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#I LOVE THE MC FOR THIS BOOK. I'D FALL IN LOVE W THEM TOO.
pyrothecary 1 year
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i am finishing heist monaco finallt. and every time there is a scene with sonia
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gutsfics 1 year
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Tobias should have been a canon LI. Where is the Open Heart Book 3 rewrite that the we need? If someone ever kickstarts this project ILW style, I will be the first to donate. I was rereading the series. I got to Book 3 and I had to stop. The characters deserved better. The series deserved so much better. The Open Heart fandom deserved better. There was so much more that PB could have done with the characters if they cared about the player experience. OH was one of Pixelberry's best series and they let it die in the most disappointing way possible. Anyone who is willing to give the story a better ending deserves the Choices fandom's support. It's been ages since we have had a real romance arc on this app.
im fine w Tobias not being a canon LI as i personally headcanon him as aromantic & have him in a queerplatonic relationship w my LOA mc, Reigan, but like other than that HUGE agree
and now i'm gonna use this ask as a reason to talk about what all i would change of book 3 lmao thank u <3
so first of all, there's really no reason for Harper to be part of the diagnostics team besides "whoah oh noeses Ethan is talking with his ex whoopsie oopsie i hope he doesn't fall back in love with her!!!!!1!!111!!!" (which goes nowhere, iirc MC doesn't ever talk really to him about their jealousy) and a few nice friendship moments between her and MC when Tobias and Ethan are being dumb at each other (like when you can choose to side w either E or T during an argument OR ask Harper if she wants to get coffee- i genuinely love that part so much). so i would change it so that instead of the opening on the diagnostics team being because Baz is leaving (which also had no reason to happen), but because Ethan took too long to find a replacement for June
imo it would have been more interesting if Bloom had used Ethan taking the whole 3-month closure of Edenbrook to decide on a new team member as an excuse to try and get more hands on with the DT. so like right after Ethan, Baz and MC sit down the first day back he should have just showed up w Tobias & made that new rule about voting on cases. i did like the feud between Bloom and Ethan though, the writers just majorly dropped the ball there. and kept dropping it the whole book.
I'd also remove all of the parts where the MC just straight up ditches work to go play with their friends. it felt so wrong that the MC fought so hard to get to the place where they're at just for them to blow of work every five seconds bc Jackie and Sienna want to go shopping or Bryce wants to drive a fancy car or whatever. or i'd like change it so it happens on days off or after their shift is over.
+ the diamond scene in ch1 where MC and their friends are enjoying all of the amenities that Bloom added for employees, I would have loved the option to be more wary of them, a lot of them seemed like a distraction, like the video games in the breakroom
like imagine ur surgeon being late to ur life-saving surgery bc they were too busy playing mario kart or whatever
i would say there should have been another Big Important Disaster but honestly Rafael has already been through enough with the first two book's Big Disasters being somewhat focused on him
also the fuckin uuuuuuh. patient suing Ethan over medical malpractice plotline?
100% should have been Ethan's fault.
having Naveen actually be the one who did it feels kinda.... racist??? a little bit????? like god forbid PB's Specialest White Boy do something wrong and face the consequences for it
i have more qualms with this book but i am gonna be honest: i straight up do not remember most of the book. it was such a nothing end to such a good series
i did like being able to do that team building exercise w jackie's group. Dr Gary Garison, my beloved, i'm so glad i got to see you for one single scene this whole book
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usertala 3 years
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ask: Do you do angst? If not ignore!I鈥檓 up to the part where Luci has amnesia and they鈥檙e talking about separating the pacts, brothers are comforting MC saying they won鈥檛 feel any different鈥magine if the pacts were separated and while the brothers still see MC as family, the MC doesn鈥檛. The MCs emotions were completely bc of the packs and without them they鈥檙e afraid/don鈥檛 like the brothers
afton notes: hi anon! im sorry i couldn't really write it the way you wanted. I kept writing and re-writing it as it wasn't that good, so it ended up as MC saying their goodbye's to the brothers as the MC knows their feelings would vanish as soon as the packs are removed. This is what I've decided on as we're at the same part (i can't play it rn my cards are too weak)
Characters: Lucifer, Mammon, Leviathan, Satan
Genre: Angst, hurt/comfort (?)
