#like thers some flow issues and whatever but this thing is in my phone and i hate it like that but i have to finish it | Explore Tumblr posts and blogs

waywardsalt · 1 year ago

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so ive been writing out the scene meant to be when linebeck and damien first meet as kids, and in addition to just. being rusty with writing the dialogue of children. i need to figure out how to write the dialogue of five year olds who don’t understand how fucked the situation that one of them is in is

#salty talks #like thers some flow issues and whatever but this thing is in my phone and i hate it like that but i have to finish it #like. theyre both five and briefly talk about their families and its like #linebeck mentions that he doesnt have a dad around and that his mom usually isnt home for days at a time #and damiens like oh thats weird and linebecks like oh i didnt know that ok and they move on #bc they dont yet understand what child neglect is and arent old enough to recognize how fucked it is #its a short scene and its mostly. subtext? implication? that linebecks home situation is Not Good esp cuz its from his perspective #idk its just a short scene ill rework it on desktop oncr i finish it #fun writing update ig? i have a hard time thinkking of linebeck and damien stuff to write but i have a lot of drafts with em

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