#JJK characters dropping left and right. Character arcs? You KNOW that shit is being dropped.
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frost-felon · 11 months ago
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The plotting and a lot of the decisions are eerily reminiscent to late-stage Naruto, but the character death is in Isayama's lane...except, I think even Isayama made sure that you felt a lot of the deaths more. Like, giving those characters and moments some focus.
Higuruma is a cool character, but hasn't really accomplished anything since his arc. Not just in fights, but in developing his own and others' characters, passing on knowledge, etc. Closest we got were the scenes where Yuji confronts Higuruma about his death wish, and when he talks about the possibilities of trying to whack Sukuna with his Domain. In the first case, it was really nice to get some focus on how Higuruma felt about it all (and about Yuji), but it didn't really do anything for Yuji's character, and in the latter case, Well. You Understand.
I'm never not going to be mad about the timeskip. A lot of the problems I have with the manga's current direction and various character deaths could have been solved by spending more time with the characters.
Gege with his cast:
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Yeah, can't have a fight against Sukuna without some bodies dropping. They were all expecting this as well. I much prefer this over Naruto, where you had a "world war" and the only somewhat relevant character dying was Neji.
First people were complaining that the Culling Game was too easy, that the protagonists were winning too much and now they're surprised that people start dying in the final fight of the series.
Not to mention Higuruma. Sure he's talented, but in what world would he have survived a 1v1 against Sukuna? He's been death flagging pretty strongly the past chapters and said himself he wants to die to pay for his actions. He died quicker than I thought, but you could see it coming a mile away. Although I have to say I would've liked a bit more...focus? on Higuruma. He was kinda sandwiched between Kusakabe, Ino and Choso running around as well. An environment with just him, Yuuji and Sukuna like we got this chapter would've been nicer. Like his domain for example...With such a large cast that is difficult to do because you'll inevitably get the feeling they're all lining up to be killed by Sukuna, but I'll still mourn the lack domain trial.
I kinda wish Choso got that same treatment. People have been crying over his "death" while he's still alive. Sukuna didn't even pierce his heart and we know he can patch up his wounds with blood. But I guess his fans want to see him dead. Relatable.
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aprylx · 2 months ago
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-JJK CHAPTER 271 SPOILERS-
RANT INCOMING
I’m honestly so disappointed with how ts ended 😭 - it just felt so lazy… like pretty much since Choso’s death (Not an exact timeframe, this is just how I remember it) I feel like the whole thing has gone down hill.
It feels like Gege has completely lost interest in having a coherent story, not only writing wise, but you can also see a drop in the panel quality art-wise (IMO)
We know little to nothing about SO many characters.
-Yuji’s Domain Name
-Megumi’s Complete Domain
-NO SUKUNA BACKSTORY, like WHAT?!??
And even though Gojo isn’t in my top 5 characters, the fact he was just FORGOTTEN??
No funeral, no mourning, in 270 they were ragging on him for what he didn’t do during the fight w/ Sukuna 😭
Like not even a LITTLE sympathy? Nothing from Megumi - Gojo pretty much RAISED him.
Idk… I’ve seen arguments like ‘Gege is put on such a tight schedule! He needs to figure it all out in a week!’
While I agree that being a Mangaka is HARD - as a writer myself I understand writers block and everything, then having to draw on top of that… it’s tough.
…But did Gege not plan out his story before writing…?
As I said, JJK had such a strong start and middle. I LOVE the culling games arc and I am beyond excited for that to be animated… but I can’t help but feel the ending was lazy.
And to reiterate again, Gege left out a shit ton of stuff… and then him trying to make up for it with 270 which was just a history lesson that no one asked for - a history lesson about 200 chapters too late at that… and with Mei Mei??? Cool ig?
I love JJK with all my heart, don’t get me wrong… but the story is ass 😭
And I can’t help but to compare it to shows like BSD (which, in fairness, is Seinen not Shonen, though I feel like the early seasons of BSD and the current seasons of JJK are pretty comparable… and this is strictly comparing the BSD anime, not manga…. Also, I’ve not finished BSD - halfway through s4 - but my sister LOVES IT, so I feel like I’m somewhat qualified to bring this up… maybe??)
The characters in BSD are so complex - their relationships, their personalities and their actions… we know a good chunk about most characters on the show - and it’s not like it’s ending anytime soon (AS FAR AS I KNOW - could be wrong) so what we don’t know we’ll find out, right??
