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CHAPTER 1
(Before you start, the first two images were added months after. This is why there are two titles and signatures)
Sorry for taking almost a month to complete this!
the “old art” part of this isn’t here yet…
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#artwork#adventure forward#first star savior#read this right to left#manhua? comic? i’m not sure what to fucking call this#Trap Town#roblox#sorry for the lack of art ;(#i need to learn how to write man#To Trap town comic
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Why is the anime so weird, it's not even the same series dude?? It's like,
Anime:
GOKU: I have a great idea to bring peace to the universe, and my leadership and compassion alone will unite us all. I have No Flaws and am A True Relatable Everyman :)
VEGETA: NO! I AM THE BEST AND I WILL CAUSE PROBLEMS UNTIL I AM RECOGNIZED AS SUCH!!!!
Manga:
GOKU: Vegeta what's cornmeal made of? I know it's what the corn eats, but what's it made of? VEGETA: Hey Kakarot let's play the quiet game until one of us dies.
#dbtag#I do not understand this writing it's so bad aklsdlkasjd#Toei wants Goku to be Clark Kent SO bad and he SO isn't lmao#they're so good and dumb and rounded and complex in the manga what is the anime so afraid of#Toriyama said 'no no this man is a detached faux-immortal who has a dear pure heart but he's childlike and selfish even though he's kind'#and toei went 'got it goku's never done anything wrong ever in his life'#toriyama said 'Vegeta's gone through a lot and he's finally settling into his more mature leadership role with the confidence he's earned'#and toei said 'got it vegeta has the confidence of a high school bully except now he can interact with his family as a comedy bit'#girl hWHAT#Toei trying to group Goku and Vegeta as two people who would rather train than be with their families and Toriyama said NO Vegeta wants#to be HOME this is the first time in years that he's HAD ONE and it makes him HAPPY to be with his wife and children!!#Vegeta trains so that he can protect the things he doesn't want to lose again and Goku trains because it's the thing that makes him happies#They are NOT the same lmao And yeah Vegeta still wants to beat Goku but he also knows that Gohan could dogwalk both of them if he wanted#He also knows Trunks and Goten are going to surpass them it's not about being the best anymore he's past that he just wants to Not Need Gok#He just doesn't want to have to rely on Goku to save the day he wants to be Enough on his own he just wants to know he can be#because every time it's mattered he WASN'T and people he loved were lost to his inability to protect them and he carries that#Like Whis diagnosed him with anxiety and cptsd out in the open and Beerus said he was self-centered for feeling guilt#+ he lowkey enjoys the rivalry it keeps him goal-oriented so he can't get complacent and lazy which is what triggered his Buu Saga breakdow#realized how Fucked Up it was that having a home and loving family made him feel like he was failing and went 'wait no I won actually??'#now he's chill as fuck in the manga. cool confident leader.#and sometimes he is childish and dumb with Goku as a treat#you know what rocks about his rivalry with Goku in Super though is that it's Playful. Vegeta is learning how to Play.#You ever seen a shelter dog get introduced to a really playful dog and it takes a minute for the shelter dog to understand it's safe here#And then they're both running around the backyard playing hot potato with one braincell?? That's Goku and Vegeta's relationship#and the way the anime sleeps on that dynamic is so fucking criminal especially when it's literally canon it's in print it's out there#you had the playbook how'd you fumble it this bad#anyway that's my 25+ year blorbo thoughts I love Geets a lot okay#And I love Goku in the manga a lot I'd forgotten that he's actually a great character when Toei's not fucking up his whole vibe
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I hate it when cishet people write Achilles and Patroclus as friends and that is in part why I'll always insist in Achilles and Patroclus being interpreted as a 100% gay couple, especially with non queer people
Like, is not wrong to interpret Patroclus and Achilles as friends BUT
When straight people that are neck deep in amatonormativity do it, it always goes like this
"Oh, Patroclus and Achilles are friends lol, but Achilles is a man, therefore he needs to be with a woman, so he's in love with Briseis, oh but romantic love is more important than friendship, so Briseis is more important than Patroclus and Patroclus doesn't matter in the end"
And another thing I absolutely hate when straight people write Heterochilles is that they always are like
"Oh, Achilles killed Briseis's entire family, took away her freedom, and raped her, but she loves him, because... How could she not love him? After all he was a boy, she was a girl, can I make it any more obvious?"