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Lucifer
As you softly clutched Lucifer's hand, you could feel your tears pouring down your cheeks. Since Barbatos had put him to sleep, he hadn't awoken. Everyone else is undoubtedly sound sleeping by now, so no one could enter his room for the time being.
"I hated you at first, you know? I hated the way you handled things, how you punished your brothers, and how you treated me at first. I never imagined things would turn out this way in my life... I love you, Lucifer. I hope you continue to love me. I'm confident the moment you open your eyes, it'll be me who won't remember anything. I hope you'll be patient with me, as I was with you. I love you, darling." You lay down next to him. One last time, basked in his warmth.
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Mammon
You feel like you're about to faint from how much you're crying, not to mention Mammon's tight hug. Out of all the brothers, he was the one who protested about breaking the pacts, and you couldn't help but feel thankful to him.
You cry as you try your best to talk, "Y-you have to be by my side, Mammon. Don't leave me, please. I love you, don't leave me... You won't leave me, right?" You look up from his chest just to see him crying just as much as you, "O-of course! I'm your first man- fucking hell, I don't want you to forget me, MC! We've been through so much together. I don't want you to forget those memories! But I promise, I'll stay by your side. Screw those memories! We'll make new and better ones!"
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Leviathan
As much as you want to breakdown and tell him all your fears, you know it would be a bad idea. You settle for a bittersweet smile. The process hasn't even started, and yet he can't even look at your eyes. What
"W-what if when you forget me, you'll realize how much of a worthless shut-in otaku I am? What if you change your mind and don't want to be in a relationship anymore? What would I do then, MC?" He starts crying, holding his tail like a security blanket. "That won't ever happen, Levi. I may lose my memories, but I'll still be the same MC you fell in love with. Amnesia or not, I'll always find my way back to you. "
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Satan
He feels like destroying his entire room, a room full of worthless books to help your case. He feels his heart sink when you quietly enter his room. You had a smile on your face, but your eyes looked like you wanted to run into his arms and cry.
"So, I'll forget everything, huh? How awful..." The dam finally breaks as you fall onto the floor crying, Satan immediately stands up to comfort you, letting out a bittersweet laugh. "Who could've imagined I'd be balling my eyes out because of a demon? A demon I fell hopelessly in love with... Do you feel the same way?" Feeling him nod, you continue, "I'm not that concerned about forgetting everything... I'm heartbroken that we have to start back at step one. I can't imagine how hurt you'll be, Satan. I'm so sorry."
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minzart 3 years
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Idk if your asks are open you can delete if so... but what about kogal!mc?
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Mc gets on with everyone that may or may not make the first years jealous.
Heartslabyul mob: hey mc!
First years: *defense mode activate*
Mc: hi-hi~ ya need something?
Heartslabyul mob: *rubbing back of his neck* I uh wanted to thank you for the notes.. you really saved my as today! So... here! *gives mc bag of cookies*
Mc: wah~ no worries! Glade to help!
Ace: eh? Who was that?
Mc: oh thats 'heartslabyul mob' I lent him some notes
Deuce:*chuckling* your pretty popular huh?
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Epel: so then after the show he-
Savanaclaw mob: kantokusei!
Sebek: huh? What do you need?
Savanaclaw mob: woah- chilax... dude... so anyways *handing mc fashion magazines* you said you wanted to borrow these the other day
Mc: OH MY 7'S! THANK YOU THANK YOU! *hugging Savanaclaw mob*
Savanaclaw mob: *blushing* y-yeah..
Jack: you really get along with everyone..
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Ace: Mc let-
Floyd: Shrimpy~let's play!
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Epel: hey m-
Carter: mccc! Let's take pictures together~
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Jack: m-
Rook: Bonjour, Trickster~ Vil asked me to come fetch you~
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First years: *crying* MCCC!
Ace: I'VE HAD ENOUGH!
