#-- and so reflective of y/n's character /pos in a way of how she was completely relying on this to turn her life around
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causenessus · 4 months ago
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i definitely got way too deep into this and started my aforementioned 2 hour long video essay analysis of drunk walk home so here's the rest of my tags that don't fit </3
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DRUNK WALK HOME
chapter one: morning after
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“i hear my heart breaking tonight / do you hear it too?” -pink in the night by mitski
cw: mention of/implied drinking problem
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extras!
mattsun and tendou are #1 yn defenders for life it does not matter if she is wrong/in the wrong (and she is the majority of the time)
yn spent a good chunk of time on her own drinking herself into oblivion and trying not to care about the fact that she was crying in public before she called tendou
akaashi yn beef is deep and long-running (we will absolutely get into it)
he has not filter when it comes to yn and he hardly even tries
yn is still nursing that hangover and has not even once asked for her phone back she is too nervous and humiliated to even look at it
this is kinda chaotic and messy and it was kinda supposed to be but im sorry if this sucks im not confident abt it yet lol
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#THE SONG RECCS <3#ILY MITSKI#PINK IN THE NIGHT AAAAAAAAAAAAA#i totally understand still like getting a feel for the smau and everything but i think you should feel confident in it!!! /pos /gen#or to word it better i hope you feel confident in it soon <3#in every single way like i cannot describe how good this is already#the way that all of her friends obviously care for her and her reaction to rejection is so important and detailed --#-- and so reflective of y/n's character /pos in a way of how she was completely relying on this to turn her life around#but because she was rejected things have just gone south instead. yk?#tendou being the sweetest friend ever#kuroo not being able to read the room whatsoever#i love how you write bokuto and akaashi's dynamic. like obviously this is different from 35 mm#but in both of them you've just written their interactions and messages so in character#like they are very constant /pos in a way of you just never miss !!!#i felt so sick /pos reading everyone's texts especially bokuto's like ik he cares but i'd definitely get wasted and die after that too </3#and i genuinely cannot wait to read about what yn's next moves will be. the beef between her and keiji#and like if she's going to show up to these tutoring sessions of her own will or just because she's forced to#the entire idea and the themes of this smau are already so wonderful and profound /pos you're doing amazing as always !!!#i feel like i could make a two hour long video essay analysis on just these chapters alone#i am always so inspired and amazed by how incredibly thoughtful and human your writing is#like the way i can attempt to describe your author's voice (although there is so much i could say <3)#is that you can see how insightful and emotionally intelligent you are#each of your characters and stories are all so different. they are all different “takes” on characters#bc they're placed in different situations#(by characters rn i'm talking about everyone besides y/n we'll get to her)#and ik i've said this before but at the same time again you write them so constant. you write them so accurately#how they would respond to these different situations they were put in and how they move on past it#you write it all perfectly! and there's is so much emotion and knowledge put into your writing#and i am just forever grateful that i get the opportunity to read your works because i always feel like i learn so much from them#like about just being human. i feel like i'm talking to *actual* people i never have before and learning from them
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lets-get-kraken-boys · 2 years ago
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If you ever were to a write a story involving Class 1-A in a platonic and non yandere-ish relationship with a female reader/oc that came to U.A with intentions of destroying the school and everyone in it and then moving on to the pros but then their plans gets completely flipped on its head mainly due to Class 1-A being their adorkable selves and actually accepting her for as she is, but will be challenged by the reader/oc which results in her death; how would you do it?
This platonic relationship also extends to Hitoshi Shinsou and Mei Hatsume. Also Dadzawa and a fatherly Power Loader. The reader/oc is quirkless and has an Iron Man like scorpion suit.
First and foremost, I want to apologize for the long-awaited response! This has been sitting in my ask box for more than a few days, sorry about that. Now, onto business!
This is quite the story idea! I say that because some of the basics of writing is having a flushed out rough draft of an idea of what you want to write about. You do not have to have all of the parts of the story entirely thought out/ready to be seriously wrote down, but it is good to have a foundation of an idea (based on the Freytag's Pyramid; Exposition/Introduction, Rising Action, Climax, Falling Action, Resolution/Cliffhanger, etc.) It seems like you know what you want to write about, which is awesome!
