#I'm probably gonna put her up for downloading regardless

[simplysweetlysimish]

Mother Of Pearl

[sinofwriting]

then I get an idea/inspo and it's off to the races (get it? I think I'm so funny).

honestly very relatable, sometime one(!!) single thing sparks an idea, then the next thing you know it's on your mind 25/8 and suddenly you're writing a whole lot of something that you were absolutely not prepared for but you can't let it go bc they've latched on to your mind🐥. smiled at the joke/gen

The fic your talking about, Made For Each Other, would honestly work well for babytrapping if it wasn't for the fact that reader would happily have Max's kids with only like three months of dating under their belt, lol.

yes! i love that fic so much.(I've actually downloaded it so that i can read it no matter what even when i have no internet😊) i fear that they are too coo coo for cocoa puffs too see that as a problem (me 2🤞 but only fictionally). i could kinda see it for please oh please or maybe even private professor if they didn't immediately get married and live happily ever after(i love them so much, I'm actually tearing up). regardless, i would eat that eat up for them, they're both crazy enough that I could maybe see like a miscommunication issue and then both of them panicking about losing one another and then instantly secretly trying to 'trap' the other into being connected 4ever🤩[talking about made for each other]

idk what max fic ive written is crazier made for each other or causing problems

personally i think it's definitely made for each other!max. max was just being (kinda understandably) weirded out and then possessive + messy in causing problems. while in made for each other he literally saw that girl and said, "yeah that's the love of my life, I will do absolutely anything to make her my wife" and then rearranged everything in his life to make sure that they'd be together. also, he was just overall crazier and that was super hot {gets shot} he definitely takes the cake and there's a spot specially for him in my brain.

There will be more Ollie fics! I have a request for him and an idea of my own for him. Will probably work on one of those after this lestappen fic idea I got yesterday (the press conference was a gold mine)

yay! can't wait!!! {everyone loved that🙂‍↕️}

also, yeah! I would love a nickname💞

adding on to my previous ask, mfeo!max literally (and I quote) thought this about reader being involved with someone else b4 him "He knows that if she had been seeing someone his blood would be boiling everytime his name got brought up or even hinted at" while cproblems!max wasn't that jealous about leclerc!reader and pierre.

speaking of that quote, i would've actually loved to see what he would've done if reader had a boyfriend or was seeing someone(casually!!) while they met. (absolute deranged and unhinged behaviour no doubt) like tried to ruin the person's life or have them taken care of😊 I'm guessing.

I have so many wips (for F1) and my brain coming up with new ideas doesn't help with that. (putting the rest under read more, cause I yap)

Writing Made For Each Other was trip. I went into that and was like... I don't know how people are gonna feel about this. Very happy that you like it! You are not wrong, lol they both are crazy enough about each other that they would try and baby trap each other. Which would honestly I think read as both desperate and funny.

Rereading please, oh please, if I was to write that today, I think that the second part would include Max trying his damndest to get her pregnant, not baby trapping necessarily, but just lots of unprotected sex, hoping that it catches. Or at least him thinking about it.

And yeah you are right. Max in mfeo is crazy (it's okay though, he's cute) while Causing Problems Max is just messy. He's honestly just a guy who learned that his girlfriend/first crush/sexual awakening lost her virginity to her brother's best friend, her friend, and his former teammate... My brain makes some interesting ideas.

He's also not weirded out, just angry because he figured that whoever she lost her virginity too wasn't in her life anymore (y'know what they say about assumptions) and while he does bring up her only being 14 in Charles hotel room with everyone, he's really just using it as an excuse to be mad at Pierre. Pierre threw him a fucking lifeline unintentionally with the whole “Max, your issue with this is the age difference. And I imagine it’s worse because of Kika, yes?” Was he surprised by her being 14? Yeah, but it's established that it was because of Lorenzo and Charles being overprotective nightmares, lol.

Made For Each Other Max is a different breed, lol. I've talked about it before but I think Max in fics is the perfect candidate for love at first sight. He doesn't believe in it but then it happens and that is that. He will be getting that person.

Also this: "He knows that if she had been seeing someone his blood would be boiling every time his name got brought up or even hinted at" insane from me. That is insane behavior from me. But, yeah he is a jealous boy.

I briefly toyed when writing it with her having a boyfriend when they met, but I already had to deal with Kelly and I liked the idea of her being unattached.

But, since you brought it up, if she had... Max would have been fucking insane. She stops him from kissing her and then just a few seconds later stops him from calling Kelly to break up with her just so he can kiss her. If she been seeing someone... well she would have done the same thing but with the added,

"Max," and his name is near breathless and he doesn't know if he wants to feel her lips on his or her lips against his skin again more. "I have to break up with someone, we can't"

Green would have taken over, he'd be grabbing her hand, dragging her out of the party they were at to his hotel, the drunkness he had been feeling gone with her words, and he's texting Kelly that it's over, that he wants what little she has at his gone before he gets back in two days. And when they finally get to his hotel room, he's kissing her, slipping his fingers between her legs and then finally when he's got her on his bed, fully inside her, he'd be making her call who she's been seeing as has her break up with them while he makes her moan his name.

