So I reworked my story "Bringing back the sun" a bit.
I wanted to have Jackie feel like Jackie so I did my best to look up how is speach pattern is and changed some dialoges, small mistakes and stuff that just sounded off.
I want the people who read it have the feeling Jackie in this story IS Jackie and not just someone with the same name but totaly different characteristics. It won't be perfect because I just can't really get why he says stuff in some ways. I think it mighty be because english isn't my first language so, please don't judge too hard.
AND I finally somehow learned how to put pictures in the chapter! So you might see some pictures that are like the covers. The pics aren't 100% right because... well.. there aren't the clothes as mods I discribe in the Story. So please take the covers more as a "get a feeling for the chapter" than exact pictures out of it.
If you have read it before: The story is completley the same :) Jackie talks just different, so if you say thats fine by you, there is no need to reread it.
First time reader: Welcome! Have fun reading it, I hope it won't dissapoint.
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We do NOT give Jackie Tyler and Mickey Smith their props for their character growth in the Parting of the Ways. Rose is absolutely amazing, an absolute ferocious beacon of hope and stubbornness and bravery in the finale, the absolute reason why the Doctor lives and the world is saved and an equal hero to Nine, but she has a moment of doubt. A moment of hesitancy.
And Mickey Smith and Jackie Tyler step in and help her save the day. Both Mickey and Jackie give up on their idea of Rose and their hatred of the Doctor and help her pull open the TARDIS. Even within this one episode we see them struggle with their feelings and decide to put them aside and help do this because Rose is right- this is a better way of living your life.
Doctor Who is about ordinary people making extraordinary decisions and making themselves extraordinary and this doesn't just apply to official companions (who I love with all my might)- it applies to the people they love, too. We see it over and over again in Davies' era, with Jackie and Mickey and Sylvia and Tish and Wilfred and Francine and Harriet Jones and every one-off character as well, from Lynda-with-a-Y to Jabe to Gwyneth to Novice Hame to McDonnell to Sally to Chantho to Nancy to all the rest.
Doctor Who is at its strongest when the story is focused on the strength of the bleeding, beating heart of humanity (and character in general, in its non-humans), when the characters drive the story, when at the end of the day you understand why, for all of the world's flaws, the Doctor comes back over and over again because of people like this- not just his companions, but the Jackies and Mickeys and all the rest of the world.
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shauna never fully letting go of jackie and her and jeff visiting her parents on her birthday every year. misty being willing to do anything for nat. lottie saving nat’s life. van writing i love you to tai in her blood. shauna crying when she realizes that she has to kill nat. the other version of tai whispering “go to her” and leading her to van. lottie getting beat up just to make shauna feel better. shauna and van not letting tai sleepwalk. misty being with nat when she finds travis’ body. tai paying for nat’s rehab and doing whatever she can for her. ALL OF THE SURVIVORS DANCING TOGETHER IN THE SNOW THAT TRIED TO KILL THEM 25 YEARS AGO IT’S NOT A LOVE STORY BUT IT’S A STORY THAT HAS LOVE IN IT ARE YOU GETTING WHAT I’M TRYING TO SAY??
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cant believe i didn't post this one here, my bad.. kiss and makeup, sort of.
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you're mine
this came to me in a dream and i HAD to draw it
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was about to sound incoherent so i will just settle on: jackie is somehow gayest in this specific scene
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