Character expression in Reader/(Y/N) is extremely important because it entails how the other characters will react to the (Y/N). Now, if it is an OC you're writing about, you most likely already know how they behave since you created them (mean, nice, kind, ditzy, etc.), so you will have an easier time writing them. However, (Y/N) [at least, to me] is meant to represent everyone who reads it. They are someone who you have no idea exactly how they act or how they look. Defining their personality through speech is much better than blatantly spelling it out for your readers (i.e. Don't just write "they are mean & cold-hearted", rather, try having them speak to the characters like, "Just stay out of my way, got it?" "I'm a part of your class, but that doesn't mean we're friends." "You really have no idea how cruel this world really can be, do you?"). And their personality can be anything! They can be rude, they can be quiet & shy, they can be loud & rowdy, they can be peppy & cheerful to hide their ulterior motives (kind of like Toga)! Just because they are planning to destroy the school, doesn't mean they automatically have to act dark and depressing!
Looping back to how they interact with UA students, it can affect your story quite significantly. You mentioned the students made them want to change their ways, so the interactions and conversations that Reader/OC has with them should reflect that switch flicking in their mind. Because, at the end of the day, destroying a large building and possibly killing those who are inside (plus, planning to move on after that point and hurt/kill even more people in an even higher position of power) is not a decision that is typically made flippantly. It takes time to think of the plan and get all the supplies needed to carry it out. They had to infiltrate a school system filled with thriving young heroes-in-the-making while staying under the radar from pro heroes who work at the school. What could the students of Class 1-A & 1-B do that made them change their opinion so drastically, and frankly, so quickly since the school year does not last that long?
Another question I have that you should flush out in your story is why do they want to destroy the school, as well as the heroes? Of course, they could be tearing it down for no other reason than to simply watch the world burn for enjoyment, but even that is considered doing it for a reason. They did it because it made them happy, excited. Did the heroes wrong them? Did someone in UA hurt or bully them? Do they not like how their society gives pro heroes so much power in the system, sometimes even higher than that of the police? There are a multitude of reasons they could be doing it, you just have to pick one and have Reader/OC stick by it!
Be careful how you write the Reader/OC if you are still planning to make them Quirkless. There is nothing wrong with wanting to write them in that way, you just have to be cautious of it. I assume they are trying to keep a low profile because of their plans to destroy the school, but making them the literal only person in that school who is Quirkless (you can argue that Izuku once was Quirkless and made it into the school, but he's not anymore, thanks to OFA. That Quirk is what got him into UA in the first place) & they are in Class 1-A? That will draw a lot of eyes from the higher-ups on them. They will be noticed and talked about A LOT, not just by the other students/pro hero teachers but also by the public, because of them being Quirkless in this prestigious school & in the top class of their grade. Plus, there are a few times in Aizawa's training with Class 1-A that does not allow hero costumes/equipment that helps boost their Quirk. Of course, since Reader/OC is Quirkless, he may make an exception, but I highly doubt it because of Aizawa's nature. Though they did let Mei use her gadgets in the Sports Festival, they only did that because she made them herself. Plus, Mei has a Quirk, one she uses to enhance the machinery she makes. Did Reader/OC make their suit. or did someone else make it for her? It is a cool idea with the metal suit, don't get me wrong, just think about how you will write it to make sense.
Speaking of Mei! If you still want to write them as friends, I would especially buckle down on their friendship. It seems like both of them are nerdy about machinery, so that could be a great starting point for their friendship to blossom. Also, regarding the rest of the students you mentioned; you said in your ask that they would "accept her for who she is", but I am confused about what you meant. Do they know that she is trying to destroy not only UA, but also the Heroes Association? Because, if they do, I can think of multiple characters just within Class 1-A who would not let that happen. Is that what you mean by "challenged by Reader/OC"? That they duke it out and they are the ones to kill her? If you are trying to have the students be the one to be Reader's/OC's demise, that's an eye-catching idea, but think about and write about the repercussions of their actions. It is possible that, since they killed one of their classmates/a minor even though they are also minors (evil, or not), they could fully lose their Hero License because they are still not fully Pro Heroes yet. They might be shamed as murderers by the public who don't know the full situation. Plus, if they grow close with her & then have to kill her, the psychological damage that would occur would severely fuck them up. Again, it is not bad to write about these dark and gritty topics! We need them in the world of fanfiction! It all depends how you go about it.
I have a few tips from when I was writing my story!
IT IS GOING TO TAKE TIME! That Yandere Class 1-A story DID NOT happen overnight (as much as I would have liked it to). More like months of multiple hours of writing. Do not feel bad that it is taking time to execute the story, especially if you write for all of the members of Class 1-A, you are doing your best.
