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Hey. I've seen some of your HB rewrites and their pretty cool. I even like some of the ideas you came up with (ex. Stolas & Stella being political enemies rather than a married couple, imps being intersex & following a binary gender system, etc).

I was wondering if you could give me some writing advice with rewrite stuff. See, I have this portfolio-like series called 'Let's Reimagine', where I revision (i.e. rewrite and/or redesign) a piece of media (be it a show, movie, webcomic, video game, etc), whether it be something I like, or something that while I'm not a fan of, believe that it could've been great (or at least decent) had it been handled better, while also integrating my OCs (including self-inserts) into my revisions as if they were canon characters in said media. This is one of my passion projects that I'd love to bring to life someday, as I wish to make YouTube videos about them when I create my YT channel (which doesn't exist at this point in time) in the future, so for now, I'm starting small by making posts talking about my revisions on Tumblr & Reddit as like a practice run of sorts (like for ex. creating a manga and then having that manga get an anime adaptation, or creating a comic (like a webcomic) and having that be adapted into an animation of some sort (ex. series, short(s), etc), or creating a book or novel and having said book or novel being adapted into a movie and/or series).

I'm also an aspiring writer who wishes to share their stories with everyone for them to enjoy, including 'Let's Reimagine' (where Helluva Boss is one of the shows I plan on reimagining, due to the many issues it's got, especially with the increase of them in Season 2; as much as I like & enjoy HB, I do have to agree that it's kind of a mess, and I get where fans are coming from with its criticisms, especially towards Season 2). However, there are some issues of mine that I feel could detriment my writing abilities & projects (including 'Let's Reimagine') in general (ex. not thinking about potential plot holes, inconsistencies, worldbuilding/lore issues, & questionable/weak/bad writing choices/ideas, rushing into things before thinking & planning stuff out, worrying about my stories not being good enough for anyone to enjoy, feeling inferior compared to other artists & writers, people hating what I make, and thinking the worst possible outcomes; apologizes if that got a little too personal and if I (potentially) made you worried; I suffer from anxiety and have a tendency to get anxious and worked up too quickly, especially when thinking negatively, and trying to be a perfectionist, worrying that if I or my content aren't perfect, then I come across as a failure; but I assure you that I am trying to work on these issues and getting past them for the better).

So, with all that said, do you have any advice in creating & doing rewrites/revisions (ex. planning stuff out, character arcs/development, worldbuilding/lore, plot points, fixing & covering plot holes & inconsistences, fulfilling wasted/missed potential & missed opportunities, avoiding questionable/weak/bad writing choices/ideas, integrating ocs/self-inserts into said rewrite/revision, etc) to any writers out there (including aspiring ones)?

Feel free to respond back to me whenever you get the chance. Thank you and have a wonderful day/afternoon/night. 🤗💕❤️🧡💛💚💙💜💖💕🤗

This is very late, I'm so sorry it took me this long to answer your ask.

Things has changed sufficiently from when this ask was submitted. My HB rewrite is on currently on pause so I can focus on my Hazbin one instead.

I do like the concept of your Let's Reimagine series. It sounds like a fun passionate project in which you experiment with your writing and show tough love for the shows you're rewriting for. I hope soon you'll be able to release your first rewrite for the series.

I have some general writing advice and one specific advice for rewrites I personally use.

Create the world building first

If your rewrite takes place in a fantasy world, I suggest fleshing the world building first before the characters. This is a different world from our, so their rules and lore will affect these characters differently, and you should know why first to explain the certain elements of the both the characters and world. Fleshing the world building first can help create plot ideas and external conflict easier.

Have a Beta Reader

This one is standard. I suggest having a beta reader to review your rewrites and concepts. As writers, we think our stories make sense because we know the context, but to readers who don't know anything, our scripts realistically be confusing at first. Along the same vain, they can help you realize that an idea is underdeveloped or useless. Another good reason is they can offer new and improved concepts and ideas you didn’t or wouldn't think of before.

Be open to criticism

Criticism will help you grow as a writer. You don't have to like them all or listen to every piece, but still keep an open mind because they can and will help you. I heavily suggest being open to criticism specially when you’re writing a topic you have no experience in (Ex: mental illness, addiction, a specific identity). Again, not only will it help you improve, but also portray those topics better.

Rewrite

My only rewrite specific advice is to expand and flesh out ideas and characters, you felt the original show skimmed over. In both of my rewrites, I'm putting a greater focus on the world building, dark character concepts and how they intertwined with each other because the shows barely touches on them. It's your rewrite so do whatever you want with it, don’t feel limitless.

I hope this helps!

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#5

Ask: Pls talk about Beanstory who are these ocs we keep getting tidbits of in tags? I desire to knowwwww Like straight up I saw your tags on that oc-questions-fairy thing the other day and now the word Beanstory has not left my head since 👉👈 free pass to gush about it in any way shape or form?

Okay, Okay, THIS IS NOW THE BEST DAY OF MY LIFE CAUSE I WAS THINKING OF POSTING MORE ABOUT BEANSTORY, so here we go:

A brief synopsis of the (prominent) characters, motivation and inspiration behind BEANSTORY!

Inspiration and Motivation:

I saw a post on instagram of Belphegor from Obey Me in a sleeping bag, looking very bean-like, and I thought "haha, wouldn't it be fun if people drew themselves in sleeping bags and called themselves beans? And I could harvest them beans, cause they're cute, and I'd have a bunch of beans" and then I talked to one of my friends and she wrote her Beansona's personality. So I took it and drew a little Beansona for my friend Alice @stolenages

After that I took to an old discord server I was in and made Beansonas of some friends, and also developed my self-insert Character in the story, Rest.

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9 notes • Posted 2021-04-01 21:15:05 GMT

#4

Ask: FUCK YEA GENDERFLUID UNABARA THATS A GENDERFLUID MF IF IVE EVER SEEN ONE

He probably has, like, 17 gender identities. Cute gender and ottergender, and others, cause he loves his creations so much. He uses cute neopronouns hhhhhh, I love him

17 notes • Posted 2021-02-20 09:29:16 GMT

#3

Hey Tumblr, little "social experiment" I guess but me and my friend Ana @absolute-anamation were talking about how "my man" translates to "άνθρωπε μου" in Greek and the phrases have completely different feels to each other (my man sounds friendly, has a sense of camaraderie while "άνθρωπε μου" has contempt and a sense of displeasure/anger), so we decided to start asking around to see how that goes in other languages! So, reblog with what "my man" would translate to in your language and what the feel of that phrase is!

23 notes • Posted 2021-06-27 13:22:41 GMT

#2

Do you think the Guardians of the Globe ever explored each other's bodies?

25 notes • Posted 2021-07-01 15:06:07 GMT

#1

Anyone that watched Invincible and DIDN'T develop a slight obsession with Joseph and Olga, I do not understand you

39 notes • Posted 2021-06-28 20:49:37 GMT

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