Mc: *???*
Epel: so cruel...
Sebek: MEN ARE WOLVES MC! IF YOU GET TOO COMFORTABLE THEY'LL EAT YOU!
Ace: yeah!
Jack: WE'RE GUYS TO YOU IDIOT!
Ace+Sebek: *falling to the ground* YOU'RE RIGHT!
First years: *on the floor crying*
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Loves messing with the shy boys
Mc: *sneaking up behind idia* Idia sempai~
Idia: *explodes* WAH!
Mc: *pressing their chest on his back* I have something to give you~
Idia: *unlocked achievement* w-what?
Mc: remember last month when I came to ignhyde..?
Idia: *melting* y-yeah.. and you took my jacket t-to!
Mc: well~ I thought I'd be nice and give it back to you *gives jacket that was bombed by mc's perfume*
Idia: *fuckin dies*
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Mc: *leaning on riddle* wah~ it's so hot!
Riddle: then get off me!
Mc: *whining* dontcha got wind magic? Blow some wind my way!
Riddle: NO I HAVE FIRE MAGIC!
Mc: THATS WORSE! *taking cardigan off*
Riddle: WAIT!
Mc: *unbuttoning shirt* huh? *taking off socks*
Riddle: *blushing* STOP STRIPING!
Mc: *smirking* eh~ wanna take it to a more prive-
Riddle: OFF WITH YOUR HEAD!
Mc: *got collared*
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Jamil: *minding his own business*
Mc: *blowing air into his ear*
Jamil: AHH! *clutching chest* m-mc...
Mc: I'm bored.. entertain me.
Jamil: that's above my pay grade
Mc: *starts playing with is hair* please~
Jamil: *starts blushing* no. *pushing mc away*
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Azul: now onto payment...
Mc: *taking of shirt*
Azul: *blushing* WAIT WAIT! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?
Mc: payment~
Azul: NO! I-I MEAN LIKE WORKING AT THE LOUNGE...
Mc: no fun...
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Vil wanting to fix mc bad dye job
Vil: where did you get this done?
Mc: at home... why?
Vil: yourself?
Mc: *deadpan* no a monkey
Vil: *hits Mc head* I don't like that mouth of yours
Vil: it's all patchy.. I'm surprised you don't melt your hair potato
Mc: I'm built different
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Carter and Mc being shady together
Cater: OM7! Mc didya hear! *whispering*
Mc: *gasp* really and then what?
Cater: he caught him in the broom closet with *whispering*
Mc: I HELPED THEM GET TOGETHER TO!
Cater: RIGHT!
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Kalim: *running arms outstretched* BESTFRIEN!
Mc: BESTFRIEN!
Mc and kalim: *tackle hug eachother*
Idia: TOO BRIGHT!
Jamil: *wearing sunglasses* you'll get use to it
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Mc making the first years matching onesies for sleepovers
Epel: *crossing arms* i'm not putting that on
Mc: *puppy eyes* epeel You're the only one not wearing it!
Ace: *with slight blush* yeah epel! Come on!
Deuce: even Sebek and Jack are wearing them!
Ace: Mc took so long to make these for us
Epel: FINE!
Mc: YAY!
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Epel: *coming out of the bathroom in lilac bunny onesie*
Mc: let's take pictures!
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Headcanon time:
Mc got gifted an expensive black leather shoulder book bag from malleus; slowly accumulated charms and stickers
If mc female she'll tease the boys while walking up stairs 'ehh~ like the view?'
Mc signature sent is warm vanilla but sometimes goes for a fruity sent
Gets acrylic nails all the time
Makeup skills that rivals vil
Grim is a pampered baby
Mid at cooking but comfort foods go brr
Cater and mc have a phone case war
Loves to bully Crowley 'you old pervert'
Vil ages ten years everytime mc dyes their hair a different color
'Take notes' *Mc pulls out pencil case full of colorful pens and pecils*
Matching crocs with Carter and kalim
Adeuce and mc will send eachother meme even though their next to eachother
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Ngl I just had the best grilled cheese 馃ゴ馃馃徑
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