#sorry im not good at dialogue

[pedrigavi]

a night to regret pt. 2

pablo gavi x reader

part 1 here

wc: 566

warnings: angst, bad dialogue (im not a writer im sorry im trying my best), swearing but not too much

pictures of last night kept blowing up your phone. your boyfriend pablo with a girl you didn’t recognize, pretty sure he had not met her before last night, but that didn’t stop him from having her in his lap.

you had spent all your tears crying at pedri’s house, feeling guilty because of a fight with pablo that you couldn’t even remember this morning. you know gavi had called you, you heard pedri talking to him on the phone while you were trying not to fall asleep once again on his couch, tired and feeling a headache come from all the crying. 

you went home as soon as pedri hung up, just wanting to find your boyfriend in your bed and wanting to leave every piece of anger behind. your relationship felt more important than that. 

except when you came home, pablo wasn’t there, he wasn’t in bed, nor on the couch, nowhere to be seen. you didn’t call him, maybe that was your mistake. 

now you knew where he was, in the club, too close to someone else for him to think about missing you, maybe that was his mistake. 

you didn’t know what to feel, betrayed, angry, mostly just hurt. how could he do this? 

while you were trying to gather your thoughts, you heard the keys turn in the door.

pablo. 

“hey”

“hey? you are pictured with another girl in your lap and all you can say is hey?”

“i’m sorry” he pleaded “i can explain, you were with pedri, and i was angry, and i love you but i don’t know how to-”

you cut him off. “i was with pedri because you left me alone, i didn’t leave you, i didn’t turn away from you” you tried to stop the tears but it was too late. 

after a moment of silence, he sighed and said “i know”. and that he did, he knew, he knew he had to hold you, no, he needed to hold you, to feel you close, as if he could never hold his girlfriend after this, as this was his last chance.

“did you kiss her?” you asked scared. 

“i was mad, but i would never do that to you, you have to believe me, please” he looked sincere, you thought, his eyes could never lie to you, you knew them all too well. you had spent too many hours studying his face, all the colors in his eyes, and counting his eyelashes. 

you had nothing left to say, so you just kissed him, he wasn’t forgiven, pablo knew that, but he didn’t care. he would do anything to keep having the privilege to kiss you, 

“last night won’t ever happen again, or you will never hear from me again, understood?”

pablo smiled softly and nodded. he understood. still too scared to talk and fuck it up. 

so he did the next best thing he could think of, picked you up, carried you both to your shared bed, and held you until you fell asleep. 

pablo didn’t feel like sleeping, so he just admired how the light hit your face, and cursed himself for almost forgetting what seeing your face did to him. 

he regretted the previous night, and even if he couldn’t erase it from both of your brains, he knew he could make every next night you’d both share from now on much more memorable.

[pbnmj]

THE NOIR-HOBIE INTERACTIONS THAT I MADE UP IN MY MIND ARE VERY REAL TO ME. SONY PLEASE PICK UP WHAT I’M PUTTING DOWN!!!

[xxplastic-cubexx]

[right to left]

finally finished This Wip from Ever ago and so now i ask you ever look into another dudes eyes and suddenly want to do whatever he wants

[b4kuch1n]

study of this masterwork

[panakoui]

post canon laishuro prelude :>

[blanketfortz]

like looking in a mirror

[gryffindraws]

i finally finished the comic i started back in october? i based it around the idea that aziraphale secretly planned the dance to confess to crowley <3 this comic was went though a few stylistic changes as i learned more about drawing the characters and the comic itself. so i apolgise for the weird continuity, this was genuinely just a fun little project tat turned into something I'm really proud of. as an aside, i will be running a dtiys for the last panel on my instagram @gryffin_draws sometime next week!

page text:

page one: Aziraphale: We're perfectly safe!

Crowley: No, we're not! We need to work out what to do

A: I have a plan. Besides... I think you're overestimating how much danger we're actually in

Page two: C: Angel, what are we doing?

A: Dancing? What does it look like?

C: Why the ball plot? Do Nina and Maggie really [need] a ball?

