#if not the climax of the entire story
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obsessed with trying to figure out who sent baxter this e-mail
there’s not a whole lot to go on...... about all I can piece together is that whoever sent it has a mouse motif going on 🐁 based on the pfp and the 3 “ears” on their emoticons... and this lady is the only person I feel like I’ve seen that has that going on even a little bit
Which SEEMS perfectly plausible, if a bit of a stretch... it feels a bit odd, though, since she’s a member of the cult.
I guess that’s not that unusual, though. The death cult is SECRET, so it wouldn’t be THAT weird for members to have friends on the outside who seem to be completely oblivious to the supernatural goings on in Mayview.
#paranatural spoilers#i don't know why i even made this post!#i just like hunting for clues to try and deduce mysteries#since i SWEAR chapter 8 feels like it's building up to a big paradigm shift#if not the climax of the entire story#i feel like we're over the hill when it comes to introducing more wholly new characters?#like#it feels like from here on out a mystery person#is more likely to be someone we're already familiar with#than some entirely new human being we've never seen before
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#see the issue is i feel like that isnt the main problem with kabuto here lmao#I've been gone for so long but ahem. as a kabuto scholar-#i feel like kabuto's main issue is that he was forced into this position by literally every outside force around him#the leaf village tried to kill him. he had no choice but to stay with orochimaru. after orochimaru died he had -nowhere to go-#but at this point in the story kishimoto doesn't want to acknowledge the problems with ninja society that led kabuto here#and that's why this explanation falls so flat to me#the most kabuto gets is itachi saying ''well it wasn't all his fault'' but not elaborating on why#and itachi is the one that is seen as in the right for making the decision to kill his entire clan in the name of upholding the status quo#so kishimoto can't outright blame kabuto's problems on the leaf village. so instead some reasons are thrown out here#that genuinely make no sense to me#and itachi claiming kabuto reminds him of himself also doesn't make much sense to me#because itachi always came across to me as incredibly sure of himself. always knew who he was and what he needed to do#which is... the opposite of kabuto#and itachi's explanation doesn't make it make sense to me.#kabuto had an amazing arc and this little summary from itachi here just ignores all of it to make up something entirely different#just in my own opinion at least.#naruto#kabuto#kabuto yakushi#mangacap#everykabuto#fourth shinobi world war: climax#chapter 587
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So confused where fandom/fic writers got this interpretation that Miles does stupid shit that doesn’t make sense or barely works out in the end or puts his friends in unnecessary danger all the time. Like in both movies the others simply underestimate him and don’t understand what Miles is doing cause he thinks like Miles, not like your everyday Spiderman. He uses his Venom Strike to throw Kingpin in the ITSV movie and literally saves Gwen and Peter because they went into battle less than ready. Then had the entire plan to lure the Spiders in ATSV, yet I keep seeing him written like he doesn’t think or gets his friends in trouble even when he understands the danger. Most of the time his different thinking has helped or led people to fix personal issues.
The first movie alone pretty much sets in stone that the exact opposite of what he wants is others to get hurt by his actions, inactions or the actions of others and trying to live up to that belief and the expectations it carries. Across the Spider-verse hammers it home with how he constantly tries to save people because that’s what he should do, rather than listen to some theory that is clearly not absolute at best and outright wrong at worst. Every fic has him being the one to cause issues and not fix them when his planning and actions literally helped save Gayatri and her father. (c’mon we know the glitching was the spot)
Yeah, I get making him stubborn or strong willed cause he doesn’t listen all the time but usually it’s for a good and valid reason, if he listened every time he was told not to, guess how many of our beloved characters would be dead?
#cause all the times he acts rash are because hes being lied to misled or not treated like he is gonna have to be spiderman and is spiderman#first gwen with the entirety of spider society and why he couldn't come then talked over by Miguel and blamed for what he couldn't possibly#control not to mention the shoddy nature of miguels entire theory#cause if it was true 1610b earth 42 and mayday wouldnt have happened or would collaspe casue miles was never supposed to be spiderman#so many things would be going wrong if it was true#miles is pretty level headed most of the time and quick he outsmarted the guy who made the trans dimension tech for crying outloaud#he simply doesnt tell his exact plan he does it and its up to others to figure it out cause why would he narrate his plan to them#he litteraly tells miguel he just doesnt know what miles is doing in response to miguel thinking hes just running blindly even Peter & Gwen#are suprised cause the whole point of miles story is others thinking they know it and underestimating him#him being dumb and rash and naive in fics just isnt a good source of conflict especially if its post ATSV and BTSV#he is constantly stating he doesnt need to prove himself as spiderman to anyone but himself soemthing he realizes in ITSVs climax#he already knows he spiderman and be damned if hes gonna try to prove it to someone who wanted his dad to die like yall treat him like he#learned nothing Miguel made more issues by not listening to Miles about the spot like he wants to wait for him to get stronger so Miles dad#will die think about that and say Miles is rash and doesn;t think again he isnt inexperienced or naive anymore save that for Pavitr who jinx#himself and has only been spiderman for 6 goddamn months#miles morales#across the spiderverse#atsv#spiderverse#atsv spoilers#spiderman#mini rant over im actually going to sleep now
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I have a lot of grievances over how Vitani's Lion Guard was executed in the finale, but I think the one thing that would've saved it [or made it less bs] is to have them all be different animals. Same characters, personalities, voice actresses (and maybe eye-color?), and you can even keep the all-female guard, just different species of animals that would've made the ending come full circle rather than having its narrative be circular.