The power system is decently understandable - to me at least - and the writing does a good job of telling the watcher this, without having to just explain it - like in 270.
My point is- BSD took time in crafting its story, its a monthly manga and there’s 40 or so pages per chapter… and I’d much prefer waiting and getting an in-depth story than whatever the hell this recent chapter was.
Anyway… Honestly I’m still just sad abt Sukuna getting turned into a FUCKING BLOB.
WHAT. THE. FUCK.
Kugisaki saying ‘Rolling out!’ was my final straw.
I didn’t proof read this so if I said something completely wrong or off topic… ehhh, wouldn’t be the first time.
Thanks for listening to my TedTalk… and idk maybe read my ao3 I have some pretty okay stuff on there.
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whatifyoulivelikethat · 4 years ago
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lollipop, m | jjk
pairing(s): jungkook x reader
summary: You and your boyfriend, Jeon Jungkook, were supposed to have a nice movie date, but somehow get sidetracked once you whip out that strawberry-flavored lollipop. Who would have guessed?
warnings: rated M (18+) for language; smut (fem reader, public sex in a movie theater tsk tsk, palming, fingering, edging, no one finishes, welp); fluff; non-idol!BTS; cute but dirty XD inspired by candy - BAEKHYUN this is for @gowayyeonjun, you know why :)
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“Where’d you get that?”
“Get what?”
Your boyfriend narrowed his eyes at you and pointed to your mouth. “That.”
Your lips curved into a slow smile. Pink tongue sliding out, curling around the hard confection. Your fingers spun the thin white stick slowly, pulling it out of your mouth. Jeon Jungkook’s dark brown eyes followed the movement, becoming darker with every soft flick of your tongue, pressing the tip against the lollipop and smearing sticky sweetness all over your taste buds.
“Got it when I went to the dentist.”
Jungkook pursed his lips, disbelieving. “They give out candy to adults?”
The strawberry flavor invaded your mouth. “I asked for it.”
“Share.”
You raised an eyebrow. “No.”
Jungkook puffed his cheeks. He held up the things in his hands. “Then I guess you don’t want any jellies, chocolates, or pop rocks, do you?”
You opened your mouth wider and placed the lollipop on the middle of your tongue, swiping it up and down, up and down, slow, sugary, sticky, turning your tongue red with the hard candy. Jungkook bit his lip, breathing becoming shallow, his grip on the bags of sweets tightening.
“Stop it,” he chided.
“Then share your candy with me.”
You rolled the strawberry lollipop in your mouth, coating it with saliva. He nearly moaned.
“Stop… We’re in the movie theater...” Jungkook breathed, leaning over the armrest.
You lowered your lashes, closing your lips slightly, popping the confection into your mouth. Out of your mouth. Soft, gentle pops, in, out, in, out. You could hear patrons settling into their seats, but you two were in the back. If anyone turned around though, they would definitely notice Jungkook closing in on you, panting needily, his gray hoodie spilling over the armrest, dumping the bags of candy he had brought earlier into your lap.
“Please…”
Jungkook leaned in to kiss you and you shoved the lollipop between his lips. He grimaced, frowning as you smiled pleasantly, smearing it over his lips and coating them.
“Oh no,” you purred. “You got something on your face.”
And then you pulled the lollipop away, pressing your lips to his, licking off the candied syrup, Jungkook moaning in your mouth, grabbing your face and kissing you greedily, tangling his tongue with your strawberry-flavored one, breath hot against your skin. You snickered, licking his lips one more time before backing away. Jungkook whimpered, chewing on his lip as he opened his eyes slowly, dark eyes cloudy with lust.
“… L-Let’s leave.”
You popped the lollipop back in your mouth and collected the bags of candy in your lap. “Why? Movie’s going to start soon.”
Jungkook thinned his mouth into a line and pushed the armrest between you two up, scooting closer to you. He grabbed your hand and put it on the crotch of his black jeans.
“This is why.”
You shifted the lollipop in your mouth from side to side. You knew Jungkook was watching your lips, growling as he placed his chin on your shoulder. You rubbed your palm against his growing hardness.
“Hmm, but I have jellies to eat.”
