#BUT im not as attached as the true love's kiss so yk oxi do your magic and if it must go it must

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Martín is lucky the guys are unnarmed :')

Im fine with the mug scene then, i stayed with the original because i already expected you'd suggest a different scenario lol i do know you. (not so) heroic rescue it is, so we introduce very early on that martin is no long invincible. I see this becoming a problem often, i'm willing to bet this isnt the last fight he'll get into in the next few days.

The only very minor change i'll make is that instead of this happening after he spent an entire day in the city, its more of a few hours later, like the movie. And thats because... i think martin on his own would get arrested in a heartbeat lol the longer he stays the worse are his chances, until lulu finds him of course to control a little bit his charmingly impulses.

now i'm imagening once they're at the apartment and talked a bit martin goes like I am tired my humble host! *Starts walking around the place like it was his, gets to luciano's room* I see these are the largest quarters of this strange hut! Quite... rustic! Shall do me just fine! Good night! And before luciano can stop him ops he's already sleeping like a rock. FINE luciano can sleep on the couch but sebastian better show up in morning.

As funny as it is to imagine luciano being caught in some sort of fairy tale roleplay, i think i'll stick with fully nude ticnho walking out of the bathroom proud as ever. 1) because it's a good scene for a tiny bit of gay panic, but i think its too early for martin to feel it for luciano naked on his lap (YET) but luciano can be turning his face like uRGH he's handsome and he's hot i see his brain melted down and and went to those shoulders apparently also when sebastian asks why he's naked he just goes 'oh luciano told me to get naked before going into the magic shower' and Sebastian is like..... okay...... i did not need to know that. But okay, misunderstandings apart, sebastian will see what he can do meanwhile luciano watches over martin.

Pulling from memory, in the movie, the first day giselle and patrick spend together, he takes her to his work to ask for his secretary to find some information, she talks to his divorce clients about how they must be in love, patrick gives up on her and gives her some money to go away, sees she can't be on her own, and then the iconic How Does She Know scene. I think we can start on a similar place, with luciano taking martin to his workplace (its not like he'd let him alone on his apartmnet to destroy everything) and asks his secretary to try to find the kingdom he says he's from or any other lead. Martin, however, doesnt entertain this much and waltz way a little after - he's a prince afterall, he doesnt need to tell luciano where he's going.

I say that might happen right after he talks to luciano's clients in a moment he's not around. He goes to them, tells the lady she's very beautiful and that man who loves her must be very happy which yk seems very much like flirting but she's having none of it and is about to tell him to fuck off, when he sees her future husbandn't and starts talking about him too, about how he looks strong and brave like the knights of his kingdom etc etc, and in the middle of his own speech talks about his beloved princess and how in love the two are and then its like wait!!! what am i doing here!!! i must find her immediately i cannot afford these long rests!! so long!!!! leaving the clients very confused and angry at luciano, and him very distressed because great martin escaped AGAIN

So he goes after him and thankfully he's not that far, though i wouldnt be surprised if he's already in trouble again, either in a fight or just falling for some scam of someone trying to take his information or his money (which well its not like he has any either way) and luciano has to rescue him again. I say maybe instead of telling him to fuck off he considers talking to the authorities, certainly they can handle him better than a random lawyer with too much on his plate as it is, but they get distracted half way.

I'm finding trouble fitting the How Does She Know number (though a more prince-ly one instead of princess-ly), though i think martin starting a big musical number in the middle of the Ibirapuera is too good of a scene to miss. But without a Nancy on the story i can't how we'd pull it off. But besides the iconic-ness of it all, i also think its time to confront more directly their ideas of love and intimacy. It's also on this scene where we see patrick's mind starting to change about giselle, with him humming along the song and smiling and ultimately deciding not to leaver her alone and continue helping her.

Another possibility i thought is transferring the number to María and make that the moment they find each other again, but move it way later in the story of course. I dont find it a great solution because again, iconic scene, but it is .... an alternative.

that aside, let's move from the point luciano decides not to take martin to the authorities but instead help him himself. This has mostly comedic potential but also needs to help moving their relationship, foward, their understanding of each other and etc. So, i'll leave it to you to elaborate how you see that going :D

@oxiosa and I are out of control in this Enchanted AU and our first post is already too big. It’s mostly detailing the fairy tale, and you can read it here if for some reason you keep up with our chaotic brainstorming.

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