Let👏Briseis👏hate👏Achilles👏
#ramblings#greek mythology#iliad#tagamemnon#trojan war#achilles#patroclus#patrochilles#I've been victim of another depiction of heterochilles#people complain that everyone sees Patrochilles as only romantic#BITCH. most depictions of them are as straight#or Patroclus having a one side love with Achilles#Put some respect on my man's Patroclus name because let's be honest. If one of the two had a one side love#It was Achilles having a maddening love for Patroclus#Achilles was the president and founder of the “simping for Patroclus” club#I'm so mad lmao#It should be illegal for Straight people to write Achilles AND Briseis#“She hated him and loved him at the same time. But the love was bigger” WRONG#She wanted to hit Achilles in the head with an ax and would've done so if she had an ax#Also I'm going to confiscate Patroclus from straight people until everyone learns how to respect him#If you can't respect Patroclus then you shouldn't be able to write him#I'm sorry I'm still so mad lmao#I need to read something gay. I need to read the Iliad again
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The Little House books are actually great inspiration for worldbuilding, because their working class perspective reminds you to think about all the work that goes into getting the resources needed for daily life.
Where does the food come from? Who cooks it? Where does the fabric for clothes come from? Who spins it, weaves it, sews it? What do you use for heat? Light? Transportation? Can you get these resources yourself from the local landscape or do you buy them from somewhere else? What happens if something breaks or runs out?
Not all those details are needed for every story, but these books show how useful it can be to consider those details. And remind you that, if you tell it well enough, sometimes those details can be the story.
#little house#adventures in writing#i always say that little house was the bedrock of my interest in fantasy#so much worldbuilding!#i loved learning about a world different from my own!#and this thought brought to you by me thinking i need to do some worldbuilding on 'lily between worlds'#thinking about how i could use little house as inspiration in how they have civilization but also have to worry about a dangerous landscape#and dangerous animals#so that culture is good to a point but a real man/woman also has to have practical survival skills#and then i thought about the daily life considerations of little house#and my brain suddenly exploded with worldbuilding questions
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this was supposed to be a sketch of what ishmael might look like if he grew his hair out post-canon and i blacked out and woke up to this on my computer. help where have the past two hours of my life gone
no tattoos yet because he's fresh off the sea and in nantucket again for the first time since the pequod. i don't think he's happy to be back guys
#hes so <3#character of all time im so in love. in a non-literal non-romantic sense#guys i dont this obsession with herman melville's 1851 whaling novel is going anywhere guys i think its here to stay. guys help#anyways uhh idk ishmael maybe get on some xanax or something man idk....#i do believe he carried that coffin everywhere like a video game character for the rest of his life btw. i just physically cannot draw it#coffins are a weirdly difficult shape to draw. ill keep trying tho dw. anything for my strange little princess my beau my weirdo#hes like the pet i trap in a glass cage so i can watch him run circles#help im on computer and im physically incapable of shutting up when im talking#i need to draw 50000 comics about him i need to write novels. i need him to be real so i can kill him and play with his innards#who said that#anyways#moby dick#ishmael moby dick#herman melville#alto art#firealpaca#'alto didnt you say you were gonna learn how to draw ahab' shut up and look at my 1000th drawing of ishmael being haunted by a living whale#click for better quality. or dont. maybe the real image quality was the moby dick fanart we made along the way
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A builder who totally understands where X is coming from, collecting all those shinies for Coco, because she also likes shiny things, and has been secretly leaving pretty rocks on Unsuur's porch for weeks now.