“Come on…”
The lights around you dimmed and the previews began to start. You slipped your fingers under the hem of his hoodie and Jungkook yelped sharply as you drummed his hot skin with your cool touch. You turned your head and frowned at him.
“Hey! Be quiet.”
Someone shushed you two from a few rows below.
“Yeah, Jungkook,” you whispered, dancing your fingers up and down his abs. “Be quiet.”
Jungkook buried his face in your white fleecy jacket, moaning softly as your nails traced patterns on his stomach. “Stop…”
Your hand slid down, outlining the bulge in his pants. “You sure you want me to stop?” you murmured teasingly, slipping your fingertip under the zipper flap, brushing against the metal.
He pressed his lips on your earlobe, gasping. “N-No…” You heard him swallow hard, pressing his hips back into the plushy red seat as you played with the button of his jeans. “But someone will see… Or hear me…”
Ah, but you knew your boyfriend well. His hands were wrapped around your upper arm, holding tight, needy pants in your ear, egging you on. You slowly teased the metal button out of the hole. He shuddered as it came free.
“No one’s going to see. We’re in the back.”
You reached up and plucked the lollipop from your mouth. Turned slightly to see Jungkook’s head leaned against you, long black hair spilling over your shoulder, eyes glazed over, mouth open, lips glossy and pink.
“Here you go, love,” you cooed, sliding the strawberry lollipop into his mouth. His lips closed around it, whimpering quietly in his throat. “Be quiet now.”
The movie was starting, but neither of you noticed.
The zipper was going down, accompanied by dramatic music from the opening scene, but your eyes were on Jungkook and his handsome face, the dim light casting shadows all over his sharp features, lollipop stick poking out of his mouth. He sucked in a breath as you palmed him through his underwear, feeling him swell at your touch. He mumbled your name around the hand candy.
“Hm?”
“Go under.”
“What do I get?” you breathed, teasing him by hooking a finger over the waistband of his boxer briefs and caressing his warm skin.
Jungkook reached over and fumbled for the zipper of your fleece jacket, stopping as the sound of the movie stilled, then continued as it got loud again with dialogue and action, lowering it halfway and slipping his hand under the coat.
“Did you wear that dress I like?” he murmured.
“Find out.”
His lips curled into a pleased grin as he touched the satin fabric of his favorite dress of yours, the plum wrap dress with the deep neckline. Jungkook liked this dress for many reasons. One, cleavage. Two, easy access. Three, because you looked fucking hot in it.
And four.
He gasped as his fingers brushed against the hardened nub.
“You’re not wearing a bra,” Jungkook breathed, nearly dropping the lollipop.
“Mmm, I wasn’t going to take off my coat anyway.”
Your hand sat on top of his cock, only the thin fabric of the underwear between you and his stiff length. You stroked him with your fingertips as he played with your nipples, rubbing his hands all over, sucking on the lollipop, trying not to moan. Good thing this was an action movie, because there was a lot of loud gunfire masking the tight squeak that escaped Jungkook’s lips as you wrapped your fingers around his clothed bulge and began to roll your palm into his hardness.
“A-ah, don’t…”
“I can zip you back up,” you purred, but he pinched your nipple. You had to bite back your own moan.
“I m-meant, don’t stop…”
He pressed his fingertip on your nipple and rubbed it in slow circles. You leaned back in your seat, bags of sweets sliding in your lap, temporarily forgotten as you rubbed his length, right there in the back of the movie theater, both of you staring into each other’s eyes, the lollipop stick trapped in Jungkook’s pretty pink lips. He reached in your coat with his other hand, both hands now gently cupping your breasts and pushing your nipples around with his thumbs. You could feel a wet spot beginning to grow at the front of his boxer briefs, pre-cum soaking the fabric.
“U-Use your nails… run them over the head…”
Your nails trailed down, gently scraping at the tip of his cock through the thin fabric. His hips quivered; thin, slight whimpers trapped in his throat. The wet spot was getting bigger and bigger, and you switched between your nails and rubbing his pre-cum in slow circles on the head.
Jungkook was losing his mind under you.
You leaned over and nudged his chin with your nose, kissing his neck, moving your chest closer to him so he could get a better grip and give you the pleasure you wanted. The sweets slid to the side, trapped between your bag and your thigh. You lapped at the space right between his collarbones, Jungkook gasping lightly, squeezing your breasts. Placed your lips on that spot and sucked hard, him trembling under you as he silenced his moan.
