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happy bday casey!!! i'm thinking of you!!

Thank you so much for sending this! I had such a terrible and lonely birthday

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what are your twenties if not an endless string of the ghosts of who you thought you would become

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Abbotsford House, Scottish Borders, Scotland, United Kingdom ~ gisforgeorgina

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i love you polls i love you democracy i love you funny tumblr jokes i love you vanilla extract i love you vanilla extract i love you vanilla extract i love you vanilla extract

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I wish when u quit a job itd give u a spotify wrapped abt it

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I think they should make a fighting game where all of the characters are from the public domain

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#i watch for the plot

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Writing advice that changed my sentence

When I was a young writer, I was told that I often started my sentences with "there is/there was/there are." I was told to eliminate those as much as possible.

I couldn't believe how often I used them. My first novel was completely littered with them.

I learned to diversify and grow my use of verbs. Instead of the state-of-being verbs, like "is" which isn't very descriptive at all, I started using stronger verbs.

Instead of writing "There were a bunch of trees on the hill" I wrote "A cluster of trees towered over the hill."

"Towered" is a much stronger verb than "Is"

Use the state-of-being words, but if you can, try replacing them with more active verbs. You might be surprised how much your writing improves.

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