Like, Vitani's the one-lion on the Guard who's the leader/fiercest.
Shabaha would be a caracal cat since those motherfuckers can jump high and compete with other, bigger predators for food (we were robbed oa caraca, in TLG anyways so this would've been perfect.
Tazama would be a Secratarybird since they can run fast but also have sharp vision as birds of prey.
Imara would be a South African Rock Python, her strength being her coils and jaw vice - In fact, they could've easily saved time and effort by just co-opting the rock python from Season 1, pulling the ultimate Chekov's Gun by turning a background character into a major game player in the finale (also serving as a heroic parallel to Ushari and giving us a non-villainous snake, not enough of which are shown in media)
Kasi as an African Wild Dog (known for their stamina unlike the cheetah, and again, don't get enough appearances in animated animal-based media sans Wild Kratts)
#the lion guard#the lion king#the lion guard season 3#the lion king vitani#vitani#the lion guard vitani#shabahah#imara#kasi#tazama#Having them be all lions makes the story feel painfully circular and unsatisfying#by undermining the moral of the show about differences being useful when working as a team by having the mains be beaten by all lions#Not to mention it retroactively proves pilot!Simba and Zira (the VILLAIN) in the right.#This one change would've at least given a conclusion that used elements of the story built up over time like the abovementioned themes#Ideally the plot would've needed a massive overhaul to actually have it be good#Make the finale an hour long special to wrap everything up#Replace the contest with an entirely new conflict altogether#Allow Vitani and Kion to have some actual agency in the plot#Not rob every character of their brains for the sake of plot (Vitani herself included)#To actually pay attention to the story built up in Seasons 1-2#And to have a natural satisfying send-off for the main cast instead of them dropping everything to leave home with no emotional climax
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and tbh the time skip in switch and knights climax events is what makes me the most mad of it all. "oh true hmm maybe i should've added foreshadowing earlier for my acid-trip plot to work hmm well ill start the story at the beginning of the year and then do a bunch of timeskips" no you absolute idiot you are going to write your stupid story on the foundations you built before or ill kill you
#like honestly even if the characters interactions are good#the plot is just too much. it makes me mad#i havent read either story yet but by principle im not too fond tbh#ughh#you'd think after the story released i would be less anxious about knights climax but nooo#honestly i cant think of much of a reason to read it besides maybe nice izlo#but that. is not really what i look for in a tsukasa event you know............#and since he for some reason had that tour this year itll take an eternity till his next event sighs#but well he is a sweet and charming and lovely and honest boy im sure the story will be good for him regardless..........#but im still mad tf. so many possible plot threads and he had to go and make up an entire new thing ugh#mar's midnight rambles
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i had an insane dream last night…
#the whole thing was framed as a movie i was watching#but also i was living out the events of the movie#but anyways the entire human collective consciousness existed as membrane of thin glowing strings#and it was located in a ship#and there were these two guys trying to sever humanities connection to it#anyways i like lept into the membrane to go after them#and it was just like an endless carpeted back rooms filled with giant steps and streams of water that were running through#idk it is very hard to describe what it felt like#other stuff happened after that’s hard to explain or remember#but the meaning i got from it was how access to so much information via phones and the internet#it’s like messing with our ability to synthesize information#and it replacing our way of knowing#idk…. idk it was a lot actually#i remember like crying in the theater in my dream#when the movie reached its climax#and i looked down at my phone screen and there was like pink glowing fractal cracks in the screen#and i asked everyone in the theater to share whatever little experiences or memories they felt like were important with eachother#and each new memory created a new string which helped rebuild the collective knowledge#it was important somehow that the information was coming from sharing stories in person#and not digitally i think#ANYWAYS#i just needed to get that out somewhere
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on a related note: awwwwwww fuck, I spent 5 months designing Cynthia’s fake magical girl outfit, what about her REAL one 😭😭😭
#i lowkey forgot the climax of yhnn existed 😔#just pav things#ok sure it appears for like .5 seconds and the post-game if that exists but LIKE#it’s such a major moment too I can’t get out of it#maybe I’ll just go back to my mind-map and go in a completely different direction when the time comes#or maybe I just rewrite the climax to get out of doing more work 🤔#Maybe it’s just like the beginning of the story where I’ve just had it wrong the whole time and it has the wrong vibes entirely#So it’ll end up being different anyway#Of all the stories to have as a dream project why this incredibly intricate and complex one 😅😭#Sooooooo many parts to juggle just because of the premise#Don’t be like me be like my wife and write angsty fics on tales of graces instead ✨✨✨#That one has a feasible chance of getting finished in well under 7 years what about me 😭😭😭😭#I’ve been cursed.