... so yeah it's confirmed that mfeo!Max is fucking insane. Thank you for coming to my ted talk.

Also, nicknaming you 💞 anon. I now have to find what asks are yours and go back and tag them, lol.

[darkx-the-dragon-kn1ght]

Chapter 1- Part 4

Yeah, he had ghostly fog powers and a fedora!! People could probably do a lot of spying with those!

Our first quest before we’ve even gotten our first Pokémon, got it!

Also Ame can you tell me who exactly Julia over there is, I'm still not really sure about that-

You really need to stop telling me that, lady, there is everything to worry about all of this.

That sentence makes no sense, but I’m sticking with it anyways.

Anyways there goes Ame, which just leaves dear ol’ Julia (I say, as if we’ve known her longer than five minutes).

A bomb-loving cheerleader? Sure, I’ll go with this, she seems fun!

I mean, that’s usually the goal with most mainline Pokémon games, real and fan-made, and I’ve got no issues continuing those ambitions here in Reborn City, so- yeah!

…what if I’d said “No” instead-

OH. Bomb-loving cheerleader who is also the Electric-type Gym Leader! …wait she’s gonna have an Electrode isn’t she-

And…this is where the game truly begins! I can now freely move my character and do whatever it is I want or need to do! Let’s see my Trainer Card first-

Again, I expected that though, we did just start the game after all. If you’re wondering why my time’s so high already (over an hour), it’s due to me making these screenshots and writing up my commentary. I should really just do the screenshots and just write little notes to be filled in with real commentary later, but I dunno- I worry I’ll forget what I really wanted to say if I wait like that.

Regardless…look at those numbers where the Badges will (I think) go. One of the things I remember learning about this game is that it does stuff to prevent players from overleveling their Pokémon before a certain Gym- those numbers must be the maximum level caps for the Gyms. It’s nice that the developers put those there for easy reference!

Also- “Opal Ward”? With that and the “Lower Peridot Ward” thing from earlier, I’m certain that’s a location in Reborn City- do they make the Trainer Cards there, hence the emblem? Is the Pokémon League, with the Elite Four and Champion, located there? It’s interesting worldbuilding they’re doing here, I’ll say that much, and I do like it.

But anyways, is there anything in our Bag?

(And yes, I looked at the other tabs too, they also had nothing. Again, to be expected right at the start of the game.)

I also changed the text box and menu borders, we’ll go with this for now and I’ll change it again if I find I don’t like it.

Anyways, that’s enough for right now. I know I just wrote about how I worry about writing notes vs. writing my raw thoughts as they happen, but that whole intro was probably supposed to be like- ten minutes tops, and yet it took me over an hour doing it the way I’m doing now, so I may need to find a way to streamline things after all so I don’t take ten years to play through this whole game. I must reiterate- first time ever doing a screenshot Let’s Play, I’m still figuring stuff out, maybe a little scuffed.

But that doesn’t matter! Because next time, we’ll find this other Trainer, we’ll get our starter, and then we’ll REALLY be set to start our grand revenge quest adventure! The download page said all starters up to Gen VII would be available, and that means I already know exactly who I’ll be choosing. You’ll all see in the next installment, hehehe-

CURRENT TEAM: None, because I have no creatures

NUMBER OF RELOADS: 0 (don’t worry, I’ll explain this in due time)

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[atmymercy]

ASTROLOGY READING FEEDBACK:

You were spot on with the astrology reading and i want to start off by thank you for downloading my chart. That's a lot of work :) I'm indeed a libra rising, however, my sun is in Taurus (&Gemini cusp hehe). You were so right about the consciousness as to what I'm wearing at all times. My mom is a fashionista and although, I prefer comfort, she wants me to show up presentable at all times and it has rubbed off on me. You mentioned that I give off mysterious vibes regardless of what I'm wearing, thanks for saying that. I always look at things from both sides, again so very true. I don't know if I'm charming or sociable though, haven't inherited those libra like traits 😭 I'm socially awkward and have anxiety. Crowds scare me. :3 I like asking a lot of questions like you mentioned. My senior at work resisted punching my face because I bugged her so much haha. Overall, everything you mentioned was super accurate.

It felt amazing to have someone describe me so beautifully, with super intricate details :))))))

P.S. I was gonna drop the review sooner but I was not able to access the ask and I wanted to re-read the reading before dropping feedback sowwie 🥺

hello rebel!

spot on??? omg! yes! that's what i love to hear! especially because astrology is still pretty new to this page! but omg! i'm thinking not for long since if it's going to go this well, i think i'm going to make astrology a more regular thing around here! woot! omg! thank you for making me so excited!

aww! barely any work at all! i enjoyed doing it for you, honey!

ah! fashionista mom! omg! that makes so much sense! but honey, remember with you growing up with a fashionista mom, you probably almost effortlessly put clothes together because it's so second nature to you now! especially with that taurus sun! lol

hmm... i wonder if the crowds thing comes from your taurus sun as well. feeling like a bull in an antique shop, perhaps? don't worry you'll figure out those horns! lol

aww! i'm so happy that i could describe you so beautifully with all these details too, honey! i'm just so happy we could connect and make a fun reading out of it for the both of us! woot! i love it!

love & light!

-tea