Page three: C: What do you mean? Who else would it be for?

A: Crowley

C: Angel?

Page five:

C: Did you set up a whole ball... to set us up?

A: Uh...

C: Ha! Hahaha! *Snort*

A: Stop laughing!

Page six:

C How can someone as clever as you be so silly?!

A: W-what? Oh, do stop teasing, dear?

C: Angel, you already had me.

page seven:

A: Do you mean it?

C: what have we been doing for 6000 years?

Page eight:

A: Dancing around each other?

C: Oh, you're such a bastard

A: My dear?

C: I guess there's only one thing left.

A: what's that?

Page nine:

C: Lead on, angel

[greencatalystcomet]

im so excited for one year from now when there's an abundance of really long, like 100k+ word deadpool/wolverine fanfiction because. there is currently a drought

[hiphopcherrrypop]

"second coming of christ" + it's saint young men jesus

[undefeatablesin]

Like just about everyone else does, the Good Hunter Ruza finds Lady Maria very ✨️compelling✨️

[natsmagi]

honestly the more i hear about engstars and its TLs the more i absolutely dread the inevitable release of poltergeist and what may ensue from it, bc if if the translators themselves are already invalidating arashis identity then i Really Truly do not want to see how theyll translate natsume and tsumugis microaggressions/transphobia towards her. esp since ive noticed a rise in people being comfortably transphobic towards her, and i REALLY do not wish to see natsume and tsumugi being stupid fucking morons be used as evidence to discredit her

and i think this is all the more reason why its VERY IMPORTANT for engstars to DIRECTLY ACKNOWLEDGE arashi and her gender. bc sometimes characters are STUPID and RUDE and APATHETIC. enstars is a story with NUANCED and FLAWED CHARACTERS, and when a character is being a fucking asshole youre meant to PROVE THEM WRONG. but they dont even acknowledge arashi as a girl themselves. so, if you do use engstars, please keep pressuring them bc omfg this is so bad and i can only see it getting worse

[redlyriumidol]

a lot of the writing around sera is not great, more so in the sense that it's ~problematic~ or insensitive, but as someone who has spent time trying to emulate sera's speech patterns in writing, there are so many moments of brilliance where I've had to stop and say "how did that guy come up with this." a lot of sera's dialogue is just very creatively and cleverly written, imo. I consider myself pretty decent at writing specific accents/dialects but what makes sera difficult is she has her own dialect that this guy made up for her, her own way of speaking that is uniquely sera and matches no known dialect known to man or god. which makes absolute sense for her character, someone who has grown up with such a varied hodgepodge of influences and who sees and understands the world in a particular way that nobody else does.

this is just from an objective standpoint about sera's dialogue itself, i obviously have issues with a lot of her writing. particularly the dialogue choices in response to sera and the way I think her character arc was mishandled (or not handled, as it were.) but I personally don't think she was entirely terribly written. just because there are so many times when i see her dialogue and i'm like ughh that's so good.

[squuote]

comparing dialogue once again as you do. anyway. this cut dialogue from the other games ending vs the the 2011/ultra deluxe final game dialogue is interesting. frying my mind a bit.

no deeper meaning to this post i just think it is. intriguing. i love dialogue comparisons sorry </3

[robotsafari]

redrawing my favorite gba chain of memories scenes with my own interpretations part 1(?):

“You’re thinking about me… You’re afraid of the darkness I command.”

[snailasleep]

why does vash carry cigarettes if he never smokes?

extra comic

if it makes anyone feel better heres what i named some of the layers for this comic

also panels i liked!

see you, vash! until next time!

[bigkickguy]

some daan marcoh doodles around some dialogue bits I hit in game haha - gave me some thoughts on how one could think of daan if you only bumped into him at certain points? I don't remember the lines exactly but there were a few like this? 'Are you moving on? I guess we'll split ways here.' 'Someone has figure out how to treat these people...'

'You were very heroic stepping in there.' 'In the dark, your thoughts can really get to you out here...' 'Am... I... still a good man? Or...'