#my time#my time at sandrock#sandrock#X#X and Fang#Unsuur#Builder#each of my builders I HC to be a little bit different#Rave loves dancing and is a total extravert - she may be book smart; but doesn't tend to act like it#Zurika likes shiny things and wants to fight. She's not angry; she just really wants to fight.#Sparring; monster fighting; whatever lets her improve those skills.#Rave learned to fight because it became important to know how in Sandrock.#She enjoys sparring now; and takes pride in the skill; but it didn't start that way for Rave.#Zurika learned how to fight because her parents weren't there to stop her anymore#Zurika is a good sport; just as happy to lose a fight as to win one; as long as she can learn something from it#Rave likes relics and books. Zurika likes sparklies and daggers.#Zurika and Rave both like parkour though. Parkour; and Going Fast 🏃♀️🏃♀️#Zurika is plenty smart too - she just doesn't like books that much. She likes listening to stories or lectures; or watching old videos.#Rave has books and diagrams to look back on as needed; and does write some notes. Zurika just Remembers. Everything.#Sidenote; I really like X.#X is awesome 👌 Solid bro; silly little guy; I love the bird. Take some glass; my man. Have a scorpion on the house.#Love his cute relationship with Coco. 'X is on a date' is one of my favorite dialog options of all time. It sent me to outer space.#Unsuur caught me off guard with paint drying. I hadn't really noticed him much before that;#but that was the moment I realized he was gonna be a favorite of mine#Unsuur is the funniest guy in Sandrock; hands down. You just gotta give him a chance; you wouldn't expect it off first impressions.#Ily my dude; keep it weird#I will also be keeping it weird.#mtas#fandom#rambles
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“That was the trouble with slow people. Give him a fool any day. Slow people took some time to catch up, but when they did they rolled right over you” - Terry Pratchett, small gods
In small gods this quote always stood out to me and I think I just realized this idea is so core to the book and the general arc of the book. Like this is one of Brutha’s core traits and also kind of the primary arc of the book. I think unlike most protagonists with an arc of the sort Brutha has, as well as in comparison to the other people fighting Vorbis, he takes a long time to really seemingly leave the harmful beliefs behind. However when he does he bowls everyone else over.
This quote, as well as Brutha’s characterization in general, also made me think about what exactly slowness is. I think, at least in this case and context, slowness is taking the time in your thought. Brutha really takes the time to come to conclusions he comes to. He thinks about what he is learning, and some of it is probably partially denial, but in comparison to other characters that deal with this kind of situation there is not a lot. Instead it is more like he comes to his conclusions slowly and with consideration.
#terry pratchett#gnu terry pratchett#discworld#small gods#brutha#idk I just really liked this take on ‘slowness’#I think in some ways I can be like that too#I’ll learn a new piece of information in a discussion with someone#and then I may need a day or so or more to really sit with my opinions on the topic#idk brutha is just a really cool character to me#and man how does pterry write characters with such intricate personal selves#they’re all so complicated in just their way of thinking#and individual#it’s so cool
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Still wild to me that the Avatar team saw a guy write a love story between a stick and a monkey and were like "This is the guy who we need to write Rangshi and Yangvik" and then he ended up making two of the best couples in all of the Avatar-verse TT0TT
#rangshi#yangvik#'a stick and a monkey?' did I stutter?#listen they knew they wanted to make Kyo's love life messy and were like 'HIM! THAT'S THE GUY! GO HAM!'#of course by the 2nd novel i was shipping the stick and the goddess but that wasn't intentional on Yee's part#willllld that Iron will came out AFTER RoK#maybe some of the yuri rubbed off on his writing kjfdsakljfda#i did like the stick and monkey romance in Epic crush tho don't get me wrong they are fun#it's just that Iron Will they get shoved to the side for uhhh *reads palm* “sisterhood” hmm uh huh yeah that's what that is hmmm#I know this man CAN write sisterhood. Jetsun is proof#i think the issue is that the monkey gets sidelined waaaaay tooo much in the 2nd novel#listen all i'm saying is that genie has a boyfriend.......BUT she also gets two girlfriends in Iron will ok it's a poly situation#Please come back for the Szeto novel FC Yee! *pray emoji*#Have Szeto make out with a volcano and that's how he learns lava bending~! <3 *pray emoji*#(y'all need to read both Epic Crush and Iron Will of Genie Lo bc you'll see A LOT of how both Kyo and YCs novels were influenced)#(it's really fun to see)#guanyin is like if kirima and yangchen merged (and had the voice of chaisee...if you're listening to the audio book)#genie is 100% the rangshi love child#there's a yun/jianzhu dynamic in this too but it plays out differently which is fun#ahhh there's a lot I need to re-read it tbh but i like them#RoK/LoY/1st half SoK>2nd half SoK/Epic Crush>DoY>>>Iron Will#That's how I'd rank the novels imo (tho I REALLY do love Iron Will's ending#I'm just a little....hmmm eh on how we got there....but it's a much better/happier ending than what Kyo got so :'D I'll take it)#epic crush of genie lo#iron will of genie lo