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doyiu have any idea how hard it is to have this guy make up a formative amount of your mid-to-late teenage years.
#and then people do things like GET UP AND GET A DRINK when i'm DOING MY GUITAR SOLO!!!! SAINT!!!!!!!!!#ineed to start reading ens stories againidk maybe i will when undead's climax story eventually comes out.#whenever that happens.#kinnie on side#idk if i'd ever ship w anybody from ens anymore.iused to ship w kanata veery briefly.#before i even had a blog iirc.#i loooove adonis but that's entirely a kinnie thing. sso in my mind he's like my highschool bf.#seeing him at the 10yr reunion like um... hey... lol......
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Chapters: 31/? Fandom: KinnPorsche: The Series (TV) Rating: Explicit Warnings: Graphic Depictions Of Violence Relationships: Pete Phongsakorn Saengtham/Vegas Kornwit Theerapanyakun, Porchay Pichaya Kittisawat/Macau Theerapanyakun, Minor or Background Relationship(s), Background Porsche Pachara Kittisawat/Kinn Anakinn Theerapanyakun
Chapter summary:
Vegas faces his father. Pete makes a decision. Macau and Chay grow closer, and Chay decides to shut a door. Pete heads to his interview.
Work summary:
When Pete saves a bleeding, gorgeous stranger from being killed by the Yakuza, that man opens doors to a world of submission and pleasure he’d never known before.
When Vegas is saved by a beautiful college student, he knows he doesn’t want to let the man slip through his fingers.
The two of them start up an arrangement: kinky sex, but only casually.
But with the Yakuza on the hunt for the person who took down their men, and the main family asking questions about where Vegas goes when he disappears, how long will their casual arrangement last?
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OR: Pete is a college student. Vegas is in the mafia. They shouldn’t meet, but they do, and their spark is impossible to ignore.
Now with Chinese translation! Link in notes.
#good news this should be the last you-know-what in the entire story ahahaha#I hope you're all mentally prepared#vegaspete#vegas/pete#vegas x pete#vegaspete fic#vegaspete fanfic#oh yeah I removed the chapter count too because I decided to expand things post-climax
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Ultimately, I am really scared and worried on whether they'll drag Godfather plot Again into Eden climax. I don't care that he's really important!! If it's possible to write a story without dragging Godfather in then why not!!! But alas, climax curse — when was the last time we had a climax that is not batshit insane— oh right Crazy:B climax, and also Alkaloid. Okay but they don't count since they're going to have that special tour in April to compensate
If they *really* want to include Godfather plot, they really need to tone down the intensity because it feels like everything is just for shock value — or if they want to keep the intensity, don't just cram in it such a short amount
#enstars#This was also why my enjoyment from reading SS Fin was greatly hampered#There are really great moments but. I feel like the climax was just pure shock value#And mayybe tone down on the introducing one-off characters as plot device#Like aren't they supposed to be more important. Idc if it ends up being too long I prommy that#the fand would enjoy it greatly if it's written well#*fans#Can mobile Tumblr introduce editing tags without deleting an entire tag Please#Okay maybe I need to lower my expectations but I've been on a story retrospective spree you have to excuse me#Will I or will I not be burned at the stake for this? Who knows!
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"i'll just do some light editing" <- that is the devil speaking
#s.txt#light editing turned out to be Rewording The Entire Climax.#its because i got REALLY into the sun motif i built up and then the rest just kinda Clicked.#there needed to be resolution for the quick little Protag Becomes Aware He's In A Narrative thing anyways. so.#ALSO had to add more misogyny. naturally. this is the misogyny story. after all.#and of COURSE a [REDACTED] is a dog actually but he isn't. its complicated. theres payoff though <3#where was i going. with this. i think i had a point.