Take breaks! There were times I took a few weeks away from writing the story because I was so burnt out of writing it, especially near the end. Allowing yourself to write on something other than that is somewhat therapeutic too.
Inspiration & creativity come and go day-to-day. Sometimes I had an amazing idea and I spent hours cramming it in until I was satisfied; other times I sat frustrated in front of the computer for upwards an hour with a blank page, trying to force a creative thought to come to mind. Don't waste your time, the story will come to you when it is ready. Don't try to force creativity, or you will not be happy with the outcome!
You might have to rewrite a word, a sentence, an entire paragraph, an entire page, or maybe even the entire story if you are not happy with it; but that is okay! I had to rewrite an entire page more than a few times during the Yandere Class 1-A story. Believe me, it was heartbreaking and incredibly discouraging; you work so hard on this just for it to turn out crappy or not make sense and the only solution is to scrap and restart. But I did it because I truly cared about the story. I wanted it to be the way I had originally imagined it going, and I hated the way I had shifted the plot. And, after rewriting it, I was happy again. I have no regrets and I'm still extremely satisfied with the way it ended up. Make those choices out of love for your story, even if it hurts.
That is pretty much all I have to say at the moment. I hope some of what I said was helpful LOL! Whew, I kinda went off on a tangent there! Please, if you need more help/advice, don't be afraid to shoot me a message in my inbox or, if you prefer to say anonymous, keep asking me questions through my asks. Also, if you need someone to edit your work, I am available! Just send a message to me and we can work something out. I hope your writing goes smoothly; I know the finished product will be spectacular! Have a wonderful day, thank you for the ask!
With Love,
Kraken 🐙
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welldonebeca · 6 years ago
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Unexpectedly (Prologue)
Summary: Getting married to Dean Winchester was never in your plans but a princess has to do what the people expect from you. It was also never in your plans that he would be a man so different from what you had first imagined, or that he would captivate you so easily. Maybe it’s not such a bad thing to be married to him, after all. Pairing: Princess!Reader x Dean Winchester Other Characters: Queen!Amara, unnamed handmaid Word Counting: 430 words Chapter: 1/8 Story warnings: Game of Thrones-ish, Medieval AU, Arranged Marriage, Past Amara/Chuck Shurley, Amara and Chuck are not related, Mentions of Loss of Parent(s), Smut (Gentle Sex, fingering, loss of virginity)
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“Y/N,” you heard and turned to look at your stepmother, her eyes staring deeply into yours. “What are you thinking?”
“Nothing, Amara.”
Amara gave you a small smile, watching you through the mirror. Your wedding dress fitted you like a glove, bringing your breasts up and squeezing you so tightly you could barely breathe. The golden necklace you’ve gotten as a gift this morning from your mother-in-law matched the details of the fabric covering you and made it look a lot richer, and your face was coated in makeup to make you look your best.
“You look beautiful,” she affirmed, checking your hair to see if there was anything out of place.
You were getting married to a man you’d never met. Your stepmother and grandfather had arranged a political alliance with the Winchesters and you had a duty to fulfil. 
“Lord Dean will fall for you as soon as you enter the chapel.” your handmaid affirmed, standing by your side and straightening your dress back.
“Are you sure?’ you questioned, feeling hesitant.
Amara shook her head, seeing in you the same fear she had had the day she married your father, long ago.
“Maybe,” she touched your back. ”But it doesn’t matter, does it?”
You stared at your reflection for a moment.
“No, Amara.”
Your brother was king and your role was to be a good princess. Your happiness didn’t matter, your duty did.
You were King Chuck’s first child, a daughter born before his first wife - your mother -  had died. And the apple of his eyes for a long time.
If the world was fair, you would be his heir and the queen; however, you were just a woman. If he hadn't had any children with his second wife, Amara, you'd be in the throne now, but that wasn't what had happened. You couldn’t raise a sword or defend your own honour with your hands if your life depended on it, and didn't have supporters enough to start a war, but knew your beauty was a weapon and you knew this was the best option you had in your life now. 
The best weapon you have is between your legs – Amara had told you the day you had flowered, dismissing how you were completely terrified of the blood coming out of you– your beauty will take you anywhere you want if you use it the right way.
She had taught you what she thought you needed to know.
“Come,” she offered you a hand as the soldier opened the door of the room you were in. “They are waiting for us.”
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