahhhhh you wrote that part so amazingly.. The detailing was immaculate right from bullet vests, to how jungkook goes the back and sounds alarm to how the OC was close to literally having a panic attack. The way she gets to namjoon and he soothes her. The perfect calm to her internal storm at that moment.
Also tae with that katana I may need a future shirtless demo or something π this is a very under utilised plot imo
The part where they're all as high as a kite lmaooo.. Honestly this entire sequence was well written. I could see the scenes unfold in front of me and I like that in any story I read.
Namjoon's bath sequence was so soft. That man is so gentle and as warm as a hot butter on toast when he has to be. Him calling yoongi as hubby is also so cute.
Yoongi is always such a gentle guy with OC. However I wish they would kind of settle in some boundary where they stand bcz weren't they fake engaged and now there's a whole poly Amory happy WHICH I'M HAPPY ABOUT BCZ THAT'S WHAT THE WORLD NEEDS. But where do they stand?
Jungkook and OC are gonna be so explosive and I have a feeling I'll be left very sensitive after reading it.. Will there be a taekook OC in the future while namgi π and ππ
I kinda want OC to tell yoongi about Jin's proposition. And for them to finally test everyone's loyalty..
But hear me out mama.. A 2seok hard domming oc to convince her for taking out yoongi while yoongi hides in the corner and then kills JIN while man is still hard like??? *okay this is ridiculous... π * but imagine dying with blue balls? Isn't that worse
I loved this chapter it was superior god tier fabulous just like you π
Where is Jimin though? Has he been set free? *pun pun*
ππππππππππππ βbut hear me out mamaβ took me out π©πππ
THE SEOKJIN BLUE BALL MURDER FANTASY LMAOOOOO i love it. alternate ending, coming this summer to a blog near you!!!!!
Jimin isnβt anywhere mysterious or dangerous, heβs just too delicate to be called to a gun fight. weβll pretend heβs balls deep in some cutie at the club. π₯°π
Yoongi and mc definitely do need to have a conversation!!! especially after all the complicated feelings in this chapter.
iβm so excited that everything read like an action film! these scenes are so difficult to write. i spent the most time while writing this chapter on those first scenes because i was worried about getting them right. π thank you for letting me know what you think!!!!! I HOPE YOUR OTHER IS EYE IS GOOD, BESTIE!!!! thank you for reading with only one eye lololol. ππππππ
shirtless Tae with a katana does sound great. and there is a chance Jungkook and mc will be very explosive. but weβll seeeeeeeee.
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