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It’s been MONTHS since I’ve last drawn something like this so I kinda. Forgot how to draw, don’t look too close + I decided to experiment with some stuff + I have no idea how light works
This one is personal but there’s nothing too deep about it
#lemon man's art#described#described art#< I did my best with the ID but I’m still learning how to write proper ones#Do tell me if I need to fix it :)#I never know how to tag personal art#Chat do we fw this
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Recently decided to re-read Impulse because he’s my fav and this particular character development has been living in my head for years and years
(Issue 23- Issue 66)
#Bart Allen#Impulse#Max Mercury#thaddeus thawne#I always think how the very first issue of impulse starts out with him writing about how he thinks Iris is the only one who’s ever loved him#And of course Thad’s a beautiful parallel because his anger derives over the same frustrated feeling. That no one has ever really loved him#but there’s also the fact that like Bart clearly loves and cares for the people that surround him very early on he’s just.#like right after that happens in issue 23 he inmediately starts behaving as properly as possible to appease max#who’s understandably pissed but hasn’t really explained why to Bart and he’s clearly wanting to get any form of response#(average neurodivergent kid when they say something off and no one bothers to explain to him the why just assume the worst)#and like the point is that he doesn’t need to learn how to love people he just needs to adjust his parameters basically#and I love that because it means that his clear neurodivergence isn’t treated as a flaw or something wrong#in the next issue after 66 he once again drifts off and has trouble focusing on a convo and max is still looking at with pride and fondness#I just love Bart a lot man I don’t know
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🍷🍷💔💔
🍷 Jake's family causes the hangster break up
He watches as Javy blinks at him, face moving through emotions too quickly for him to really understand what the other man is feeling. Clearing his throat, he gives a little awkward chuckle and brings his hand to fiddle with his beer. “So. So no worries, Javy. I won’t.” Pausing he swallows around the lump that wants to form in his throat but powers on. “I won’t mess up anything for him. Promise.”
💔 icemav break up / icedad
“How are you doing? And none of that bullshit either, Tommy. Truth only.” Snorting, Tom shoots Ron a look but settles back into his couch and lets out a bone weary sigh. “Fucked up on all sides, ‘except about Bradley.” Which is the truth. He knows he’s all twisted up about Carole and Mav and how that’s all landing. But he’s positive and beyond certain backing Bradley is the right thing to do. It’s the only thing he’s sure about these days.
Make Nixie Write!
#nixie answers#gwaihiril#make nixie write#hangster#sereshaw#seresin family ruins sereshaw#bradley trying to reassure javy he doesn't want to hurt jake more than he has#and instead is horrifying the man because javy didn't have all the facts and just wants his brother to not be hurt by the man he still love#and instead javy is learning he needs to help nat beat someones face in on behalf of bradley#javy and nat are going to team up with tally in this i think#how or why i'm not sure#but I think it might happen#icedad#slider being the bestest#and checking on his pilot#even though by now they both are out of the plane and are going more career instead of just going vroom vroom in planes#also. seriously considering turning this into slice but on the fence about it
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i am so deeply emotional about sbk right now. how the hell does a server this good exist
#skyblock kingdoms#sbk#yt#txt#orig#it's like -- the good kind of heartache i guess?#i love hearing people talk about storytelling in the way sbkers talk about storytelling.#i wish more mcyt stuff had fansongs and avid is out here creating bangers i can put on my driving playlist without fear.#i love the way everyone interacts on the server <- currently losing it over milkman complaining abt cherry kingdom being hard to steal from#and it's just. wow. this is it. this is peak. i am so contented with what we have right now.#like there's things i'd love to see but. i can write those things if i really need them. i am overjoyed with what we have already.#i am maintagging this because i want people to see this. i am so full of joy right now. just. man. sbk makes me wanna Make Stuff#in so many different ways it's a little overwhelming tbh. i want to get back into making music. i want to learn how to shade metallics.#i want to write music with lyrics and i want to write fics with weird formatting and i want to do drawn-out meta analysis#i wanna make aus that are just snippets and vibes. i wanna SING i wanna COSPLAY i want charms and stuff i just. aaaAAAAAAA!!!!