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just got the durge reveal..!!! screamnnn it’s saur good when you actually have a durge specific character and not just an au of the char you previously made lol. anyway I’m just imagining yves admitting that she’s one of bhaal’s children and then her going like oh btw I was his bride too 🧍♀️
#I was watching corpse bride earlier (bc of yves lol. it’s inspo) and now I have a vision#of yves wearing her old vein again (gifted by gortash) maybe in her old dress but idk if she’ll manage to find that#but anyway yves in her old veil walking back to bhaal’s temple with her flail humming here comes the bride#it’s a whole ass visual in my head ok LIKE THE girls who gets it gets it ‼️‼️‼️#but I’m like 🤭🤭 at the reveal then waking up to jaheira watching you#bc yves is not revealing anything!!! she’s not saying that she’s gonna turn away from bhaal nor is she saying she’s gonna embrace him#she’s being very sly rn… keeping her cards close to her chest …#her dialogues are getting more calculated too… unlike in act 1 where she was mindlessly following whatever people were telling her#(like she literally smeared shit on her face lol) she’s now being very careful of what she says …#and I just imagine her demeanour changing completely after the reveal … she’s not that naive cleric anymore she’s someone else entirely ….#her eyes are hardened she is more shrewd and reserved … but there’s moments where she lets her guard down#and she becomes that sweet girl again ..#anyway start of act 3 is yves starting to plot…!! and to scheme ..!!! 🤭#/IM/ particularly excited bc I’ve been planning to do this particular thing and it’s the sole reason why I’m doing her playthrough#so I hope it works out LMFAO like I’m hyped for it personally feels like a fitting climax to her story#shut up about bg3.#bg3 spoilers
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spiderman: across the spiderverse somehow exceeded into the spiderverse in every possible way, and yet ... even as i say that, it did that thing poorly.
#whAt. thE. HeCK was ThAt.#spiderman: across the spiderverse#messed me up man#that movie#amazing#stunning#beautiful#wholesome#thrilling#surprising#entertaining#and YeT.#THaT.#in case anyone actually cares#i'm referring to the plot#this movie is specifically made to be 'part 1'#i thought it had a climax but then it just kept building and building and building#the entire thing screams middle-of-the-story#i love middle-of-the-story movies but this one... at least give us some kind of closure for the problems miles faced srsly
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Room temperature take but Azure Gleam's second half would have been a much better story if instead of Thales the main villain were the real uncle Arundel instead. Thales sucks as a villain for Dimitri, he's a literal stranger, there's just no drama there. Give me some actual family betrayal! I wanna see Dimitri have a breakdown about having to kill not just one, but TWO asshole uncles!
#not tagging#sorry for hopesposting in the year of our lord 2023 but i had thoughts i needed to get out of my head#man... arundel is such a waste of potential. think about how juicy that story would have been#and I'm still salty the writers just had to remove the entire emotional climax of am just because they wanted something ''different''#fuck it. cornelia should have also been herself and not some body snatcher#she was so good in this game#I'm choosing to ignore THAT ''lore drop'' they give us at the beginning. I'm making my own story#thinking thoughts
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Catch me completely unable to force myself to write even the most exciting scenes in a story.
#I'm staring at the scene where the love interest finally shows some non-toxic personality#and we get to see the fabled fighting prowess of the beefy established girlfriend#and my brain's like:#''mm… nah''#how about we finally update our fun hero x villain story?#''I don't really FEEL like it''#a new story???#''okay. but. like. what's the /purpose/?''#that sex scene?!?!#''I can't right now. I'm too tired''#I JUST WANNA—#*makes a throttling gesture at a poster of the human brain*#the rough draft I already wrote?#I literally put the climax in brackets#THE ENTIRE POINT OF THE PLOT#I PUT THE SINGLE MOST EXCITING CONFLICT IN THE ENTIRE STORY IN BRACKETS AND THEN MOVED ON#'[SHE FIGHTS THE THING AND GOES HOME]'#LIKE?!?!#WHO DOES THAT?!#🕸️
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#also#the thing about spoilers that I love is that unless the entire story is centered around a big reveal. spoilers don't ruin the viewing#and even then. a good foreshadowing means that when you know what's coming you can appreciate the build up to it#I went into arcane having watched an hour long analysis of the themes (unbreakable bonds of love. thanks osp) and as such knew the plot#but that just made it even better. being able to see how they would build up to each character climax#anyway any film that relies on no spoilers for it to be good.. isn't actually good#tag talk
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