“Feeling good?”
You had left him a nice hickey.
“Mm-hmm…”
You heard the movie sounds quiet down, slowing to a more serious point in the story. Your hand matched the pace, gradually stopping, your palm blanketing the wet spot and pressing down in the head. And Jungkook couldn’t say anything, breathing hard against your hair, trying to hump your hand without making his chair squeak, but it was impossible. You simply waited, not reacting to his insistent tugs of your nipples. Unlike him, you could control yourself pretty well if you wanted to.
That fact annoyed Jungkook to no end.
You were pretty sure there was some deep character development going on, and you were also pretty sure Jungkook did not give a fucking shit about this character’s sad arc. He was probably glaring daggers at the movie screen. You took the chance to slip a finger in the opening that was always in men’s underwear. Honestly, what was that for anyway? It baffled you, but in times like these, it was useful.
You stroked a line down his pulsing cock.
You heard a crack as the strawberry lollipop snapped in half from the force of Jungkook’s teeth grinding down.
You had to bite your tongue to avoid giggling. Jungkook was becoming increasingly frustrated, gripping your tits tightly, completely forgetting that he had been in the middle of teasing you. Your finger lowered, spreading the pre-cum over the head and onto the slit. Crack, crack, crack. The lollipop was being crushed to powder by his teeth, barely audible behind his closed lips, but you could hear it because you were right at his throat, pressing your lips against his neck.
The whines in his chest were almost silent, vibrating your lips as you glided over his hot skin, blood pumping through his veins.
Deep dramatic music. It was certainly dramatic in Jungkook’s pants right now as you placed two fingers around the sides of his cock and slid them up and down his length. His hands dropped, urgently searching for the lower flap of your dress and gliding under the smooth fabric, finding the lace of your panties.
You pulled back a little as the action started up again, both on screen and in between your thighs, his long fingers stroking your slit, your juices soaking through. You could smell the strawberry scent from Jungkook’s lips, see his hooded eyes staring down at you as you rubbed him through his underwear again, matching his pace on your pussy.
“Want you so bad,” he whispered, holding the lollipop stick with his teeth.
You smirked.
There was a loud explosion. Some people in the audience below gasped.
You whipped Jungkook’s cock out of his underwear.
His eyes widened, dropping the lollipop stick and you caught it, tsking softly. Some high action tension was happening on the screen as you shoved the stick into the cupholder. Jungkook always put napkins in there before every movie. He liked being clean.
You were the dirty one.
Well, maybe naughty was a better word.
You pumped him, shielding his cock with your fleece coat, his finger fishing for your clit as he clenched his jaw, pressing his head back into the seat. You smiled as he found it, rubbing fast and hard. A tense showdown happening behind you, the hero skirting around in the night as you furiously jacked Jungkook off with his finger on your clothed clit matching your pace.
The hero was confronting the enemy for the first time, accusing him.
You tightened your grip, faster and faster, tremors racking Jungkook’s torso.
“I-I’m gonna cum,” Jungkook gasped softly.
The enemy taunted the hero, killing an important side character.
You gripped the swollen head of his cock and cutoff his orgasm sharply. Jungkook slapped a hand over his mouth as the gunshot went off, hissing and squeezing his eyes shut.
“N-No…” he murmured behind his tight fingers. Some important character development was happening as you started up again. “P-Please…”
“Shh,” you purred, wiggling up. Jungkook removed his hand from his mouth, slipping his finger under the lace of your panties. You pressed your forehead against his, his black hair brushing your cheeks.
“Wanna cum, please…” he breathed against your lips, so quiet even you barely heard him.
“I know, love. But you can’t.”
He whined quietly, feeling how wet you were, dipping his fingers into it.
“You want me to stop?” you asked gently.
“No…” His eyes were so dark, pupils blown wide. “Keep going.”
Your pussy throbbed as Jungkook slid two fingers in, thrusting slowly to avoid making noise because you were so aroused, pussy absolutely drenched. You started up again, up and down his stiff length, building up speed. The hero was collecting his friends, gaining support of his fellow comrades and rebuilding his resolve as your brought Jungkook to the edge once again, panting against his lips as he slid his fingers in and out of you, making you feel so good, his thumb knuckle rubbing your clit at the same time.