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NOT MY FRENCH WRITING EXAM BEING HARRY FUCKING POTTER RPF I'm dealing so many psychic damages rn you have no idea
#on the 3rd day of pride month nothing less#i think that should be considered hate crime (/hj)#please imagine my reaction wheni a trans person discovered that the subject was hp related#like... not directly about it thank gods but y'know still kinda#only to then learn that the writing part would be fucking rpf#about daniel radcliffe and i think some fictional guy?#like first i do not want to write rpf#im not comfortable with that#but also harry fucking potter#DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA how much restraint was needed to not turn the whole thing too gay?????#it was not about gays but gosh so mich restraint was needed... like blame my fanfic heart i pretty much only know romance T-T#also i only had 2h for the whole subject so i couldn't waste time with taking it the fact that I HAD TO PASS MY FRENCH EXAM ON FCKING HP#man wtf
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the downside to being a sitcom neighbour sort of person is that when rough things happen and emotionally fuck u up a lil bit, it also sounds completely made up
#bert's dead dad tag#found out today the way my dad told mom he wanted a divorce?#he wrote her a letter and left it on the dining room table for her to find on the morning of her fortieth birthday#who the fuck does that dead father#like that is the sort of thing i would entirely make up if i needed everyone at the table to fuckin hate an npc#and at least one person would go 'you're laying it on a little bit heavy'#i know he did work to become a better person as he got older#which is good because BOY howdy was that man a piece of shit in the early 90s#and we are having Complicated feelings about it tonight and also for the last nine months#something something when i was writing his eulogy i came across an old article discussing something he did in the 90s#YDIP (your dad is problematic)#like yeah this is the sort of thing that would have been vaguely acceptable in the cultural context#but like. still objectively bad. potentially ruining several lives sort of bad.#learned this and then wrote the rest of his eulogy about how he was a great guy and how i'm lucky to have been his son#(which was rough enough on its own because i've never said 'i'm [dad's name]'s son' as many times as i did that trip home)#but like what else do you do? i sent off a message looking for more information#and that information if it comes is just gonna sit with me i guess#sure as hell not telling my sister and this whole thing i've been getting through without really having anyone here for me to talk to#(hence the big fuckoff tag rant. your problem now losers who like clicking the read more button)#so even if i get all the answers i want about this one thing it's not gonna do any good except putting an end to one question#but part of having a dead dad who's been out of the business of forming new memories since you came out is having more questions#answering this one's just gonna add even more questions to the pile#but. got fuckall else to do
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as someone who's been thinking ab garp for over a year the OPLA is such a moment of vindication fr like?? first off, incredible casting, but also just the whole. how duties as a marine conflicts with morals but that it’s worth following your own code of justice and his love and fear for his family that stems a lot from having Some kind of relationship with Roger like?? Was genuinely surprised when they outright said that Garp wanted Luffy to stop because he reminded him so much of Roger but like Yeah and just—
#one piece#one piece live action#opla#opla spoilers#monkey d garp#i need to. i need to write out analysis ab this old fucked up man fr#going to be real the amount of garp stuff and how well they did his character rly caught me off guard but i win. as a treat#fdslkjlsd#head in hands#<- they need to explain their thoughts so badly but they are so bad at explaining things#why explain things when you can write 2k of men kissing in a fervor after watching the la <- roger sorry zeff#i need. i need to. i need to learn how to be normal on main (keeps rambling all their thoughts on other blogs but wants to talk#ab things to public also)#sighs
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Godddd I need aroace scar fics I gotta do everything myself around here
#like you guys dont understand how much i need this#and i have ideas#i just dont know how to write lmao#and i barely have any time/energy to learn#maybe this weekend i can try something..... man#stiff talk
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