“You’re so wet…” Jungkook exhaled, breath hot. “Wanna be in here so bad.”
You could tell he was getting close again, so close, his lashes fluttering as you got him there, nudging him closer and closer that tipping point, just before, moments before…
You pressed your lips against his, grasping the head firmly as you stopped his orgasm again. He cried out in your mouth, muffled by your kiss and the romantic music playing as the hero confronted his love interest. Rising sexual tension between the hero and said love interest.
You opened your eyes to Jungkook’s pleading gaze, imploring you to finish him off. You could almost hear his voice, knowing exactly what he would say. You’d done this time and time again, in various settings, although perhaps never in such a quiet place.
Please, please, let me cum. Wanna cum so bad for you. Wanna show you how good you make me feel.
One of your eyebrows arched, lips still on his.
But we’re out in public, Jungkook. Everyone’s going to see how naughty you are.
He stared into your eyes, breathing in rapid, shallow gasps, right into your mouth.
Please, I need it. You’re not being fair. You always make me feel so good. Please…
Your thumb slid up, rubbing pre-cum on the velvety skin of the engorged head. Jungkook’s eyes rolled back into his head, shivering at the sensation. His fingers began moving inside you again, and now you both climbed together on that mountain, chasing the pleasure.
The action on the screen became more intense, nearing the final confrontation.
You stroked him hard and fast. He shoved his fingers into you, stimulating your clit at the same time, coating his fingers with your juices, your mouth over his to muffle his cries, his eyes telling you, it’s so good, you’re so good, I love you, please don’t stop, please, I need this, I need you, don’t stop, and you could almost hear it because his lips were moving against yours, forming your name, desperately trying to get you there without making too much sound.
There was a lot of tense stuff going on behind you and a whole lot more happening in your hand and mouth right now.
Jungkook hips bucked in the seat. There was a sharp explosion and all seemed lost for the hero. You moaned softly into Jungkook’s mouth and he groaned as the action hit its peak.
You wrapped your fingers around the throbbing head, squeezing tightly. Jungkook nearly screamed, orgasm cut short once again, digging his fingers into you and stopping your pleasure as well. You bit back your disappointment. Lots of things were happening on the screen, enough action that you could detach your lips from Jungkook’s, his low hiss soft, but deadly.
“Why?” he whispered hotly, puffing his cheeks.
“What are you gonna do, cum on my coat?” you shot back, affronted but playful.
“It’s white!”
You ticked an eyebrow amusedly. “Ah, but the movie’s almost over.”
Some nice closure was happening on the screen, but this was not the case for you or Jungkook.
Jungkook thinned his lips into a line, thoroughly irritated, but also aware that he asked for it. He pulled his fingers out of you, and you took his wrist, guiding them to his mouth. His lashes lowered, quiet erotic moan leaving his throat as he licked off your taste.
“Tastes nice with the strawberry,” he mumbled as he righted his clothes, tucking himself back in and rezipping his pants. He looked up as the closing scene was playing, the hero encountering the tough heroine and professing his love. Except that wasn’t what Jungkook was looking at, because you were in front of him, coat open and tits out, bouncing them in your palms, hard nipples poking out due to the cool air.
Jungkook’s eyes bulged out of his head, gesturing violently for you to close your fleece jacket.
You grinned and scooped your breasts back into your dress. Jungkook looked both disappointed and relieved as the closing credits played. The lights brightened once again. Jungkook scanned the audience, trying to see if anyone noticed.
“I never got to eat my jellies,” you pouted, shoving the bags of sweets into your bag.
“And I never got to watch the movie,” Jungkook snapped, taking the napkins and the lollipop stick, shoving the trash in his hoodie pocket.
You waited until he turned back to face you.
“Next time I’ll let you be then.”
“No, no,” Jungkook said instantly, swooping down and cupping your cheeks. “You don’t have to.”
“Hmm, you’re so upset though.” You stood up and Jungkook followed, taking your hand and holding it tightly. You squeezed his fingers back.
“I’m not upset,” he muttered. “I like all the things you do to me. But you make my life hard.”
You stopped at the stairs, looking up at him from the step below. The top of your white fleece coat was a little open, revealing a little bit of your plum satin dress and all of your cleavage.
“Only your life?” you teased.
“… H-Hey!”
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